Zankoku na Tenshi no These

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Disqualified for timing as mentioned in #633499 : the current offset is definitely early.

Moje gratulacje z okazji drugiej dyskwalifikacji. XD

A tak w ogóle to pragnę poprzedniego tła na mapie gdyż było ładniejsze, do kija wafla. ;_;

EDIT: A jeżeli nie zmienisz tła, to chociaż daj kolory które pasują do obecnego.

Sounds like +10 to offset to me.

A w sumie to też dopiero zauważyłem że nie ma wyciszonego dźwięku na spinnerze. Może wyciszysz za pomocą pustego pliku "spinnerspin" żeby nie było tyle szumu jak kręcisz to koło? Jeżeli też dźwięk każdego tysiąca ci przeszkadza to można też dać "spinnerbonus".

soft-hitclap.wav 53.22ms which is below 100ms and unrankable

why are u using darling in the franxx bg on evangelion song

there seems to be delay on a couple of hitsounds: soft-hitclap https://puu.sh/BZFjZ/8f3bc848b7.png and soft-hitfinish https://puu.sh/BZFne/76ccd38138.png there is some noise at the beginning but obviously not peaking, so cut down some of the beginning on both files

00:14:546 - Missing whistle

W sumie wiesz wkurzają mnie sliderslajdy, weź wycisz. XD

I think emphasizing the last sound with 5% is somehow omitting the fade out effect the ring makes here 00:29:865 - making a very weird pattern to follow because players would be spinning with no actual feedback behind the spinner. Therefore, it would be more appropiate if emphasized a fade out effect with green lines;

Here the green lines:
30025,-100,4,2,0,45,0,0
30344,-100,4,2,0,30,0,0
30663,-100,4,2,0,15,0,0
30982,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0
31302,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0

That one may will make a greater effect here.

00:32:578 - Weź daj wyciszenie pustym dźwiękiem bo to brzmi AaaAAaAAaaAAAA i to nie w pozytywny sposób jak w AiAe.

All difficulties end on a very questionable spot because there's no actual feedback to highlight here 00:32:578 - . It would be wiser to short it up so it's more accurate according to what the song offers. I think ending it around here 00:31:302 - would hurt no one.

My biggest concern here Bany is the way you handled hitsounds. You only use whistles during the whole section and do not switch between sampleset that might end creating an awkward hitsound feedback becase there are which have no hitsounds whatsoever but there's a clear background sound to cover up as an example 00:09:599 (1,2,3,4) - . I know it's just a 30 secs map, but I really believe using other sample sets or even adding new hitsounds would fit this mapset the best!

Może jednak użyj delikatnych dźwięków a nie normalnych. .3.