<a class="link link--white link--no-underline" href="https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/2105011">raputa (Game Ver.)

00:11:717 (11717|1,11717|2) - 和前面不是同一种鼓，可以换轨

8 days ago

7 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

00:13:804

00:13:804 - ~ 00:17:717 - 这里看的出来是想简化，但是有点太简单了，可以至少把1/1的位置写上这样至少有连续感

00:22:412 - 这里开始一样

8 days ago

都加上了

7 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

00:16:412

Seiran-

00:16:412 (16412|1,16412|0,16543|3) - 1/4 LN

16 days ago

16 days ago

14 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

00:26:325

Seiran-

00:26:325 - 00:26:847 - double

16 days ago

改成排列比较简单的全double了

14 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

00:39:160

00:39:160 (39160|0) - 这里没有明显的音，建议删除，同时可以改一下排列 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19284807/7c4e

7 months ago

我觉得这音还是挺明显的，而且也能与00:36:878 (36878|0,36943|2,37008|1,37073|3,37138|2)的节奏对应上，应该没啥问题，keep吧

7 months ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

01:02:977

01:02:977 (62977|0,63107|0,63273|0,63440|0) - 这么衔接感觉不是特别有必要，挺容易崩的

8 days ago

给挪到右边了

7 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

01:22:594

Seiran-

01:22:594 - 2 01:24:681 - 01:26:768 - 01:28:855 -

16 days ago

嗷

14 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

01:22:725

01:22:725 - 这里这个1/2感觉可以加，刚好和后面01:23:116 (83116|2,83246|2,83507|2,83638|2) - 对应

另外这一段好像就这一小节的叠是锁手的，可以挪一下

8 days ago

7 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

01:29:377 (89377|1,89507|2,89507|1) - 这个突然换轨了，也许可以挪后面的LN？

5 days ago

Reopened by gzdongsheng

这里的LN好像本来是对音高的来着，不过低难无所谓了，挪了一下

4 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

01:28:464

01:28:464 (88464|2,88529|3,88594|1,88594|0) - 可以继承前面小节的小交互写法

8 days ago

这里貌似是摆忘记了，，ok

7 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

01:32:768

01:41:116 (101116|3,101116|0) -

01:32:768 (92768|0,92768|2) - 好像没啥double LN的必要

8 days ago

这里本来是想带一下那个很轻的人声切片，不过好像确实没啥必要，改了

7 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

01:37:464

01:37:464 - 和开头的那条类似，这里把1/1位置的LN也加上更符合连续感

8 days ago

如果是说01:31:072的话这里少了那个明显的敲管子的声音不太好照着套，感觉这里就加个米表现一下这块连续的合成器就好了吧

7 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

01:44:377

01:44:377 (104377|2) - 确认一下是不是有意写的这个，高难度没突出而且前面01:36:029 - 也没有

8 days ago

本来是有意的，不过好像是不太合适，改了

7 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

01:48:929

[Crz]Cardiloid

01:48:929 - 类似音色十分突出，建议采用更加激进的排列如交互甚至子弹来做出明显区分，但考虑到谱面难度的设置推荐改为交互。本时间戳之后的同样音色采用同种处理方法。

9 months ago

Accepted

9 months ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

01:57:538

01:57:538 (117538|1,117603|2,117668|1,117733|2,117799|1) - 这里可以Ctrl+H调整一下这一整段交互的结构

7 months ago

可

7 months ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

01:58:399

01:58:399 (118399|1,118464|2,118529|1,118594|0,118659|1,118725|2,118790|1,118855|0) - 为啥这里突然和前面01:57:290 - 难度差一大截，没啥特别明显的变化吧

8 days ago

好像是我忘了改。。对称了一下

7 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

02:01:464

02:01:464 (121464|3,121529|0,121594|2,121659|1,121725|3,121790|0,121855|2,121920|1) - 前面01:54:942 - 都用短LN了，这里第二次出现理论上情绪应该更强，除非有特殊理由要弱化这个地方

8 days ago

改LN了

7 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

02:01:972

[Crz]Cardiloid

02:01:972 - 作为drop段的结尾，主要对鼓点进行采音相对来说要比采旋律更加合适。不仅因为鼓点的强度过于抓耳，还应该与逐步递进的难度曲线相契合。

9 months ago

Accepted，不过是在保留了旋律的基础上

9 months ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

02:07:659

02:07:659 - 鼓

8 days ago

hao

7 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

02:10:725

02:10:725 (130725|2) - 漏LN了？

8 days ago

确实

7 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

02:11:638

02:11:638 (131638|0) - 鼓double

8 days ago

好

7 days ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

02:19:712

02:19:712 - 这段感觉还是只采1/2比较好，master难度都是只采的1/2

7 months ago

也行，其实本意是想整点不一样的东西不过确实不太一致）

7 months ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

02:24:368

02:24:368 - 结尾变速段既然一开始就用了单押和后面的双押同轨的结构，这里最好也用同样的结构 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19284818/d8a6
在这个基础上可以微调一下衔接的地方锚键的压力

7 months ago

hao

7 months ago

Marked as resolved by DivineJudas

02:39:371

02:39:371 - 尾拉的和其他难度不一样

（不知道是不是改timing导致的，之前好像还看到哪里拉歪了但现在我找不到了，，，你可以自己查查）

8 days ago

😱
fixed，别的我看了应该没了

7 days ago