00:28:552 (1,2) - would have 3 circles here for the melody since that's the most prominent here
00:33:181 (5,6) - space this more than 00:33:010 (4,5) - or nerf 00:32:495 (1,2,3,4,5) - so it emphasis the stronger sound better on 00:33:352 (6) -
00:35:410 (3,4,5,6) - follow vocals a bit better here, since that's what you're doing in 00:39:524 (3) - . Something like https://gyazo.com/c08ac279085ae9f04fe4d78d7dd8be6f
00:52:895 (5,6,7) - given the few seconds later, would turn this into passive, too much 1/4's for an Insane for spread reasons