jihad (TRIBAL LINK ver.)

00:19:326 (1) - pretty sure spinners need atleast 1/4 gap before the next note starts so recommend to make the spinner end 00:20:493 -

00:21:993 , 01:41:992 Your green line isnt affecting the slider, just move around the slider in the timeline and it should be fixed

00:23:326 (3) - nc should start here instead of 00:22:992 (1) - since (3) is more prominent

u could maybe move 00:25:326 (3) - to X 177 Y 170 so it looks like this https://imgur.com/a/ah40sKu

00:27:025 (1,1) - would unnc either one of both since the combo is too short and looks weird ngl

00:37:691 (1,1) - 01:47:025 (1,1) - 01:57:691 (1,1) - 04:16:358 (1,1) - 04:27:025 (1,1) -

(would also rearrange some of them in top diff)

00:47:419 Curious why you left this blank when you could've easily put a circle or two, maybe even put a slider and remove the 2 notes 00:47:669 (3,4)

00:49:826 (1) - not sure why a new combo here since the vocal is 00:49:659 - here but u could make 00:49:992 (2) - this the new combo instead since its a louder vocal

00:52:159 missing a note on vocal, could go with a circle + 1/2 slider to cover the vocal and the drum

00:53:492 (1,2) - Unstacking this would be nice since the toms are different pitch

00:59:336 (2,3) - This slider's orientation is weird, and there's no beat on the 2nd slider.
Maybe just make it one long slider?

01:02:669 (1,2,3) There's a held vocal here, why isn't it just a long slider/ 1/4th circles.

01:04:159 (4,5,6) - could emphasize these more since they're pretty intense and also slightly feels part of the calm part.

01:04:191 (4,5,6,1) - would nerf a bit as it is too big to be a transition to the next buildup

01:04:525 (6,1) - why is the same color wtf how can u do that lmao, anyway u cant do that

01:09:993 (1,4) - slider isnt stacked properly

01:14:326 (1,3) - arent stacked u should probably stack them since theyre a pixel off

01:15:003 (1) - I think you should atleast leave a 1/6th gap to avoid any playability issues.

01:24:993 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - subjective, but given both similar sections at 2nd & 3rd kiai (i.e. 02:45:025 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - 03:54:025 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ) already introduced some cool patterns to represent the content of music, the first one seems a bit bland, could try something to make it funnier

01:25:326 (3) - maybe consider changing this into circles for more emphasis, the slider kinda makes it feel weak with little spacing.

01:25:493 (4,1) - not really a fan of this overlap either u may wanna change it

01:25:742 (5,6) - consider adding soft-hitwhistle since you have additive rhythm

01:36:659 (1,2,3,4) - maybe space them more for better emphasis as it transition into verses?

01:54:669 (1) - Wave sliders look weird if they're not pointing Up, down, left or right. I suggest rotating it by about 30 degrees or so to not make it look weird.

also ugly overlap with 01:54:003 (5) -

02:04:659 (4) - not sure what u follow here with this slider if its vocals it should be 1/1

02:06:669 (1) - Same thing with the wave slider, looks better to me if it was just a slight curve pointing up.

02:07:503 (2) - Making it a straight slider looks cleaner.

02:12:159 - u should probably make this clickable since its where a vocal start

02:12:836 No clue why this is left blank.

02:27:025 (1,2) - spacing goes too big for a filler rhythm imo

02:28:003 (1,2) - this looks weird to me, not sure why they wouldn't just work as normal curved sliders.

02:31:493 (1,2,3) - this rhythm doesn't make sense to me imo, shouldnt (1) be a 1/2 slider since you're following the vocal?

02:34:669 (9) - you could have a very slow slider here to go along with the Vocals.

02:40:191 (4,5,1) - this angle is kinda harsh imo, maybe move (5) to the left?

02:41:003 (5,1) - this was a bit uncomfortable to play, same thing with the 1/6th gap.

03:12:659 - and 03:17:993 - should probably have diffrent velocities since 03:17:993 - seemed bit louder

03:30:525 (2,3) - would buff a bit to emphasize the (3), as the high pitch is notable unlike weaker sounds like 03:24:691 (3) - 03:28:691 (3) - (assuming this is your intention of not introducing jumps for every individual downbeat in the same structure)

03:36:659 (3,4,5) - this should have more spacing to give more contrast to 03:37:659 (1,2,3,4) -

03:41:992 (1,2,1,2) - Consider spacing this more and have it reduce spacing as the instrument is getting calmer?

03:44:659 (1) - sliderend is snapped to 1/5 for some reason

04:09:336 (6) - you could add some cool slider here.

04:20:659 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ik this is the last part of the music but does the spacing need to be that large compared to 00:31:358 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 01:51:358 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -

personally I would say something like this should be enough

04:31:326 (1) - slider tail should end on 04:32:659 then you can have the spinner

04:32:659 (1) - i wouldve made the spinner end 04:39:326 - since it sorta end on something that continues fading out