00:15:788 (2) - 00:16:100 (4) - dont really hear much on these since the instrument that played on last 4 objects died out; i think u could remove these in favor of vocal emphasis
00:30:319 (1) - could remove nc for consistency with the whole section since this one feels a bit random
was 00:35:632 (5) - meant to be a 1/2 slider? if not i think the spacing between 00:35:632 (5,6) - is too big considering it's 1/4
00:36:256 kiai isn't snapped here, should be snapped 1 ms earlier at 00:36:257 (also wanna adjust 00:36:256 (1) - accordingly)
00:48:131 (1,2) - and 00:40:631 (1,2) - i suggest changing to a 1/2 slider as u do it on these two 00:38:131 (1) - 00:50:631 (3) - for consistency w rhythm choice
00:55:631 (5) - i recognise you want to keep the "star" feel but this slider facing this way feels a bit weird, in addition to its flow to the next one. I would consider reworking these two sliders
01:47:819 (2) - 01:52:819 (2) - 01:57:819 (2) - you could nc there to be consistent as u do it on 02:02:819 (1) - so it kinda feels off for patterning