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This beatmap wasn't updated since 9 August 2019 so it was graveyarded...
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00:06:999 (2) - This curve slider got kinda messed up (got turned into a bezier slider), just delete the point and add it again.

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Whoops, fixed

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00:08:669 Do a square for this little "stream"

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Done! --- EDIT: this section is totally different now btw

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00:19:169 Put this circle higher

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Done! --- EDIT: this section is totally different now btw

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00:19:226 (3) - this circle here is very, very, very (idk) but like if its meant to be for the sliding S pronounciation, it should be a insanely short slider with a muted sliderend, and it couldn't possibly fit here, so, i'd rather you extend 00:19:337 (4) - for the slider head to be at 00:19:226 or work some other magic out because this is actually really weird

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I reworked this section a bit to (hopefully) be better rhythmically - circle is gone now in favour of two 2/3 beat sliders starting from 00:18:670 (1,2) instead.

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00:26:502 Put the 7 between the 6 and 8 ( overmod hype :D )

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Done!

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Move this NC 00:26:670 (1) - to here 00:26:503 (7) -

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I did consider doing NC focusing on the vocals but ultimately decided I'd rather keep the combos consistent through the kiai of eight notes each.

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00:27:332 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't see the point of reducing spacing here tbh, the intensity feels the same as 00:26:332 (5,6,7,8) -

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Will fix along with the general issue you've mentioned #617047

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00:28:332 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - I would make this turn like https://i.imgur.com/hahPO0i.png so it flows better and (imo) emphasizes the vocal better

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Will fix along with the general issue you've mentioned #617047

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00:28:415 (6,7,8,1) - this pattern is never used again in the map despite there being instances where this could be repeated. (00:31:165 (7) - 00:36:499 (7) - 00:41:166 (7) - 00:45:166 (7) - 00:49:166 (7) - 00:50:499 (7) - ) Either make this follow the same circular flow or change the rest. Right now it's very out of place

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Will do once streams are fixed #617047

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00:29:837 (7,8,1) - eh like after the two stream loops and you give this, it's kinda weird, maybe you can like ctrl+h it and vice-versa all the sliders because the sliders can be confused for a loop with an AR like 9.5 ngl

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I'm currently in the process of reworking basically the entire stream section, so this will be changed when I'm finished doing that. Consider it "done"

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00:31:670 (5) - flow is broken here

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Reworked this stream (and subsequently everything after it because the spacing got hecked) to hopefully flow better

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00:39:002 Move the 2 and the 4 on the left and move the 5 down

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I'm not totally satisfied with this part so it'll be changed. Will mark as resolved when I do.

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Done!

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Done!

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00:43:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this transition in flow is uncomfortable to play

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Reworked this stream and more subsequent streams too - hopefully flows better now

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00:49:087 (6) - move this lower bOi by like 5 and move 00:49:253 (8) - down by like 3 bOi my OCD omegaLUL

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00:51:338 Do there 4 circles a little spacer

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Reworked the spacing in this section a little bit.

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00:51:666 (5) - Is unsnapped

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: )

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00:51:666 (3,1) - spacing is too low forcing players to wait a lot and breaking the flow of the map. You should increase in spacing to keep movement consistent

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I just got rid of the slider altogether for now but the entire stream section needs redoing anyways. "Fixed" for now

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00:52:002 And do more spacer streams at the end, the contrast is really hard if you see what I mean

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I did want the ending to be less spaced since it's much less intense than the end of the kiai, so no change

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00:53:337 (1,2,3,4) - Make this a straight stream is looks weird

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Done!

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00:54:670 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - transition of the flow to the following circles here is very weird, maybe make it a bit curved so that it can connect with the circular stream ahead of it

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same thing with 01:07:337 (9,10,11,12) -

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00:55:667 (5) - missing clap hs

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Fixed

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01:03:920 (16) - move this a bit down <3

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01:07:333 (1) - a bit nit-picky but move this down a bit and rotate a bit clockwise so it follows the flow of the end of the stream

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Done - pending upload

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Done!

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01:10:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - tbh, i see no change of placement, spacing or anything in this section. since there is a crash in the background, maybe change a bit of placement? it just sounds like random crash cymbals in the background and the only spacing change in the entire section is the ending

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Good call! Going to rework the spacing post-kiai to reflect "intensity" (number of finishes per measure) and will reupload later when finished! -- EDIT: added green lines to show progression of spacing that will be used when remapping cause that's all I have time for atm

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Done!

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