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02:36:967 ~ 02:47:345 -

I think it feels a bit incomplete to not map vocals like 02:37:616 - considering you followed to it a lot on this section 00:32:426 - intensity are equal to both section. Therefore, I would suggest to follow the vocals layer a bit more in order to improve the consistency of the rhythm you following:

Add notes at: 02:37:616 - 02:38:102 - 02:42:805 - 02:43:291 -

Move this following notes:
02:38:264 -> 02:38:426 -
02:43:453 -> 02:43:616 -

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Added notes at 02:37:616 - 02:38:102 - 02:42:805 - 02:43:291 -

02:38:264 -> 02:38:426 -
02:43:453 -> 02:43:616 - moved two

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00:32:426 ~ 00:53:183 This part is too dense compared to the song intensity because you used a bit too much 1/4 improvisations

Could consider deleting the following:

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01:03:562 this part is fine because it has additional guitar layer

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02:36:96702:47:345
00:32:751 - と 01:03:886 - のパートと比べてさすがに激しすぎるので、密度を同じくらいにした方がよいです

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密度を同じくらいに変更しました

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03:18:48003:26:264
結構静かだし、1/4もあんまりかみ合ってない感じするので全部1/2にしてはどうでしょう

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1/2に変更しました

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03:53:34503:59:508
正直ここのストリームは音も無いしちょっとやりすぎです 最大でも5から7連符ぐらいに収めたほうがいいです

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変更しました

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