00:16:557 (1,2) - I think you could have a note be between these two to emphasize the saxophone a little bit more. Simply having 00:16:557 (1,3,4) - these 3 slider doubles just doesn't emphasize it that well. Its a very distinct part of the song so I think its important to emphasize it if possible. Especially since you go through the work of emphasizing it later in the song.
have note between this it look weird for me
it not feel like emphasize saxophone when have note between 00:16:557 (1,2)
01:19:507 (3,4) - 4.00x seems like a mistake considering the section is calm + the rhythm snap is weird. it's feels too difficult, and the hdashes never go above 3.5x even during intense sections
what is the difference between a mistake and an oversight... and it's especially noticeable with mods but whatever