00:02:758 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i would rotate this to this cuz people will prob snap aim this and sharp angles are good 4 sharp aims
that doesn't change anything tho, it still has the same flow, that just makes the spacing bigger
00:03:442 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23) - Imo i feel like this can be lower down (as in playfield-Placement) Cuz atleast to me it seems to be quite a massive jump out of no where while prior for a similar sound the jump was not as big here : 00:02:071 (3) -
00:11:557 (5,1) - Shouldn't 00:11:671 (1) - be shorter to leave room for a clickable circle for following the same action (2 clicks) since the sound are the same for (slider-tail of (1) and 00:12:014 (2) -
00:32:579 (1) - Can remove NC here to keep consistent with the 2-beat NCing across the rest of this short burst section
I'm not quite sure what 00:34:185 (8,8) - follows
Might be better to extend both (7) ? would require some replacement and a slight remap tho
it's monotonous just with the reverse. i'll leave it the way it is now. It kinda emphasises the jump from one arpeggio to another one.
00:34:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Would honestly just full NC this like top diff, with the large variety in spacing changes across the 1/6 streams like 00:32:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - vs 00:33:608 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - vs 00:37:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
It could totally be interpreted as just another 1/6 with different spacing so NCing would prob help here
00:37:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Feel like you could extand more on this by following a similar idea with the spacing like you did previously at :
00:34:985 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) -
and 00:33:614 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - / 00:34:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
00:38:071 (2) - i'd ctrl+g this slider to fix the flow: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19184199/873e , since there's no reason to break it bcause the drum sound goes the same
00:40:642 (1) - i would map the sound on the sliderend here cuz that's the only place where you mapped the guitar passively in this section
00:45:785 (1) - i'd nc this note to emphasize nc 00:46:042 (1) - here more, so player will understand obviously that 00:46:042 (1) - here's another rhythm scale
01:00:471 (5) - Feel like this is a bit too hard to see the slider-tail maybe you could do something like :
atleast to me it would help in term of readability