00:33:936 (1,2) - these sliders, comparing with whole spread, is the unique one is not covering hitclaps on white ticks. Consider to make both sliders 1/1 leaving 00:34:425 as 1 beat gap
00:35:240 (3,4,5,6,1) - careful, other modders might say this is too much for new player. personally, idc, but keep that in mind
01:11:599 this is the same hit of 01:14:207 (3) - 01:16:816 (3) - etc. Consider to include it as such
01:39:805 (3,1) - spacing looks very small unlike 01:41:109 (3,4) - etc. you could space it more to make it equal with the rest
01:41:599 (1) - this slider hardly follows the music, try to follow vocals better with strong sounds like 01:51:870 (3,1) -
same as 01:46:816 (3) - with 01:57:088 (3,4) -
01:45:512 (4) - vs 02:40:294 (5,6) - these patterns are following the same vocal but mapped differently. you might map the first as the second to give more variation circle slider