02:01:512 (1,2) - I can't understand why the spacing for this one is so low compared to others here
00:16:370 (5) - uuuuuh imo should be a 1/8 reverse for simplification, cause it starts on 00:16:381 - and end on 00:16:523 - .
01:08:742 - Or something here is missing, or 01:08:588 (4,1) - this need to be stacked or spaced more. Atm it looks like a 1/4 jump and create a really weird feeling on this.
This diff in general could be more balanced between kiais and other "strong" sections.
Spacing used in sections like 00:26:059 - (especally 00:29:866 (1,2) - / 00:31:541 (3,4) - ) is quite the same, if not bigger, than during kiai. And the slow SV variation doestn't make enough difference, since rhythm is quite the same aswell.
Few adjustments at least for spacing would make it better.