The Island (MaxNRG drum'n'bass remix)

00:02:778 (1,2,3) - could make it a perfect triangle just put 00:03:467 (3) - to x194 y60

00:02:778 2 timing points at the same time

00:03:984 (5,5) - NC

00:04:502 (6,7) - rhythm is wrong, should be slider then circle

should be same spacing from 00:04:502 (2,3) - for 00:04:846 (3,4,5) -

00:04:846 (3) - fix blanket by placing it to x351 y120

00:05:536 (1,1) - i assume one of these nc's are a mistake

00:06:053 (3,4) - stack again here doesnt correspond very well with the rhythm emphasis, also maybe replace this 00:06:226 (4) - slider into a circle on both sliderhead and -end of it ? id suggest maybe something like this https://i.imgur.com/INvLW6u.jpg

00:06:226 (4) - this slider should be half a beat later to be consistent with this 00:03:640 (4,5) - the 1/1 gap between the slider end and the next object may cause misreads

the spacing between 00:07:605 (5,6) - and 00:08:122 (7,1) - is the same which is wrong since theres only highbeat on 00:08:295 -
id suggest lower the spacing on 00:07:605 (5,6) -

00:07:605 (3,4,5) - use the same rhythm than before 00:04:846 (3,4,5) - the song repeats so the map should do the same

00:08:295 (1) - this should be a finish, not a whistle

00:09:502 (5,5) - NC

00:10:364 (4,5) - i think these should go in the same direction since the sound playing is the exact same what i would do is ctrl + g 00:10:364 (4) - and copy and paste it for 00:10:709 (5) - the reason u would ctrl + g (4) is so u still have the emphasis for 00:11:053 (1)

00:10:709 (5) - u can ctrl G this so it emphasises the song going lower in pitch and it would also be fitting for flow since its a bit inconsistent now,

with this it would follow a-b-b-a instead of a-b-a-a (a=linear, b=circular) every 2 measures

00:11:053 (1) - imo this could be changed for a circle and a gap of 1/1 till next white tick so its consistent with the melody n u use it 00:05:536 (1) - here aswell

also fits cuz song gives strong hits every 4 measures 00:08:295 (1) - and 00:13:812 (1) - , while next part has them every 2 measures and ur rhythm choice is consistent in following it 00:17:088 (2,3,4) - 00:19:329 (1,2,3) -

00:11:053 (1,2) - space these similarly to 00:05:536 (1,2) - since currently there's no distinct way to read this as a 1/1 gap in rhythm

00:12:260 (5) - should be more spaced from the previous slider, there is a beat stronger than the other 1/1s in this part but the slider is less spaced

00:12:778 (6,7,8,9) - , 00:12:778 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - should emphasize the vocaqls in this part with a clap hitsound cause it's the only part in the songs that has these vocals without having an important bg music

00:13:122 (4,5) - could use different slider shapes for these sliders so u can visually emphasize 00:13:812 (1,2) - more

00:15:019 (5) - missing NC, doesn't seem intentional since you NCed 00:03:984 (1) -

00:17:088 - make this circle-circle-slider instead to be consistent with what you've been doing so far

00:18:295 (5,6) - lower the spacing between these two notes?
for example 00:18:984 (9,1) - has same spacing as above (00:18:295 (5,6)) which feels wrong since 00:19:329 - on this timestamp has strong beat which would be correct for high spacing, but for the 00:18:295 (5,6) - doesnt if you listen closely,,,
rhythm/beats that sounds similar should at least be mapped with same spacing, if they arent similar then spacing should vary between them

00:19:329 - make this two half beat sliders instead like you have done every single time before this on big white ticks

NC 00:20:536 (5) - instead of 00:21:398 (1) -

also for stacks you need to be wary that if the afterbeats ought to sound with stacks then they shouldnt be stacked since it destroys the flow which the song gives. like, if you listen to the beats/rhythm here 00:22:433 (2,3,4,5) - they sound similar, and when you stack a note and a slider like 00:22:778 (4,5) - it breaks the flow which the follow up 00:22:433 (2,3,4) - gives

00:23:467 (1,2,1,2) - should be spaced like 00:24:157 (1,2) -

00:23:812 (1,2) - you can probably move this double a little bit further to make the jump a bit more gradual

why do you cut off the vocal with the slider at 00:24:846 (1) - but you make it longer at 00:30:364 (1) - keep it consistent

00:24:846 (1) - should end at 00:25:191

00:24:846 (1,1,2,3) - would make them a spacing between the slider and the triple - smoother gameplay

00:24:846 hitsounds on this green line change are very quiet n subtle so it feels like they are underpronounced, you can like bump this up to 50% for at least some feedback
same goes for 00:30:709, on 00:36:915 u can bring this a bit higher, to 55% id say

00:24:846 (1) - could make reverse slider instead of the gap

00:25:536 not really a big deal but maybe don't leave this unmapped. even passively like making 00:24:846 (1) - a repeat works since you've not ignored these guitar-sounding things

00:25:536 there is a sound here should map it

00:26:053 (4) - would follow the rhythm much better as 2 1/2 sliders to match the vocals at 00:26:053 - and 00:26:398 -

00:26:743 (6) - this should be all circles instead of a 1/1 slider, you are missing a lot of important sounds, especially on the white tick, so map it as circles and give a bit of emphasis on 00:26:915 - with slightly higher spacing

remove nc at 00:27:433 (7) - and add at 00:27:950 (1) -

00:29:674 (3) - i see youve tried to snap this to the vocals but there are pretty important sounds that youre missing here on 00:30:019 - and the sliderend being snapped 1/4 away from the imporant white tick sound feels really off and weird to play

00:30:364 (1) - should be streched to the white tick

00:30:364 (1) - should end at 00:30:709

00:30:364 (4) - two 1/2 sliders here instead to be consistent with the beginning

00:31:053 sound here u could map

00:33:122 (7) - nc

00:35:191 (4) - guitar is still going here, maybe add a passive 1/2 repeating slider

00:36:571 (3) - mute slider end

00:38:640 (1) - ctrl+g

00:43:381 - imo this sound noticeable enough to have a hitcircle here since you mapped most of these sounds in this section. you could put a hitcircle stacked on 00:43:467 (1) - and move them closer to 00:43:122 (6) -

00:44:846 (5) - and 00:45:191 (7) - could be NCed so they are in pairs of 2 to emphasize the vocals that start here.

00:45:967 (6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - could look a lot better aesthetic wise, possibly do something that resembles a perfect circle? something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/13142188

00:46:915 (1) - bruh slider

00:47:605 (3,4,1) - its the biggest most intense part of the song why is the spacing the same if not smaller than before :(

at 00:48:812 (2,3,4,5,6) -these are jumps but at the exact same part of the phrase at 00:54:329 (2,3,4) - theyre sliders, keep it one or the other

the spacing between 00:49:329 (4,1) - should be higher to emphasize 00:49:674 (1) - more

00:50:967 (7) - dont hear any sound here, jus change it for a 1/2 jump like u did 00:56:053 (4,5,1) - since u didnt map low volume triples on this section of the drop

00:51:053 (1) - probably turn this into a 1/1. every large white tick you've had so far is 1/1 and i don't think there's a change of melody here to warrant a change in slider.

00:51:743 (4) - the synth or whatever sound you mainly follow is present on both head and tail so maybe turn this into 2 circles to follow.

00:55:709 (2,3,4,5,1) - ,
00:56:053 (4,5) - strong beat on these two, so you should increase the spacing.
or just lower the other

00:56:398 (1) - this looks really visually unappealing when it just barely overlaps 00:56:226 (5) - , check this high quality, in-depth guide on overlapping, provided by K4L1: https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/485593489762025474/560288817475485696/Sem_titulo.jpg?width=1301&height=671

00:56:915 (2,3,4,5,6) - change to perfect star perhaps?