Koishi Circulation

00:01:271 (1271|0,1271|1,1428|2,1586|3) - at the start of the music maybe you can follow the pitch?

00:15:007 - Not sure why these long notes are suddenly doubles, when the rest of this section emphasizing those long synths are only single long notes (00:12:797 and 00:10:586)
00:17:218 - I think this should also have that long note emphasis, as that extended synth sound is here as well

00:15:402 (15402|3,15481|3) - This minijack appears out of nowhere in the chart, and is the only minijack in a section of otherwise simple jumpstream, and there's no clear reason for it within the song, which leads me to think this is unintentional.

It's quite sudden and uncomfortable, and I think this section would play a lot better if it was removed

00:15:481 - I have some concerns about the imbalance towards the left hand here, especially with such long anchors appearing here. This causes the section to play rather uncomfortably, and could probably be improved with some rebalancing

00:15:639 - till 00:17:849 -

Sudden burst of double triple usage here is a bit concerning tbh.

Based on what I can see for overall pattern usage on this overall section, the double triple usage should be something like this:

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19266877/aa1a
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19266878/5f77
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19266881/6c58

the pattern itself you can rearrange it as what you like but overall, the double triple usage would be somewhere similar like that, and you can start to introduce the 1/8 before the 1/8 burst ahead.

00:16:113 (16113|3,16271|3,16428|3,16586|3,16744|3,16902|3) - Very long anchor in col 4, would try rearranging to reduce the weight and strain

00:16:665 (16665|1,16744|3,16744|0,16784|2,16823|1,16863|0,16902|3) - ,

Could rearrange into https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19288943/e7b8 to make it a bit more balanced.

00:18:047 (18047|2,18086|3,18126|0,18165|1) - Would continue making this 4-3-2-1, the sudden shift in direction makes this very awkward

00:18:481 (18481|3,18521|2,18560|1,18599|0,18639|2,18718|1,18797|2,18876|1) - I have some worries about the length of these long notes, specifically that they're a bit too short, to the point where it impacts the how well this section plays.

These long notes being 1/8ths makes these play as if they're 380 1/4 long notes, which is far too short to be reasonably hit accurately, especially considering these almost completely don't show a long note tail in game.

I'd suggest adjusting these to be rice notes, or lengthening these to be 1/4, which is far more manageable

This also applies for 01:54:955, 01:56:218, 01:56:849, 01:57:165, 01:57:955, 01:58:586, and 01:59:376 as well in the ending.

00:18:639 (18639|2,18718|2) - i think the minijack could be moved to col4, there have more space from the trill and minijack

00:20:218 (20218|3,20297|2,20376|1,20455|0) - the sounds here is Triplet, i think this pattern can't emphasize the triplet sounds

00:20:849 (20849|0,21007|3) - Would control H to make 00:20:691 (20691|1,20770|1) - easier to hit

00:23:376 (23376|0,23533|3) - Same

00:25:270 (25270|0,25428|0,25586|0,25744|0,25823|0) - Try to rearrange for comfort cause the anchor + 1/4 minijack is very difficult to hit

00:26:533 (26533|1,26612|1,26691|2) - Control H to make it easier to hit?

00:28:270 (28270|3,28270|2) - why here doubled? here is no kick compared with 00:27:797 -

00:30:797 (30797|0,30797|1,30876|0,30955|1) - Kinda weird to hit, try this

00:34:270 (34270|2,34310|0,34349|1) - Would make this 4-3-2 for easier flow

00:35:376 (35376|0,35533|0,35691|0,35849|0,36007|0,36165|0,36402|0) - Try to reduce this anchor

00:54:955 (54955|0,55112|0,55270|0,55428|0,55586|0,55744|0,55902|0,56060|0,56218|0,56376|0,56533|0,56691|0,56849|0,57007|0,57165|0,57323|0,57481|0) - an anchor with 17notes, i think can be optimization

00:59:376 (59376|0) - for the playability,i think this note can be delete,so hard to hit actually

01:04:112 (64112|0,64112|2) - im a little confused about why double here,i think its unnecessary

01:13:270 (73270|1,74376|2,74455|0,74533|2,74533|1,74533|0) - ,

Personally, I think this looks weird and unnecessarily hard to hit.

It would be better if you can rearrange it into something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19266887/8c73

01:14:533 - for the cymbal sounds here,it may should be triple

01:15:165 (75165|2,75165|0,75165|1) - at this part, i think u can make kick doubled and cymbal triple to compare kick and cymbal

01:17:060 - triple

01:24:481 (84481|2,84560|2) - 01:30:165 (90165|1,90244|1) - Seems like inconsistent minijack that doesn't really appear at any other similar spots, might be good to double check this

01:24:639 (84639|1,84639|0,84797|3,84797|1,84955|0,84955|3,85112|2,85112|0,85191|1,85270|3,85270|2,85428|3,85428|1,85586|0,85586|2,85744|1,85744|0,85902|2,85902|3,86060|1,86060|0,86218|2,86218|0,86376|1,86376|3) - im a little bit not understand why LN are suddenly be shorter here,not only for the consistency but also for the difficulty here is obviously easier than 01:19:586 - with the more dense music

01:30:165 - why not make minijack here,it same as 01:32:218 -

01:39:797 - ~ 01:49:902 - This section is probably still better to have consistent minijack like other sections, while different mappers can have different concept but it's just weird for this to be the only one section that being left out consider the song's repeated nature

01:41:849 (101849|1) - to col 3 would be easier imo

01:47:849 (107849|2,108007|0,108007|3) - Would try this to reduce strain on right hand

01:50:455 - Missing a 1/4 note for melody

01:52:428 (112428|3,112428|2,112507|3) - Move minijack to col 3 and 01:52:428 (112428|2) - to col 4
01:53:060 (113060|0,113060|1,113139|0) - Might be easier to move minijack to col 2 and 01:53:060 (113060|1) - to 1

01:58:705 (118705|0) - Would just make this rice note instead of extending this into 01:58:744 -

01:59:218 - till end,

why not rearrange into https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19288940/4b77 ?

consistent LN hold length and more balanced.

01:59:612 (119612|1,119652|2,119691|0,119731|1,119770|3,119810|2,119849|1,119889|0) - why not just make roll ,i don't find anything that can make the flow be interrupted