03:54:955 (234955|2,235034|0) - I feel like these long notes should not be long notes, but rather rice notes, as they lessen the impact of the jumptrill and strong drums here, and unintentionally give it a flowy feel from holding the long notes.
05:19:772 (319772|0,319851|1) and 05:21:029 (321029|3,321107|2) - Rather similarly to #4254702, I think these long notes should be reduced to 1/4 snappings to create a better contrast to the hand ahead, which would give it a more impactful feel. It would also make the release timing on the one hand trills a bit kinder to the player