Electric Angel

00:05:814 - Maybe can change this pattern so its an abekobe of 00:02:614 and not 00:07:814? Not to be prescriptive, but easiest change would be ddkdk here

00:19:514 - what do you think about moving this note to 00:19:914 (and of course changing the color)? I think this has nice support from the 1/4 in the song here, and also makes it so you have a prominent feature at the 8th beat of this loop, similar to how you have the D D finishers in the odd loops(00:16:614, 00:23:014). Also gives it a relationship with 01:11:014.

00:30:414 - not mapped but 00:27:214 00:32:014 is?

00:45:614 -> 00:46:414 seems better of a rest moment placement since the song gradually gets more intense

00:50:914 - don't think this 1/4 works when there's a clear 1/2 sound at 00:50:814 compared to 00:39:714 where it slaps

01:01:014 - i like this pattern!

01:04:714 01:04:814 - maybe omit these to focus on drums here

01:11:014 - this is 3/8 + 3/8 + 1/4 just represent it with 1/3 lol and remove finisher on 01:11:414

01:15:014 - chain kinda too dense maybe nerf it a lil

01:28:014 - i like how you shifted the 3plet 1/2 earlier than where you had it in 00:37:014. Nice simple variation, and supported well with the buildup being stronger and faster here.

01:52:614-01:55:814 - maybe you can flip the colors of this whole passage?

at least from what I gathered in 01:43:414-01:56:214, it seemed that you were starting phrases with len with blue and rin with red. Not sure if that was coincidental or intended, but thats how it all is except for the last bit at 01:52:614-01:55:814, and i think itd be cool to lean fully into that idea.

02:28:214 - the HS vol here feels a little low to me. Id probably suggest bumping it at least to 70%, maybe 80%?

Also on a related note, youre doing a pretty big vol jump all the way from 25% at 02:28:214, so id recommend adding another volume line earlier before the note, so the vol still gets applied if the player hits early.

02:29:314 - probably would recommend moving this over to 02:28:914, and then making the resulting 5plet a mono. Or removing this note.

it just feels a little weird to me since 02:29:314 i guess could be mapped as a held sound, but 02:28:914 seems like the more obvious spot cause of the drums

02:29:814 - you can map here a bit more if you want since there's a rest moment right before this

02:34:414 -> 02:35:014 for the snare + vocal? Can also omit 02:36:014 if you want to separate sections better

03:00:214 - here you could use a kat instead for the cymbal, to differentiate it from 01:03:414 where it was just drums

03:08:114 - the sound you're mapping to ends here so maybe could map this and omit 03:07:714
Could also map 03:08:114 for top