00:18:044 (18044|3,18044|4) - The pattern here imo are a bit challenging to tap for them I think due to these yellow 00:17:144 (17144|3,17744|3) - already be tapped before. Not really a major problem but I suggest you to make the pattern here more easier. How about https://kysk2104.s-ul.eu/ITk6mqpH for better easy tapping ?
00:27:044 (27044|5) - Any reason as to why this is a single note instead of a double? You've establised doubles for every other part with the piano chord in it such as 00:25:244 (25244|2,25244|0) - and 00:26:444 (26444|2,26444|4) -
Same applies for other similar parts like 00:32:444 (32444|5) - ,00:36:644 (36644|4) - , etc.
00:27:044 (27044|5,27194|4,27344|3,27494|4,27644|5,27644|6) - If a beginner right hand spacebar user were to play this pattern, it'd be a bit intense for them. I'd rearrange the notes so that at least one of the notes is shared with left hand (excluding spacebar)
00:30:194 (30194|1) - Highly recommend you move this note so that you don't have a bracket-like pattern. It's waaaay too hard and awkward for easy. Same with the other parts that are similar
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01:20:444 (80444|2) - I got it why you make double here but for more better structure pattern and consistency, recommend you to remove this note. But if you still want to make double for the loud vocal there, why not to make triple in your normal diff ?