00:24:478 (3) & 00:33:126 (3) - Shouldn't the NC be here since the piano buildup starts here rather than on 00:24:343 (1) - ?
If you're going to make this one long combo instead of just splitting it into two 16 note combos then I feel this would be more accurate to what the song is doing
00:46:234 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I don't really understand your spacing here, should 00:46:437 (4,5) - be spaced and 00:46:572 (6,7,8,1) - be lower spacing or something to follow the piano?
i checked the full ver midi (https://youtu.be/DplX2g9WXys?t=63) and it apparently does both a decrescendo and a crescendo but i dont think that can fit so i think its fine ?
00:55:694 (5,6,7,8) - Since the high pitch synth sound cuts out would suggest either using a 1/4 reverse instead to make this passive or 00:55:424 (1,2,3,4) - increase the spacing here to better represent the intensity here