00:07:240 (1) - I think the movement to this slider isn't intense as the sound underneath, i would space it a bit more, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15058939/eb84 (Just an idea)
00:11:068 (5) - feel like this slider shouldn't extend to 00:11:411. 00:11:411 should get its own circle or start of a slider
00:14:154 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Feel like this whole section is pretty bland rhythm wise.. I think vocals can be followed here instead of drums that happen on every 1/2 kick. It will create a much more interesting section imo.
00:14:154 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - overall not a big fan of the circular flow clockwise of this section.
You follow a one directional circular flow for 2+ measures which for mouse players can cause mouse drift. Overall it's pretty repetitive and can make this section feel bland.
00:16:554 (4,1) - Not a big fan of how this sliders flows into this 1/4 gap here.
https://prnt.sc/t2ewku this cursor movement can be quite unexpected.
00:18:268 (1) - slider shape contrasts with the rest of the map a little too much. might wanna make it straight with a red anchor at the middle
00:20:954 (1,2) - This 1/1 gap spacing is similar to other 1/2 gaps you've used (00:13:411 (1,2) - an example), i would stack (2) on (1), something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15058945/949f (You'll have to slightly rework the patterns after it)
00:25:040 (3,4) - (4) is an important beat. might wanna push it out a little farther and possibly remove 3
fixed. rather having 00:25:040 (2) expanded till 00:25:125, i chose to move (3) to 00:25:125 (3)
00:28:897 (4,1) - Rhythm is off here.
Think this slider should belong on the red tick 00:29:068
You seem to be following vocals here.
drum hit on blue tick. extended sliderend of 00:28:897 (4) - to match the sound. blanketed 00:29:240 (1) - and mirrored so it fits better
00:29:754 (2,3) - maybe nerf the spacing here somewhat. There isn't really anything that deserves that much of a spike and it feels inconsistent with the rest of this section
00:30:611 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Not a big fan of the rhythm.
Slider ends on a vocal phrase. This should be mapped actively..
00:30:611 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - because it follows the drums like the rest of the section does, why would i switch to vocal for a single slider, as long as theres a sliderend sound on it that should be enough
00:52:040 (6) - don't feel like this slider repeats at a fast enough rhythm. I think having it repeat out to 00:52:468 at 1/8 timing would be better
hmmm..... mapping this reverse slider at 1/8th feels little too extreme. i agree that it does feels like it's not fast enough rhythm but if i try mapping at 1/8th the slider becomes too short length for my liking. so im keeping this issue open for further discussion or if i can find a proper pattern that i like.
00:56:325 (6) - Why not overlap with 00:55:640 (3) - Can tidy this up pretty easily. Stuff like this makes your map look messy.
00:58:897 (4) - Slider ends on a more important vocal phrase than where it starts on.
Creates irregular rhythm that can throw the player of guard.
00:58:897 (4) - I think this would work better as 2 circles so that 00:58:725 (3,4,5) becomes all active. This would segway better into the sort of climactic bit at 00:59:411 a better imo by functioning as a better intensity buildup. Also keeps this section more consistent with itself (ie see 00:55:297 (1,2,3,4) )
01:03:525 (1,2,3,4) - feels like too much of a diff spike since you don't see spacing nearly that high anywhere else in this whole section. I advise nerfing
01:10:554 (2,3) - drums r going sicko mode here but you've mapped the fill with just two 1/2 sliders. Feels pretty underwhelming to me. Try smth like https://i.gyazo.com/1f79101bd4e57d1756cceb96edcdee12.png (time is 01:10:554 in screenshot)
01:13:125 (2,3,1,2) - feels pretty underwhelming with just some low spaced circles a beat apart like this. Maybe try using 3/4 sliders instead?
01:17:183 (1) - I think the movement to this slider isn't intense as the sound underneath, i would space it a bit more, something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/15058956/c6da (Just an idea)