Bad for me (Dz'Xa's Amenpunk)

00:13:391 - falta una nota aqui por tu esquema de layering

00:15:491 (15491|1) - is there any particular reason to have this single? coz it is being inconsistent with previous layering on the heavy kick sound like 00:13:091 (13091|2,13091|3)

I think it's fine to have double here

00:18:491 (18491|2) - I think this note is misplaced, this looks like to catch the vocal sound but the layering here was supposed to be instrument focus which should be here 00:18:341 I suggest move that note into this timestamp

00:19:991 - I think should have note here to maintain the flow and it has similar sound with 00:20:141 (20141|0)

00:21:941 (21941|0,22091|1,22241|2,22391|3) - this 1-2-3-4 placement seems abit out of the pitch, moreelse it's being similar with 00:20:591 (20591|0,20741|1,20891|2,21041|3) but clearly different sound in the short period is abit weird for me, may differentiate them

I suggest 00:22:241 (22241|2,22391|3) - ctrl+J into 4-3
00:24:641 (24641|2,24791|3) - ^

00:23:291 - I guess note here on col1 wouldn't hurt the pattern? pretty clear sound right here I suggest to add

00:30:941 (30941|0) and 00:32:141 (32141|0,32141|1) - have same sound but with different amount of note(s), may better to make it same

00:37:391 (37391|2) - there is no vocal here, so I think sacrifice this kick with this (maybe trumpet) sound is not really good, I suggest to move this note into 00:37:241 for the kick

00:42:491 (42491|2,42641|2) - abit weird minijack choice, the vocal is "ko" and "ro", if needs to make minijack here I would make it into the two "ko" vocals here 00:42:341 (42341|3) - 00:42:491 (42491|2)

something like this
00:42:041 -

00:46:991 (46991|3) - this one should be unnoted to make it same with 00:37:391 - it also gives impact on the vocal stop. also might move 00:46:841 (46841|1) - into col3/col4 to make the trill pattern

01:03:791 (63791|1,63941|3) - it will be better to shift this up 1/2 beat to follow the kick, most prominent sound around here is 1/4 snare that abit confusing if we have note on the red line

01:03:941 -

01:06:491 (66491|3) - here there is no percussion sound you've tried to layer, suggest to remove and arrange some notes around

01:17:928 (77928|3,77928|1,77928|0) - not triple, normal is discouraged to have triple, double is enough

01:18:003 (78003|3) - I feel like map this cymbal sound is not really good, since there is more prominent sound (snare) here 01:17:928 (77928|0) that might make player reflected to press here rather than the cymbal sound

*you can map both but snare should be prioritized

01:23:291 (83291|0,83441|0) - there is no music cue that can be expressed with this minijack, tho I think instead of note at here 01:23:291 (83291|0) - should be better to note the snare here 01:23:141 - since sound right there is very quiet and having pretty low impact in compare with the snare

01:23:440 (83440|1,83440|3,83740|2,83740|0) - if you're gonna chart these out like [13] to [24], then you should probably do the same thing but flipped here 01:24:640 (84640|2,84640|3,84940|0,84940|1) - ([24] to [13]). you do this in the first kiai so its a bit weird to break this consistency here for that reason.

01:26:290 (86290|1,86290|2,86740|1) - so instead of this, make this so all the doubles during this part are [13]. you do something similar in the first kiai with [12] (00:43:089 (43089|1,43089|0,43539|1,43539|0) - ) so im thinking u can do the same thing here but [13].

01:27:791 - okay consistency mod based on prev section

01:28:091 (88091|1) - should be double looking at 01:18:491 (78491|0,78491|3)
01:30:041 - should add a note and remove 01:30:341 (90341|2,90341|1) looking at 01:20:441 (80441|2,80591|1,80891|0)
01:30:641 - should add a note looking at 01:21:041 (81041|1)
01:31:991 (91991|3) - should be removed looking at 01:22:391
01:32:741 - should add a note and remove 01:32:891 (92891|1) based on #3720668

02:06:641 - now for kiai 3

02:11:141 and 02:20:741 - I think can add double here, or single if you think too dense for double, since it is the last kiai so issokay to make it more dense?
02:15:791 (135791|1) , 02:34:991 (154991|1) and 02:44:591 (164591|1) - is there any reason for making this single that it was double on previous kiai?
02:16:241 - should add for consistency 02:06:641 (126641|0)
02:18:191 (138191|3,138491|3) - you don't do this stack of the trumpet emphasis on previous, you want to keep this, at least also do stack on 02:08:591 (128591|0,128891|2)

02:46:691 (166691|3) - you might wanna connect this to the 1/1 tick since i dont think this is snapped properly

02:46:691 (166691|2) - this LN looks like follow the trumpet, then it should be longer since the sound is still there after 02:48:641 , should snap the slider end until here 02:49:109 (169109|1)

03:13:841 - I barely hear anything after this timestamp. also for normal diff, I think it's better to do this LN 03:07:691 (187691|0) ends on more prominent sound at this ending

03:11:441 - maybe here is better since the wind sound already ended here