01:09:181 (3,4,5) - patterning like this might me better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19222788/22f1
00:39:952 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - movement is awkward you can probably do something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19222787/eccc
00:16:381 (6,7,8,1) - this is really awkward to play i think you should repattern this so it continues to next pattern better
intensity of 00:47:410 part isnt very reflective of the song as its currently very similar to 00:12:952 as seen in 01:11:238 (5,6,1) - simplified patterns like these. you can fix it by buffing the rhythm in the part
I dont use distance snap on hard diffs but I agree that spacing is kinda messy in this diff. I will rework spacing and show clearer emphasis.