00:12:336 (5) - You could change this into a circle because the snare sound is pretty similar to 00:11:388 (2,3) - .
And change 00:12:652 (6) - into a slider cuz there's drums on 00:12:809
i get your idea but from 00:12:020 the guitar noticeably starts to build up so i want to reflect that with 1/2 sliders, and the idea works with the build up rhythm too (circle only -> sliders). I get that the drum roll starts at 00:12:809 but having a circle at 00:12:967 (7) - already emphasize the cymbal enough so i think the rhythm works fine :D
00:41:862 (3,4,5,6,7) - I get that you're prioritizing the drums here but you were focusing on vocals during the entire section so this rhythm becomes a bit awkward.
Having a clickable on 00:42:178 would be nice to complete the vocal phrasing.
Could try something like this for example and see if you like it.
00:46:757 (3,4) - 00:49:283 (3,4) - Optional but ctrlg'ing the rhythm here could work better since you'll have a clickable on both vocals and snare.
01:07:757 (5,6,7) - The vocal line on 01:07:757 (5) - is pretty similar to 01:05:230 (5) - but you have a 1/1 slider instead. Could tweak this rhythm a bit to have more consistency between these vocals.
Try something with a circle on 01:07:757 like and see if you like it.
01:32:862 (5) - Could turn this into a circle to differentiate from 01:33:178 (6) - where the drum roll starts.
And then turn 01:33:494 (7) - into slider to keep up with the drum roll.