the intro feels rly intense for such a "hard", you prob can contrast it by something like overlap 00:03:099 (1,2), create spacing for 00:03:684 (3,1), it will be a lot better
-> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17537062/dedf (if you do this you can keep 00:04:658 (1,2,3) for holding visual with 00:05:437 (1))
feels free to do the same with 00:06:216 (1,2,3,1,2)