00:17:603 - Maybe add d so the rhythm bridge feels consistent + piano sound (similar to 00:25:498, 00:28:656 - )
00:36:551 - same ^
00:46:024 - same ^
00:54:314 - This note can be moved to 00:53:130 - and ctrl+g the double for similar reasons above
02:18:393 - not exactly like the issue above, but the idea is overall similar, could add d for the drums
00:26:288 - a little contrast with 00:25:498 (lower note in vocals)
00:30:235 - ok
01:38:524 - I guess it can work
01:48:590 - I think it's fine, plays of the change in tone of vocals from 01:48:393
01:52:340 - I prefer current pattern, it better highlights the snare
02:42:669 - sort of a similar premise as 01:48:590
01:03:590 (127,128) - ctrl+g so you can differentiate the vocal mapping vs. piano mapping on 01:04:182 (129,130,131,132,133) -
02:39:117 (458,459,460) - I really don't think these sounds are worth mapping because they remove the focus on the piano sounds
02:40:498 - You could perhaps map the string sounds with kddkd