00:13:357 (1,2,3) - Could make this part more clear in its rhythm by having (1) end on the middle white tick and adding a note after it. Having the slider morph into the stream creates rhythm that isn't so clear.
Want to give better focus and emphasis on the vocal that's overpowering the instruments by keeping this as a 2/1, don't really want to create another note for this weak drum
00:31:757 (2,3,4) - This does a poor job of standing out because of how you use this shape previously. The difference is rather minor despite the sound being so distinct. I would either try to change the rhythm here or make the patterning more diverse/aggressive.
This pattern is fine? It's a full horizontal that's meant to emphasise the repeated vocal and kick so I don't really see anything wrong with this
I buffed up the spacing between each object for better contrast though but keeping same shape
00:45:557 (1) - This slider kind of morphs into the note creating some awkward rhythm. Shortening this slider to the red tick and adding a note after is creates a way more clear rhythm while also sounding better.
I did this on purpose so that it would end on the next notable and apparent vocal, don't really fancy ending it on pretty much nothing
00:58:157 (1) - I would shorten this slider to match up with the gap between 00:59:757 (1,1) - It would make this slider feel a lot more in place with this section.