01:42:669 - 01:53:610 - A lot of notable sounds, especially the ones on white ticks aren't being mapped in this part which lead to an awkward playing experience. (e.g. 01:42:933 - 01:43:198 - 01:43:727 - 01:44:345 - 01:44:610 - and so on)
I'd recommend remapping the part to follow the main melody appropriately, since the current rhythm choice is highly questionable and does feel off music
02:50:433 - 03:00:316
it would be cool to add an hdash before every big white tick for better presentation of every ''Never Let Me Go''
02:51:492 (5) - make it horizontal
02:53:257 (1) - move to x:390
02:54:316 (5) - make it horizontal
02:56:080 (1) - make it vertical and move to x:106
02:57:139 (5) - make it horizontal
02:58:904 (1,2) - move both to x:401