00:18:757 (5) - perhaps not to stick with DS only, try making some kind of sharper angle for the emphasis on this beat? https://i.imgur.com/28IFIPG.jpeg rushed pattern, but gives the example.
00:24:069 (2,1) - tight visual spacing, perhaps put it somewhere else? Doesn't really blend with your map imo.
01:03:757 (1) - spinner recovery time too short, there should be at least 1 beat between spinner and next object on a hard diff