Twisted Drop Party

00:14:069 missing note? snare sound

00:31:844 (31844|4,31994|3) - would switch columns because melody goes lower, so notes go to the right; but when the melody goes higher, the notes go to the left

00:33:344 (33344|2) - I think this LN could be extended to 00:33:644 since it's not a short detached sound like these 00:32:744 (32744|3,32894|5,33044|1) - . Same applies to 01:40:544 (100544|2) -

00:34:994 (34994|4) - since you're being pretty accurate with the length of the LNs, I suggest shorten this one to 4/4. The sound stops pretty early

00:52:769 (52769|3,52769|4) - I don't think the sound here is impactful enough to warrant a double. I'd make it a single.

00:55:844 (55844|6,55994|3) - Hm, would remove these (or at least 00:55:994 (55994|3)) because the three kicks sound all the same and are also equally loud, so putting a different amount of notes on each kick seems a bit confusing

00:57:044 , 00:57:194 maybe you better highlight it with 2 notes for vocal? it gets stronger on 00:57:344 and it will be cool if it was 2 notes > 3 notes, not 1 > 3

00:57:944 I believe you can highlight it with 3 notes, since there is crash sound + hey sound

01:04:694 (64694|5,64694|4,64769|1,64769|2) - could use snare and kick hitsounds

01:07:844 (67844|2,67844|1,67844|6) - I think this should be 2 presses rather than 3 since you've made it that every part with kick+snare is 3 presses. It would also make it consistent with 01:09:044 (69044|1,69044|6) - etc.
Make sure you correct the inconsistencies that are similar i.e 01:12:644 (72644|4,72644|0,72644|5) - , etc.

01:09:494 maybe you better remove this note? no snare sound, only kick

01:11:144 I find this sound stronger than 01:10:844 , 01:10:994 so you better highlight it with 3?

01:51:794 (111794|2) - would move to c2 because the melody is the same as 01:51:494 (111494|1)

02:02:144 delete a note for double?

maybe you better do smth like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/16602624/6c3c to highlight 02:03:869 sound?

02:05:444 hm its kinda random 3 notes here I think... 02:05:744 , 02:06:044 same sounds ...

02:09:644 it's unusual to put 3 notes here as well, I can not hear any extra sounds

02:13:544 (133544|1,133544|2) - I feel ctrl+h'ing this would make it more representative on the music.
If you apply this, be sure to ctrl+h the others (02:13:844 (133844|4,133844|5,134144|2,134144|1) - )

02:26:294 (146294|6) - remove this cause no snare here

02:27:644 (147644|1,147644|2,147644|0,147794|0,147794|1,147794|2,147944|5,147944|4) - i think you should change triplet to double, double to triplet here

02:47:969 (167969|2,167969|3) - This should be a single. Sound is not impactful enough