00:09:642 (2) - 00:20:077 (2) - these notes are following anything with the song, you would remove them and leave the gap
00:27:414 (1,2,3) - this jump looks very spaced comparing with 00:30:022 (1,2,3) - 00:31:979 (3,4,5) - , you should decrease a bit his distance to make all jumps not too much dense as you did with the lasts
00:50:566 (5,1) - their distance is very far considering the whole slow section, you might get closer the slider one to make the same spacing as 00:47:794 (3,4) - 00:52:686 (2,3) - etc.
same as 02:33:120 (3,4) -
00:58:718 (1,2) - this pattern doesn't follow very weel the melody, you could make sure to hit this kick 00:58:881 and leave this 00:59:207 as passive
same as 01:03:936 (1) -
01:01:164 (1,2) - would ctrl g the pattern to make rhythm more comfortable to hit with the song
01:11:762 this hit is passive but 01:10:457 (1) - 01:15:675 (1) - are not, you should make it more active like ctrl g this pattern 01:11:599 (1,2) -
01:24:153 (2) - vs 01:26:763 (2,3) - they are the same sound but they are mapped in different way, try to map the first one as the second one
02:59:044 (2) - slider looks weird basing on what you are trying to hitting, it would match better if there were 2 circles