1. Friend (2.84 stars, 237 notes)
2. Stranger (0.54 stars, 108 notes)
3. True Love (4.68 stars, 421 notes)

Yuki-kun wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 27 June, 2011 at 12:17:46 AM

Artist: Toyama Nao
Title: Love Call
BPM: 143
Filesize: 5275kb
Play Time: 03:28
Difficulties Available:

1. Normal (2.95 stars, 249 notes)
2. True Love (4.33 stars, 344 notes)

Download: Toyama Nao - Love Call
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st beatmap...on-going =.=
Thanks net45291, Makar8000, Alace, Nymph_ and YuukiH for helping me
And special Thanks to Regenz - my teacher xD

DIODO wrote:

mod irc

[friends lvl]

00:17:412 : new combo
00:19:090 : new combo
00:19:510 : slider asta 00:19:82
00:25:174 : new combo

00:20:224 : new combo
00:20:663 : combo
00:21:083 : slider ()-()-() asta 00:21:503

Yuki-kun wrote:

DIODO wrote:

mod irc

[friends lvl]

00:17:412 : new combo
00:19:090 : new combo
00:19:510 : slider asta 00:19:82
00:25:174 : new combo

It's ok with those suggestion but...

00:20:224 : new combo
00:20:663 : combo
00:21:083 : slider ()-()-() asta 00:21:503

I dont think they will work well, those beats are mismatch with song =.=

Anyway..Thanks for suggestion xD

Yuki-kun wrote:

@YuukiH and Nymph_: thanks for good sound

Makar8000 wrote:

[General]
-I must say you really improved last time I looked at this map.
-I really like the difficulty names
-Maybe you should add a SB with the lyrics and english translation?
-Also, why use custom hitsounds if they sound exactly the same as the regular hitsounds?

[True Love]
Pointless Timing Points:
-01:27:901
-02:16:573

00:15:733 (1,2) Spacing
01:02:517 (2,3) ^
01:03:146 (3) Because of the slider speed on the sliders before, this note is hard to predict
01:20:768 Start this Kiai Time at 01:22:866 instead? That way the star fountains come at the climax of the buildup in the song. Same with the one at 02:48:045 (start at 02:50:139).
01:20:768 (1,2,3,4,5,6) I think you should make these notes jumps like this:

If you do this just make sure you stack (1) and (6)
02:05:244 I think this spinner should start at 02:04:824 instead.
02:16:573-02:29:999 I think you should avoid using straight patterns. Idk it just seems like it would be funner if it were curving or zigzagish

[Friend]
Do the same thing with the Kiai Time in this difficulty if you change it in the True Love difficulty.
Pointless Timing Points:
-00:21:608
-01:27:691
-01:28:321

00:26:223 (2) Move up so its straight with (1). After doing this you will have to adjust (3) and (4) as well.
00:32:936 (2,3,4) Move right so its straight with (1).
00:49:300 (1) This barely doesn't line up with (2).
02:36:293 (4) Move right so its straight with (3).
02:55:594-02:58:111 Just a personal preference, but I don't like the straight patterns here.

[Stranger]
Pointless timing point at 01:28:321
Do the same thing with the Kiai Time in this difficulty if you change it in the True Love/Friend difficulties.

00:17:412 (2) Adjust so the cursor goes is a nice circle pattern:

00:44:055 (1,2,3,4) It's hard for beginners to start on upbeats like this.
00:52:656 (4,1) Spacing
01:32:097 (5,6) Spacing
01:41:328 (4,5) Spacing (Easy should never have jumps, even though this looks small).
01:53:915 (2,3) Spacing
02:58:531 (5,1) Spacing

Good map! Star~

YuukiH wrote:

@Makar: actually, the hitsounds have not much changed to the default sound sample, except it will make the sliders sound go silent, which i think it is needed with this song

also, star~

Nymph_ wrote:

Hihi, Nymph here^^; I am really busy these days so sorry for the longggg delay to this reply=w=

Soso~ here are some suggestions~

Stranger:
I suggest to make the hp drain lower, I think -2 is better~

00:43:216 (3,4,5,6) - I think these notes are really not necessary. Just delete them and make here a break time is much better~
01:16:992 (1) - I think this spinner starts at 01:16:153 is much better. Why not make the last slider shorter and make the spinner starts here?
01:20:768 (1,2,3,4) - these sliders didn't follow the music well.Anyway to improve these?
01:45:943 (1,2,3,4,5) - same problem, try to improve these? seems a little weird.
02:04:824 (1) - starts at 02:03:146 is much better, have a try?
02:44:265 (1) - starts at 02:43:426 is better I think.
02:48:461 (2) - different spacing comparing to others,here is 1.4.
03:21:188 (1) - just same as the other spinner I talked about.

Friend:
Ok first of all: this is a 3 stars diff. So at least:HP drain-3. OD-2.
Then:spacing is 0.5? I really think it is too low.Everything is too near to each other.And the rhythm is a little mess I think.
I think maybe you are trying to follow the vocal? Then there are some places that have vocal but still empty.
I think you can listen to this diff carefully and try to make it more full.

True love:
I think there are many things that are very similar to my map love call.. So I really have something to say.
For me I think my love call is really not a good map, cause the rhythm is not consistent enough and hitsounds are simple(Although I love simple hitsounds...) So I suggest you using some long sliders ? (Cause I overuse short sliders..) And try to not follow the vocal too much, this is just what I feel when it ranked..

So here are just some suggestions for now~ Hope you can make this much better~ I really love this song <3

net45291 wrote:

Yuki ~

Here my mod

SPOILER

: General :

No thing :3

: Stranger :

00:19:090 (3) - New combo

00:24:964 (4) - New combo here

00:28:321 (1) - Delete New combo

00:29:999 (2) - New combo here

00:32:517 (4) - ^

00:34:195 (1) - Delete new combo

00:35:873 (2) - New combo

00:39:230 (4) - ^

00:40:069 (1) - Delete new combo

00:59:370 (3) - New combo

01:07:761 (3) - ^

01:32:097 (5) - ^

01:56:433 (3) - ^

02:19:929 (5) - ^

03:16:153 (3) - ^

:: Friend ::

*SV - 1*

00:25:803 (4) - New combo

01:26:642 (5,6) - Ahh , so hard ; w ;

02:53:915 (8,9,10) - ^

03:19:929 (3) - Square =O=

::: True Love ::: <3

No Problem here :3

Kanon <3

karenying wrote:

Please look at this mod before MAT or BAT 's mod

General
- Please use this for spinnerbonus.wav and soft-sliderslide.wav.Don't use 0 bytes .wav file for blank hitsound
- There is two .osb file in the folder, delete one please.Every map should have only one .osb file in folder.
- remove countdown of [True Love]
- Unite kiai time of every diff please

Friend
00:55:803 (1) - Unsnapped
02:28:950 (3) - ^
02:53:286 (2) - ^
02:58:111 (3) -

True Love
02:03:154 - Unsnapped timing section,you should snap it bcz of kiai time

regenz wrote:

Irc mod

SPOILER

23:17 <Yuki-kun> : hello regenz
23:17 <regenz> : hello
23:17 <Yuki-kun> : long time i dont see you
23:17 <regenz> : oh sorry
23:17 <regenz> : my pc broken
23:17 <Yuki-kun> : lol
23:17 <Yuki-kun> : that's why you had offline so long
23:17 <regenz> : yes
23:18 <regenz> : my hardisk broken
23:18 <regenz> : all gone :C
23:18 <Yuki-kun> :
23:18 <Yuki-kun> : sorry about that
23:18 <Yuki-kun> :
23:19 <Yuki-kun> : anyway, if you free, can you help me check my map?
23:19 <regenz> : now i can quick look
23:19 <regenz> : but can't deep check
23:19 <Yuki-kun> : ok
23:19 <Yuki-kun> : just a fast look
23:19 <Yuki-kun> :
23:19 <regenz> : link then
23:19 *Yuki-kun is listening to (Toyama Nao - Love Call)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/32042]
23:20 <Yuki-kun> : btw: your map
23:20 *Yuki-kun is listening to (Rita - Alicemagic (Blasterhead Remix))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/15780]
23:20 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:20 <Yuki-kun> : so hard
23:20 <regenz> : lol
23:20 <Yuki-kun> : but i like this
23:21 <Yuki-kun> : and about the map
23:21 *Yuki-kun is listening to (Hashimoto Miyuki - TIME (FULL Ver.))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/20220]
23:21 <Yuki-kun> : are you really drop it?
23:21 <Yuki-kun> :
23:23 <regenz> : no sb left
23:23 <regenz> : my work gone
23:24 <regenz> : :C
23:24 <regenz> : cut pic gone
23:24 <regenz> : hardisk broken can;t recover
23:24 <Yuki-kun> : hmm
23:24 <Yuki-kun> :
23:24 <Yuki-kun> : i have that in my pc but that's map SB
23:24 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:24 <regenz> : i mean non upload pic
23:25 <Yuki-kun> : yeah
23:25 <Yuki-kun> : i though so
23:29 <regenz> : hmm
23:30 <regenz> : some point
23:30 <Yuki-kun> : after some modding from other player then my map become that xD
23:30 <regenz> : it's hard
23:30 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:34 <regenz> : last slider have special meaning?
23:34 <Yuki-kun> : yes
23:34 <Yuki-kun> : that's one of my favourite symbol
23:35 <regenz> : for this difficult i suggest
23:35 <regenz> : - 1 od
23:35 <regenz> : + 1 app
23:35 <regenz> : + 1 drain
23:35 <Yuki-kun> : oh ok
23:36 <regenz> : and replace slower slider with normal speed slider
23:36 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:36 <regenz> : normal difficult is not suit for slower slider
23:36 <regenz> : but it's up to you
23:36 <regenz> : it just my comment
23:37 <Yuki-kun> : that's because i learned from my friend
23:37 <regenz> : and i think app 6 is
23:37 <Yuki-kun> : then i tried to apply to my map
23:37 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:37 <regenz> : fine for this
23:37 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:37 <regenz> : i'll test easy
23:38 <Yuki-kun> : oh
23:41 <regenz> : ok easy enough
23:43 <regenz> : ok
23:43 <regenz> : there are some point thai suit for finish sound
23:43 <Yuki-kun> : where are those?
23:44 <regenz> : 01:32:726 (4) - this is bad point
23:45 <regenz> : right point is
23:45 <regenz> : 01:32:936
23:45 <regenz> : 01:33:775 (6) -
23:45 <regenz> : 01:34:615 (1) -
23:46 <Yuki-kun> : whistle?
23:46 <regenz> : no no finish
23:46 <Yuki-kun> : oh ok
23:47 <regenz> : i think there are another part
23:47 <regenz> : but there are same
23:47 <Yuki-kun> : well, i'm very bad about add hitsounds xD
23:49 <regenz> : 02:14:894 (1,2) -
23:50 <regenz> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156122
23:50 <regenz> : add note here with both finish sound
23:50 <regenz> : 02:19:090 you miss important note here
23:51 <Yuki-kun> : oh
23:52 <regenz> : 03:00:209 (7) - finish
23:52 <regenz> : 03:01:048 (9) - same
23:53 <regenz> : 03:01:468 (10) - at tail
23:54 <regenz> : oh and
23:54 <regenz> : make sure all difficult end at same point
23:54 <Yuki-kun> : wha...?
23:54 <Yuki-kun> : xD
23:55 <regenz> : 03:26:223
23:55 <regenz> : this is easy end point
23:55 <regenz> : 03:27:062this is normal end point
23:55 <regenz> : 03:28:740 (1) - this is hard end point
23:56 <Yuki-kun> : hmm
23:56 <regenz> : you need to end all difficult with same spot
23:56 <Yuki-kun> : about easy end point
23:56 <Yuki-kun> : i think that 3:27:062?
23:57 <regenz> : 03:27:062
23:57 <regenz> : i think end this point here all difficult
23:57 <regenz> : is good
23:58 <Yuki-kun> : ok.
23:58 <regenz> : oh it's a bit long point
23:58 <regenz> : i think i can request for kudosu
23:58 <regenz> : lol

good luck

kazumikos wrote:

Hey~
deeply sorry for being late ._. I was quite busy and nearly totally forgot about this, sorry again ;_;
[General]

SPOILER

Well I was about to make a big mod about hitsound from the last time i saw this, but u changed it urself( lol), but still, too much whistles (u overused it) u should seriously consider to reduce them
However i still slightly disagree with sv in [True love], it's not really fast (for a hard diff), not really slow (for a soft song), it's just.. in the middle lol (for me this is the main problem of the whole map, w/o this ur map will remain only some minor issues left) It's up to u not to change it though

[True love]

SPOILER

well, combos r quite messy =/ and due to the fact that it will make this post incredibly long, u should fix it urself or pm me IG i'll be glad to help
00:30:629 (4) - remove whistle?
00:38:601 (1) - ^ ( at the end)
00:49:300 (1) - i dont think there should be a KIAI fountain here, remove it?
00:53:286 (4) - remove whistle
01:03:985 (1) - remove whistle at the start and the reverse
01:05:663 (4,5) - remove whistle
01:09:020 (2,3) - ^ (at the end)
01:58:111 (4) - remove whistle
01:59:370 (8,9) - ^
02:18:251 (3) - ^
02:24:125 (3) - add whistle
02:26:013 (1,2,3,4,5,) - remove whistle
02:36:922 (3) -remove whistle, add whistle at 02:36:712 (2) -
02:45:943 (4) - remove whistle
02:57:272 (1,3) - ^
03:06:503 (10) - ^ at the end

[Friend]

SPOILER

if u wanna add whislte to create sound for sliders only, just add whistle for the whole slider then remove whiistle at the start and the end, dont keep them, they sound horrible ;_;
00:15:733 (1) - add whistle
00:19:090 (2) - remove whistle at the end
00:22:447 (1) - ^
00:30:629 (7) - remove whistle
00:36:293 (4) - remove whistle at the end
00:50:768 (3) - ^
00:51:398 (4) - add whistle at the end
00:57:272 (3) - remove whistle at the end
01:03:985 (3) - ^
01:06:503 (1) - ^
01:13:216 (6) - remove whistle at the 1st reverse O_o
01:23:496 (4) - remove whistle at the start
01:24:545 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - remove whistle
01:28:321 (1,2,4,5,1,2) - ^
01:36:712 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - ^
01:43:216 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:22:866 (2,4) - ^
02:21:608 (1,3) - add whistle at the end
same with after 02:50:139 reduse whistle
same problem with combo

[Stranger]

SPOILER

this actually is the most comfortable diff among all, my ears r really relax when i play this diff
00:24:125 (4) - remove whistle
00:29:999 (1) - ^ at the end
00:34:195 (3) - ^
00:35:873 (1) - add whistle at the end
00:40:069 (2) - remove whistle
02:24:125 (3) - ^ at the end
02:35:873 (1) - remove whistle at the end, add at the reverse
02:50:139 (3) - forgot finish at the start?

sorry for long post (blame on the long song) xD
here da star and good luck ^^

Makar8000 wrote:

Recheck requested so here I am :3

[General]
Use a Stack Leniency of 6?

[Stranger]
00:29:999 (1,2) - Spacing
01:01:887 (2) - I think you should just straighten the slider like this http://puu.sh/6WE3
01:22:866 - You should make the volume louder in Kiai (90%-100%?). It sounds better imo.
01:27:901 (2) - Remove finish and use whistle instead?
01:28:740 (3) - Add a whistle on the repeat of the slider?
02:02:307 (2) - Remove the repeat?
02:03:985 - The the spinner start here and end at 02:06:503 ?
02:04:824 - Remove the Kiai Time here? It doesn't fit imo. (Be sure to change Kiai in the other difficulties if you do this)
02:19:929 (1) - Add a whistle on the first repeat?
02:25:803 (1) - Add a whistle at the start and the second repeat?
02:50:139 - Make the volume louder here like I suggested with the first Kiai?
03:08:601 (3) - Remove a repeat? Using more than 1 repeat on a short slider like this is not recommended for Easy.
03:14:475 (2) - Shorten the slider to end at 03:14:894 - ?
03:18:670 (2) - Finish at the end?

[Friend]
-In general I think your circle size and slider velocity are too high for a normal
00:50:559 (3,4) - I don't think you should stack these. It's a little confusing.
01:15:104 (1,2) - Spacing
02:35:454 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - You use 0.5 spacing here when it's supposed to be 0.6
03:07:342 (3,4,5) - Spacing
03:08:601 (5,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - You switch to 0.5 spacing here again D:
03:27:901 (1,1) - These notes don't fit imo. You should remove them and maybe extend the spinner?

[True Love]
-In general I think the slider velocity is a little bit too high and unfitting for the song. It doesn't seem like much of a problem but if you feel like it I think it would be better if you lowered it a bit.
00:33:356 (6) - If you are going to change the slider velocity here, you should use a different looking slider so it's not as hard to predict
01:11:118 (2) - Not a proper stack
02:32:097 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - The 1/2's have bigger spacing than the 1/1s. This isn't a good idea :s. Fix the spacing please so its more friendly
02:53:915 (5,6,7,8,9) - Not a proper stack
03:27:062 (1,1,1) - As said in the other difficulty, I don't think these notes fit. Remove and adjust spinner?

[A u t o] wrote:

This is my moding

00:25:594~00:25:803 (2,3) : Use Distance Snap 1.0x
00:26:433~00:26:642 (5,6) : Use Distance Snap 1.0x
00:30:209 (3) : Delete note
00:45:524~00:45:943 (2,3,4) : Use Distance Snap 1.0x
01:06:293 (4) : Delete note and
01:06:053 : Add note (84, 336)
01:09:649 (4) : Delete note
01:15:104~01:15:314 (5,6) : Use Distance Snap 1.0x
01:16:363 (1) : Move spin start point (01:16:153) and move spin end point (01:19:510)
01:22:866 (6) : New Combo
01:23:076 (7[2]) : Delete note
01:55:384~01:55:803 (2,3,4) : Use Distance Snap 1.0x
03:01:468 (7) : Use Distance Snap 1.0x

Good luck!

Barney Stinson wrote:

I'm doing an hard diff

Mod Request

SPOILER

SPOILER

Barney Stinson wrote:

I'm doing an hard diff

Well, Nice map. That's all, Good Luck with your beatmap

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Mod Request

Stranger:
HP Drain Rate: -1
Overall Difficulty: -1
00:40:908 (3): Delete the slider and add a note
00:41:747 (x): And add a Slider here that ends in 00:42:587
00:50:978 (4): I think that slider sound better if ends in 00:51:293 (blue tick) and after that add a Reverse Arrow (if you think that you have have to make a lot of changes, don't make it)
02:02:097 (x): Add a Note
02:03:566 (spin): A whistle sound better than finish
02:43:006 (spin): ^^
02:55:174 (1): Whistle at the end
03:10:279 (4): New Combo

Friend:
Circle Size: -1 (Is to big Normal Size to Normal diff)
Overall Difficulty: -1
00:20:768 (4): New Combo
00:59:370 (4): ^^
01:16:363 (spin): Remove the finish and add a whistle
01:23:496 (4): New Combo
01:49:929 (1,2): Try something like this to avoid confusion

SPOILER

01:57:272 (3): New Combo
02:02:307 (2): Don't decrease the slider speed in Normal, is quite unpredictable
02:18:251 (3): Soft hitfinish for consistency
02:19:929 (5): ^^
03:17:202 (3,4): To avoid confusion:

SPOILER

03:28:740 (1): Remove New Combo and for consistency with Stranger and True Love, replace hitfinish to whistle

True Love:
00:16:363 (x): Add a Note for consistency
00:17:831 (5): New Combo
00:47:622 (5): Delete this note
00:48:041 (6): New Combo
01:41:118 (x): Add a Note
01:41:328 (10): Clap
01:47:202 (5): New Combo
02:22:237 (x): Add a Note
02:43:006 (5): New Combo
02:54:335 (6): Move this Note to 02:54:230
02:54:545 (7): This one to 02:54:335
02:54:754 (x): Add a Note
03:27:062 (1,1,1): This sequence is unnecesary. Is better if you make (1,2,3)

Barney Stinson wrote:

I'm doing an hard diff

@Barney Stinson I think that you have to make an Insane difficulty, because true love is quite easy to be an Insane

Well, Nice map. That's all, Good Luck with your beatmap