Summertime Record

I think you can remove the small improvisation notes at 00:08:345 and 00:09:643, as I think the simple 1/2 portrays the intro perfectly already!

They currently feel a bit unnecessary since the sound there isn't very clear either

00:10:616 00:11:264 missing sv

00:11:025 (23) - ドラムの音に合わせてo ooo ooo のような配置にするのはどうでしょうか？配色はお好みで
同様に00:21:404 (97) - 00:26:755 (134) - 00:31:782 (172) -

00:16:863 (65) - 00:27:241 (139) - 00:53:187 (282) - 00:58:377 (318) - 01:34:701 (508) - 02:55:133 (221) - 03:02:917 (256) - 03:25:944 (41) - 03:26:268 (43) - 03:59:998 (333) - 04:05:187 (375) - 04:07:782 (397) - 大音符。他の同じ音が鳴っている部分と統一させるため

00:17:345 - add k?
00:17:426 (65,66) を消して00:11:994と揃えたい

00:28:697 - dが多すぎる気がしなくもないのでkに変更？

00:32:751 ～ 00:35:021 ちょっと音符が少なすぎるのでこんな感じに追加してはどうでしょう
01:03:886 ～ same

00:38:264 to 00:39:886 - rather odd that this section got less dense compared to 00:33:075 to 00:34:697 - can make them more similar

00:40:048 (203,204) - ctrl + g?
00:39:724 (200,201,202,203,204) - と 00:41:021 (209,210,211,212,213) - のddk k dの繰り返しを避けるため

00:47:994 - to 00:52:859 - ここを 00:42:805 - to 00:47:670 - と似たようなパターンに置き換え
00:32:426 - 00:37:616 - ここの区切りはパターンをほぼ統一していて二回目に少し肉付けしている感じなのでそれと比較すると違和感を覚えました

00:51:237 - could map here, with the vocals here it seems important enough

00:53:021 - 小さいけど音なってるのでノーツを置けます

00:58:133 (315) - を削除して00:58:052 (314) - を大音符にすることを検討してください　5連符にしたければそのままでも良いですが、音的には大音符になります

はっきりした音があるのでここにノーツを配置　01:03:160 - 02:25:539 - 03:07:701 - 03:38:836 -

consider deleting 01:11:589 becasue this type of 1/4 improv is kinda done not much in the calm parts and looks a bit random

01:13:210 と 01:13:291 ここにボーカルがあるので、ノーツを追加してもいい思います

01:24:318 (457) - 音符と小節線がずれているため修正が必要です～

Green line 01:24:318 -> 01:24:399 ugly slowdown here

The part at 01:27:886 to 01:34:697 could be a bit more dense, like adding at 01:28:129 - 01:28:372 - 01:33:318 - 01:33:562

01:37:778 - 01:38:751 - change to k
01:38:102 (512,513) - 01:40:859 (527,528) - Ctrl+g
ボーカル合わせなら

01:39:566 (530) - 大音符にするほどの音ではないので、大音符ではない方が良いと思います。01:44:755 (564) - 03:02:593 (255) - 03:28:377 (60) - 03:49:295 (235) - も

01:42:399 del? This improv doesnt provide much use when 01:42:156 and 01:42:480 vocals are on completely different verses

01:43:778 (577,578,579,580,581,582,583,584) - if using sv, why not here?

01:53:102 - ドラムの音があるため音符を追加してもよさそうです

could move 01:53:426 -> 01:53:751? I think it sounds a little better

01:58:778 - k
01:59:021 - d
直前の同じ配置(ddk k)を避けてボーカルの違いを明確にする

02:00:562 - move to 02:00:886 - then change to d? I think it would make the cymbal sound on 02:00:643 - more impactful which give a nice touch to the rhythm, also would improve the consistency with 01:50:264 -

In my opinion deleting 02:00:886 would result in a better emphasis of the song by highlighting 02:00:967 as a singular note, and I feel like a note on 02:00:886 would be unnecessarily dense.

02:01:859 - k
ddddkが多すぎるので

02:05:021 (751,752,753) - better change this to kkd to fit song and naturally connect next wall (avoid ddk copy)

02:20:264 (15,16)
02:17:670 - と曲の強度が変化してないので、同じ配置にするために削除？

02:29:021 (59,60) - 02:31:616 (74,75) - ctrl+g
他のシンバルのFinisherは基本Dで取っているのにここだけKなのが気になりました

could go for something like kdk at 02:30:318 to avoid many ddk's in a row?

02:34:048 (88,89) -
02:28:859 - との一貫性のために削除

I think you can afford to add a note at 02:36:237 to create a kdk triplet? It would still match the guitar on the background very nicely in my opinion!

02:36:805 - missing k, it's same sound you following on 02:36:480 (101)
similar case with 02:47:183 (157)

03:02:431 (254) - k d k Dの方がより曲に合っていると思います

03:05:426 (248) - actually no sound for this, it's out of your following to song. i'd delete

03:05:426 i dont see why there should be a SV jump here, just do 03:05:426 ~ 03:08:102 0.95x -> 1.19x

03:27:724 - SVs on this 7-plet 1/4 somehow looks a bit unlinear here, you may change the SVs from 03:27:724 ~ 03:28:372 - by x1,10~x1,17 instead (aka increased by x0,01 per note)

add a note on 03:32:183 to make a triplet to fill this part a little? It feels a bit empty as of now compared to the rest

03:41:674 - 他の同じ部分とは違いここにはボーカルがあるため、kを追加してもいいと思います。

03:58:697 why isn't this a linear speed up when the rest of the map is?

add 04:00:237 cuz u did 04:05:426

04:00:485 - ここは他の同じ部分とは違いドラムが鳴っているので、音符を追加

04:06:886 - you may add kat, 04:06:480 (366,367,368,369) - dddd and 04:06:805 (370,371,372) - k_kk were pairing and same sound you've used.

04:09:724 (402) - K D D Kの方が曲に合っているように感じますが、どうでしょうか？Kの連続で終わらせたいと考えての配置かもしれないので、お任せします！

04:10:372 - スピナーの終わりを04:19:291に移動？
こっちの方がギターの終わりと合ってていい感じです