00:30:614 - could use a pattern starting with kat here to catch the snare? like you did at 00:27:414, 00:29:014, 00:30:614 - this would be the only one missed
also, for these 5plets I think using x xxx rhythm instead could help bridge it more smoothly to the rhythm used at 00:32:214 and seems more fitting for this section's intensity imo.