at 04:54:612 (7) - i would suggest that you would make it like that http://prntscr.com/oq9vmt bc i think it fits the music better
would suggest that from 05:18:269 (1) - until the end you will start to progressivly turn down the sv to mark the end of the song or basically the climax of it
02:26:226 (1) - in this try making this pattern- http://prntscr.com/nsk7hd
00:12:778 (6,7,8,9) - , 00:12:778 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - should emphasize the vocaqls in this part with a clap hitsound cause it's the only part in the songs that has these vocals without having an important bg music