00:01:388 (1,1,2,1,1,1,2,3,1,2) - would decrease volume down to 20% or get silenced sliderslide, sounds a bit too loud rn
00:20:219 (1,1,1) - Players will read these NCs as 1/3s (instead of 1/2) considering you led with a 1/3 snapping earlier 00:19:870 (1) - .
00:46:033 (1,2,3,4,1) - Can you spice this up a bit?
Spacings throuhgout 00:46:033 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - are a bit monotonous to play.
00:56:323 (1,2) - Since the sound on 1 continues, I think extending it a little would represent it nicely. Previous times where we heard this sound 00:33:998 (1) // 00:45:161 (1), 1 extended until 1/4 beat before the next object too
02:02:076 (1,2,3) - This looks like a pattern rather than 02:02:250 (2,3,4) - tbh. 01:48:123 (1,2,3,4) - has a much clearer pattern arrangement for example.
(I know it's a minor thing but given you have been super consistent with this I figured I should at least point this out.)
02:09:925 (2) - Map this differently than 02:10:274 (2,2) - to emphasize the prominent sound on 02:10:012 - not present on the following kicksliders
02:14:983 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - What about instead of these, you use the same rhythm from 02:09:402 (3,1,2,1,2) - ?
02:17:076 (4) - Should use higher spacing compared to 02:16:378 (3,1) - to emphasize the snare
02:34:518 (2,3,4,5) - 02:35:739 (2,3,4,5,6) - These are inconsistent with similar patterns which use consistent spacing 02:40:099 (2,3,4,5) - or groupings of two 02:41:320 (2,3,4,5,6) -
03:35:216 (3,4,1) - Should use higher spacing for 2 snares, contrast with the spacing used in pattern such as 03:37:657 (1,2,3) - in the same section
03:49:518 (1,2,1,2) - Could you fix up the visuals here a bit?
03:50:216 (1,2) - 03:54:402 (1,2) - Song's rhythm is not the same for both of these, so they shouldn't play the same way.
03:49:518 (1,2) - Looks super sloppy since they don't have any visual relation whatsoever (unlike 04:00:681 (1,2,1) - which is more typical of your style).