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Tim Vegas - Imitation Lovers Club Mix

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thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Tuesday, 26 October 2010 at 6:23:33 PM

Artist: Tim Vegas
Title: Imitation Lovers Club Mix
Source: Touhou
Tags: ZUN Because Princess Inada Is Scolding Me
BPM: 168
Filesize: 11739kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Delighted (4.68 stars, 171 notes)
  2. Ecstatic (4.9 stars, 319 notes)
  3. Happy (3.34 stars, 106 notes)
  4. Sad (1.58 stars, 69 notes)
Download: Tim Vegas - Imitation Lovers Club Mix
Download: Tim Vegas - Imitation Lovers Club Mix (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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8/2/10
I saw the vid on youtube and i figured i'd have a go. going for ranking here. have fun!


STAR COUNT goal=8, 20

8/8

20/20

NEW GOAL: bubble and rank

20/2/10
doing what Xgor said. i finished the comboing stuff but im still cutting down the song, adding hitsounds and finding a background. im getting there :D

changed mp3 file like xgor said. also changed the offsets for that. im gonna get the sounds and background done soon. thanks JarJar

made one teensy weensy change with a slider

21/2/10

added more hitsounds. still finding an appropriate bac

2/3/10

found a background! :D

2/3/10

did the stuff garven said :D

11/3/10

did most of what jarjar said. im getting there!

13/3/10

Fixed up some things CDFA and Luigihann told me to. i need more modders! i gotta upload another thing!

15/3/10

blaargh i forgot preview point... put it in now. thanks rayxdgreatsx

20/3/10

fixed some stuff.

24/3/10

fixed up stuff from xxheroxx and babble.

25/3/10

fixed more things

26/3/10

did some more fixes from sushi971... i hate you, AIMod... i shall kill you with fire!!! mwahahaha...
Where is my flam throwa?

27/3/10

did some stuff from Leorda.

1/4/10

deleted entire map...

april fools!

nah i just fixed suggestions from Zekira.

4/4/10

more stuff

SOMEONE PUBBLE, BUBBLE AND RANK THIS THING!!! IVE SEEN MAPS START AND GET RANKED IN 3 DAYS!!! ITS BEEN MONTHS! T.T

6/4/10

fixed DJpop's stuff

8/4/10

fixed YGOkid8's stuff

1/5/10

fixed sakura301's fixes. good thing too, it was almost gonna graveyard from inactivity

19/5/10

Fixed natsume rin's modding

22/5/10

Fixed H-boy's stuff among other stuff

1/6/10

Fixed lil issue from Hitoshirenu Shourai as well as a few lil things of my own

4/6/10

fixed stuff from beuchi-chan and jericho2442

6/6/10

got a waaay better quality vid

got new mp3. thanks nachopiggy!!!!!!!!

then i had to resnap EVERY TIMING SECTION AND NOTE (and the beat snap divisor was at 1/6 for ecstatic when i tried to resnap so i had to do them all by hand.) and i also changed a lil bit towards the middle from the different mp3 file. see if you can find it

fixed a lil stuff


FAK the timing is wierd now.. puttin in a timing help queue or something T-T

i think i got it, but keeping in queue to make sure thanks a LOT to jarjarjacob for that timing

7/6/10

fixed nachopiggy's stuff

13/6/10

fixed saymun's stuff

22/6/10

fixed JInxyjem's stuff

9/7/10

got rid of that stupid 1/8 sliderthingie cause im sick of it

7/8/10

made changes

30/8/10

got rid of countdown

15/9/10
did moar stuff

17/9/10

Fixed mafiamaster's issues...

24/9/10

fixed garven's stuffs

(i lost my watch and i cbf to find it)/10/10

Uploaded with a soundless video. thankyou so much, Garven

8/10/10

Fixed Mafiamaster's fixes

9/10/10

fixed one thing i missed

15/10/10

fixed yes's fixes, removed hitsounds and made kiai moar fun ;D

19/10/10

fixed garven's stuff

24/10/10

tweeeeek


fixed xgor's IRC

25/10/10

fixed james's fixes... tiem to get rebub'd

26/10/10

fixed james's other fix he forgot.
fuckballs, i cant use non-inherited timing to make slow sliders. sadfaic
Last edited by thekillerhjkhjk , edited 70 times in total.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
Get a background, Even if you have a video you still need to have a background <.<

30% of the mp3 isn't mapped.... map it or cut the rest on the mp3

The use of hitsounds is pretty dull and the first part has none at all.....

[Sad]
00:46:536 (4) - New combo
00:49:393 (9) - ^
00:55:107 (4) - ^
00:57:964 (7) - ^
01:06:000 (3) - ^

[Happy]
01:11:897 (4) - New combo
00:39:197 (8) - This just feels odd.....

[Delighted]
01:00:107 (6) - New combo
01:22:964 (7) - ^
01:24:214 (1) - Remove new combo

[Ecstatic]
00:57:429 (7) - New combo
01:06:000 (7) - ^
AHHHH to fast for me <.<

Well i feel that this map has a bit to go <.<
Well here's a star for some priority
*star*
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

Xgor wrote:

Get a background, Even if you have a video you still need to have a background <.<

30% of the mp3 isn't mapped.... map it or cut the rest on the mp3

The use of hitsounds is pretty dull and the first part has none at all.....

[Sad]
00:46:536 (4) - New combo
00:49:393 (9) - ^
00:55:107 (4) - ^
00:57:964 (7) - ^
01:06:000 (3) - ^

[Happy]
01:11:897 (4) - New combo
00:39:197 (8) - This just feels odd.....

[Delighted]
01:00:107 (6) - New combo
01:22:964 (7) - ^
01:24:214 (1) - Remove new combo

[Ecstatic]
00:57:429 (7) - New combo
01:06:000 (7) - ^
AHHHH to fast for me <.<

Well i feel that this map has a bit to go <.<
Well here's a star for some priority
*star*
thanks for modding n stuff, im getting things done, itll be done soon!

Edit: finished with the new mp3 file. thanks JarJarJacob
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[Sad]

00:30:492 These two sliders really feel like they need a finish on the end of each of them.
00:33:349 ^
00:44:421 Move this over one grid (x3) to the left to line it up.
00:52:992 ^

[Happy]

01:23:349 Lower 5 and 6 one grid down to line up with the 3 slider end and 4.

[Delighted]

01:25:224 End this spinner at 01:26:564.

[Ecstatic]

00:40:492 More a suggestion, but maybe change the hit sound to a soft finish or no hit sound at all.
01:25:312 Put a spinner here 'till 01:26:562 to go with the rest of the difficulties.

[General]

That one break in the song is really long. Maybe start it up again in the middle of it so you're not just sitting there waiting after the beginning of the song each play, kind of like what you did with Ecstatic, but maybe a bit more. It looks like the video is a little bit off, but I'm not sure. Maybe it's just me.

Great maps, though. Star.

Edit: Typos, grr
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
Kiai should begin at 00:40:849. Even though it's on for over half the map, it makes sense. Either that, or just leave kiai off.

Happy:

00:22:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Quite a long combo.

Delighted:

00:39:421 - Remove break.
01:07:457 (5,6,7,8) - Jumps don't make sense.
01:24:778 (10,11,12) - Jumps don't make sense.
LuigiHann
Resident Skinner
4,432 posts
Here since the beginning
LuigiHann
Not much to complain about, so here are some cosmetic suggestions that you are welcome to ignore

General:
I'm not usually a fan of single-note kiai fountains, but if there's ever a decent place to use one, it's when somebody goes "whoo!" like at 00:27:635

Sad:
00:22:278 (1) - Whistle here is just kind of annoying in my opinion
01:03:171 (1,2) - (and similar) I tend to think that on an Easy difficulty like this, short repeating sliders like this should all have the same number of repeats as one another, or inexperienced players could get confused and frustrated. Not a huge deal, but yeah maybe you could rework that a bit

Happy:
Stupid nitpick, but if you moved 00:03:349 (1) - down one, it'd line up with the following slider, and look nicer
00:27:992 (1) - The slider repeat doesn't really fall on a beat of the song, I don't like this. Maybe move it a bit and make it into two sliders that each start on white ticks and end on red ticks
00:30:849 (1) - same as that ^


Delighted:
Stupid nitpick, but if you moved 00:06:207 (1) - down one, it'd line up with the following slider, and look nicer
00:15:135 (1,1) - I personally found it difficult to read this, there's really no way to intuitively tell when to let go of the first slider to hit the second slider. If nobody else agrees with me then you can probably leave it the way it is because this might just be because I suck

Ecstatic:
00:22:278 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,1) - I feel like your use of new combos here isn't very consistent with the music. I'd probably put new combos at: 00:23:528, 00:24:957, 00:25:671, 00:26:385, 00:27:635, and 00:27:992
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
General:
You have to end Kiai time on every diff. It doesn't really do anything, but it's required.

Sad:
00:22:278 (1) - Oh god thatv whistle

Happy:
00:42:635 (4) - The whistle seems out of place. Also, move 1 lvl3 grid left
00:54:421 - Add note here

Delighted
Overlapping sliders ;-;. Try increasing the slider velocity until the sliders don't stack. (SUGGESTION. Only if you want to spend time re-spacing your map)
00:38:350 (6) - 1 lvl3 grid up
00:38:707 (7) - 2 lvl3 grids up

Estatic
00:39:242 (1) - <3!~

A BA BA BAAA~
rayxdgreatx
52 posts
Joined February 2010
rayxdgreatx

thekillerhjkhjk wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, 15 March 2010 at 7:51:59 PM
blaargh i forgot preview point... put it in now. thanks rayxdgreatsx
first things first, it's rayxdgreatx :D

-Estatic-
00:22:174 - 00:27:291 - randomly placed and spaced too far (but since it's an impossible map, nvm)

...that's the only thing I got... >_>

without further ado, i give you a star :D
AtemiskKun
112 posts
Joined March 2010
AtemiskKun
o-o wow... i cant find anything wrong once again some few things though about your vid ^^ ill fix that right up for ya~
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Hikato
[General]
Set a preview point.
Delete .osb if it's ununsed.

[Sad]
No problems.

[Happy]
00:04:778 (3) - right one grid
00:05:135 (4) - same again
00:30:135 (3) - spacing
00:30:135 (3) - spacing
00:59:421 (3) - repeat and add clap to the end

[Delighted]
00:29:599 (3) - spacing
00:30:135 (4) - reverse it? :D
00:42:100 (5) - spacing

[Ecstatic]
Lower OD by 1?..
00:15:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - umm...what?
00:22:278 - 00:26:385 - seems so random..
01:02:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - :|

This diff seems very messy..I don't like it. D:

Star for the other diffs, nice map.
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

Hikato wrote:

[General]
Set a preview point.
Delete .osb if it's ununsed.

[Sad]
No problems.

[Happy]
00:04:778 (3) - right one grid
00:05:135 (4) - same again
00:30:135 (3) - spacing
00:30:135 (3) - spacing
00:59:421 (3) - repeat and add clap to the end

[Delighted]
00:29:599 (3) - spacing
00:30:135 (4) - reverse it? :D
00:42:100 (5) - spacing

[Ecstatic]
Lower OD by 1?..
00:15:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - umm...what?
00:22:278 - 00:26:385 - seems so random..
01:02:278 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - :|

This diff seems very messy..I don't like it. D:

Star for the other diffs, nice map.

fixed some stuff... i like the stream at 1:02:278... plus, have you seen Marisa Spark? it has a stream like that but 4 times the length.
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-touhou.jpeg search for a better BG and resize to 1024x768
-Tim Vegas - Imitation Lovers Club Mix (thekillerhjkhjk).osb if u don't use this, kill it

[Sad]
-Acc 100% I don't see problems

[Happy]
-Acc 100% no problems :3

[Delighted]
-Acc 99% very nice but pretty easy i think

[Ecstatic]
- -2 OD (more easy pliss, too fast)
-Sry i can't pass this dif it's realy ugly D:
-00:15:135 <-> 00:16:564 I can pass badly this part but is horrible D:

Well that's all, nice map, and good luck.

StaR
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

Astom wrote:

In blue suggestions, In red maybe important

[General]
-touhou.jpeg search for a better BG and resize to 1024x768
-Tim Vegas - Imitation Lovers Club Mix (thekillerhjkhjk).osb if u don't use this, kill it

[Sad]
-Acc 100% I don't see problems

[Happy]
-Acc 100% no problems :3

[Delighted]
-Acc 99% very nice but pretty easy i think

[Ecstatic]
- -2 OD (more easy pliss, too fast)
-Sry i can't pass this dif it's realy ugly D:
-00:15:135 <-> 00:16:564 I can pass badly this part but is horrible D:

Well that's all, nice map, and good luck.

StaR

about the stream... what will i replace it with? plus i like it. i deleted the .osb and -2 OD
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[General]

  • • Add some Source
    • Delete the .osb file, then "Full submission"
    • Sample volume: 7,5
[Happy]

  • • 00:02:278 (2,1) - Spacing
[Delighted]

  • • 00:27:635 (4,1) - Spacing
    • 00:28:707 (2,3) - ^
    • 00:31:564 (2,3) - ^
[Ecstatic]

  • • 00:30:135 (4) - The end slider is hidden; make it visible
Babble
230 posts
Joined July 2009
Babble
Heya

Sad
Looks good.

Happy
Also looks good

Delighted
00:32:903 - Add hitcircle

Ecstatic
00:24:599 (8) - Move to 00:24:421
00:24:689 - Add hit circle here

Yes, this map made me happy.
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
general

  • Tags : touhou project touhouproject
    lol maybe remove "touhouproject"?

    remove .osb

    no need a countdown

    Stack leniency = 5
SAD

about song setup
HP DRAIN RATE =0
OD = 0
NONO , At least make them = 3 . remember easy does not means NO FAIL

[00:00:15] remove the red tick
[00:27:60] too short kiai . no sence
[01:15:135] start kiai here
[01:19:42] move 1 grid left

HAPPY

set a previou point (like [SAD])
At least make HP drain & OA = 3~5

[00:00:15] remove the red tick
[00:27:60] too short kiai . no sence
[01:15:135] start kiai here

Delighted

set a previou point (like [SAD])

[00:00:15] remove the red tick
[00:07:09] move 1 grid left
[00:27:60] too short kiai . no sence
[01:15:135] start kiai here

Ecstatic

set a previou point (like [SAD])

[00:00:15] remove the red tick
[01:24:76] new combo

potential map but need more improved
star
Sushi
osu! Alumni
2,989 posts
Joined October 2008
Sushi
IRC modded

complete discussion :
SPOILER
10:55 From thekillerhjkhjk: : you need to do it in public chat
10:55 To thekillerhjkhjk: : kay~
10:55 From thekillerhjkhjk: : cause you're basically pming me !where thekillerhjkhjk
10:55 To thekillerhjkhjk: : oh, true
10:55 To thekillerhjkhjk: : so
10:56 To thekillerhjkhjk: : for removing .osb, you have to full submit :)
10:56 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ok
10:56 To thekillerhjkhjk: : let's start with the mod itself
10:57 To thekillerhjkhjk: : (Sad)
10:57 From thekillerhjkhjk: : just wait, im getting your screenshots then ill fix
10:57 To thekillerhjkhjk: : kay~
10:58 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ok got em. going to my map to fix ur stuff
10:58 To thekillerhjkhjk: : so
10:58 To thekillerhjkhjk: : in (sad)
10:59 To thekillerhjkhjk: : the only thing which annoyed me, was the loooog slider
10:59 To thekillerhjkhjk: : 00:22:278 (1) - 
10:59 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ... ok...
10:59 From thekillerhjkhjk: : any suggestions?
10:59 To thekillerhjkhjk: : making it look nicier
10:59 From thekillerhjkhjk: : break in two?
10:59 From thekillerhjkhjk: : oh
10:59 To thekillerhjkhjk: : or break in two
10:59 To thekillerhjkhjk: : or repeat
10:59 From thekillerhjkhjk: : i like long slider. making it look nicer...
11:00 To thekillerhjkhjk: : :)
11:00 To thekillerhjkhjk: : oh, one thing
11:00 From thekillerhjkhjk: : hmm?
11:00 To thekillerhjkhjk: : 00:22:278 (1) -    and  01:09:064 (1) - 
11:00 To thekillerhjkhjk: : 01:09:064 (1) - 
11:01 From thekillerhjkhjk: : yeah?
11:01 From thekillerhjkhjk: : extra nodes?
11:01 To thekillerhjkhjk: : you have to choose between these two timing
11:01 To thekillerhjkhjk: : +s
11:01 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ?
11:01 To thekillerhjkhjk: : i mean
11:01 To thekillerhjkhjk: : they're mapped on the same kind of thing right?
11:02 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ... i dont understand...
11:02 To thekillerhjkhjk: : hmmm
11:02 To thekillerhjkhjk: : oh shit
11:02 From thekillerhjkhjk: : did you post the wrong note?
11:02 To thekillerhjkhjk: : ^
11:02 To thekillerhjkhjk: : 01:06:028 (1) - 
11:02 To thekillerhjkhjk: : 01:09:064 (1) - 
11:02 To thekillerhjkhjk: : these two
11:02 From thekillerhjkhjk: : oh
11:02 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ic
11:03 To thekillerhjkhjk: : oh this one too 01:03:349 (1) - 
11:03 From thekillerhjkhjk: : i shortened the first one
11:03 From thekillerhjkhjk: : to match the othes
11:03 To thekillerhjkhjk: : kay~
11:03 From thekillerhjkhjk: : others*
11:04 To thekillerhjkhjk: : now, (happy)
11:04 From thekillerhjkhjk: : just wait, fixing the first slider...
11:04 To thekillerhjkhjk: : kay~
11:05 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ill screenshot it and you tell me what you think. ok?
11:05 To thekillerhjkhjk: : kay~
11:06 From thekillerhjkhjk: : how to link a screenshot in chat? XD
11:06 To thekillerhjkhjk: : well, when you Shift+F12 , it normally uploads on the site, and automatically opens in the browser
11:06 To thekillerhjkhjk: : if you only F12, it will be only stored on you comp
11:06 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ah
11:07 From thekillerhjkhjk: : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5701
11:07 From thekillerhjkhjk: : the gap next to the end is where the next slider starts
11:07 To thekillerhjkhjk: : it's better now
11:07 From thekillerhjkhjk: : :D
11:08 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ok happy.
11:08 To thekillerhjkhjk: : 00:03:349 (1,2,3) - little spacing problem here, make (1) closer to (2)
11:09 From thekillerhjkhjk: : !!! and then (4) can go straight up! thanks!
11:09 From thekillerhjkhjk: : next?
11:09 To thekillerhjkhjk: : looking for errors
11:10 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ... thats always a good sign...
11:10 To thekillerhjkhjk: : 00:33:707 (1,1) - symetry here
11:10 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ?
11:11 To thekillerhjkhjk: : select one of the two notes, and do a Ctrl+J
11:11 To thekillerhjkhjk: : you'll understand
11:11 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ok
11:12 From thekillerhjkhjk: : omg thats gonna come in handy so much, i always have to count those freaking boxes
11:12 To thekillerhjkhjk: : xD
11:12 To thekillerhjkhjk: : Ctrl+J is for vertical, Ctrl+H for horizontal
11:12 From thekillerhjkhjk: : thanks
11:13 To thekillerhjkhjk: : now (delighted
11:13 From thekillerhjkhjk: : what exactly is the .osb anyways?
11:14 To thekillerhjkhjk: : .osb is for StoryBoard
11:14 From thekillerhjkhjk: : oh
11:15 To thekillerhjkhjk: : 00:35:492 (6) - move the note 1 grid right for alignment and symetry stuff
11:16 From thekillerhjkhjk: : yep
11:16 To thekillerhjkhjk: : suggestion : 00:36:207 (8,1) - align (1) and the following notes with (8)?
11:17 From thekillerhjkhjk: : i did that just now when you mentioned the other one XD
11:17 To thekillerhjkhjk: : :3
11:17 To thekillerhjkhjk: : 00:42:278 (6) - move it 1 grid right, looks better
11:17 From thekillerhjkhjk: : moved
11:18 To thekillerhjkhjk: : 01:15:671 (2,3,4,5) - I feel a lack of hitsounds
11:19 From thekillerhjkhjk: : added some
11:20 To thekillerhjkhjk: : (ecstatic)
11:20 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ok
11:20 To thekillerhjkhjk: : you have a looooooooooooooooot of unsnapped notes
11:20 From thekillerhjkhjk: : not a looooooot...
11:20 To thekillerhjkhjk: : check AIMod
11:21 From thekillerhjkhjk: : aiwut?
11:21 To thekillerhjkhjk: : File > open AIMod
11:21 From thekillerhjkhjk: : o.o
11:21 From thekillerhjkhjk: : ok i do have a lot
11:23 To thekillerhjkhjk: : use "Resnap all notes" then globally check your map to go faster
11:25 From thekillerhjkhjk: : do i have to do them ALL?
11:25 To thekillerhjkhjk: : just do a "Resnap all notes"
11:26 To thekillerhjkhjk: : they will be automatically resnapped
11:26 From thekillerhjkhjk: : how to resnap?
11:26 To thekillerhjkhjk: : but verify that your notes are well resnapped
11:26 To thekillerhjkhjk: : Timing > Resnap all notes
11:31 To thekillerhjkhjk: : verify some notes, as 00:40:848 (1) - 
11:31 To thekillerhjkhjk: : when I resnapped, it did shit
11:31 From thekillerhjkhjk: : yeah same
11:31 From thekillerhjkhjk: : i fixed though
11:32 To thekillerhjkhjk: : kay~
11:32 To thekillerhjkhjk: : there, I think that's all
11:32 From thekillerhjkhjk: : oh thank god
11:32 To thekillerhjkhjk: : papapa~ papa papa papa papa~
11:32 From thekillerhjkhjk: : its ba
11:32 From thekillerhjkhjk: : :3
11:32 To thekillerhjkhjk: : D:
11:34 From thekillerhjkhjk: : okaaay uploading~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi

YAY! TOUHOU!

[Timing]
00:00:15 4/4 168,00bpm S - I think this timing points is unused

[Sad]
00:10:850 (1,2,3,4) - Make a diamond pattern
00:49:421 (1) - Make it like this?

01:09:064 (1) - Make parallel?

[Happy]
00:29:421 (2,3) - Too close between two
00:43:707 (1) - Looks ugly, make it symetric?
00:44:421 (2) - ^
00:52:278 (1) - ^
00:55:135 (1) - ^
01:10:850 (3) - Make it symetric?

[Ecstatic]
All unsnapped, resnap it (Timing -> Resnap all note -> Yes)

Nice map
STAR
Foster Don
150 posts
Joined August 2009
Foster Don
8-)
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
[General]
Remove all 'touhouproject' tags on ALL difficulties :
Snap all the green timing points to their appropriate ticks.
Offset: 855 (+5 from current)
...lol, alignment with tails... almost no one knows about the shift functionality. Maybe take a look at all the notes you wanted to align with slidertails and adjust all of them: hold shift while doing so so that the notes snap to a multiple of 45 degrees with the slidertails.

[Sad]
00:48:707 (5) - one grid up

[Happy]
00:03:707 (2) - suggestion: symmetry?
00:35:135 (1) - remove new combo

[Delighted]
Delete the offset at 156.
00:53:350 (4) - jump is unintuitive. Reverse it plz

[Ecstatic]
Copy this into the [TimingPoints] portion in the .osu file. This should fix the x1/4 speed issue:
850,357.142857142857,4,1,0,100,1,0
15135,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
16564,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
27607,-100,4,2,0,100,0,1
27992,-100,4,2,0,100,0,0
33707,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
39242,-400,4,1,0,100,0,0
40849,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
75133,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
86562,-100,4,1,0,100,0,0
Resnap notes afterwards, and finally adjust the offset like what I said in the General portion above
00:15:849 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - lol, a good way to remind us of Alice's curse.
00:27:635 (1) - remove new combo
00:40:849 (1) - move to next white tick
00:40:849 (1) - New Combo
00:56:562 (6) - symmetry
jockeytiyan
1,269 posts
Joined July 2009
jockeytiyan
I see, so the timing section thingies were done by Zekira.

Ok, Eph told me that those were ok so I'll only give a star. ^^
arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
Umm...

Just for star due to nice one?
But...

Anyway :3...
Good luck XD
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
~Sad~
00:40:855 (1) - add hitfinish
00:52:283 (1) - ^
01:03:355 (1) - add hitfinish at end
01:15:140 (1) - add hitfinish at start

~Happy~
00:10:855 (1,2,3,4,1) - make them more symmetry
00:40:855 (1) - add hitfinish at start
00:42:640 (4) - add clap
00:50:497 (4) - move up 1 grid (Lv3) (Optional)
00:50:497 (4,5) - remove hitfinish
00:52:283 (1) - add hitfinish at start
01:03:712 (1) - ^
01:15:140 (1) - ^

~Delighted~
00:07:283 (3,4,5) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:33:712 (1) - move right 2 grids (Lv3)
00:34:069 (2) - move right 1 grid (Lv3)
00:38:355 (6,7) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
00:40:855 (1) - add hitfinish at start
01:03:712 (1) - ^
01:15:140 (1) - ^
01:16:033 (3,4,5) - weird claps

~Ecstatic~
00:39:242 (1) - silence the sliderslide


+Star
YGOkid8
osu! Alumni
2,729 posts
Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
General:
- Delete the .osb in the Song Folder and Full Submit
- Preview time in [Ecstatic] is different from the other diffs.
- ...what is this? Stack leniency for ALL diffs. is too low to be rankable. Anything below 0.3 (3rd tick from the left) is unrankable >:(

Sad:
- I don't like you use of whistles in this diff. :|
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- Delete the .osb in the Song Folder and Full SubmitOMG WHAT THE F***! ive deleted that thing a billion times AND fullsubbed! WHAT THE HELL! deleted again
- Preview time in [Ecstatic] is different from the other diffs.changed
- ...what is this? Stack leniency for ALL diffs. is too low to be rankable. Anything below 0.3 (3rd tick from the left) is unrankable >:( when i first started people said 0.2 was fine... changed

Sad:
- I don't like you use of whistles in this diff. :| removed some
done


lololol my 69th post
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
Ok time to mod this
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[Sad]
00:06:569 (1) - 1 grid to the left
00:22:283 (1) - Make more symmatrycal
00:40:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - Center this combo on (4)
00:46:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - Center this combo on (2)

[Happy]
00:06:212 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid to the left

[Delighted]
Fine

[Ecstatic]
Fine

Here's your Star
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

Sakura301 wrote:

Ok time to mod this
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, and can sometimes pass if justified
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[Sad]
00:06:569 (1) - 1 grid to the left X (for spacing reasons.)
00:22:283 (1) - Make more symmatrycal X (cause i dont want to reposition any other notes after it)
00:40:855 (1,2,3,4,5) - Center this combo on (4) X (cause if i do, the next combo wont be able to fit the way it is)
00:46:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - Center this combo on (2)ok

[Happy]
00:06:212 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid to the leftok

[Delighted]
Fine

[Ecstatic]
Fine

Here's your Star

thankies!!!~ and this is a first, modding on the two easiest but none on the harder two XD
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset: i got about +10
496*276...you need a better BG, no doubt.
can you find a better mp3..
i don't think this song nees a kiai.

[Sad]
wow long sliders....
Overall+1
00:34:426 (2) - turn off distance snap and move it slightly to align with (1)'s End

[Happy]
00:06:569 (2) - better to make this symmetrical
00:30:140 (3) - 1 grid down.
00:42:283 (3) - 1 grid right.
00:47:997 (4,5) - spacing. make (4) 1 grid down.

[Delighted]
Overall+1
00:28:712 (2,3) - tiny spacing problem
00:32:462 (3,4,5) - ugly.
01:13:355 (4,1) - spacing?
01:24:069 (6) - new combo?

[Ecstatic]
01:02:990 (9) - new combo here.
01:13:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - crazy.

though no big problems.... but still needs more work.
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset: i got about +10 done
496*276...you need a better BG, no doubt.X
can you find a better mp3..X, tried many places and files, this was best
i don't think this song nees a kiai.X

[Sad]
wow long sliders....
Overall+1done
00:34:426 (2) - turn off distance snap and move it slightly to align with (1)'s Enddone

[Happy]
00:06:569 (2) - better to make this symmetricaldone
00:30:140 (3) - 1 grid down.done
00:42:283 (3) - 1 grid right.done
00:47:997 (4,5) - spacing. make (4) 1 grid down.done

[Delighted]
Overall+1done
00:28:712 (2,3) - tiny spacing problemX
00:32:462 (3,4,5) - ugly.i dont see anything wrong with it
01:13:355 (4,1) - spacing?done
01:24:069 (6) - new combo?done

[Ecstatic]
01:02:990 (9) - new combo here.done
01:13:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - crazy.done

though no big problems.... but still needs more work.
thanks for contributing~
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
Happy
00:57:650(x) - add a circle

suggestion
00:01:936(x) - add a circle
00:40:329(x) - ^
00:40:507(x) - ^
01:14:793(x) - ^
00:14:972(x) - ^

Delighted
00:43:364(7) - new combo?
00:43:722(1) - remove new combo.

suggestion
00:03:007(x) - add a circle
00:05:864(x) - ^
00:40:329(x) - ^
00:40:507(x) - ^

Ecstatic
i think you need turn down the volume at the beginning... its some loud.

starrr
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

H-boy wrote:

Happy
00:57:650(x) - add a circledone

suggestion
00:01:936(x) - add a circleX
00:40:329(x) - ^x
00:40:507(x) - ^x
01:14:793(x) - ^done
00:14:972(x) - ^done

Delighted
00:43:364(7) - new combo?
00:43:722(1) - remove new combo.

suggestion
00:03:007(x) - add a circlex
00:05:864(x) - ^x
00:40:329(x) - ^done
00:40:507(x) - ^done

Ecstatic
i think you need turn down the volume at the beginning... its some loud.done

starrr
Hitoshirenu Shourai
osu! Alumni
990 posts
Here since the beginning
Hitoshirenu Shourai
Change all beginning offsets to 135. There's no reason to have different offsets for each difficulty, stick with one.

Don't forget to resnap.
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

Hitoshirenu Shourai wrote:

Change all beginning offsets to 135. There's no reason to have different offsets for each difficulty, stick with one.Done~

Don't forget to resnap.Done~
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Add Touhou to Source, and delete "touhou project" from Tags.
- Maybe you'd like to add to Tags the name of the original ZUN song... I think the title is "Because Princess Inada Is Scolding Me", but I'm not so sure oxo;

~Sad~
No problems here~

~Happy~
No problems here~

~Delightful~
00:00:865 - Delete this Timing Section please~

~Ecstatic~
00:00:849 - Delete this timing section please~
00:15:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'm not so sure about this... I've tried to hit it like 10 times and the best run I had 3 x100 because of the sliders. I'd say to continue the stream and delete the sliders... :/
01:24:776 (1,2,3) - This is just too much IMO, decrease the spacing a bit?

I'm going to kill you, this melody is going to haunt me the whole day!! xD *star*
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi hi!! :)

Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me :P
Let's go!!

~All Diffs~
- Add Touhou to Source, and delete "touhou project" from Tags. done
- Maybe you'd like to add to Tags the name of the original ZUN song... I think the title is "Because Princess Inada Is Scolding Me", but I'm not so sure oxo; i think thats right only its InaBa EDIT:youre right :P

~Sad~
No problems here~ sweet

~Happy~
No problems here~ sweet

~Delightful~
00:00:865 - Delete this Timing Section please~ X cause i need a soft anacrusis

~Ecstatic~
00:00:849 - Delete this timing section please~ X see above
00:15:848 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I'm not so sure about this... I've tried to hit it like 10 times and the best run I had 3 x100 because of the sliders. I'd say to continue the stream and delete the sliders... :/ it matches the background... waht if i make the sliders shorter? (as in 0.5 speed for that point)
01:24:776 (1,2,3) - This is just too much IMO, decrease the spacing a bit? done

I'm going to kill you, this melody is going to haunt me the whole day!! xD *star* LAWL
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jericho2442
osu! Alumni
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Joined March 2009
jericho2442
ok first off the mp3 is barely acceptable, its a 128 and a not very good one at that :/

also your vid is horrid quality and could be encoded much better for not much more mb

now onto the maps :p

on your two hardest difficultys there is 2 red timing sections while on the two easier there is only 1, this is a nonono, also there is no need for 2 timing sections on this map, sort the section out so that it works for all diffs the same



[Sad]

im bad for ugly sliders but thisone is beyond bad :/ 00:22:277 (1) -
01:09:777 - you need a note here or it sounds really off because of the pattern your doing before it
(suggestion) 01:19:420 (3) - im not keen at all on the clap at the end of this slider

some of your spinners feel too small for a easy


[Happy]
00:27:992 (1,2) - broken spacing and plays very bad, fix spacing
00:46:206 (1) - remove new combo
00:46:563 (2) - add new combo
00:55:135 (1) - the way the notes in the combo conflict with the combo before make this tricky to play and abit ugly
(suggestion) 01:13:706 (4) - give it more of a deeper curve if you want this to look good
01:23:706 (6) - new combo because as it is your breaking your own pattern


[Delighted]
00:00:313 (1,2) - spacing is wrong, 1 is too close to 2 to fit in with the rest of the combo, thus it makes it iratating to play
00:26:579 (1,2,3,4) - faaaar out of line to the pattern your making line it up with 00:23:722 (1) - and make sure the line it is creating is smooth
00:43:186 (7) - new combo, or make it the same as the combo after, it plays wierd it being the same combo as before
00:49:079 (5) - new combo is a must here, the break from playing is too long to continue with the same combo
tbh go through this map and make sure all the combos make sence

[Ecstatic]

first off, if this is meant to be a insane map sort out the expert criteria what the aimod shows up, if its meant to be expert then ignore this comment

00:22:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i REALLY dont like this section and it also hold no relevance to the song at all. that part by the song is created by a combo of white and blue ticks not white and red, i guess it can be classed as a pattern so this dont really need fixing but to me this does not suit at all

00:30:848 (5) - new combo
00:38:706 (6) - new combo
00:39:242 (1) - no new combo
00:39:242 - i dont agree with using normal timing sections just for a note slow down. if 0x5 aint slow enough then i say rethink your pattern
00:48:705 (13) - i dont like this note at all and it plays better without i
00:54:419 (13) - same here
01:22:990 (13) - new combo
___________________________

tbh in my eyes theres still ALOT of work to do on these maps yet ;)

anyway will star after and if you fix the stuff i really think need fixing (like the timing sections and spacing problems)

EDIT: enough fixes have been applied for me to now star this :)
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thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

jericho2442 wrote:

ok first off the mp3 is barely acceptable, its a 128 and a not very good one at that :/

also your vid is horrid quality and could be encoded much better for not much more mb

now onto the maps :p

on your two hardest difficultys there is 2 red timing sections while on the two easier there is only 1, this is a nonono, also there is no need for 2 timing sections on this map, sort the section out so that it works for all diffs the same



[Sad]

im bad for ugly sliders but thisone is beyond bad :/ 00:22:277 (1) - changed
01:09:777 - you need a note here or it sounds really off because of the pattern your doing before it changed
(suggestion) 01:19:420 (3) - im not keen at all on the clap at the end of this sliderchanged

some of your spinners feel too small for a easy x


[Happy]
00:27:992 (1,2) - broken spacing and plays very bad, fix spacingk
00:46:206 (1) - remove new combok
00:46:563 (2) - add new combok
00:55:135 (1) - the way the notes in the combo conflict with the combo before make this tricky to play and abit uglyx
(suggestion) 01:13:706 (4) - give it more of a deeper curve if you want this to look goodk
01:23:706 (6) - new combo because as it is your breaking your own patternk


[Delighted]
00:00:313 (1,2) - spacing is wrong, 1 is too close to 2 to fit in with the rest of the combo, thus it makes it iratating to playfixed
00:26:579 (1,2,3,4) - faaaar out of line to the pattern your making line it up with 00:23:722 (1) - and make sure the line it is creating is smoothdone
00:43:186 (7) - new combo, or make it the same as the combo after, it plays wierd it being the same combo as beforex
00:49:079 (5) - new combo is a must here, the break from playing is too long to continue with the same combo
tbh go through this map and make sure all the combos make senceeegh ok

[Ecstatic]

first off, if this is meant to be a insane map sort out the expert criteria what the aimod shows up, if its meant to be expert then ignore this comment
Expert criteria: 42 spacing infringements is greater than 40. not true, most of my spacing is used with distance snap on.
01:24:866 Expert criteria: Two hitobjects are too far apart (reduce by ~5%). 01:25:044 Expert criteria: Two hitobjects are too far apart (reduce by ~6%).its an ending jump, its not THAT bad
00:15:848 Expert criteria: A stream exists with 9 objects 46ms apart (less than 65ms). meh, there can still be a few expert criteria in an insane map... plus its only beta stages

00:22:277 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - i REALLY dont like this section and it also hold no relevance to the song at all. that part by the song is created by a combo of white and blue ticks not white and red, i guess it can be classed as a pattern so this dont really need fixing but to me this does not suit at all X im going with the low offbeat sounds

00:30:848 (5) - new combodone
00:38:706 (6) - new combo donedone
00:39:242 (1) - no new combodone
00:39:242 - i dont agree with using normal timing sections just for a note slow down. if 0x5 aint slow enough then i say rethink your pattern X
00:48:705 (13) - i dont like this note at all and it plays better without it i like it
00:54:419 (13) - same here i like it
01:22:990 (13) - new combo done
___________________________

tbh in my eyes theres still ALOT of work to do on these maps yet ;)

anyway will star after and if you fix the stuff i really think need fixing (like the timing sections and spacing problems)
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Jarby
BPM: 168.000
Offset: 1,845

Don't forget to adjust all timing sections!
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

JarJarJacob wrote:

BPM: 168.000
Offset: 1,845

Don't forget to adjust all timing sections!

thankyou SO much!
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
Pretty nice and fun mapset

[Sad]
You should capitalize the T in Touhou on this diff

[Happy]
You should capitalize the T in Touhou on this diff too

[Delighted]
01:03:630 (6) - This would look nicer with a new combo imho, but your call

[Ecstatic]
01:17:731 (8) - Move this a bit upper left and make 01:17:910 (9) - aligned with it like this
01:18:267 (10) - Make this a new combo and remove the new combo of 01:18:445 (1)?

~star
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

NachoPiggy wrote:

Pretty nice and fun mapset

[Sad]
You should capitalize the T in Touhou on this diff k

[Happy]
You should capitalize the T in Touhou on this diff too k

[Delighted]
01:03:630 (6) - This would look nicer with a new combo imho, but your call k

[Ecstatic]
01:17:731 (8) - Move this a bit upper left and make 01:17:910 (9) - aligned with it like this k
01:18:267 (10) - Make this a new combo and remove the new combo of 01:18:445 (1)? X

~star
whee!
saymun
299 posts
Joined July 2009
saymun
heres a mega nazi and useless mod lol

[Sad]
00:03:987 (2) - align to x-axis?
00:04:702 (3) - flip of (1)?
00:06:845 (4) - flip of (2)?

[Happy]
00:13:273 (3) - 1 grid down
00:13:987 (4) - 2 grid down
00:14:701 (1) - flip of the blue (1)?

[Delighted]
00:23:987 (1) - no new combo?
00:36:487 (6) - you missed a finish here? (in my opinion this section is too loud, get rid of the finishes with the claps?)
00:44:701 (4) - 1 grid right
00:45:237 (5) - 1 grid down
00:46:130 (8) - ^
00:50:773 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
SPOILER
01:00:773 (5) - 1 grid up
01:04:344 (3) - 1 grid up, right

[Ecstatic]
00:01:844 (4) - 1 grid right
00:23:273 (1,2,3,4) -
SPOILER
00:36:665 (5,6) - spacing
00:43:626 (9) - 1 grid up
01:05:946 (3,4,5,6) - placement looks weird
01:24:874 (2,3,4) - the 2..

decdaman
1 post
Joined April 2010
decdaman
fun to play~

lolz made me happy :)
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

saymun wrote:

heres a mega nazi and useless mod lol

[Sad]
00:03:987 (2) - align to x-axis?k
00:04:702 (3) - flip of (1)?k
00:06:845 (4) - flip of (2)?k

[Happy]
00:13:273 (3) - 1 grid downk
00:13:987 (4) - 2 grid downk
00:14:701 (1) - flip of the blue (1)?k

[Delighted]
00:23:987 (1) - no new combo?k
00:36:487 (6) - you missed a finish here? (in my opinion this section is too loud, get rid of the finishes with the claps?)k
00:44:701 (4) - 1 grid rightk
00:45:237 (5) - 1 grid downk
00:46:130 (8) - ^k
00:50:773 (3,4,5,6,7,8) -
SPOILER
[attachment=1:85050]asd.JPG[/attachment:85050]
k
01:00:773 (5) - 1 grid upk
01:04:344 (3) - 1 grid up, rightk

[Ecstatic]
00:01:844 (4) - 1 grid rightk
00:23:273 (1,2,3,4) -
SPOILER
[attachment=0:85050]asdd.jpg[/attachment:85050]
k
00:36:665 (5,6) - spacingk
00:43:626 (9) - 1 grid upk
01:05:946 (3,4,5,6) - placement looks weirdk
01:24:874 (2,3,4) - the 2..fixed (c-c-c-COMBOBREAKER)
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
Move offset to 1,487 so the notes are on the white ticks. Not that important and won't vastly affect anything, but still.

[Delighted]
01:04:701 (4,5) - Okay, the end of 4 sounds pretty bad here. I understand its a difficulty thing, but this... just sounds bad.

[Ecstatic]
00:16:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Have you actually seen this with stacks on? Its just plain horrible. the start is still ok, but the slider part is BAD. I mean, not only the stacks, but why is it even on 1/8!? If you really want this crap on 1/8, make it like a deathstream:

Note that I don't even know if this damn thing is rankable.

Starred on account of the first 3 difficulties.
thekillerhjkhjk
259 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
thekillerhjkhjk

JInxyjem wrote:

Move offset to 1,487 so the notes are on the white ticks. Not that important and won't vastly affect anything, but still. i moved it to the white tick BEFORE that one, cause i need a soft anacrusis in the last two diffs

[Delighted]
01:04:701 (4,5) - Okay, the end of 4 sounds pretty bad here. I understand its a difficulty thing, but this... just sounds bad. i dont think so

[Ecstatic]
00:16:130 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Have you actually seen this with stacks on? Its just plain horrible. the start is still ok, but the slider part is BAD. I mean, not only the stacks, but why is it even on 1/8!? If you really want this crap on 1/8, make it like a deathstream:

Note that I don't even know if this damn thing is rankable. well first of all, ive fixed the stacking. Second, im keeping 1/8s cause i like them... also, theres plenty of songs with 1/8 slider only deathstreams (such as marisa wa taihen bla bla cbftoremembertitle ikimashita)

Starred on account of the first 3 difficulties.
YGOkid8
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YGOkid8
not good using marisa as an example. Note that that was a 2007 map? That was before all these strict(?) rules were implemented, because there was less need back then.

Actually, it's not good to use any old map as an example. They're old. And some of the above stuff.
thekillerhjkhjk
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thekillerhjkhjk

YGOkid8 wrote:

not good using marisa as an example. Note that that was a 2007 map? That was before all these strict(?) rules were implemented, because there was less need back then.

Actually, it's not good to use any old map as an example. They're old. And some of the above stuff.

fair enough but i dont recall ever having complaints about that part yet...

we'll see
braian5234
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8-)
thekillerhjkhjk
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thekillerhjkhjk

braian5234 wrote:

8-)
thanks
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