00:16:903 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - Stream shape feels kinda random. Try considering what you want out of it and I can try to assist you with it
Same as Hard, you didn't get what I meant with that, so example too https://puu.sh/De3oE/a473728eff.png (spacing between 00:53:653 (2,3) - should be more important than 00:53:486 (1,2) - )
01:14:319 (2,3) - Maybe consider https://puu.sh/CX33w/b191e3c427.png ? It'd keep the emphasis on the vocals properly and not on the rather quiet synth sound on 01:14:819 -
01:45:652 (2,3) - this is a bit underwhelming, because the finish hitsound used here doesn't fit the stack. change it up a bit to give emphasis to the finish