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44teru-k - F.I (Fantasy Impromptu)

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Cygnus
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Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, February 24, 2012 at 4:15:49 PM

Artist: 44teru-k
Title: F.I
Source: BMS
Tags: fantasie frederic holic respect for chopin o2jam classical mix ultimate fantasy electro emdyion impromptu
BPM: 180
Filesize: 2361kb
Play Time: 01:54
Difficulties Available:
  1. Bronze (3.99 stars, 134 notes)
  2. Emdyion's Silver (4.93 stars, 278 notes)
  3. Gold (4.99 stars, 440 notes)
  4. Platinum (5 stars, 678 notes)
  5. Rust (1.46 stars, 77 notes)
  6. Silver (4.86 stars, 258 notes)
Download: 44teru-k - F.I
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ THE LEGEND ~

[ Rust = Easy | Bronze = Normal | Silver = Hard | Gold = Insane | Platinum = Extra ]

Thank you to all Modders who have made such big help improving this map! Especially
those who helped me with the Major Errors and in Storyboard. This will never be as
great without you guys! #Beuchi-chan #lolcubes #Card N'FoRcE #NatsumeRin #Derekku
Also #Starrodkirby86. (: haha
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Last edited by Cygnus , edited 103 times in total.
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
Needs a Namco influenced taiko.
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus
Go for it! :3
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Needs a Namco influenced taiko.
Can I do it? :D ?
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
Hi, from #modreqs~ :)


[Starter]

  1. beginner?
  2. 00:10:312 (2) - 1/2 beat longer
  3. 00:19:646 (2) - move to (72,272)
  4. 00:34:908 - 20 seconds on break is too long... add some long sliders?
  5. 01:07:979 (4,5,6) - clap only on 5?
  6. 01:08:979 (1) - clap on end
  7. 01:11:646 (1) - ^
  8. 01:14:312 (1,2) - ^
  9. 01:16:979 (1,3) - add finish on end
  10. 01:32:979 (1,2) - add finish on end
[Medium]

  1. 00:13:312 (2,3,4) - 1 grid down...
  2. 00:25:646 (4) - last point 1 grid left...
  3. 00:27:646 (2) - move to (272,240)
  4. 00:28:979 (1) - I think it should end on white line (creates hitsound, then 1/4, the next spinner
  5. 00:56:979 (1) - (408,112)
[Victory]

  1. nice streams...
  2. 01:04:646 (13,14,15) - curve
  3. 01:21:479 (7,8) - this jump is too far? it's just 1/4......
  4. 01:37:312 (1) - new combo
  5. 01:38:312 (12) - add note, new combo
  6. 01:38:646 (1) - remove new combo
  7. 01:39:312 (1) - new combo
  8. 01:40:312 (1) - ^
Good luck~
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs~ :)
✔
✘
[Starter]

  1. ✘ beginner? Yes it is, but i'm not changing. lol
  2. ✔ 00:10:312 (2) - 1/2 beat longer
  3. ✔ 00:19:646 (2) - move to (72,272)
  4. ✘ 00:34:908 - 20 seconds on break is too long... add some long sliders?
  5. ✘ 01:07:979 (4,5,6) - clap only on 5?
  6. ✔ 01:08:979 (1) - clap on end
  7. ✔ 01:11:646 (1) - ^
  8. ✔ 01:14:312 (1,2) - ^
  9. ✔ 01:16:979 (1,3) - add finish on end
  10. ✔ 01:32:979 (1,2) - add finish on end
[Medium]

  1. ✔ 00:13:312 (2,3,4) - 1 grid down...
  2. ✔ 00:25:646 (4) - last point 1 grid left...
  3. ✔ 00:27:646 (2) - move to (272,240)
  4. ✔ 00:28:979 (1) - I think it should end on white line (creates hitsound, then 1/4, the next spinner
  5. ✔ 00:56:979 (1) - (408,112)
[Victory]

  1. ✔ nice streams... <3
  2. ✔ 01:04:646 (13,14,15) - curve lol, i changed the whole combo.
  3. ✘ 01:21:479 (7,8) - this jump is too far? it's just 1/4. the end note before the jump was a slider so i think it's fine
  4. ✘ 01:37:312 (1) - new combo
  5. ✔ 01:38:312 (12) - add note, new combo changed note (23) to slider inside
  6. ✘ 01:38:646 (1) - remove new combo
  7. ✘ 01:39:312 (1) - new combo
  8. ✘ 01:40:312 (1) - ^
Good luck~
SakiK
326 posts
Joined June 2010
SakiK
hi~ from modque

[General]

looks fine.

[Starter]

deleat a tag 'O2Jam'
00:21:646 (5) - DS
01:11:646 (1) - DS
01:12:979 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:13:979 (5) - 1 grid down
01:17:979 (2) - DS
01:51:646 (3) - NC and 01:52:979 (1) - Rm NC

[Medium]

00:24:979 (3) - DS
00:25:646 (4) - move to 00:25:979 - end of slider
00:26:312 (1) - DS
00:27:646 (2) - 1 grid left
00:57:646 (2) - DS
01:02:979 (4) - 1 grid down and 1 grid left
01:05:646 (4) - 1 grid left and01:05:979 (5) - is 1grid up
01:53:646 (4) - DS

[Victory]

very hard o/
NC suggestion
00:16:312 (5) - NC
00:18:979 (7) - ^
00:21:646 (7) - ^
00:25:646 (7) - ^
01:09:646 (9) - ^
01:12:311 (9) - ^
01:10:979 (7) - ^
01:13:645 (7) - ^
01:14:978 (9) - ^
01:21:646 (8) - NC and this Jump is too hard to almost player
01:36:979 (9) - NC
01:37:646 (17) - NC
01:39:979 (5) - ^
01:54:979 (9) - ^
01:55:729 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - this spacing is too hard to almost player too

that's all. fight~
Midasmens
507 posts
Joined June 2011
Midasmens
This is my first time to mod :P

General
The map doesn't have a preview point. Go to timming setting and select a preview point. :oops:

Starter

Fine

Medium

00:24:646(2) move to x:432 y:72 (if you don't like it.Do what you want.)

Victory
It is a great diff and hard to play for me. :o

First 01:13:394 snapped the note.
00:18:646 add a new color
00:18:979 ^
00:19:312 ^
00:21:312 ^
00:21:646 ^
00:22:062 ^
00:24:312 ^
00:25:312 ^
00:25:646 ^
01:08:312 ^
01:08:646 ^
01:10:646 ^
01:10:979 ^
01:11:312 ^
01:13:312 ^
01:13:646 ^
01:13:979 ^
01:21:646 ^
01:29:562(5,6,7,8) it doesn't fit the music~ add a new note here and move (5,6,7,8) to 01:29:646
01:30:896(5,6,7,8) ^ do the same thing~ make sure to fit music
01:32:229(5,6,7,8)^
01:35:312(10) make reverse to 01:35:562
01:36:979(9) new color
01:37:646(9) ^
01:54:979(9) ^
01:55:062(10,11,12,13,14,15,16) it is strange~ the distance is 0.5X?

That is it~~ Crazy music! I like it!
Good Luck~
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus

SakiK wrote:

hi~ from modque
✔
✘
[General]

looks fine.

[Starter]

✔ deleat a tag 'O2Jam'
✔ 00:21:646 (5) - DS
✔ 01:11:646 (1) - DS
✔ 01:12:979 (2,3,4,5) - ^
✔ 01:13:979 (5) - 1 grid down
✔ 01:17:979 (2) - DS
✔ 01:51:646 (3) - NC and 01:52:979 (1) - Rm NC

[Medium]

✔ 00:24:979 (3) - DS
✔ 00:25:646 (4) - move to 00:25:979 - end of slider
✔ 00:26:312 (1) - DS
✔ 00:27:646 (2) - 1 grid left
✘ 00:57:646 (2) - DS
✔ 01:02:979 (4) - 1 grid down and 1 grid left
✔ 01:05:646 (4) - 1 grid left and01:05:979 (5) - is 1grid up
✘ 01:53:646 (4) - DS

[Victory]

very hard o/
NC suggestion
✔ 00:16:312 (5) - NC
✘ 00:18:979 (7) - ^
✘ 00:21:646 (7) - ^
✘ 00:25:646 (7) - ^
✘ 01:09:646 (9) - ^
✘ 01:12:311 (9) - ^
✘ 01:10:979 (7) - ^
✘ 01:13:645 (7) - ^
✘ 01:14:978 (9) - ^
✘ 01:21:646 (8) - NC and this Jump is too hard to almost player
✘ 01:36:979 (9) - NC
✔ 01:37:646 (17) - NC
✔ 01:39:979 (5) - ^
✘ 01:54:979 (9) - ^
✘ 01:55:729 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - this spacing is too hard to almost player too

that's all. fight~ thanks <3
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus

Midasmens wrote:

This is my first time to mod :P
✔
✘
General
✔ The map doesn't have a preview point. Go to timming setting and select a preview point. :oops:

Starter

✔ Fine

Medium

✘ 00:24:646(2) move to x:432 y:72 (if you don't like it.Do what you want.)

Victory
✔ It is a great diff and hard to play for me. :o

✘ First 01:13:394 ? snapped the note.
✘ 00:18:646 add a new color this ain't a TAG4 lol
✘ 00:18:979 ^ ^
✘ 00:19:312 ^ ^
✘ 00:21:312 ^ ^
✘ 00:21:646 ^ ^
✘ 00:22:062 ^ ^
✘ 00:24:312 ^ ^
✘ 00:25:312 ^ ^
✘ 00:25:646 ^ ^
✘ 01:08:312 ^ ^
✘ 01:08:646 ^ ^
✘ 01:10:646 ^ ^
✘ 01:10:979 ^ ^
✘ 01:11:312 ^ ^
✘ 01:13:312 ^ ^
✘ 01:13:646 ^ ^
✘ 01:13:979 ^ ^
✘ 01:21:646 ^ ^
✘ 01:29:562(5,6,7,8) it doesn't fit the music~ add a new note here and move (5,6,7,8) to 01:29:646
✘ 01:30:896(5,6,7,8) ^ do the same thing~ make sure to fit music
✘ 01:32:229(5,6,7,8)^
✔ 01:35:312(10) make reverse to 01:35:562
✘ 01:36:979(9) new color
✘ 01:37:646(9) ^
✘ 01:54:979(9) ^
✔ 01:55:062(10,11,12,13,14,15,16) it is strange~ the distance is 0.5X?

That is it~~ Crazy music! I like it!
Good Luck~
Kanari
1,311 posts
Joined June 2011
Kanari
Haii~
You requesed in my queue~

[Starter]
-00:09:646 (x) - Add note.
-01:13:979 (5) - Fix the placement on the grid?
-01:15:312 (x) - Add note.

[Medium]
-00:21:979 (x) - Add note.
-00:27:312 (x) - ^
-00:59:312 (x) - ^
-01:15:312 (x) - ^
-01:28:646 (x) - ^
-01:29:979 (x) - ^
-01:31:312 (x) - ^
-01:32:646 (x) - ^

[Victory]
-00:02:146 (1) - Add a clap?

Hope this was helpful ;3
Kiddo-Kun
1,014 posts
Joined May 2009
Kiddo-Kun
General

• Add in the epilepsy warning on all diffs.
• Bg is too large. The recommended size is 1024 x 768
• I would add this combo color, it matches the background well.
Combo3 : 255,128,192

Starter:

(Combo Stuff. You take one, you take all~)
SPOILER
• 00:20:979 (4) - Add a new combo on this note. It matches the piano.
• 00:22:312 (1) - Remove the new combo on this note
• 00:23:646 (2) - Add a new combo to this note
• 00:27:646 (2) - I would change the position of this slider to enhance the flow like this:
SPOILER
• 00:54:312 (1) - Bring the volume up for the start of the slider. 5% is way to quite and it feels as though I didn't hit it.
• 01:02:312 (3) - Remove the clap on this note. It does not fit the music at all.
• 01:07:646 (3,4,5,6) - This part of the music if pretty powerful and a stack does not really fit it. I would change it. Suggestion:
SPOILER
• 01:29:646 (4,1) - This spacing...Too far apart, fix it please~
• 01:34:312 (2) - Make this slider straight like the last one.

Medium:

• 00:54:312 (1) - Remove a repeat on this slider. It seems a little hard for a Normal. Also, bring the volume up on this slider. 5% is too low.
• 01:38:646 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This pattern can be very confusing, and it comes way to soon after the spinner. I would try something like this:
SPOILER
&
SPOILER
• 01:45:979 (1) - I would delete this slider. It does not play very well in an easier diff like this. I would do this instead:


Victory:

• 00:07:312 (13) - This is hard to see and the second repeat is quite unexpected. I would make it more visible so people can see the second repeat.
• 01:07:646 (1,2,3) - This seems to be awfully forced. It barley goes with the music. I would delete (2) and (3). (This goes for the other patterns like this)
• 01:13:394 (5) - If you do decide to reject the previous comment. This note is unsnapped.
• 01:55:646 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - I would keep the spacing consistent with the previous stream so it does not confuse the player.
• 01:57:979 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - I would change the slow down to 0.75x. It feels a lot better when playing.

Overall:

Not a bad map, but I see space for improvement. I like how you take risks and show some creativity, but it gets in the way of the gameplay sometimes.

Great effort, have a star~
Ranger
939 posts
Joined June 2011
Ranger
Hi~
sorry my poor English

[Starter]
00:10:312 (2) - Add Clap in head

[Medium]
00:10:980 (2,4) - I think a straight line be better
01:19:312 (6) - Remove whistle

[Victory]
If you change circle size 4,Is to better

00:07:979 (2) - Put in x:464 y:288
00:54:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Narrow little
01:21:646 (8) - Mad Jump :o
01:46:145 (3) - Put in x:352 y:192
01:56:979 (17) - Touch the Hp bar

Good luck~
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
General

errors

  1. offest is a bit late. -4ms to adjust it
  2. Diff spread is obviously "im-balanced". To meet all players' need, there should be a diff between 【M】 and 【V】
Starter

01:13:646 (4) - no clap
01:40:312 (3) - no whistle
01:52:979 (3) - ^

Medium

fine

Victory

00:10:146 (11) - no clap
00:12:896 (10) - clap
00:17:979 (4) - remove clap from the end of the slider
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus
For now, modding is only open for Rust, Bronze, and Platinum Diffs. The other two, is still WIP.

All mods are granted 1 kudosu star. Although the mods aren't followed yet, i will try to update the diffs modded as much as possible after i finish the two new diffs (Gold and Silver).

Thanks for those who modded and also the reader. lol
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus

LKs wrote:

  1. offest is a bit late. -4ms to adjust it
uhh, are you sure about this? i've already asked several mod helpers and they requested this is my offset.
Frozen Child
121 posts
Joined September 2011
Frozen Child
Mod reqs.
Rust
01:27:646 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - i know u can make better than it. Please..
01:53:646 (4) - why clap ?
Bronze
01:38:646 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - it's so confuse. for a " normal "
Silver
00:02:146 (1) - you can't do anything before the first red tick.
Gold
00:02:146 - you can't do anything before the first red tick.
01:54:312 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - wtf ?
Platinum

00:02:146 (1) - you can't do anything before the first red tick.
j4yj4ys3z
110 posts
Joined April 2010
j4yj4ys3z
Rust

Nothing wrong.

Bronze

01:19:646(1)- Use finish here.

Platinum

00:04:479(9)- Move to x:120 y:232. Small thing but it bothers me.
01:15:646(1)- Move to x:352 y:88
01:15:979(2)- Move to x:160 y:296
01:16:312(3)- Move to x:368 y:24
01:16:646(4)- Move to x:144 y:360 The reason I changed the positioning is, because sliders 3 and 4 were going off the map.
01:22:896(8)- Move to x:176 y:192
01:22:979(9)- Move to x:136 y:200 Makes it more smoother.

Nothing wrong with Platinum just a little problem with smooth streams.

Awesome map. Star :)
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[Rust]
00:31:646 (1) - finish?
01:03:646 (1) - finish at the end?
01:06:312 (1) - use finish instead of clap?
01:19:646 (1) - finish?
01:38:979 (1,2,3,4) - 01:38:646 (1,2,3,4) ← change to this rhythm should be more easy for beginners
SPOILER

01:54:312 (1) - finish in the end


[Bronze]
01:19:312 (6) - delete whistle?
01:27:646 (1,2,1,2) - it seems a bit dull


[Silver]
00:06:812 (4) - spacing error
01:21:146 (2,4,2,4) - delete whistle. it sounds noisy
01:36:979 (x) - use soft sounds more better imo
01:48:312 (1) - since the previous slider has 1 arrow , it's strange that this has 2
01:49:479 (3,4,5) - recommended to make 2 arrows
01:52:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - it looks not pretty
01:54:312 (1) - spacing error
01:56:979 (5) - why not add finish?


[Gold]
00:19:312 (x) - delete whistle at the arrow and the end
00:22:979 (5) - ctrl+r ? it looks more better.
01:10:312 (1) - use a slider instead it
01:17:646 (6) - if you want to use whistle , add whistle on this note
01:18:312 (1) - ^
01:18:979 (6) - ^
01:19:646 (1) - ^ at the beginning
01:20:312 (5) - ^
01:48:312 (1) - ......
01:54:312 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - eh, I don't know if this is rankable, but I don't suggest you to put these notes as this


[Platinum]
AR-1 (seems too fast, but it is not big issue, you can keep this)
01:55:729 (2,3,4,5) - you do it on purpose? the spacing is a bit larger than the following.and it becomes larger again in the end
02:07:646 (1) - in the end, I recommend to make a semicircular slider or a whole round slider.
--------------------------------------------------
I like platinum best :D
Nice mapset, good luck ;)
Apricot
565 posts
Joined July 2010
Apricot
General
  1. fix the artist, title, source, and tags. should be like this.
  2. why 2 timing lines at the start? remove one. and offset should be 979
Platinum
  1. 01:13:394 (5) - Object isn't snapped.
no kds.
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Emdyion
Finished. You might want to replace a difficulty (I suggest Gold/Platinum, but your choice if you want to replace anything)

Download: DM Ashura - Fantasie Impromptu (Philippines) [Emdyion's Hyper].osu
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus

Emdyion wrote:

Finished. You might want to replace a difficulty (I suggest Gold/Platinum, but your choice if you want to replace anything)
Changed your diff name to Emydion's Silver
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
Good Afternoon. A DM Ashura here, i remember the map from Sprosive so nice and hard but never approved lol.How strange

General
  1. Is neccesary put two times "fantasy" in Tags?,remove one a Full submit
Rust
- 00:19:644 (1,2) - Spacing,is not the big deal but try to reduce
- 00:28:977 (3) - New combo here

Bronze
-- Hmm,try to reduce the slider velocity, is too high for being a Normal
- 00:08:977 (3) - Ugly slider, i suggest to see about this guide in your future maps
- 00:15:644 (1) - Is neccesary to put this slider so long in the points? i suggest to put to center and maybe like this?
- 00:58:310 (3) - A new combo here,would be good
- 01:07:144 (3) - Delete this note please,for a newbies players is hard to read
- 01:09:810 (3) - Same ^
- 01:12:477 (3) - ^

Silver
Fine

Emydion
-- Why this diff has not preview point? Add one please like you did in the other diffs

Gold
Circle Size: -1
AR: +1
01:54:310 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Uhm bad idea,try to put a streams here? is sounds more better if you add streams

Platinum
Good

I can see a crazy streams and jumps in this map,try to find more mods.That's it and good luck
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

[General]

Might be me but "BG Fade.jpg" looks like it's tilted slightly every time it fades, you should check that out.

[Rust]

~Clear~

Bronze

00:14:310 (5) - Move this down a grid to align with (3).
00:14:977 (6,7) - Move these down a grid and here's the end result: http://puu.sh/dkmT
01:43:644 (1) - Extend this 1/4?

[Silver]

00:34:310 (9) - Remove Whistle, and add Finish.

[Emydion's Silver]

~Clear~

[Gold]

~Clear~

[Platinum]

~Clear~

Good Job!!
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Emdyion

Philippines wrote:

[*]Emydion's Silver (4.93 stars, 278 notes)
Spellcheck please :o

Rename to Emdyion's Silver please.
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
Cygnus

Emdyion wrote:

Spellcheck please :o

Rename to Emdyion's Silver please.
oops, my bad.reupdating..




UPDATED.
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
Sorry for being late

==General==

==Platinum==
-- Combo Problem --
01:00:977 (1) - remove new combo and add it to 01:01:310 (2). (Jumped)
-- Sound --
00:07:644 (1-1st) - remove clap and 00:07:644 (1-2nd) - add finish
00:12:894 (10) - remove clap (That clap strange) and add it to 00:12:977 (1). That cause a patten for the clap
00:15:560 (10,1-1st) - ^
-- Spacing --
-- Other(S) --
00:33:977 (4) - Make a return is better to add a 5. I thought that is ugly =3
01:48:310 (1,2,3,4) - ugly. Can you make it be a square
01:06:310 (X) - A bit noise for this timing section. Maybe -10% to -15%
01:16:977 (X) - too annoying for the wistle. Recommand to remove some. (But I think you will not :D)
So, I decided to lower the sound to -10%.
01:30:144 (X) - missing note here? I felt strange here.
01:31:477 (X) - ^
01:32:810 (X) - ^

==Gold==
-- Combo Problem --
-- Sound --
00:19:645 (1-2nd) - remove wistle and change it to finish
00:23:645 (1-1st) - Totally missing a finish here.
00:26:311 (1-1st) - ^
After, plz not be lazy that. Add the finish in the right way plz.
00:32:978 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - OMG. Noise. Change those sound be F>N>F>N... (F=finish and N=None)
-- Spacing --
00:09:228 (2,3) - Spacing problem (x0.5 and x0.6)
00:12:978 (1,2,3) - ^ (x1.0 and x1.1)
-- Other(S) --
Some of the problem in Platinum also. Not willing state.

==Emdyion's Silver==
-- Combo Problem --
00:09:146 (5) - NC (Jumped)
00:16:979 (5) - ^ (Started another spacing)
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
01:32:644 (8-3rd) - A bit noise for this wistle and strange. Lower the timing section to 80% or lower is better.
-- Other(S) --
01:11:144 (7) - Change it to 01:11:311 maybe better. Coz I think there is a bit strange.
01:56:979 (X) - After... Not as the finished point as other. I think that isnt acceptable.

==OVERALL==
LIKE : LOVELY, so LOVELY ~
UNLIKE : Crazy, So crazy Too many diff. Im not gonna mod all.
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Emdyion

KingsAL2 wrote:

==Emdyion's Silver==
-- Combo Problem --
00:09:146 (5) - NC (Jumped) Done
00:16:979 (5) - ^ (Started another spacing) Done
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
01:32:644 (8-3rd) - A bit noise for this wistle and strange. Lower the timing section to 80% or lower is better. Done
-- Other(S) --
01:11:144 (7) - Change it to 01:11:311 maybe better. Coz I think there is a bit strange. Don't really know about this one. I'll think about it :P
01:56:979 (X) - After... Not as the finished point as other. I think that isnt acceptable. Rust, Bronze and Silver finish at the same time as this. I don't see why this isn't acceptable.
Download: DM Ashura - Fantasie Impromptu (Philippines) [Emdyion's Silver].osu
Cygnus
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Cygnus
Updated. Looking for BUBBLES! Thread now has 8 Stars! Just shooted 3 stars. YEAY! :3
Haruhi_sama
333 posts
Joined September 2010
Haruhi_sama
aha.I‘m not very good at modding.So you can skip it:D
[Easy]
00:24:979 (2) - maybe add finish?
00:28:979 (1) - ^
00:30:310 (1) - ^
EDIT:A lot of notes unsnapped

00:54:312 (1) - delete green lines. you can't use green lines to change slider volume

01:56:977 - why you use 90 bpm? use 0.5x is better
[normal]
00:54:310 (1) - delete green lines. you can't use green lines to change slider volume!
nothing to say
It's too far to bubble it :3
Cygnus
1,517 posts
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Topic Starter
Cygnus

Haruhi_sama wrote:

aha.I‘m not very good at modding.So you can skip it:D
[Easy]
00:24:979 (2) - maybe add finish?k
00:28:979 (1) - ^k
00:30:310 (1) - ^k
EDIT:A lot of notes unsnapped..
[attachment=0:9462f]snapped.jpg[/attachment:9462f]
00:54:312 (1) - delete green lines. you can't use green lines to change slider volume really? no

01:56:977 - why you use 90 bpm? use 0.5x is better. eh
[normal]
00:54:310 (1) - delete green lines. you can't use green lines to change slider volume! really? no
nothing to say
It's too far to bubble it :3
will get to that asap. btw, what program is that? o.o
Card N'FoRcE
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Here since the beginning
Card N'FoRcE
Oh hey.
Yeah, you got me interested a bit, so I'll give this a full mod (it's been months since my last one uhuh) even though i promised myself i wouldn't have done such thing anymore.

So:

- General: (Considerations and things you need to check/fix for the whole map)
  • Timing inconsistencies. Use the timing from Emdyion's difficulty for the whole mapset, because it's using the correct timing signature for each section. Then also resnap all notes, fix preview time and fix any possible unsnapped inherited section you notice for each difficulty (as they will probably get unsnapped thus messing up hitsounding, KIAI time or other stuff).
    Add "Emdyion" to tags
    I would +15% the volume of every timing section for each difficulty (except for Emdyion's), it's kinda low right now imho.
- Storyboard:
  • The Scale and Move values you used for "bg_fade" are not good enough and because of that the "fade" effect is not alligned correctly. Considering that you're also using a non-conventional BG size, Let's just do a one-fix for everything altogether:
    SPOILER
    Download: SB_fix.zip

    This package includes resized BGs (to 1024*768 keeping the correct aspect ratio) and various script fixes, including the correction for the Scale value and the removal of a faulty Rotation value.
    Remember to Full Submit!
    The rest looks nice and seems to work correctly so I won't try messing up with it.
- Rust:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    01:35:646 (1,1,2,3) - i somehow find this weird, but i can't think of anything better that's also easy enough, so I'm just telling you to make you aware of it.
  2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:17:977 - add a beat here
    00:23:310 - add a beat here
    00:58:979 (1) - remove new combo; 01:00:644 - add beat; 01:00:979 (2) - New Combo
    01:05:977 - add a beat here
    01:43:310 - add a beat here
  3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    Unsnapped stuff. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing
- Bronze:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
  2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:00:644 - add a beat here
    01:39:644 (4) - new combo; 01:39:977 (1) - remove new combo; 01:40:977 (4) - new combo; 01:41:310 (1) - remove new combo
    01:46:310 (1) - make this end at 01:48:310; 01:48:977 - add a beat with new combo; 01:49:644 (1) - remove new combo
  3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    An unsnapped beat. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing
    01:43:644 (1) - this has to end at 01:45:644.
- Silver:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    Maybe the difficulty gap from Bronze is a bit high. Not that bad anyway.
  2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    00:33:477 (4) - remove this?
    01:17:477 (4) - 01:18:144 (4) - 01:18:810 (4) - 01:19:477 (4) - remove all of these
    01:20:977 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - move them a tiny bit more to the left
    01:27:644 (1,2) - kinda big and unexpected jump at this point, maybe just make it a bit more lenient
  3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    An unsnapped beat. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing
    01:46:477 (1) - it's fairly logic to miss 01:48:310 (1) as it is now, so this spinner has to end at 01:48:310 following the same pattern as the other one; 01:48:310 (1) - remove one repetition and Reverse Selection.
- Gold:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    01:54:478 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - weird sound pattern. It doesn't really sound bad, but is it intentional?
  2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:43:312 (4) - remove two repetitions; 01:43:978 (1) - make this start at 01:43:644.
    01:46:311 (1,1) - I'd say to do the same thing as Silver, but this is a harder difficulty and also the higher AR helps a bit more, so it's up to you to decide here.
    02:07:644 (3) - i'd remove the repetition and add a beat at 02:10:312
  3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    Unsnapped stuff. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing
    Overall Difficulty +1
- Platinum:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    01:07:644 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - wow. Kudos for having the idea of having them play like triplets and thus more playable and enjoyable. Same goes for the other similiar patterns
  2. .Suggestions: (Fixing this should make gameplay/aesthetics a bit better)
    01:30:144 - 01:31:477 - 01:32:810 - all these balnk spaces feel weird actually
    01:35:310 (10) - remove a repetition.
    01:41:310 (5) - DDDDDDDD: move farther
    01:46:310 (1,1,2,3,4) - same as Gold
    02:07:644 (1) - same as Gold
  3. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    Unsnapped stuff. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing
    Overall Difficulty +2. +1 at the very least.
- Emdyion's Silver:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    I would +10% the volume of KIAI sections.
    I like this map :D
  2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    Unsnapped stuff. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing
    Missing epilepsy warning.
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Emdyion

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

- Emdyion's Silver:
  1. .Opinions: (Just some thoughts, I'd personally like if you follow them)
    I would +10% the volume of KIAI sections. Added.
    I like this map :D Thanks! XD
  2. .Errors/Mistakes: (Bad gameplay issues or badly applied changes)
    Unsnapped stuff. It will fix if you do what i said about the timing Fixed.
    Missing epilepsy warning.Fixed.
Download: DM Ashura - Fantasie Impromptu (Philippines) [Emdyion's Silver].osu
Cygnus
1,517 posts
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Topic Starter
Cygnus
Thanks Card NForce! I'll fix all of it as soon as I get enough free time during weekends or something.
Cygnus
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Topic Starter
Cygnus
Shooted another star. Oh well.
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,795 posts
Joined February 2010
-kevincela-
Hi~

[Rust]


  1. 01:11:646 (1) - Spacing
  2. 01:13:979 (5,1) - Allign them with the notes 01:12:979 (2,3,4) -
  3. 01:38:643 (1,2,3,4) - Very strange rythm here. Maybe it yould be better if you put the notes 1/1 back.
  4. 01:43:310 (5) - Add a note,if you did ^
  5. 01:43:646 (1) - Make the slider longer until 01:45:971 -

[Bronze]


  1. 00:12:311 (4) - Flip it horizontally
  2. 01:12:977 (5,6,7,8) - A pattern like this would be better:
    SPOILER
  3. 01:43:644 (1) - Make the slider longer until 01:45:971 -

[Silver]


  1. 00:15:977 (3) -(nazi) 1 grid left (with grid 4)
  2. 00:16:310 (4) - (nazi) 1 grid right (with grid 4)
  3. 00:24:977 (1) - Spacing
  4. 00:32:644 (4) - ^
  5. 01:22:310 (5) - You should center that better (use grid 4 to move it without any problem)

[Emydion's silver]


  1. 01:08:811 - Maybe add a note here?

[Gold]


  1. 01:51:978 (2) - Make the spacing of this slider higher,just like the sliders 3 and 4
  2. 01:53:311 (2) - ^
  3. 01:54:311 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This seems really difficult,even for an insane. Maybe,you can make the spacing lower.
  4. All the part next to 01:57:979: Unfortunately is not allowed to use different BPMs to change the slider velocity. Now I don't know what to do here,maybe yo can remap this part with the bpm 180,like before.

[Platinum]


  1. 00:16:977 (1) - Spacing (maybe it's on purpose,but i see that the slider 00:17:644 (3) - is on the same line on where the slider 1 should be.)
  2. Maybe put a new combo in zones like 01:07:977 (4), - 01:08:310 (7),or - 01:08:644 (10) - ?
  3. 01:21:644 (8) - New combo?
  4. All the part next to 01:57:979: Unfortunately is not allowed to use different BPMs to change the slider velocity. Now I don't know what to do here,maybe yo can remap this part with the bpm 180,like before.
Cygnus
1,517 posts
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Topic Starter
Cygnus
Emdyion, ill just add a note by myself on kevincelo's modding. if its okay with you

NVM, i doubt you want add a note. I think it's better.
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Emdyion

Philippines wrote:

Emdyion, ill just add a note by myself on kevincelo's modding. if its okay with you

NVM, i doubt you want add a note. I think it's better.
Yep, don't add a note :P

EDIT: SPELLCHECK MY NAME IN TAGS
Samah
423 posts
Joined May 2010
Samah
From queue:

[General]
That first break is very long for such a short song.
01:56:979 - Either remove these two timing points or change the red point to 4/4 and remove the green 0.5x one.
Edit: I see some of the diffs have been mapped past this point. You can leave the green 0.5x timing point, but the red should still be 4/4.

[Rust]
You could probably flesh out the hitsounds a little more in this.
01:08:979 (1) - Down one to keep the spacing on that curve.
01:11:646 (1) - Get rid of the cusp on the end of this slider.
01:18:312 (3) - ^
01:34:312 (2) - ^

[Bronze]
01:12:479 (3) - Up and right one.
01:17:645 (3,4) - Right one.
01:18:312 (5,6) - Down one.
01:18:979 (7,8) - One left.

[Silver]
Mostly grid with this diff just to even up spacing and get rid of overlapping notes. Pedantic, sorry. :)
00:06:311 (3,4,5,6,7) - Spacing is a little uneven here. Some notes are almost touching.
00:08:977 (3,4,5) - ^
00:11:644 (1,2,4,5,6) - ^
00:24:310 (2,3) - Too close.
00:27:310 (4) - Down one.
00:28:310 (2,3,1) - Increase the gap between these just slightly (about one grid or so).
00:54:532 (2,5) - Symmetry.
00:55:979 (2) - Down one.
00:56:312 (3) - Down two.
01:00:146 (5) - One left.
01:02:312 (1) - One right.
01:06:979 (3,4,1,2) - Up one.
01:09:646 (3,4) - Up one.
01:14:812 (3) - One right.
01:15:479 (6) - Up one.
01:16:145 (3) - One right.
01:16:645 (5) - Two down.
01:19:645 (1) - Two down.
01:29:645 (3,4) - Two left.
01:30:979 (3,4) - One up.
01:35:645 (1) - The slider ends aren't quite symmetrical, if you're fussed.
01:53:145 (2) - One up.

[Emdyion's Silver]
00:10:977 (3,4,5) - Spacing.
00:58:645 (2) - Maybe move this up one to centre it between 1 and 3?

[Gold]
Seems all good.

[Platinum]
00:04:560 (12,13) - Too close?
01:04:062 (6,7) - This looks a bit uneven and makes the curve stick out.

So many diffs....
Nice set.
Cygnus
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Topic Starter
Cygnus
DONE WITH ALL THY MODS. <3
Scorpiour
2,633 posts
Joined May 2011
Scorpiour
Hi there~ mod from queue
~~o2jam~~~my memories~~

General:
  1. there're something wrong with the file name of 'Emdyion's Silver', it is DM Ashura - Fantasie Impromptu %28Philippines%29 %5BEmdyion%27s Silver%5D.osu now, looks strange, try to fix please
  2. Preview time is different in Emdyion's Silver.
  3. SliderMultiplier is strange in Bronze and Rust, please fix them via osu file directly.
Plantium:
  1. i suppose there's overuse of clap, finish, and normal-whistle. imo, claps' position should be consitent, for example, 2/4 clap or 4-clap, and finishes just only put on downbeats or emphatic beats. Really a good stream but the hit sound is mess...please try to make it better and this map will be great
  2. 00:26:977 (3,4) - change to a five-notes stream?
  3. 00:54:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i suppose an anti-stream here is better~~up to u~
  4. 00:56:979 (1) - change to notes like prev stream?
  5. 00:58:312 (1,2,3) - add two repeats and remove (2,3)?or reduce 2 repeats and add 2 notes?
  6. 01:07:979 (4) - to these jumps, because of the different between slider and note, highly recommend to put slider before notes~
  7. 01:31:479 - i suppose u miss a note here~
  8. 01:32:812 - ^
  9. 01:55:645 (1) - omg, u must be mad! but it's really coooooooooooooool~
  10. 01:56:979 - and then, i suppose i'd like end my map here, the rest part is excrescent and boring.
Gold:
  1. same issues on hitsounds
  2. 01:10:478 (2) - remove it?
  3. 01:56:979 - same suggestion as Plantium diff.
Emdyion's Silver:
  1. 00:08:477 (4) - add a repeat?
  2. 00:09:810 (4) - ^
  3. 00:13:811 (4) - ^
  4. 01:11:311 - add a note here? or move (8) to here?
  5. 01:15:978 - add a note here?
that's all , and good luck :)
Emdyion
292 posts
Joined October 2009
Emdyion

Samah wrote:

[Emdyion's Silver]
00:10:977 (3,4,5) - Spacing. Fixed.
00:58:645 (2) - Maybe move this up one to centre it between 1 and 3? Fixed.

Scorpiour wrote:

Emdyion's Silver:
  1. 00:08:477 (4) - add a repeat? No; following the music
  2. 00:09:810 (4) - ^ ^
  3. 00:13:811 (4) - ^ ^
  4. 01:11:311 - add a note here? or move (8) to here? Done. Thinking about changing back though..
  5. 01:15:978 - add a note here? Don't think so.
"Sorry, the board attachment quota has been reached." :o
"Could not upload attachment to ./files/190213_c7a9d52236d529b9770d8680d1919783" >:o

Will add updated diff soon~

EDIT: http://puu.sh/dXrA <--
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
I am a lazy man

hi mod time

just suggestions

[Gold]
01:14:645(5,6)-I think finish should add on (5)? remove finish on (6)
01:21:479(6)-remove whis , too noisy
01:21:979(11)-add whis

[Emdyion's Silver]
nice map on mapset and hitsound <3

[Platinum]
00:08:310(5)-add clap?
00:08:977(1)-add whis?
00:09:644(5)-add clap?
00:10:644~00:16:894(8)-I think you can add some whistle in this pattern
for example:
00:10:977(4)-add whis?

wtf crazy stream map..
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
[General]
Timing is a bit off. it should be -6 at the first section. (-8 at the others. i don't know what caused your timing section problems... it's now changed a bit during 1st/2nd.), don't forget to snap everything.
I don't know if it's just me, the SB load sometimes get over 5.0x, plz check it (also the reason may be i downloaded this map twice)
One thing i hope you could pay some attention in the future: try to use different Slider Velocities for different diffs, especially the higher ones. Now [Emdyion's Silver] have faster sliders than [Plantinum], it's kinda weird. However, i'm not trying to make you change the settings in this map, just want you to know it.

[Rust]
Not focusing any of the patterns...i think even in the easiest diff, you could make the 1/1 notes clear from each other (no parts stacked), it looks better to me.
01:16:979 (1) - maybe change the direction a bit, make it parallel or use a larger degree.
01:27:646 (1,2,3,4) - i think you're trying to make it curve more along with the notes, but it won't make much sense because they're so slow. A straight line here may be better.
01:30:312 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Bronze]
Is there any reason why you only use tick rate 2 for this diff..?
00:23:644 (1) - looks poor... how about http://puu.sh/e5Ft
00:27:644 (3) - 1 grid left nazi.
00:54:309 (1) - the ticks are just out of place, that's why i would insist tick 1.
00:55:643 (1,2) - looks not so good... combine 2 differnt kind of sliders like this is not a good idea imo.
01:00:645 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - hope you could use 1 or 2 slider in this group of notes. patterns like this would be definitely hard than the other parts.
01:16:979 (1) - ^ similar.

[Silver]
00:11:311 (4) - whistle at the beginning.
00:13:977 (3) - ^
00:22:310 (5,1) - switch new combo
00:32:977 (1) - try to avoid 1/2 notes streams like this... remember you still have 3 diffs higher than it.
00:54:310 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - would be a bit hard (or at least hard to recognize) for this diff, sliders would be more appreciated.
00:58:979 (2) - whistle at the end.
01:17:312 (3,1) - make them farther would be better, now it may be misread as 1/2.
01:53:645 (5,6,7,8) - could you make them curve better? or just use sliders here..?
01:54:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - no for this diff. no one want to die just before the song ends. consider the players of this level plz.

[Emdyion's Silver]
not a fan of those offbeat sliders..
01:55:644 (1) - why lower the volume... a 60% Normal-hitfinish would fit it fine. Also the green line here is useless.

[Gold]
HP-1, the HP drain in the last part is kinda stupid... or you could switch HP/OD.
00:16:644 (4) - remove sliderwhistle.
00:20:310 (3) - whistle at the end..?
00:54:728 (3) - not snapped to 1/3, fix plz.

[Plantinum]
00:22:310 (1,2,3,4) - why no hitsounds here.
00:32:977 (1,4,7) - according to your placements, add finish here...?
01:03:312 (13) - whistle at the beginning
the kiai part... well i'm not even close to this level, no comments.
in fact i doubt if players will like such things but well, at least a great try.
Cygnus
1,517 posts
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Topic Starter
Cygnus
Thanks. NatsumeRin! Will work on that by tomorrow. Ill do a massive change for the beatmap. Thanks! :D

EDIT: STAR! O.O
Ulysses
1,911 posts
Joined September 2010
Ulysses
From my modding queue,I have to mod this map.
First of all,quite good map with good SB.But,you have to follow the rule:
Rule:

A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels").
Or you have to note Sliver and Emdyion's Silver are hard in this thread :33

Therefore,first fix this unrankable issue.

Before modding,I have to say something:
1.My English is poor so ask me in IRC or PM me if you don't understand anything in this modding.
2.Don't challeng me if my mod is wrong or poor.Just calm it down.Or you can remind me.
3.I just want to improve your map , not destroy it.
4.You can ignore everything if you don't like that suggestion even thought it's a unrankable issue.

Okay,let's begin.

Black=Just suggestion,you can fix it if you like.You may not fix it or ignore it if you don't agree with me.
Blue =I think it's a important thing(IMO,you have better to fix it.(Still the same,ignore it if you don't agree.)
Red=Unrankable issue.(You should fix it,otherwise you can't get a rank or app.)

[Platinum]


00:02:144 (1) - Del clap,it doesn't fit at all.

00:07:310 (13) - Del whistle at 00:07:560 ?

00:12:894 (10) - Del clap?

01:07:729 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - These 1/4 jumps are too big and unreable to understand it's a 1/4 jump!!

01:10:396 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^

01:12:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Really unplayable

01:16:979 - Since here,you have to keep low volume when the normal whistle hit comes.It's too loud.


01:31:645 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why no whistle here?

01:35:645 (1) - Since here,the same problem.The whistle hitsounds are too loud.

01:57:979 - Since here:20% volume is enough.


That's all for this diff:33


[Gold]

00:06:977 (5,6,7) - 5 between 6 is 0.5x distance snap and 6 between 7 isn't.

01:11:978 (5,6,7) - Uneven Spacing.

01:16:978 (1) - Start at here,the normal whistle hitsounds are too loud.Keep low volume when the normal whistle hit comes?

01:26:313 (1,2,3,4) - Do it like this :33?
SPOILER

01:57:978 (1) - Start at here,20% volume is enough.

[Emdyion's Silver]

00:59:311 (5) - Add whistle at the end :33?

01:36:311 (1) - Del NC :33

[Silver]

00:27:310 (4) - One grid up to becomes a congruent triangle.

00:32:977 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - So many circles :33~It's too hard for this diff.


01:38:645 (1) - From here,I think 01:38:645 (1,2,3,1) are one group.01:39:979 (2,3,4,1) Are one group ...And more...

01:48:979 (1) - Del NC and 01:49:312 (2) - NC

01:54:312 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - It will become a Insane if you don't change it to easier.

[Bronze]

00:27:644 (3) - x272,y240?

00:28:977 (1) - Spinner bouns are too lund:33

00:31:727 (1) - ^ :33

00:31:727 (1) - Add whistle is the best :33

Also,double spinner in Normal diff s the way too hard><"

01:16:312 (4) - 's end,Stack it probably at 01:15:312 (2)

The rest is fine :33

[Rust]

Fine :33

That's all my mod><"Hope I can help you :33
Cygnus
1,517 posts
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Topic Starter
Cygnus
Will basically do all of it next time. I better go to sleep though atm. Thanks for the star! <3
ax_pokl
ax_pokl
[Gereral]
well done!
offest=2300!
circle size of gold and Platium can be larger
[Platium]
00:03:310 (14,1) - distance
00:04:560 (12,13) -
......
I see that you make NC every Section, But a recommend that make it when it's Jump
such as:
00:02:144 (1,2) -
00:07:977 (2,3) -
etc..(that's only a suggestion, or you need to adjust the distance)

Hp rate=4 or 5
00:55:646 (1) - sb loader > 6.0
the move of the sb-- BG Fade.jpg can be larger.
01:35:645 (1) - sb > 7.0
you can make it earlyer to load it frist.
01:51:812 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what's that?
02:03:645 (2,3) - make a jump?

[Gold]
overall diff +1
00:06:977 (5,6,7,1,1,2) - too hard to read!

[Sliver]
overall diff +1
00:23:310 (2,1) - jump?
00:16:311 (4,2) - don't snapp
01:05:646 (3,2) -
01:08:312 (3,1,2) -
01:20:812 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - you can make that, but don't snapp

[Bronze]
00:19:310 (2,1) - snapp it

[Rust]
add sth in break?


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Cygnus
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Topic Starter
Cygnus
Thanks for the mod and stars everyone.
NatsumeRin
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NatsumeRin
Still in doubt but after 2 hours' modding/fixing period i'm really tired... the map itself is a good try somewhere i guess.

To the next BAT/MAT:
At some of the parts, SB Load get over 5.0x (example: 00:54:301 - ), i'm not good at SB and don't know a good idea to tone it down, but my old computer could run it fine so i just assume it's ok here.
The patterns in [Plantinum] is quite crazy but ... well, don't know if crazy players will like things like that.
Hope i didn't miss other things.


Bubbled.

Good Luck.
(logs if needed)
SPOILER
10:14 <Philippines> : hi there
10:14 <Philippines> : im about to do the mod you gave me
10:14 <Philippines> : still having somequestions
10:14 <NatsumeRin> : ~?
10:15 <Philippines> : the timing thing
10:15 <Philippines> : you said first and second
10:15 <Philippines> : do you mean the red lines?
10:15 <NatsumeRin> : yep
10:15 <Philippines> : oh i see
10:15 <Philippines> : what about the other red lines?
10:18 <Philippines> : okay now im lost
10:18 <Philippines> : someone modded my map and told me offset is 2300
10:19 <NatsumeRin> : in fact i got about the same when listening
10:19 <NatsumeRin> : i got 2302
10:19 <NatsumeRin> : but when playing i tend to make it 2305 (-6)
10:19 <Philippines> : ill take a look at AHO's offset
10:20 <Philippines> : he also has this beatmap
10:20 <NatsumeRin> : but the mp3 file is different..?
10:20 <Philippines> : nvm, their different
10:20 <Philippines> : yeah
10:20 <Philippines> : eh, i think ill just follow -6 / -8 thing
10:20 <NatsumeRin> : or you could make it -8/-10
10:20 <NatsumeRin> : -10/-12
10:21 <Philippines> : okay
10:21 <NatsumeRin> : when it's only about 5ms error
10:21 <NatsumeRin> : i won't pick it
10:21 <Philippines> : ill follow -10/-12
10:21 <NatsumeRin> : hehe a bit much imo
10:21 <NatsumeRin> : i'd suggest-8/-10
10:21 <Philippines> : okay
10:21 <Philippines> : i already decreased rust by -6-8
10:21 <NatsumeRin> : don't forget to resnap (especially the 1/3)
10:21 <Philippines> : so -2 for both again lol
10:21 <Philippines> : yeah i knew that
10:54 <Philippines> : http://puu.sh/eaui
10:54 <Philippines> : is it normal?
10:54 <Philippines> : after i edited gold, that happened
10:54 <NatsumeRin> : yep it's quite common
10:55 <Philippines> : i see
10:55 <NatsumeRin> : the order is only related to the star rating
10:55 <NatsumeRin> : and star rating is not that accurate
10:55 <Philippines> : can star rating be manipulated?
10:56 <NatsumeRin> : you can do it by changing difficulty settings
10:56 <NatsumeRin> : but only a bit
10:56 <NatsumeRin> : 1hp/od=0.04 star rating
10:57 <Philippines> : oh
10:57 <Philippines> : i decreased hp drain by 1 because you said it D:
10:58 <NatsumeRin> : you could do od+1
10:58 <NatsumeRin> : and the star rating will be back
10:58 <Philippines> : okay
10:58 <Philippines> : there
10:58 <Philippines> : thanks XD
11:09 <Philippines> : A map set should not have more than two difficulties in the same difficulty level (not based on stars, but on how the map "feels").
11:09 <Philippines> : oh god, so should i delete my silver diff? D:
11:10 <NatsumeRin> : don't really need to
11:10 <NatsumeRin> : that's a hard
11:11 <NatsumeRin> : Emdyion's Silver is also a hard
11:11 <Philippines> : okay
11:11 <NatsumeRin> : but well, just mention here: when you do the other maps in the future
11:11 <NatsumeRin> : plan your difficluty spread before
11:11 <NatsumeRin> : this one is not so good...
11:12 <Philippines> : but nothings wrong right?
11:12 <NatsumeRin> : true. nothing wrong here, just feels not so good
11:13 <NatsumeRin> : also it would be appreciated to reply to the mods
11:13 <Philippines> : but its rankable right?
11:13 <Philippines> : the modder saidd its not
11:13 <NatsumeRin> : rankable.
11:13 <NatsumeRin> : though i doubt the highest diff a bit, but i'll leave it for BATs to decide
11:13 <Philippines> : Gonzvlo said it was okay
11:14 <Philippines> : hes just actually waiting for the beatmap to have a bubble
11:14 <NatsumeRin> : ok. but imo it's... barely ok.
11:14 <NatsumeRin> : the map itself is good
11:14 <NatsumeRin> : but the spread... some other things..= =|||
11:14 <NatsumeRin> : hope you could plan them better in the future
11:14 <Philippines> : D:
11:14 <Philippines> : yeah
11:14 <NatsumeRin> : also it would be appreciated to reply to the mods
11:15 <NatsumeRin> : i know they're long, but it won't take you more time than the modder right..?
11:15 <NatsumeRin> : modders like CNF should get some respect for the mod
11:15 <NatsumeRin> : still a thing i hope you can do in the future
11:15 <Philippines> : yeah :D
11:15 <Philippines> : but we actually discussed CNF's mod via in game
11:16 <Philippines> : i just asked him to post a copy via forums
11:16 <NatsumeRin> : hehe, i hope you could do such thing in general
11:16 <NatsumeRin> : (i didn't see you reply to any except for "all fixed")
11:16 <Philippines> : lol yeah
11:16 <Philippines> : btw, whats the difference between the star you gave to the thread and the bubble?
11:17 <NatsumeRin> : emm, star probably means after you fix those things the MAT/BAT will give you a bubble
11:17 <NatsumeRin> : a bubble means it only needs one more BAT to check and then go to rank
11:17 <Philippines> : oh, now i see it
11:18 <Philippines> : at first i thought those were just designs
11:18 <Philippines> : oh lol :D
11:18 <NatsumeRin> : go to lunch now, hope you could get it done when i'm back = =
11:18 <NatsumeRin> : (need to go out 2~3 hours later)
11:18 <Philippines> : i already had my brunch
11:18 <Philippines> : but thanks for reminding :3
11:19 <Philippines> : you have your lunch too. :
11:47 <Philippines> : done with all mods
11:49 <NatsumeRin> : wait a moment
11:49 <Philippines> : yeahsure
11:49 <Philippines> : take your time :)
12:03 <NatsumeRin> : 00:15:638 (1) - sliderwhistle is on purpose or ont?
12:03 <NatsumeRin> : not*
12:03 <NatsumeRin> : [Rust]
12:04 <Philippines> : no :D
12:04 <Philippines> : lol
12:04 <NatsumeRin> : ..i still can find some more but lazy to point out
12:05 <NatsumeRin> : pay attention to them in the future
12:05 <Philippines> : yup.
12:06 <NatsumeRin> : 00:54:300 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - [Silver]
12:07 <NatsumeRin> : 01:19:638 (1) - also [Silver], i don't think use 32 circles in a row is a good way
12:07 <NatsumeRin> : maybe you can change
12:07 <NatsumeRin> : 01:19:638 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
12:08 <NatsumeRin> : to sliders?
12:09 <Philippines> : i think its fine since its a kiai part
12:09 <NatsumeRin> : you could leave it there and let's wait for a BAT check
12:10 <NatsumeRin> : just imo it's not good
12:10 <NatsumeRin> : (consider about the diff spread)
12:10 <Philippines> : there is still a diff spread? D:
12:10 <NatsumeRin> : i mean in general
12:10 <NatsumeRin> : Silver is the 3rd Easy diff
12:10 <NatsumeRin> : and it get massive 1/2... = =
12:11 <NatsumeRin> : Emdyion's Silver --- offset not changed
12:11 <Philippines> : Emdyion is not online yet
12:11 <NatsumeRin> : also plz delete the useless green line at the end
12:11 <Philippines> : okay
12:11 <Philippines> : btw Silver is a hard diff
12:11 <NatsumeRin> : i didn't pick anything in his diff in fact..
12:11 <NatsumeRin> : offset change and green lines... they could be done by the mapper = =
12:12 <Philippines> : okay ill do it
12:12 <Philippines> : its just that
12:12 <Philippines> : there are so many lines D:
12:12 <NatsumeRin> : 00:54:302 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
12:12 <NatsumeRin> : gold
12:12 <NatsumeRin> : damn you...
12:13 <Philippines> : i think its okay
12:13 <Philippines> : its gold = insane
12:13 <NatsumeRin> : it's 1/3, man
12:13 <Philippines> : oh nvm
12:13 <NatsumeRin> : it's not ok.
12:13 <Philippines> : its not snapped
12:13 <NatsumeRin> : *sad face
12:14 <Philippines> : how about i scale by .75?
12:14 <NatsumeRin> : btw you don't need to snap every green line
12:14 <Philippines> : .8?
12:14 <NatsumeRin> : you could choose them all and shift
12:14 <NatsumeRin> : ehh what're you talking about?
12:15 <Philippines> : 00:54:301
12:15 <Philippines> : 00:54:301 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
12:15 <NatsumeRin> : i don't mean you have to change the placement
12:15 <NatsumeRin> : just snap them
12:15 <Philippines> : oh. lol
12:16 <Philippines> : i dont see any useless green lines D:
12:16 <NatsumeRin> : Emdyion's diff
12:17 <NatsumeRin> : 116979
12:18 <Philippines> : so i should decrease timing by -8 on first red
12:18 <Philippines> : and on the rest -10?
12:18 <NatsumeRin> : yep
12:19 <Philippines> : btw i have to go
12:19 <NatsumeRin> : ...
12:19 <Philippines> : ill probably just let emd edit
12:19 <Philippines> : my mom is dare
12:19 <Philippines> : i better go
12:19 <Philippines> : there*
12:19 <NatsumeRin> : well i have to go out some time later
12:19 <Philippines> : lol, she musn;t know im here
12:19 <NatsumeRin> : so i can't bubble it today or tomorrow
12:19 <NatsumeRin> : be patient again
12:19 <Philippines> : its okay
12:19 <NatsumeRin> : hehe bye~
12:28 <Philippines> : ah
12:28 <Philippines> : thank god its not my mom
12:28 <NatsumeRin> : .
12:28 <Philippines> : back to mapping
12:29 <NatsumeRin> : but anyway, i'll go out soon.. orz
12:29 <Philippines> : eh
12:29 <Philippines> : anymore errors?
12:29 <NatsumeRin> : need to check
12:29 <Philippines> : im doing emdyion's now
12:29 <NatsumeRin> : k, let's do it fast so i can bubble it before go out
12:30 <NatsumeRin> : 01:30:135 -
12:31 <NatsumeRin> : [Plantinum]
12:31 <NatsumeRin> : probably miss a note here?
12:31 <NatsumeRin> : ..oh wait.. on purpose?
12:31 <Philippines> : yup
12:31 <Philippines> : is there anything wrong with this part?
12:31 <NatsumeRin> : no
12:32 <NatsumeRin> : just feel empty there suddenly
12:32 <NatsumeRin> : 00:54:302 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same thing
12:32 <Philippines> : should i add a note?
12:32 <NatsumeRin> : i hope you could add
12:32 <NatsumeRin> : also the similar parts
12:32 <NatsumeRin> : 01:31:469 - 01:32:802 -
12:32 <Philippines> : what's with the star shape thing?
12:32 <NatsumeRin> : it's ... not snapped
12:33 <NatsumeRin> : when you have both 1/3 and 1/4 in your song
12:33 <NatsumeRin> : after you click "resnap all notes", remember to check the 1/3 parts!
12:34 <Philippines> : checked
12:34 <Philippines> : and snapped
12:34 <Philippines> : ill add some notes on the empty parts you said
12:34 <NatsumeRin> : kk
12:35 <NatsumeRin> : [Gold], the first note is not snapped
12:35 <NatsumeRin> : 00:02:302 (2) -
12:36 <Philippines> : done
12:41 <Philippines> : oh god
12:41 <Philippines> : im lost on emdy's timing
12:41 <NatsumeRin> : ....
12:41 <NatsumeRin> : you just need to change the red lines (-8/-10)
12:41 <NatsumeRin> : then shift all the green line before 2nd red line to -8
12:42 <Philippines> : oh D:
12:42 <NatsumeRin> : shift all green line after 2nd red line to -10
12:42 <NatsumeRin> : easy to do
12:42 <Philippines> : lol
12:42 <Philippines> : i changed each line manually
12:42 <NatsumeRin> : ...
12:43 <NatsumeRin> : http://puu.sh/eaX9
12:43 <NatsumeRin> : just as you select multiple folders in windows
12:50 <Philippines> : finally
12:50 <Philippines> : done <3
12:53 <NatsumeRin> : [Rust]
12:53 <NatsumeRin> : first offset should be 2303
12:54 <Philippines> : okay
12:54 <NatsumeRin> : [Emdyion's Silver] hundreds of unsnapped notes
12:55 <Philippines> : oh and i forgot to delete the useless green thing
12:55 <Philippines> : okay updating
12:56 <NatsumeRin> : god, why you always forget to resnap
12:56 <NatsumeRin> : [Rust]
12:56 <NatsumeRin> : after change this offset you forget it agian.
12:57 <Philippines> : :DD
12:58 <Philippines> : okay done
12:58 <Philippines> : uploaded
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