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DJ Okawari - Luv Letter

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Ulysses
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Ulysses
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年1月15日 at 21:07:48

Artist: DJ Okawari
Title: Luv Letter
Tags: spboxer3 Mirror piano
BPM: 95
Filesize: 5683kb
Play Time: 03:52
Difficulties Available:
  1. Calm (0.77 stars, 121 notes)
  2. Posthumous (5 stars, 695 notes)
  3. Quiet (2.31 stars, 202 notes)
  4. Romantic (4.39 stars, 365 notes)
  5. Spinboxer (6 stars, 416 notes)
Download: DJ Okawari - Luv Letter
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Overmap is my way!

My 1st Ranked map :D

Re-download it if you downloaded it before 3/1/2012[/color]


Diffculty Sperad

Calm-nold_1702 : Easy
Quiet-nold_1702 : Normal
Romantic-nold_1702 : Normal Plus~Hard Minus
Spinboxer-spboxer3 : Insane
Posthumious-nold_1702 : Extra

Speical Thanks:
Spboxer3 - Guest Diff(Spinboxer)
Happy30 - Modding for twice
Kert -Many Stars and many improvment lol

Modders:
SPOILER
Red Highlight=Good improve in my map
DampfNudel
Kert
spboxer3
LKs
Shiki
JInxyjem
EvianBubble
No_Gu
cRyo[iceeicee]
Pereira006
Niva
loveFantasy
Mystica
Broetchen8441
S i R i R u
fartownik
Star Stream
Shinkuu
KingsAL2
[Ranger]
aabc271
goodbye
Nymph
KuraiPettan
ziin
narakucrimson
Soul-less
happy30
IceBeam
Garven

Bubble and Rank:
SPOILER
KuraiPettan- #1 bubble
narakucrimson -#1 rebubble
happy30 -#2 rebubble
happy30 -#3 rebubble
IceBeam -#4 rebubble
Garven - Rank
Last edited by Ulysses , edited 276 times in total.
Kert
2,079 posts
Joined June 2009
Kert
It's a veeery lovely map! !>w<!
I haven't seen such jumps that fit to the music so well for a long time
Keep it up!

Mod for Quiet diff:
SPOILER
19:26 <Kert> : 00:41:590 (3) - 
19:26 <Kert> : Can you place it somewhere else?
19:26 <Kert> : Cause "stacked" notes for a normal is not a good thing
19:26 <nold_1702> : Okay :<
19:30 <Kert> : 01:08:116 (7,8) - 
19:30 <Kert> : Sounds kinda weird
19:30 <Kert> : Let's see what I can suggest..
19:30 <Kert> : 01:08:748 -
19:30 <Kert> : Shorten it to this place
19:30 <nold_1702> : WAIT
19:30 <Kert> : And add a circle here
19:30 <Kert> : 01:09:064
19:30 <Kert> : 01:09:064 -
19:31 <nold_1702> : Done
19:32 <Kert> : 01:09:380 (9) - 
19:32 <Kert> : Also delete one reverse
19:32 <nold_1702> : okay
19:32 <nold_1702> : yes sir!
19:33 <nold_1702> : hehe
19:33 <Kert> : The part here looks like it's kinda hard for a normal
19:33 <Kert> : 01:16:959 (2,1,2,3) - 
19:33 <Kert> : I have only one idea though
19:33 <Kert> : 01:16:959 (2) - 
19:33 <Kert> : Changing this to something else
19:33 <nold_1702> : done
19:34 <Kert> : Just change it to 1 circle
19:34 <nold_1702> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212776
19:34 <Kert> : Screenshot me
19:34 <Kert> : Ye
19:34 <nold_1702> : is it okay?
19:34 <Kert> : Delete (3)
19:35 <Kert> : And move the part after to fix spacing
19:35 <Kert> : And now a suggestionnnnnnnnnn
19:35 <nold_1702> : done
19:35 <Kert> : 01:24:854 (6) - Remove this circle
19:36 <Kert> : I think it makes accent on the 01:25:169 (1) -  this way :3
19:36 <nold_1702> : why~
19:36 <nold_1702> : done
19:37 <Kert> : Oh
19:37 <Kert> : Notes after a spinner
19:37 <Kert> : 01:42:538 (1,2) - 
19:37 <Kert> : Best suggestion is
19:37 <nold_1702> : deled
19:37 <nold_1702> : hehe
19:37 <Kert> : Just delete them and end the previous spinner at
19:37 <Kert> : 01:42:853 -
19:37 <nold_1702> : yes
19:38 <Kert> : 01:45:380 (3,1) - 
19:38 <Kert> : Spacing!
19:38 <Kert> : Also I don't like these stacks
19:38 <Kert> : So
19:38 <Kert> : Just move this notes a bit closer to themselves
19:38 <Kert> : With symmetry too
19:38 <nold_1702> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212780
19:39 <Kert> : Nope
19:39 <Kert> : :D
19:39 <nold_1702> : :d
19:39 <Kert> : uploading
19:39 <Kert> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212781
19:40 <Kert> : Do you like it?
19:40 <Kert> : If not then you can do like you showed me
19:41 <Kert> : 01:50:748 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - 
19:41 <nold_1702> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212782
19:41 <Kert> : dat stream
19:41 <Kert> : Good
19:41 <Kert> : About dat stream
19:41 <Kert> : Can you remove one or two circles there?
19:41 <Kert> : For example this - 01:52:011 (7) - 
19:42 <nold_1702> : done
19:42 <nold_1702> : but not this note
19:42 <Kert> : Okay~
19:42 <nold_1702> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212783
19:42 <Kert> : Exactly this note
19:42 <Kert> : :D
19:42 <nold_1702> : :d sorry~I forgot the number
19:42 <Kert> : 01:58:642 (2) - 
19:42 <Kert> : The only thing I don't like that it starts on the previous slider
19:43 <Kert> : I am not sure how it looks in the game though
19:43 <nold_1702> : just see it in the test mode.
19:43 <Kert> : Well it's kinda hidden
19:43 <nold_1702> : you will find that it's not a hidden
19:43 <nold_1702> : = =
19:43 <nold_1702> : omg
19:43 <Kert> : Can you move it somehow?
19:43 <nold_1702> : wait
19:44 <Kert> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212785
19:44 <Kert> : Something like this
19:44 <nold_1702> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212786
19:44 <nold_1702> : I love 120 turning
19:45 <Kert> : Or your variant
19:45 <nold_1702> : xpxp
19:45 <Kert> : I kinda think it needs a note
19:45 <Kert> : 02:13:169 -
19:45 <Kert> : This place
19:45 <Kert> : Also shorten this
19:45 <Kert> : 02:10:011 (7) - 
19:45 <Kert> : To 02:10:327 -
19:46 <nold_1702> : done
19:46 <Kert> : 02:42:222 (3,4) - 
19:46 <Kert> : Can you move their end points
19:46 <Kert> : So the sliders won't overlap?
19:47 <Kert> : You won't have to fix spacing
19:47 <nold_1702> : ??
19:48 <nold_1702> : done
19:48 <Kert> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212788
19:48 <Kert> : 02:38:432 (1,2) - 
19:48 <Kert> : It's cool but
19:48 <Kert> : The spacing between them
19:48 <nold_1702> : :d
19:48 <nold_1702> : i'm a devil,you know~,,,wait xpxp
19:48 <Kert> : haha
19:50 <nold_1702> : done
19:51 <nold_1702> : xp
19:51 <Kert> : 02:44:748 (2,3) - 
19:51 <Kert> : Same for this part too
19:51 <nold_1702> : donedone
19:51 <nold_1702> : already
19:51 <nold_1702> : xpxp
19:52 <Kert> : 03:08:748 (1,2,3) - 
19:52 <Kert> : Straaaange rhythm
19:52 <Kert> : Do you like it?
19:53 <nold_1702> : fixing wait
19:54 <nold_1702> : done
19:54 <Kert> : 03:16:327 (1,2,3) - 
19:55 <nold_1702> : ???
19:55 <Kert> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212795
19:56 <Kert> : Watch the timeline
19:56 <Kert> : Place the slider better of course
19:56 <Kert> : And make a better shape for it
19:57 <nold_1702> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/212797
19:57 <nold_1702> : done
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CXu
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2009
CXu
Star for great justice
Ulysses
1,911 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Ulysses
Thanks for stars!
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
懶了...

Download: DJ Okawari - Luv Letter (nold_1702) [Spinboxer].osu
Ulysses
1,911 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Ulysses
謝謝你的diff :D
+IRC Modded
Fixed some spacing and nazi.
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DampfNudel
79 posts
Joined August 2011
DampfNudel
[Boring]
01:03:700 - Add a cirlel


[Romantic]
00:36:227 - Add a circle

[Spinboxer]
00:50:437 - Delete the Circel and make this slider: 00:49:806 into a reverse slider
01:39:069 - Looks not well make it to a curve

[Posthumous]
01:13:490 - Set the circle on x256 y56
01:50:437 - Distance Snap
01:52:174 (2,3) - Distance Snap
01:53:279 (1) - Distance Snap
01:54:227 (1) - Distance Snap
General: The jumps are hard! but playable


So my opinion: It's a great beatmap hope it will be ranked <3
Ultimate
382 posts
Joined December 2008
Ultimate
Yo, sorry i didn't came here to mod, but!
A word of advice:

Please don't put Inherited Points or timing points on the note itself the next time.
When the player hits the note a fraction too eary (or too late), the Inherited -or timing points won't have any effect.
Ulysses
1,911 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Ulysses
http://puu.sh/pIwO
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Sanzenin Nagi
93 posts
Joined June 2010
Sanzenin Nagi
good map~
Ulysses
1,911 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Ulysses
Thanks ><"
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
缺一个finish音效 http://puu.sh/9Ok6 试试么
resource写Mirror

无聊

[00:34:016] no whistle
[00:39:069] ^
[00:44:121] ^
还有之前这一系列的whistle最好音量有点变化
[01:32:753] 无用绿线
[02:28:016] 一大波无用绿线
[02:58:648] ^

罗曼蒂克

[00:34:016] 这一系列的whistle再建议删
[00:49:806] 在这里做个kiai撒花效果如何 （所有难度
[00:54:543] no whistle
[00:59:595] ^
[01:04:648] ^
[01:17:279] ^

sp大

[00:39:069] 为什么都在这加whistle :?
[00:49:806] 在这里做个kiai撒花效果如何
没了

波斯特胡莫斯

[01:16:964] 直觉告诉我这里可以变成跳
[01:19;806] 变成whistle
[01:25:174] 16连还是略长

go
Ulysses
1,911 posts
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Topic Starter
Ulysses
Thanks for
DampfNudel
LKs
Modding~
They're very useful and I can improve my map<3
Thanks very much~Most of them was fixed after your moddings <3
Shiki
271 posts
Joined April 2010
Shiki
Hi~ 看到了于是就想mod一下 :>

diff spread什么的我就不吐槽了...

[General]
除了sp3的那个diff
其他diff里
00:27:700 (1) - 这个spinner我觉得尾部静音的话听起来会好些 结束那个音我总觉得很突出

[Boring]
01:58:648 (2) - 这个slider的尾部没必要翘那么高 这样反而感觉很怪
02:10:648 (1) - 这一个单独new combo有必要吗
03:08:753 (1) - 从这个tick开始声音就突然变大 真的很突然 如果你想提高音量的话可以在03:13:806开始提高 原来的那个毫无征兆
03:51:700 (1) - 向下一个格子 和03:49:174 (1)对齐

[Romantic]
00:46:648 (3) - 这个的whistle我觉得可以换到白线上
01:12:543 (1) - 我总感觉这里好像是你调过SV 然后slider缩短 你可以把它scale一下 这样看起来会好些 而不是像现在这样挤成一团
01:33:069~01:42:858 - 这里音量用90的话有点吵
03:12:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我觉得 这里可以弄个音量渐小

[Spinboxer]
00:40:490 (3) - 这个anti-jump很容易误读 考虑一下移开一点?
00:43:016 (3) - ^

[Posthumous]
鬼畜 >A<
02:03:227 (1) - 后面那个跳不太容易读出来 我建议弄成这样 http://puu.sh/9P5P
03:10:648 (1,2,3,4) - 这个弧弄得好难看
03:52:964 (1) - 稍微向左下方移一点??

就这些啦~
Good luck :>
Ulysses
1,911 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Ulysses

Shiki wrote:

Hi~ 看到了于是就想mod一下 :>

diff spread什么的我就不吐槽了...

[General]
除了sp3的那个diff
其他diff里
00:27:700 (1) - 这个spinner我觉得尾部静音的话听起来会好些 结束那个音我总觉得很突出

[Boring]
01:58:648 (2) - 这个slider的尾部没必要翘那么高 这样反而感觉很怪
02:10:648 (1) - 这一个单独new combo有必要吗
03:08:753 (1) - 从这个tick开始声音就突然变大 真的很突然 如果你想提高音量的话可以在03:13:806开始提高 原来的那个毫无征兆
03:51:700 (1) - 向下一个格子 和03:49:174 (1)对齐

[Romantic]
00:46:648 (3) - 这个的whistle我觉得可以换到白线上
01:12:543 (1) - 我总感觉这里好像是你调过SV 然后slider缩短 你可以把它scale一下 这样看起来会好些 而不是像现在这样挤成一团
01:33:069~01:42:858 - 这里音量用90的话有点吵
03:12:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 我觉得 这里可以弄个音量渐小

[Spinboxer]
00:40:490 (3) - 这个anti-jump很容易误读 考虑一下移开一点?
00:43:016 (3) - ^

[Posthumous]
鬼畜 >A<
02:03:227 (1) - 后面那个跳不太容易读出来 我建议弄成这样 http://puu.sh/9P5P
03:10:648 (1,2,3,4) - 这个弧弄得好难看
03:52:964 (1) - 稍微向左下方移一点??

就这些啦~
Good luck :>
Fixed all suggestions in [Boring] [Romantic]
Fixed most of them in [Spinboxer]
Sorry ,I didn't fix anything in [Posthumious]:<
A useful modding~
Thank you very much :>
spboxer3
Global Moderator
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spboxer3
Download: DJ Okawari - Luv Letter (nold_1702) [hitsound].osu
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
No obvious problems seen. I don't think you followed Ultimate's suggestions, but I don't think it's major myself. You should still fix it if you have the time.

Ultimate wrote:

Please don't put Inherited Points or timing points on the note itself the next time.
When the player hits the note a fraction too eary (or too late), the Inherited -or timing points won't have any effect.
Ulysses
1,911 posts
Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Ulysses

JInxyjem wrote:

No obvious problems seen. I don't think you followed Ultimate's suggestions, but I don't think it's major myself. You should still fix it if you have the time.

Ultimate wrote:

Please don't put Inherited Points or timing points on the note itself the next time.
When the player hits the note a fraction too eary (or too late), the Inherited -or timing points won't have any effect.
This bug was fixed some time ago.So,don't worried about it.
Also,thanks for star <3
EvianBubble
339 posts
Joined October 2009
EvianBubble
Yo! :3
Couple of small things I just noticed ^_^

General
Since "mirror" is the name of the album, move it from source into tags (album names shouldn't be in source). Also consider adding "piano instrumental" to tags?
Looking at your mapset now ... 0.67 stars, 4.35 stars, 4.93 stars, and 5 stars O_O Won't you consider making a normal diff? D; I'd totally offer to make a diff but I already mapped this lawlz
Also, mind if I ask how you named your diffs? They're very ... interesting lol XD
TBH I don't really think your BG image fits, but meh D:

Will mod tomorrow. Looking forward to playing it :D
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my queue

3:52-2diff

话说鼠标这个文件可以单个beatmap自定的吗。。昨天mod一个图的时候里面也有一个自定鼠标但是我这边都不显示 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/193015

[boring]
00:33:385 (3) - 结尾弄成没声的是不是好点
00:38:437 (3) - ^
02:43:490 (1) - 把前面那个包起来感觉比较好
03:45:385 (3) - 不和1放一个直线上?

[insane]
01:56:122 (5) - 左1格
02:48:384 (4,1,2,3,4) - 这个是要弄五边形吗。。感觉形状没弄太好
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