jihad (TRIBAL LINK ver.)

00:20:691 (1,2,3,4) - ik this might be intentional but could you do something to represent that 00:21:191 (3,4) - is 1/1 gap, since right now the spacing is same as 00:21:025 (2,3) - which is kinda confusing

00:21:608 (5) - personally I think it sounds weird to overmap this, but if you do this at least add additive hs like kick on it

00:21:993 (1,2) - 00:22:659 (3,1) - not sure what to think about these spacing u might wanna reduce them

00:31:358 (1,2) - 01:51:358 (1,2) - seems more intuitive to swap nc here, and 03:32:858 (3) - nc, 03:32:358 (1) - 03:32:858 (3) - unnc

00:42:076 (1) - 1/4 gap needed w the spinner nd next object!!

01:14:326 (7) - could move this up on the playfield since its a 1/1 gap + provides better emphasis

01:25:525 01:57:858 map clap active?

i personally wouldve made 01:43:993 (3,4,1) - like this https://imgur.com/a/LCtJ1zm i htink the current pathing is really awkward

01:51:993 (5,6,7,8) - could do something similar to what you did like 00:31:993 (5,6,7,8) - since it currently feels weak

02:01:993 (1) - this additive rhythm doesn't really makes sense to me since the snare are in 1/2 and is very noticeable

02:04:159 (2,3,4) - your spacing on this is very big compare to the top diff, could reduce the spacing to be somewhat similar to the top diff.

02:21:659 (1) - un-nc to stay consistent with 02:20:326 (4) -

02:23:358 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It'd be nice if you make this a buildup spacing pattern imo

02:28:326 (3,1) - this shouldn't be overlapped since its inconsistent with 02:25:659 (3,1) -

02:33:691 (4,1) - I think map the triple d be better

02:34:326 (2) - nc to signify the sv change?

02:54:826 (4) - suggest stacking this with 02:54:659 (3) - instead to give more emphasis on 02:54:993 (5) - cause of the snare.

03:00:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ur missing hs on this pattern

03:12:659 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - add hitwhistles?
03:17:993 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - this too
this applies to the top diff too.

also this pattern is lot more active compare to the top diff. could swap the pattern around.

03:22:326 missing a note here for the snare

03:47:326 (5) - nc here since the combo chain is too long?

03:54:358 (1,2,3) - would nerf the entire pattern as even considering this is for a buildup and the movement is kinda smooth, the spacing of 03:55:025 (3,1) - is still too large for an insane

04:05:775 (6) - additive hs

04:20:691 (1) - just introducing a reverse slider here when 00:31:358 (1) - 01:51:358 (1) - introduce active rhythms feels a bit underwhelming especially since this should be a notable element of the music, could do the same thing for the last part