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Shoji Meguro - Junes Theme

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-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
-kevincela-
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercoledì 25 maggio 2011 at 20:22:22

Artist: Shoji Meguro
Title: Junes Theme
Source: Shin Megami Tensei: Persona 4
Tags: atlus p4 SMT
BPM: 210
Filesize: 2804kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,72 stars, 91 notes)
  2. Hard (4,88 stars, 231 notes)
  3. Normal (4,14 stars, 148 notes)
Download: Shoji Meguro - Junes Theme
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi,here's a new beatmap from Persona 4.Hope you like it!

[Easy]:100%
[Normal]:100%
[Hard]:100%

Thanks to:

Tenshi-nyan
ZLOdeuka
Vass_Bass
-maJu
BakaHuang
DarkOkami
val0108
HakuNoKaemi
Thunderstorm
Reiji-RJ
haha5957
Derekku
ziin
Leorda
kurohacker
nicktoons
Ayeen
OzzyOzrock
Soul-less
LesTrucsRose
Driou
IceBeam
Shiirn
Sallad4ever
loveFantasy
Cirno
kokoroanime
LaunchedthousandShip
wmfchris
chungskale
akrolsmir
kanpakyin
Snowy Dream
Kurosanyan
chamelepeace710
Colin Hou
ShiroKitty
Debbiee
TheVileOne
Card N'FoRcE
Katsuri
blissfulyoshi

For modding my map/helping me ^^
And thanks to starred my map,too :D
Last edited by -kevincela- , edited 47 times in total.
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
viewtopic.php?f=53&t=46641

:D full support! (poi mod!)

inizia a cercare un comboburst di Nanako-chan se non l'hai già messo :D
Tenshi-nyan
1,482 posts
Joined September 2010
Tenshi-nyan
First mod?

:o

Hard
00:01:071 (3) - remove repeat, at note at 00:02:071 -
00:06:214 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1 grid down? all of them :<
00:08:499 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^
00:13:071 (6) - add clap to end
00:13:499 (7) - remove clap
00:13:928 (8) - add clap
00:14:214 (9) - remove clap, add finish? and add New combo
00:14:499 (1) - remove NC
00:15:642 (4) - add clap
00:15:785 (5) - remove clap in begin, add to end

^^ those faults keep appearing over and over again in the map. I'm too lazy to list them all. Check the map yourself!
So I'll concentrate on other stuff for now.

00:22:499 - add note
00:40:499 (6) - improve the arc shape.
00:42:214 (3) - remove repeat, add note at 00:43:214 -
Copy paste much starting now.
01:03:642 - add note

Normal
00:03:357 (5,6) - add finish
00:17:642 (2) - improve the shape D:
00:38:214 (3) - end at 00:38:642 -
00:44:499 (5) - add finish
01:14:785 (4) - Move the slider center point 1 grid up
01:19:357 (3) - end at 01:19:785 -
01:25:642 (1,2) - add finish

Easy
00:07:357 (1) - bad spacing (too far)
00:35:928 (3) - end at 00:36:357 -
01:05:071 (1) - bad spacing (too close)
01:17:071 (3) - end at 01:17:499 -
01:19:928 (2) - move to 01:19:785 -


Check the hitsound for all maps twice, make sure to only claps where you can hear the drums play. Otherwise it sounds weird (IMO)
Star for the song...
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
Hello -kevincela- ^^

[General]

BG: size must be 800x600 or 1024x768

Colors: add color?

Offset: 1 108

Resnap All Notes

[Kiai Mod]

start 00:32:499

finish 00:46:214

start 01:13:642

finish 01:27:357

[Easy]

00:14:214 (3) - new combo

00:14:785 (1) - delete new combo

00:16:499 (2) - new combo

00:17:071 (1) - delete new combo

00:18:785 (2) - new combo

00:23:357 (3) - ^

00:23:928 (1) - delete new combo

00:25:642 (3) - new combo

00:26:214 (1) - delete new combo

00:27:928 (2) - new combo

hmm...nice :3

Star~
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
-kevincela-

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

First mod?

:o

Hard
00:01:071 (3) - remove repeat, at note at 00:02:071 - No
00:06:214 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1 grid down? all of them :< No
00:08:499 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^ No
00:13:071 (6) - add clap to end Done
00:13:499 (7) - remove clap Done
00:13:928 (8) - add clap Done
00:14:214 (9) - remove clap, add finish? and add New combo Done
00:14:499 (1) - remove NC Done
00:15:642 (4) - add clap Done
00:15:785 (5) - remove clap in begin, add to end Done

^^ those faults keep appearing over and over again in the map. I'm too lazy to list them all. Check the map yourself! Done
So I'll concentrate on other stuff for now.

00:22:499 - add note Done
00:40:499 (6) - improve the arc shape. Done
00:42:214 (3) - remove repeat, add note at 00:43:214 - No
Copy paste much starting now.
01:03:642 - add note Done

Normal
00:03:357 (5,6) - add finish Done
00:17:642 (2) - improve the shape D: Done
00:38:214 (3) - end at 00:38:642 - Done
00:44:499 (5) - add finish Done
01:14:785 (4) - Move the slider center point 1 grid upDone
01:19:357 (3) - end at 01:19:785 - Done
01:25:642 (1,2) - add finish Done

Easy
00:07:357 (1) - bad spacing (too far) Done
00:35:928 (3) - end at 00:36:357 - Done
01:05:071 (1) - bad spacing (too close) Done
01:17:071 (3) - end at 01:17:499 - Done
01:19:928 (2) - move to 01:19:785 - Done


Check the hitsound for all maps twice, make sure to only claps where you can hear the drums play. Otherwise it sounds weird (IMO) I'll check it,sorry but i'm not good at hitsounds D:
Star for the song...

ZLOdeuka wrote:

Hello -kevincela- ^^

[General]

BG: size must be 800x600 or 1024x768 Done

Colors: add color? Done

Offset: 1 108 I don't know why,but the notes aren't in rythm after putting this offser D: So for now,i think i won't change it

Resnap All Notes

[Kiai Mod]

start 00:32:499

finish 00:46:214

start 01:13:642

finish 01:27:357

Sorry,but i don't like these kiai

[Easy]

00:14:214 (3) - new combo Done

00:14:785 (1) - delete new combo Done

00:16:499 (2) - new combo Done

00:17:071 (1) - delete new combo Done

00:18:785 (2) - new combo Done

00:23:357 (3) - ^ Done

00:23:928 (1) - delete new combo Done

00:25:642 (3) - new combo Done

00:26:214 (1) - delete new combo Done

00:27:928 (2) - new combo Done

hmm...nice :3

Star~
LOL,it took me very much time to fix all D:
Anyway,thanks for the mod~
Vass_Bass
943 posts
Joined October 2009
Vass_Bass
Hi

General
Not sure about quality of the song, i think it's to high bitrate

Don't use white combo color, do it little grey (in all diffs) red :D 
Combo2 : 255,243,13

Easy
Lead in = 1.5

Normal
Lead in = 1
OD = 5
01:03:357 (5) - "return" of the slider is there 01:03:785

Hard is good
Nice work, starr
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
-kevincela-
All done,thanks :D
-maJu
210 posts
Joined January 2010
-maJu
change source to "Shin Megami Tensei: Persona 4"

since I'm a huge fan of this game, I will star this...
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
just suggestion (T.Tmay be nazi mod)

[General]
you'd better use 1/6 to make notes aligned music
and move notes which on blue lines on red lines

[Easy]
i.e.:00:06:642(2)- move 1/6 on 00:06:690
00:08:928(2)-^
00:11:214(2)-^
00:47:785(2)-^
00:50:071(2)-^
00:52:404(2)-^
00:54:785(2)-move note to 00:54:690-

and Normal also has some the same problems. plz fix it

[Hard]
this diff is good.

/me run..
Nippo
33 posts
Joined July 2010
Nippo
Holy ****!!
I was expecting someone to do this sometime ago!
Thank you!
Well I will try to help you! (check the spoiler boxes!) ;)

EASY
|Overall:|I didn't find major problems in EASY but I don't know if it is only me, but I found the map a little to repetitive, I mean... The basis is all the same |Slider|Beat|, If you want you could add some more beats and delete some of that sliders to make the map not so repetitive. ^^
->I don't know about the next one, but maybe you could do a spinner starting at 01:27:928 and ending at 01:30:785, to not interely rely on Beats and slider points.
->Maybe at 00:58:071 you could repeat that slider and delete the 2 and enquadrate it with the next slider. ^^

NORMAL
|Overall|: Same as EASY, didn't found major errors, only some little problems. ^^
01:08:214->I think you've something off here, you should move 3, 1/4 back and add another beat at 1:08:499. (Normal hitsound)
You should again make a spinner in the end of the song. Start at 01:27:928 end at 01:29:642, same reason as above.

HARD
|Overall|: Liked it pretty much! Didn't find anything off or strange.
Again, you should consider putting a spinner in the end.

Loved it. Star *.*
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
-kevincela-
-maJu:Done!
BakaHuang:For now i won't do this,because first i need to fix the fiming,then i'll see if it's necessary to do so.Kudosu for the help anyways :D
DarkOkami:I didn't fix so many fixed,but thanks for the suggestion of the spinner!
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
val0108
ya o/

[General]
All diff's "Lead-in 2"

[Easy]
00:13:642 (2) - about here,00:13:357 -
00:25:071 (3) - just stack
00:54:785 (2) - red tick again.

[Normal]
00:04:499 (7) - Remove finish.then,add whistle
00:35:928 (3) - end blue tick?

[Hard]
00:25:928 (1) - here?00:25:785 - If you changed,adjust the later spacing.
01:09:357 (1) - Remove whistle?
01:10:214 (4) - ^
01:22:785 (1) - add finish?
01:23:357 (3) - ^ start slider only
01:25:071 (5) - add finish

nice map :3
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey

-kevincela- wrote:

BakaHuang:For now i won't do this,because first i need to fix the fiming,then i'll see if it's necessary to do so.Kudosu for the help anyways :D
yeah , I think so. :)
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
-kevincela-

val0108 wrote:

ya o/

[General]
All diff's "Lead-in 2" Done

[Easy]
00:13:642 (2) - about here,00:13:357 - No
00:25:071 (3) - just stack No
00:54:785 (2) - red tick again. No

[Normal]
00:04:499 (7) - Remove finish.then,add whistle Done
00:35:928 (3) - end blue tick? No

[Hard]
00:25:928 (1) - here?00:25:785 - If you changed,adjust the later spacing. No
01:09:357 (1) - Remove whistle? Done
01:10:214 (4) - ^ Done
01:22:785 (1) - add finish? Done
01:23:357 (3) - ^ start slider only Done
01:25:071 (5) - add finish Done

nice map :3
Thanks~
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
ho controllato i BPM, è giusto, l'offset sembra un pò in anticipo: prova ad aumentarlo di 10/12 ms <-si sente abbastanza poco la differenza.

EDIT: Doppio offset o BPM leggermente minori di 105, prova con 104,98 BPM :D, ho notato che prendevo più 100 alla fine

quindi priova questo nuovo Timing:
BPM: 104,98
Offset: 512
Thunderstorm
437 posts
Joined May 2009
Thunderstorm
ThunderMod

Some suggestions

<<Easy>>

00:55:379 (3) -->> (1) - swap new combo?
01:05:095 (1) - align with (3)?

Rest seems fine.
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
-kevincela-

Thunderstorm wrote:

ThunderMod

Some suggestions

<<Easy>>

00:55:379 (3) -->> (1) - swap new combo? Done
01:05:095 (1) - align with (3)? No

Rest seems fine.
Thanks for the mod!
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Reiji-RJ
Hi~

[Timing]

Some of your green timing sections are not stacked properly

[Easy]

00:01:083 (2) - finish
00:21:087 (1) - to my mind, the whistle sound on the slider body don't fit it. If it's your call, ok~
00:25:088 (3) - (nazi) stack properly with (1)
00:28:517 (2) - blah-blah-blah whistle on the slider body, I won't mention it next time
00:38:662 (2) - change finish with whistle
00:42:234 (2) - finish
01:23:384 (2) - ^

[Normal]

00:01:083 (3) - finish
00:42:234 (3) - ^
01:04:238 (5) - remove finish
01:23:384 (3) - finish

[Hard]

00:01:083 (3) - finish
00:23:373 (10) - new combo
00:23:659 (1) - remove nc
00:39:090 (3) - remove finish
00:42:234 (3) - finish
01:27:957 (1) - maybe decrease volume in all diffs

Good luck~
-kevincela-
Elite Mapper
2,790 posts
Joined February 2010
Topic Starter
-kevincela-

Reiji-RJ wrote:

Hi~

[Timing]

Some of your green timing sections are not stacked properly Done

[Easy]

00:01:083 (2) - finish Done
00:21:087 (1) - to my mind, the whistle sound on the slider body don't fit it. If it's your call, ok~ Done
00:25:088 (3) - (nazi) stack properly with (1) No
00:28:517 (2) - blah-blah-blah whistle on the slider body, I won't mention it next time Done
00:38:662 (2) - change finish with whistle Done
00:42:234 (2) - finish [Done
01:23:384 (2) - ^ Done

[Normal]

00:01:083 (3) - finish Done
00:42:234 (3) - ^ Done
01:04:238 (5) - remove finish Done
01:23:384 (3) - finish Done

[Hard]

00:01:083 (3) - finish Done
00:23:373 (10) - new combo Done
00:23:659 (1) - remove nc Done
00:39:090 (3) - remove finish Done
00:42:234 (3) - finish Done
01:27:957 (1) - maybe decrease volume in all diffs Done

Good luck~
Thanks for the mod~
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
*BPM: 104,98? Use 105.00. Otherwise, the offset is about 20ms off by the end of the map.

*Actually, this would probably be easier to map if you doubled the BPM. Double 105 to 210, and halve the slider velocity/tick rate on each of your difficulties. For example, 1.7 SV on Normal would become 0.85 (hold the ctrl key while changing the slider velocity to get it exact).

*The offset itself is fine.

*This song is in 1/3, so please use 1/3 snap to map with. I went ahead and resnapped parts of [Hard] correctly, and remapped a few places so that you would have something to play with. I also adjusted the BPM/SV/tick rate as mentioned above to show you how it looks.

*Note: You can also use 1/3 decently for Normal/Easy as well, but try to keep things simple with sliders and such. Good luck!

Download: Shoji Meguro - Theme of Junes (-kevincela-) [Correct Snapping].osu
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