03:09:652 (1) -should move this over to make your curve a bit more consistent with 03:09:179 (1,2,3,4,5) -

02:03:490 (4) - imo repeats like this especially for the ending climax feels really underwhelming especially since this is the most intense part of the song i think doing at least to make it a bit more intense would be nice

00:49:128 (3,1) - not the biggest fan of 1/1 stacks like this as i feel at this bpm these can be a bit difficult to read and it's expecially more problematic in later spots like 01:22:001 (2,3) - that completely ruin your momentum so i suggest just spacing these out a bit more to be a more visual 1/1 gap

00:45:139 (2) - imo i would remove this circle here to keep consistency with following the vocals

01:37:319 (7,8) - imo i think lowering the spacing here to be more in line with 00:23:941 (5,1,2,3,4) - would be nice since right now they are a bit jarring being so wildly different. i suggest doing something like

00:06:040 - 00:09:354 - honestly i feel like every slider here should have a lowering sv instead of every other maybe go from 1.0 down to .25 instead

00:18:249 (3,4) - not really a fan of this rhythm here, in particular 00:18:947 - just feels a bit forced, doing a longer slider like would show more emphasis on the vocals

00:27:319 - personally, i feel the sudden change of vocals here warrants mapping them a bit more actively, i think doing something like

would also be consistent with 01:52:435 -

00:33:598 (6,7) - i would make this a slider to emphasize the hihat a bit more and give an ending to the piano notes

01:58:714 - same

00:41:796 (1,2,3) - not really a fan of how this was stacked here, i think just keeping it consistent with 00:39:005 (1,2,3) - would be the play

00:58:191 (6,1) - imo the gap here is a bit too large considering there's barely a change in emphasis here but a major change in play would definitely suggest flipping it and lowering it like

01:02:203 (3,4) - spacing here is too large considering theres not really a loud sound on 4 would definitely suggest changing it to

01:11:970 (3,4,5,1) - flow here in general could be improved a bit since all the sharp angles here makes it feel a bit cramped, i think widening it out a bit and making the kickslider flow into the stream would be nicer

01:28:714 (5) - kickslider here doesnt really work well for the emphasis, i would just make it a triple instead here

01:42:319 (1,2,3,4,1) - should probs undermap this a bit more to be consistent with 00:17:203 -

01:50:953 (2,3) - might just be me but i don't hear a triple at all here and imo its kinda unfitting out of nowhere so i suggest removing it

02:19:296 (3,4) - imo this jump is a bit large for how the buildup is, i suggest lowering spacing a bit to be more consistent with 00:54:005 -

02:43:627 - add a circle to be consistent with 01:18:511 -

02:43:017 (3,4) - would make this a 1/2 slider to emphasize the vocals here a bit better as they would stand out more

02:41:970 (4,5,6) - would make this a 1/2 slider to follow the vocals similar to how it was done on 01:16:854 (4) -

02:36:738 (1,2,3,4) - not really a fan of this flow here, considering this is where the music gets most intense from the buildup having a bit of anti flow here doesn't really work, especially in comparison to 01:11:621 - where it was a spacing increase i think rearranging it a bit like makes the most sense

02:59:674 - would definitely make the triple here to give a bit more impact to 02:59:761 (4) - cuz rn it feels a bit underwhelming

03:10:226 (1,2,3,4) - would lower the spacing on these notes a bit more so the spacing buildup is a bit more noticeable something like maybe?

03:23:307 (2,3) - would flip the rhythm here so the loud sound on 03:23:307 - is where the slider starts

03:58:540 (1,2) - imo this flow is a bit janky especially the odd angle you have to go into the stream from this kickslider jump, i think doing something like would be better

03:53:482 - the slow slider here feels a bit jarring considering this is the start of where the song gets more intense again after the big buildup on 03:52:086 (1,2,3,4,5) - so i suggest just making it a normal speed slider tbh

00:21:682 - 00:31:256 - not really a fan of how this spot is completely 1/1 when the song picks up compared to 00:01:256 - 00:16:575 - i think adding some 1/2 sliders on the strong vocals on 00:22:799 - 00:27:905 - would be nice to add some passive 1/2 to show the song picking up in intensity a bit nicer. and at the same time i would make 00:25:352 - a circle since it's where the vocals are peaking

00:43:703 (6) - not really a fan of the loud vocals here landing on a slider end when they are similar intensity to 00:49:128 - would definitely suggest doing the rhythm as so the vocals start with the slider head on 00:44:022 -

02:03:011 - would definitely have the repeat slider start here since this is where the vocals are peaking so i suggest doing

00:16:575 - the kiai time here feels a bit unfitting considering its only for one slider on the buildup for the song so i suggest removing it

00:21:682 - you should definitely map this part of the song since it feels so jarring to not be mapped when the normal and insane both map it because it's a nice buildup to the song and i think would help improve the contrast with this diff alongside 1986888#4213053

00:43:703 (2,3) - would change this rhythm to so the loud vocals on 00:44:022 - become actively clicked since imo its a stronger sound similar to how 00:49:448 - was actively clicked

01:15:937 (3,4,5,6) - not really a fan of how active this rhythm is since atleast to me this spot isn't that intense i suggest just simplifying it a bit by doing

00:54:554 - not really a big fan of this repeat here, imo there's not really loud enough 1/4th sounds to emphasize it so i suggest just making it a 3/4th slider here

01:28:065 (1,2,3,4) - imo i would do the rhythm as so the jumps start on the vocals on 01:28:703 - to emphasize them a bit nicer

01:42:745 - maybe make this a triple and kickslider jump to emphasize the 1/4ths in the background since imo they are pretty loud and distinguishable

01:45:777 - imo i would definitely add a triple here as theres a bit of noise in the background and would help emphasize 01:45:937 - a bit more

would also mimic 01:48:331 -

00:10:192 - imo i think u should extend this slider so it ends on 00:11:469 - so it encompasses the entire part of the vocals

00:43:065 (5,6,7) - the triple here actually starts on the red tick on 00:43:224 - so i suggest just doing

00:44:581 - would definitely suggest mapping the triple here since since it's pretty loud and distinct and would give a nice climax to the ending of this vocal phrase

00:49:687 - same applies here

01:20:724 (2) - imo this kicksliders a bit unfitting since the songs intensity lowers here a bit and feels a bit forced, i suggest just doing to map the kick on 01:20:565 - and the snare on 01:20:724 -

01:24:235 (1,2) - imo the jump here is a bit excessive considering its completely additive rhythm here which makes the jump here feel a bit out of place and the extra rhythm already adds enough emphasis as it is so i suggest just doing

01:42:745 (4) - maybe make this a repeat slider to emphasize the background noise a bit more since imo it's pretty distinct

01:42:745 (1) - would suggest making this a kickslider and triple to emphasize the loud sound in the background since imo it's pretty distinct, i suggest doing

00:50:644 (5,6,7) - imo i would flip the rhythm here so the triple starts on 00:50:884 - as i feel the drums should be actively clicked and would keep consistency with the other triples in this section like 00:49:686 (3,1) - 00:48:410 (8,1) - etc

00:42:665 (3) - imo this circle here is a bit unfitting since there isn't a loud sound here and having to focus on doing a double here kinda takes away from the vocal and kick emphasis on 00:42:745 (4,5,6) - so i suggest just removing it

00:47:772 - same applies here

01:14:341 (4,5) - not really a big fan of how this overlap is, since with how different it looks compared to the other 3/4th overlaps in spots like 01:13:702 (1,2) - 01:11:468 (3,4) - etc, i feel it would make more sense to just move this pattern up a bit and make the overlaps a bit more consistent

01:57:904 (7,1) - would flip the rhythm here to so the start of the vocals on 01:57:905 - get emphasized with the slider head

00:16:575 - imo i would add a circle here to emphasize the loud crash within the song a bit nicer

00:29:660 (2) - imo i would remove this circle so the vocal focus is more prominent and then just stack 00:29:820 (2,3) -

00:54:075 (3,4) - would flip this rhythm so the slider starts on 00:54:075 - to emphasize the vocals a bit better

01:45:937 - 01:56:150 - imo spacing too large for this violin part considering it's when the songs intensity is slowing down and large jumps like 01:47:692 (3,4) - 01:50:245 (3,4) - 01:52:001 (1,2) - 01:54:394 (4,1) - etc end up giving a bit too much emphasis on these notes so i suggest just lowering the spacing a bit in general so the slow section stands out a bit more in between the vocals

00:05:574 (1,2,3) - jump here imo feels a bit too large considering it's still primarily building up in the song i think doing something like would be nicer

00:16:163 - 00:19:371 - should make this spot stand out a bit more imo i think maybe like lowering sv gradually would be a nice idea

00:20:013 - 00:35:414 - sv is definitely too high in this section considering it's tempo is really slow i suggest lowering it a bit

00:33:970 (2) - imo the 1/4th slider here i feel is a bit ackward to play so i think just making it a 1/2 slider would be better

00:39:585 (3) - would lower the spacing on this note so the contrast on the jumps on spots like 00:38:302 (1,2,3) - stand out more maybe doing something like would be nicer

00:52:740 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - the spacing is too large on these jumps as theres 0 contrast between 00:54:665 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - so i suggest reducing it

01:17:125 (1,2,1) - should make a pattern with these objects, cause the hsing clearly supports these being 3 distinct objects and rn it just looks like any other jump and at the same time i would also nc these to stand out

01:21:457 (2,1) - flow here kinda sucks ngl, going from an ackward angle to spaced streams just sucks to play would definitely suggest doing something like

01:26:592 - 01:31:677 - 5% lines for these 3/4 sliders

04:44:533 - 5%
04:54:533 - 5%

01:57:884 (1,2,3) - imo i think u should space this grouping out a bit more just to show the vocal emphasis a bit more cause rn i feel with it being so tightly compacted here it doesnt really show the emphasis as well

02:08:793 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - spacing here feels very reserved, the vocals are clearly super intense yet the spacing is extremely small i think buffing a bit here would be nice to mimic the intensity on 02:17:456 -

02:13:285 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - same with spot

02:15:049 - maybe its just me but i dont really see a point in having this really fast slider here cause imo it kinda stands out for no real reason when its just a simple snare in the song so i think it might be better to just make it normal sv

02:23:712 - same

02:12:643 - personal pref, but i think ncing to make these stand out would be nice and would probably help people not misread the bursts as single taps cause it looks visually similar to 02:12:162 (6,7,8) -

02:17:135 - same
02:21:306 - same

02:24:835 - imo i would nc the bass here cause to me its super distinct and it would be nice to stand out a bit more

02:28:365 - should have a slider start here imo cause the vocals here are extremely distinct and it feels a bit lacking to ignore them

02:30:611 (1,2,3) - jump here i feel is a bit too large cause compared to the buildup on 02:29:648 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - it feels extremely over emphasized i think just doing something like would be nice

02:34:942 (4,5,6) - jump intensity here seems a bit off cause this is definitely a slower part of the song i think reducing the spacing like makes more sense

03:11:538 (5) - would probably extend this slider to 03:11:999 - cause thats where the vocal peaks

03:23:307 - imo i would add a circle for the hihat cause i feel this space is a bit too empty

03:28:845 - same

04:10:765 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - cool emphasis

04:54:617 (5,6,7) - imo i would reverse this cause i feel triple repeats looks a bit nicer than repeats triple