00:04:757 (3) - Minor, but ctrl g'ing it and keeping up with the circular flow would prob be more consistent within this section.
Look at 00:08:862 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - 00:13:599 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - as examples of circular flows used in this section.
01:03:020 (5,6) - Could space this a bit more. It is probably the most important sound in this whole build-up and currently it is a bit underwhelming.