SICK feat. Natsuki Karin (Cut Ver.)

00:08:555 - / 00:10:642 - / 00:14:816 - should be charted like 00:16:903 (16903|3,16903|2,16968|0,17033|2,17099|1,17164|3) - / 00:18:990 (18990|3,18990|2,19077|0,19120|3,19164|1,19251|2) - or viceversa

00:11:686 (11686|3,11686|1,11860|0,11860|2,12033|1,12033|0,12207|3,12207|2) - should be charted like 00:20:033 (20033|2,20033|1,20207|0,20207|3,20294|2,20381|0,20381|1,20555|0,20555|3) - or viceversa, the difference here it's that the first one dont have the 1/2 note charted for the hihat, also the first one dont have an anchor of 3 notes (00:20:207 (20207|0,20381|0,20555|0) - )

00:12:729 (12729|3,12729|1,12794|2,12990|1) - should be charted like 00:21:077 (21077|1,21142|3,21207|0,21273|2,21338|1) -

and 00:21:599 (21599|2,21599|3) - should be charted like 00:13:251 (13251|0,13251|3) -

00:38:915 (38915|2,38915|1,39035|2,39155|1,39275|1,39395|2) - / 00:33:635 (33635|1,33635|2,33755|2,33875|1,33995|1) - is this on purpose? i mean this type of stacking it's different compared to the others

00:40:115 (40115|2,40295|1,40355|2,40475|2,40535|1,40595|2,40715|1,40835|2,40895|1,40955|2) - ik that's intentional but i suggest to make this pattern more linear, even because the gap with the hard section

00:42:755 (42755|2,42815|3) - and 00:43:235 (43235|3,43295|0) - should be charted at the opposite in order to keep the consistency

00:46:415 (46415|1,46655|1,46775|1,46955|1,47075|1,47255|1,47375|1,47555|1,47795|1) - big anchor there, also i have other suggestion for this micro sections:

• 00:46:235 (46235|0,46355|0) - it's unconfy to hit
• instead of following a 1/1 doublet pattern what about following the high pitched snares ?

example to resolve this :

00:48:275 - to 00:50:195 - ik that's intentional pt2, but in order to avoid a little bit the gap with the hard diff make this section easy and more linear like this:

it's even more cooler if we can remove 00:49:175 - / 00:49:295 - to create a gap but lets see if with other mod we can lower the sr

00:54:035 - to 00:55:955 -, ik that's intentional pt3, but what about making 00:54:355 (54355|2) - a rice note since it's equal to 00:54:195 (54195|1) - and move the tail of 00:54:035 (54035|3) - 00:54:355 - to avoid that 1/8 release gap?

also why 00:54:835 (54835|1,54995|1) - / 00:55:315 (55315|1,55475|1) - are stacked? 00:54:355 (54355|2) - have the 1/1 above empty.

00:56:135 - missing note for the kick drum

also 00:56:915 - you should focus this snare because the pitch it's really high, for this it's better to make something like this

00:58:115 - to 00:59:795 - it's filled by trills and the middle anchor goes crazy (00:59:155 (59155|1,59395|1,59555|1,59715|1,59915|1,60155|1,60395|1) - )
my suggestion to fix it:

i keep the triangles to point out the guitars solo and used a linear pattern for the kicks

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00:59:795 - to 01:01:475 - what about doing something more trickier ? it would be cool also because it's really easy compared with the section before:

in this case i used intentionally the snares and the anchors to emphatize better the percussions, but it depends by you

01:01:715 - to 01:02:675 - the right hand it's heavier than the left
(01:01:715 (61715|2,61715|3,61835|3,61955|2,62075|3,62135|2,62315|3,62435|2,62555|3,62615|2,62715|3) - )

let me suggest this pattern:

in this way you'll:

• emphatize better the trills (triangles)
• remove ghost notes (orange x)
• rearrange/balance the distribution of notes in all columns (red box)

01:06:875 - missing drum sound
01:10:595 - should be charted as doublet

01:20:915 - should be charted as triplet since there's a finisher snare

01:28:355 (88355|2,88475|1) - / 01:28:835 (88835|1,88955|2) - / 01:29:795 (89795|2,89915|1) - / 01:31:595 (91595|2,91715|1,91835|3,91955|2,91955|0,92075|3,92075|1,92195|2,92315|0) - should be charted as 1/6

01:33:395 - missing sound

also wanted to suggest this pattern

in order to emphatize the last snare (the last note)