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Midee, prozax - The Twelfth Commandment (OC ReMix)

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Topic Starter
Mukku
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 7. helmikuuta 2011 at 16:25:50

Artist: Midee, prozax
Title: The Twelfth Commandment (OC ReMix)
Source: Final Fantasy VII
Tags: Nobuo Uematsu Judgement Day ffvii ocremix
BPM: 164
Filesize: 4090kb
Play Time: 03:13
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,37 stars, 159 notes)
  2. Hard (4,47 stars, 322 notes)
  3. Normal (3,04 stars, 236 notes)
Download: Midee, prozax - The Twelfth Commandment (OC ReMix)
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Judgement Day from FFVII OC ReMixed!

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I love this song

http://ocremix.org/remix/OCR01492/
XepherX3
i like what u have so far

maybe full lenght Hard
Topic Starter
Mukku
I am not sure if thats a very good idea.. The ending doesn't sound very mappable to me.

Will consider after finished normal (and maybe easy)
Mianki
Hard:

00:58:36 (5,6,7) Distance snapping yhtäkkii vaihtuu, tarkotuksel?
02:00:37 (2) Nii tää slideri, korjaa jos jaksat :P

Eip muut, tähtiä satelee~
RandomJibberish
Nice song.

I like your use of speed changes :P

General:
Delete the .osb


Normal:
02:19:398 (1) - Hard to tell which way it goes. Doesn't really matter though, as it's basically a hold slider.

Hard:
No problems apart from the slider similar to the above.

Great map, Star'd
Topic Starter
Mukku

RandomJibberish wrote:

Nice song.

I like your use of speed changes :P

General:
Delete the .osb


Normal:
02:19:398 (1) - Hard to tell which way it goes. Doesn't really matter though, as it's basically a hold slider. I was so sure it'd go left but it went right. This kind of an illusion is unacceptable in my normal. Changed :D

Hard:
No problems apart from the slider similar to the above.

Great map, Star'd
Shulin
General:

-- Artist should be "Midee, Prozax"? I searched and found it with and without capitalisation so I guess it doesn't matter that much.
-- Maybe take "(OC ReMix)" out of song title and put it into tags. (I could only find the song listed as The Twelfth Commandment)
-- Take "(Judgement Day)" out of source since it's in tags.
-- Might want to add tag such as "ffvii"
-- Delete .osb and full submit lol.

Normal:

-- Disable countdown?

00:12:081 (1) - Finish?
00:17:203 (1) - Clap
02:19:398 (1) - Way too confusing, it's hard to decide which way the slider is going, redraw it?
03:04:770 (3,4,1,2) - Rhythm might be a bit too confusing for normal.

Hard:

-- Disable countdown?

00:12:081 (1) - Finish?
00:17:203 (7) - Clap?
00:38:422 (8) - New combo?
00:43:544 (8,9) - Might be nice if you moved these down two squares so they overlap with the position of 00:43:178 (7)
00:55:983 (5) - New combo?
00:58:178 (4) - Clap?
00:58:910 (8) - New combo?
01:01:837 (1,2) - A slider here might be nice, it would make 01:02:385 (2,3) - easier to hit.
01:07:690 (1,2,3) - ^
01:18:666 (1,2,3) - Jump feels weird because there's nothing "jumpy" in the music.
01:26:166 (1,2,3) - ^
02:03:300 (2) - This shape might be confusing for some, but it's much easier than the shape you made for Normal (which went the opposite direction)

Nice maps overall :D
~ Star.
Topic Starter
Mukku

Shulin wrote:

General:

-- Artist should be "Midee, Prozax"? I searched and found it with and without capitalisation so I guess it doesn't matter that much. It was without capitalisation on the official oc remix site.
-- Maybe take "(OC ReMix)" out of song title and put it into tags. (I could only find the song listed as The Twelfth Commandment) In osu, almost all of the OC remixes have it mentioned in the title. All my oc remix maps have it (OC Remix) but some have it without the () so I have no idea what to do here.
-- Take "(Judgement Day)" out of source since it's in tags. Consider it done :D
-- Might want to add tag such as "ffvii" Sure
-- Delete .osb and full submit lol.

Normal:

-- Disable countdown? Okay

00:12:081 (1) - Finish? Naww, it will just overlap the cymbal(?) and sound silly.
00:17:203 (1) - Clap Sure
02:19:398 (1) - Way too confusing, it's hard to decide which way the slider is going, redraw it? Done
03:04:770 (3,4,1,2) - Rhythm might be a bit too confusing for normal. I don't want to change this D:

Hard:

-- Disable countdown? I really don't know why but okay :D

00:12:081 (1) - Finish? no
00:17:203 (7) - Clap? Sure
00:38:422 (8) - New combo? Sure
00:43:544 (8,9) - Might be nice if you moved these down two squares so they overlap with the position of 00:43:178 (7) Nah, I like how it plays currently.
00:55:983 (5) - New combo? Sure
00:58:178 (4) - Clap? If there were more claps somewhere around here I would do this. With just one I think its better off without them.
00:58:910 (8) - New combo? Done
01:01:837 (1,2) - A slider here might be nice, it would make 01:02:385 (2,3) - easier to hit. Great
01:07:690 (1,2,3) - ^ Done
01:18:666 (1,2,3) - Jump feels weird because there's nothing "jumpy" in the music. Its my foolish habit to put jumps allover the place randomly. Fixed
01:26:166 (1,2,3) - ^ Disagreed o/
02:03:300 (2) - This shape might be confusing for some, but it's much easier than the shape you made for Normal (which went the opposite direction) I'll let this remain. Fixed the one in normal.

Nice maps overall :D
~ Star.
Thanks
jockeytiyan
I don't need to say much, do I?

Get this map modded because it's awesome. :P
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
i suggest change the combo colors... the grey color will make players confused (like failed.)
if you won't map the shole song, cut off the parts after maybe 03:20

[Easy]
00:14:276 (2) - whistle?
00:17:203 (2) - clap?
00:31:471 (5) - remove whistle.
01:37:690 (3,4) - make (3) symmetrical and move (4) 1 grid up.
02:38:422 (4) - new combo and remove new combo on (1)
02:57:446 (2,3) - spacing?

[Normal]
00:14:276 (3) - new combo and remove new combo on (1)
00:30:007 (2) - remove whistle.
02:10:617 (4,5,6) - 1 grid right?
03:04:764 (3,4) - i don't like this part.
03:06:227 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
00:13:544 (5) - new combo and remove new combo on next(1)
00:15:007 (4) - ^
00:17:568 (1) - remove new combo and new combo on (2)
00:19:032 (1) - ^
00:42:995 (6,7,8) - strange to me.
00:53:056 (1) - stack with (2)?
01:11:715 (1) - break after this note is too short, remove plz
02:03:300 (2) - i suggest a remap.

star
Topic Starter
Mukku

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
i suggest change the combo colors... the grey color will make players confused (like failed.) I originally intented to change them becouse of tag play, but since now you can choose custom colors for tag team I am going to leave these colors.
if you won't map the shole song, cut off the parts after maybe 03:20

[Easy]
00:14:276 (2) - whistle? Sure
00:17:203 (2) - clap? Sure
00:31:471 (5) - remove whistle. Sure
01:37:690 (3,4) - make (3) symmetrical and move (4) 1 grid up. Sure
02:38:422 (4) - new combo and remove new combo on (1) Sure
02:57:446 (2,3) - spacing? Its just few grids. I wanted it to be symmetrically below 1 and 2

[Normal]
00:14:276 (3) - new combo and remove new combo on (1) Sure
00:30:007 (2) - remove whistle. Nah
02:10:617 (4,5,6) - 1 grid right? You are right. I don't know what I was doing.
03:04:764 (3,4) - i don't like this part.
03:06:227 (1,2) - ^ But, but, but... D:

[Hard]
00:13:544 (5) - new combo and remove new combo on next(1) Okay
00:15:007 (4) - ^ ^
00:17:568 (1) - remove new combo and new combo on (2) Okay
00:19:032 (1) - ^ I refuse.
00:42:995 (6,7,8) - strange to me. I like it.
00:53:056 (1) - stack with (2)? Ooh, better.
01:11:715 (1) - break after this note is too short, remove plz But why? Players can die becouse of drain without this break. I'll remove it though. But I don't understand
02:03:300 (2) - i suggest a remap. But... I don't wanna do that.

star
Thank you p/
NatsumeRin

Mukku wrote:

01:11:715 (1) - break after this note is too short, remove plz But why? Players can die becouse of drain without this break. I'll remove it though. But I don't understand
Because when people saw a break, it usually implies "you have 5-15s time to reposition your mouse and have a rest..." (according to the mapping guidelines) a too short break may just give players next note when they're not ready.
Eirene
colours hurt my eyes *.*
IMO : contrast, and between these 3 grey add 2 darken "red" ( like in your BG )

no kiai ? *.* though there are epic parts in the song

[Hard] :
00:38:056 (7) - remove the clap ?
00:49:398 (8) - remove clap at the end ?
00:58:727 (7) - strange circle, the 6 previous circles follow the drum, but this on follow the guitar. you should remove it ...
01:01:471 (1,2) - add 2 circles at the begining of the slider. This create an easy fun jump for an hard diff and it sounds very good *.*
01:07:690 (1) - in this combo, clap are not very good ... you might remove them
01:19:398 (1) - odd shape, it's better like this :

( 01:30:373 (1) - kiai here ? and stop at 1:48 ? )
01:37:142 (1) - remove the circle ! overmapping ...
01:39:885 (2,3) - that roxx *.*
( 02:00:373 (2,4) - maybe narrow the spacing, limit of screen )
02:47:203 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3) - try to center this part (and make an horizontal symetry) (it's ugly :p )
02:53:056 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - ^

that's all :3

[Normal] :
same kiai as the Hard ?

I love it !! *.*

[Easy] :
same kiai as the Hard ?

go go ! have this ranked quickly *.* ( after fixed issues :p )
STAR
Lunah_old
Hai !

General
02:00:373 (1) - Start KIAI time here (? suggestion)
02:12:081 (6) - End KIAI time here (? suggestion)

Easy
It's fine ~

Normal
00:12:812 (1) - Add hitsound whistle
00:14:276 (1,2) - Add hitsound whistle
00:15:739 (1) - Add hitsound whistle
00:17:203 (1,2) - Add hitsound whistle (don't remove clap on (1))
00:18:666 (1) - Add hitsound whistle
00:20:129 (1) - Add hitsound whistle
00:20:495 (1) - Add hitsound whistle
00:22:690 (1) - Add hitsound whistle

Hard
00:12:812 (1) - Add hitsound whistle
00:14:276 (1,2) - Add hitsound whistle
00:15:739 (3) - Add hitsound whistle
00:16:837 (7,8) - Add hitsound whistle
00:18:666 (3) - Add hitsound whistle
00:20:129 (4) - Add hitsound whistle
00:20:495 (1) - Add hitsound whistle
00:22:507 (2,3) - Add hitsound whistle


STARR**
Topic Starter
Mukku
Fixed what I deemed worth fixing :p
Garven
[General]
Combo colors: Tag mode players are going to hate you. :P
Sometimes the hit sound volume raises up a bit too high compared to the song's crecendos. Give it another listen and see if anything sticks out bad to you.

[Normal]
The slider speed changes were getting disorienting after a bit. Sometimes it would make sense with the music, other times, it didn't feel like a good spot to slow down at. Meh, looks like everyone else loves them though.
01:53:788 (3,1) - This anti-jump intentional? Or is it due to the .5 bpm that has little to no musical cue of it's approach?

[Hard]
The slider speed changes felt a lot better for this difficulty than the normal diff's.
01:27:629 (1,2,3,4) - Check your spacing here.

Good stuff.
Topic Starter
Mukku

Garven wrote:

[General]
Combo colors: Tag mode players are going to hate you. :P I decided to let it be since you can now change tag colors manually in multiplayer! At least that was possible when I last time played tag D:
Sometimes the hit sound volume raises up a bit too high compared to the song's crecendos. Give it another listen and see if anything sticks out bad to you. Not sure about this. Will fix once I feel bad about something here :D

[Normal]
The slider speed changes were getting disorienting after a bit. Sometimes it would make sense with the music, other times, it didn't feel like a good spot to slow down at. Meh, looks like everyone else loves them though.
01:53:788 (3,1) - This anti-jump intentional? Or is it due to the .5 bpm that has little to no musical cue of it's approach? I actually wanted it just to look symmetrical. Fixed

[Hard]
The slider speed changes felt a lot better for this difficulty than the normal diff's.
01:27:629 (1,2,3,4) - Check your spacing here. Intentional. Acceleration spacing.

Good stuff.
Thanks u!
DJPop
Too early timing sections will cause some problem with hitsounds while playing :/


~Easy~
00:35:495 - move timing sections further from the note
00:40:434 - move timing section to left white tick
00:41:166 - ^
00:57:446 (1) - add clap at the end
00:58:818 - move timing section to left white tick
01:15:556 - ^
01:19:215 - ^
01:20:861 (4) - sliderslide sounds weird
01:57:446 - delete all unused timing sections
02:32:751 - move timing section to right white tick
02:33:849 - move timing section to left white tick
02:34:215 - move timing section to right white tick
02:35:312 - move timing section to left white tick
02:35:495 (1) - sliderslide sounds weird
02:36:776 - move timing section to left white tick
02:37:142 - move timing section to right white tick
02:38:239 - move timing section to left white tick
02:38:971 - ^
02:39:703 - ^
02:40:434 - ^
02:40:800 - delete unused timing section
02:41:166 - move timing section to left white tick
02:45:739 (5) - sliderslide sounds weird
02:49:032 (4) - ^
02:50:129 (5) - ^
02:52:142 - move timing section to left white tick
02:52:873 - ^
02:53:056 (1) - sliderslide sounds weird
02:55:983 (1) - ^
02:57:355 - move timing section to left white tick
02:57:446 (2) - sliderslide sounds weird
02:58:818 - move timing section to left white tick
02:58:910 (3) - sliderslide sounds weird
03:01:791 - move timing section to left red tick
03:01:837 (1,2) - sliderslide sounds weird
03:07:690 (1) - ^
03:11:257 - move timing section to left white tick
03:11:989 - ^
03:12:721 - ^

~Normal~
00:22:324 (1) - add clap at the end
00:58:818 - move timing section to left white tick
01:11:532 - move timing section to the end of spinner or later
01:21:044 - delete unused timing section
01:39:245 - move timing section to right red tick
01:40:160 - move timing section to left red tick
02:05:312 - move timing section to left white tick
02:11:257 - move timing section to left red tick
02:14:459 - move timing section to right white tick
02:50:861 (5) - sliderslide sounds weird
02:55:983 (1) - ^
03:04:764 (3) - end on red tick
03:06:227 (1) - ^
03:08:422 (3) - sliderslide sounds weird, delete unused timing sections

~Hard~
00:16:837 (7) - new combo
01:01:837 (1) - remove new combo (optional)
01:02:934 (4) - new combo
01:05:495 (1) - add clap at start
01:08:788 (4) - new combo
01:10:617 (11) - new combo (optional)
02:00:190 - add note
02:35:495 (1) - sliderslide sounds weird
02:50:861 (3,1) - ^
03:04:764 (1) - end on red tick
03:06:227 (1) - ^


+Star
Louis Cyphre
Wohou~~ another favourite game OST. Thanks for posting in my queue :3

Must
Should
Suggestion

[General]
Offset: 0


[Easy]
* I think you should delete new combos in somewhere they are too much and also this is easy, not hard :3
** Also you can finish it here 02:23:788. It's very boring in easy =/ imho

01:12:081 - distance

[Normal]
Same SPAM new combos, fix it

[Hard]
It will more brutal if you map hole the map :3 Because final part is more rythmical :3
00:16:105 - new combo
00:16:837 - ^

00:34:581 - one grid up
00:43:910 - hidden
01:02:934 - new combo
01:05:495 - SPAM
01:08:788 - new combo
02:00:373 - i don't like this jump, fix it
02:10:983 - remove new combo

Very nice, keep going :3 Star of course )
Topic Starter
Mukku
Fixed everything I deemed worth fixing.

Also, Louis: Of course it's boring. It's easy for gods sake :D
Tatsuo
Hai~ Here comes my mod~

[Overall]
You have some timing sections hanging around inside your sliders, which makes the sliderslide sound all weird. I suggest adding blank normal-sliderslide.wav and soft-sliderslide.wav to your beatmap to mute them. I think it would sound better.

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
01:27:995 (3) - That little jump was intentional right?
02:03:300 (2) - Bah, I don't like this slider.

Good map~
*star*
IceBeam
Hello.

[General]
Think of adding another bright combo colours.It will make your map more contrastly.

[Easy]
00:19:398 (3) - Think of changing it to something else.Out of the rhytm a bit.
01:10:251 (5) - 1 grid right.
02:58:910 (3) - Fix the spacing.
03:12:812 (3) - 1 grid left.

[Normal]
The only I can say is: Using 0.5x and especially 2x BMP Timing Sections in 3 Star Rating map is...well,nvm,I know you won't change it,but it may cause some problems with ranking.So good luck with it.

[Hard]
00:43:910 (9) - Stack it with (7)?
00:55:983 (1) - 1 grid up.And allign the whole moment.
02:48:300 (2) - 02:50:861 (3) - I felt in love with this moment.Awesome.

Well,probably think of adding Kiai to other difficulties,but it's up to you.

Really good job,I like it.Go go for ranked! Star~
Topic Starter
Mukku

I_Tatsuo_I wrote:

Hai~ Here comes my mod~

[Overall]
You have some timing sections hanging around inside your sliders, which makes the sliderslide sound all weird. I suggest adding blank normal-sliderslide.wav and soft-sliderslide.wav to your beatmap to mute them. I think it would sound better. I kinda like those weird sounding sliders. But thank you for bringing this option to my attention. Will be considered

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
01:27:995 (3) - That little jump was intentional right? Yup
02:03:300 (2) - Bah, I don't like this slider. I can't reform it to symmetrical enough of a slider.. My imagination is dry. I will change it if it bothers ranking and if I can come up with a nice form.

Good map~
*star*
Thanks

SadKangaroo wrote:

Hello.

[General]
Think of adding another bright combo colours.It will make your map more contrastly.

[Easy]
00:19:398 (3) - Think of changing it to something else.Out of the rhytm a bit. Changed. For worse or better, I do not know D:
01:10:251 (5) - 1 grid right. No, it's like that intentionally
02:58:910 (3) - Fix the spacing. I want symmetry. No fix
03:12:812 (3) - 1 grid left. Done

[Normal]
The only I can say is: Using 0.5x and especially 2x BMP Timing Sections in 3 Star Rating map is...well,nvm,I know you won't change it,but it may cause some problems with ranking.So good luck with it. When I mapped it, I was thinking of the difficulty normal. I was not thinking anything about the star rating. Yeah, I won't change it light heartedly.

[Hard]
00:43:910 (9) - Stack it with (7)? No, I like it this way :>
00:55:983 (1) - 1 grid up.And allign the whole moment.
02:48:300 (2) - 02:50:861 (3) - I felt in love with this moment.Awesome. Wohoo <3

Well,probably think of adding Kiai to other difficulties,but it's up to you. Oh.. I had forgotten that. They were supposed to be for all the difficulties. Thanks.

Really good job,I like it.Go go for ranked! Star~
Thanks
Neethime
Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[General]
If you don't map after 3:20, you may cut the mp3 file and full submit (and don't forget to adjust offset and renap all notes before submit),since 1 minute means 1.2MB more.

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
02:16:837 (2,1,2,1,3) and 02:19:398 (1) -You must have something wrong with these notes and sliders....fix them
03:01:471 (4) - this 1/8 slider in 2x bpm is weird to me.


[Hard]
02:03:300 (2) - this slider may make players confused imo(left or right,which way to go?).

Nice map.
+Star :)
Topic Starter
Mukku

Neethime wrote:

Pink words:You should fix this
Black words:Just suggestions
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[General]
If you don't map after 3:20, you may cut the mp3 file and full submit (and don't forget to adjust offset and renap all notes before submit),since 1 minute means 1.2MB more. If I am going to cut it, I will want to put a fade out. Last time when I cut 2 minutes of a song and put a fade out, the mp3 actually grew bigger. If I can't get this ranked becouse I don't want to cut it, only then I will cut it. :D
[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
02:16:837 (2,1,2,1,3) and 02:19:398 (1) -You must have something wrong with these notes and sliders....fix them Oh dear.. Fixed
03:01:471 (4) - this 1/8 slider in 2x bpm is weird to me. I think it fits the part :3


[Hard]
02:03:300 (2) - this slider may make players confused imo(left or right,which way to go?). I know but it's not very big. Even when they get confused they would most likely not miss it.

Nice map.
+Star :)
kino77
Hi~~

[Easy]
Disable countdown?
If you want to change volume at half point and end of slider,plz put the timing section right on that point,or it will change the volume of slider like 02:45:739 (5).
00:29:642 (1) ~ 00:40:617 (4) - Normal hitsound part too loud.

[Normal]
Same timing section problem with Easy.
00:29:642 (1) ~ 01:09:885 (4) - Normal hitsound part too loud.
01:24:520 (1) ~ 01:29:642 (3) - Too quiet.

[Hard]
Disable countdown?
OD +1?
Same timing section problem with Easy.
00:29:642 (1) ~ 00:58:727 (7) - Normal hitsound part too loud.
00:56:715 (3) - Clap?
00:58:178 (4) - ^
01:05:495 (1) - ^
01:11:349 - ^
01:17:203 (1) - Toooooo loud > <
01:23:788 (1) ~ 01:29:642 (4) - Soft hitsound part too quiet.
01:30:831 - Add timing section to increase the volume?
02:03:300 (2) - Its unrankable.

Nice map~star~
Topic Starter
Mukku

kino77 wrote:

Hi~~

[Easy]
Disable countdown? done
If you want to change volume at half point and end of slider,plz put the timing section right on that point,or it will change the volume of slider like 02:45:739 (5). I am aware. They are intentional if you see one.
00:29:642 (1) ~ 00:40:617 (4) - Normal hitsound part too loud. Lowered by one tick

[Normal]
Same timing section problem with Easy.
00:29:642 (1) ~ 01:09:885 (4) - Normal hitsound part too loud.
01:24:520 (1) ~ 01:29:642 (3) - Too quiet.

[Hard]
Disable countdown? Done
OD +1? Nah. I think this fits better
Same timing section problem with Easy.
00:29:642 (1) ~ 00:58:727 (7) - Normal hitsound part too loud.
00:56:715 (3) - Clap? Nah
00:58:178 (4) - ^ ^
01:05:495 (1) - ^ ^
01:11:349 - ^ Added.
01:17:203 (1) - Toooooo loud > < Lowered
01:23:788 (1) ~ 01:29:642 (4) - Soft hitsound part too quiet.
01:30:831 - Add timing section to increase the volume? Nice idea o/
02:03:300 (2) - Its unrankable. I love how you don't explain yourself ;_;

Nice map~star~
kino77

Mukku wrote:

kino77 wrote:

02:03:300 (2) - Its unrankable. I love how you don't explain yourself ;_;
Sorry,this is for my bad english...
look here "Unrankable Sliders/Spinners"
http://osu.ppy.sh/p/faq#
His english is much better than me~ ;)
no kudosu this post.
Mok
Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to check spacing after all modfies :3
If my mod was helpful, feed me with kudosu.

[General]
03:15:831 (75%) - 04:20:156 (100%) - Delete this part since you haven't mapped it.

[Easy]
00:31:105 (4) - New Combo.
00:40:617 (4) - 9 grids up and 3 right.

[Normal]
Reduce Distance Spacing to 1x.

[Hard]
Reduce Distance Spacing to 0,8x.
Babble
Nice, couldn't find anything wrong.

+star
Frill
hese are suggestions, you don't have to change anything.

[General]

* bg is resize plz~ (800x600 or 1024x768)

[Easy]

01:10:251 (5) - 1 grid right?
02:00:373 (1) - add finish in start?

[Normal]

00:14:276 (1) - add whistle

[Hard]

00:14:276 (3) - add whistle
00:20:129 (4) - ^
01:27:812 (2) - 1 grid down?
01:28:178 (4) - 1 grid up?
02:00:373 (3) - new measure; kiai; I'd like to see this as a new combo XP

Good!
Kurai
Hu... Perfect I think
Star~
Topic Starter
Mukku

Frill wrote:

hese are suggestions, you don't have to change anything.

[General]

* bg is resize plz~ (800x600 or 1024x768) I'll try. Last time I tried this, it didn't work. It still was out of the grid. If it doesn't work, I will have to let someone else resize it or then leave it like this :< Thanks for noting though. I had not noticed it went out of grid.

[Easy]

01:10:251 (5) - 1 grid right? Naah, it would look boring
02:00:373 (1) - add finish in start? Nah

[Normal]

00:14:276 (1) - add whistle Nah.

[Hard]

00:14:276 (3) - add whistle No
00:20:129 (4) - ^ ^
01:27:812 (2) - 1 grid down? No. I want accelerating spacing.
01:28:178 (4) - 1 grid up? ^
02:00:373 (3) - new measure; kiai; I'd like to see this as a new combo XP Oh. Suits fine. Fixed :D (even the heart turned white, I like it now better :3)

Good!
Thanks for mod & star. And thanks to babble and Kurai_ for encouraging comments & stars :D
JhnySmthApl
[Easy]
01:10:251 - Move 1 lv3 grid right
03:12:083 - Move 1 grid up 1 left
03:12:812 - Move 1 grid up 1 left

[Normal]
03:01:471 - Extend by 2

*NOTE* This is just what I felt was out of place a tad and none of it absolutely NEEDS to be changed. Forgive the mini nazi =/

Cool song tho :D
YGOkid8
General:
03:13:544 (1) - Why not finish this slider @03:16:471 (Big White Tick)?

Hard:
02:03:300 (2) - With snaking sliders off, it's hard to tell which direction it's going to go. Can you possibly storyboard an arrow pointing the direction or something?
Vikon
[General]
1) The size of your BG is 709 x 496, try to find a 800x 600 or 1024 x 768 instead?
2) you should cut the song, there is a part you haven't map it.
3) I think the volume is too high.

[Easy]
00:29:276 the audio is too loud?
00:35:678 ^
00:46:105 add a note here?
02:17:203 (1) add clap?
02:20:129 add a note with clap ?
03:09:885 (1) too loud

[Normal]
00:29:642 too loud?
02:50:861 (5) it is strange that before 02:52:142, the sliderside is slience, but after that,there is some sound
03:01:471 (4) 1/8 combo shoud not appear in [Normal]
03:10:617 (1) the volume change is too sudden

[Hard]
01:26:715 (1) this slider is covered by the "300" of the 01:25:251 (3,1), don't look good.
02:35:495 (1) strange slider :before the timing section, the sliderside is slience, but after that,there is some sound
02:50:861 (3) ^
YGOkid8

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) The size of your BG is 709 x 496, try to find a 800x 600 or 1024 x 768 instead?
why do people post mods like these? It doesn't matter as long as it's under the 1024x768 limit :/
Topic Starter
Mukku

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
03:13:544 (1) - Why not finish this slider @03:16:471 (Big White Tick)? Hmm.. I guess it sounds nice. Now I am just wondering why I hadn't done that.

Hard:
02:03:300 (2) - With snaking sliders off, it's hard to tell which direction it's going to go. Can you possibly storyboard an arrow pointing the direction or something? I don't know how. And the way the ending overlaps the beginning should be a hint enough.
Thanks

Vikon wrote:

[General]
1) The size of your BG is 709 x 496, try to find a 800x 600 or 1024 x 768 instead?
2) you should cut the song, there is a part you haven't map it.
3) I think the volume is too high.

[Easy]
00:29:276 the audio is too loud?
00:35:678 ^
00:46:105 add a note here? Done.
02:17:203 (1) add clap?
02:20:129 add a note with clap ? Done.
03:09:885 (1) too loud

[Normal]
00:29:642 too loud?
02:50:861 (5) it is strange that before 02:52:142, the sliderside is slience, but after that,there is some sound It is intentional. It sounds fitting.
03:01:471 (4) 1/8 combo shoud not appear in [Normal] I disagree
03:10:617 (1) the volume change is too sudden I disagree

[Hard]
01:26:715 (1) this slider is covered by the "300" of the 01:25:251 (3,1), don't look good. I agree but I don't want to change it
02:35:495 (1) strange slider :before the timing section, the sliderside is slience, but after that,there is some sound
02:50:861 (3) ^
Thanks

YGOkid8 wrote:

why do people post mods like these? It doesn't matter as long as it's under the 1024x768 limit :/
Agreed.
Rukario
everything I say are suggestions except if I write it in red.

Overall:
Maybe add as 3rd combo colour a dark-ish red?

Easy:
00:38:422 (3) - New Combo
01:00:373 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:10:617 (6) - New Combo
01:12:081 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:28:910 (3) - New Combo
02:20:129 (4) - 5 grids up
02:50:129 (5) - New Combo

Normal:
01:09:520 (3) - New Combo
01:40:251 (3) - 2 grids down
03:01:471 (4) - Is that really necessary for a Normal?
03:04:764 (3) - 1 grid up

Hard:
00:51:593 (4) - New Combo

Okay good map. Star~
Pokie
General
  • - Mute both soft and normal slidersides?

Easy
  • 01:57:446 (1) - try to end up at 01:59:642?
    02:40:800 - unused section
    02:50:312 - ^
    02:50:678 - ^
    02:58:910 (3) - spacing
    03:09:245 - unused section
    03:09:611 - ^


    Normal
    [list:b18bf]- ohhhh Q_Q 0.5x slider traps?!
00:39:520 (1) - increase the volume? It's a little bit...strange now
00:57:446 (1) - cancel new combo here
00:58:910 (2) - new combo
03:09:245 - unused section


Hard
  • - OAD7?
02:03:300 (2) - Add a SB warning to show which direction player should turn?
02:09:154 (5) - remove new combo


umm...I did the resize work before I saw the previous posts :<
So...take it if you want :<
http://puu.sh/3gm
Topic Starter
Mukku

Pokie wrote:

General

Hard
OAD7? Hmm.. I don't know. Both seem just fine for me. Maybe I'll put 7 then. I'll think about this
02:03:300 (2) - Add a SB warning to show which direction player should turn? Ending overlaps beginning. No sb needed.
02:09:154 (5) - remove new combo Done


umm...I did the resize work before I saw the previous posts :<
So...take it if you want :< Thats very nice of you. But I don't want to take it becouse it is bigger than the current bg. Thank you anyways D:
http://puu.sh/3gm
Taken care of both new mods. Thanks
roflninja
Hi,

[easy]
01:10:617 (6) - line up with (4,5)?
02:58:910 (3) - this needs to be closer to (2) (or move (2) away from (1) a bit more so spacing is the same)

[normal]
00:20:129 (1,1,1) - make these notes all one combo?
01:20:129 (1) - no new combo?
03:01:471 (4) - i think this would look better as a single note

[hard]
02:00:373 (1) - a bit high? (kinda into the hp bar)

nice map
ouranhshc
Easy - the majority of the map stays at the center of the screen , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17491. otherwise, good diff.
00:42:812 (4) - new combo?
00:50:861 (4) - ^
00:56:715 (4) - ^
00:57:446 (1) - no new combo
01:10:617 (6) - new combo?
01:12:081 (1) - remove new combo
01:18:666 (2) - new combo

Normal-the combos seem awkward in some places
00:55:983 (5) - new combo
02:52:690 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - up 1 grid
02:55:617 (4) - place on top of (1) of previous combo

Hard - The Combos seem to be down better in this one
The .5x sliders feel overused to me
heintsi
Process of getting maps ranked is one kind of long process.
Forgot to give star on this one. WOosh
Sakura
[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[Hard]
02:00:373 (1) - Out of bounds
02:03:300 (2) - Unrankable Slider, try to make it so the tail and the head dont overlap, it's hard to tell the direction it goes.

[Normal]
Fine

[Easy]
Fine

Fix those 2 sliders and all is good
Topic Starter
Mukku

ouranhshc wrote:

Easy - the majority of the map stays at the center of the screen , http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/17491. otherwise, good diff.
00:42:812 (4) - new combo? Sure
00:50:861 (4) - ^ Sure
00:56:715 (4) - ^ Sure
00:57:446 (1) - no new combo Done
01:10:617 (6) - new combo? No, sir!
01:12:081 (1) - remove new combo I made some fixes here but not the ones you told me to
01:18:666 (2) - new combo Done

Normal-the combos seem awkward in some places
00:55:983 (5) - new combo Agreed
02:52:690 (6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - up 1 grid Oh lol.. Fixed
02:55:617 (4) - place on top of (1) of previous combo I think you mean 6 but no. I don't want to move it.

Hard - The Combos seem to be down better in this one
The .5x sliders feel overused to me Noooooo.. Maybe.. I'll look into it
Thanks

Sakura301 wrote:

[osz File Scan!]
Fine

[Hard]
02:00:373 (1) - Out of bounds Fixed I think
02:03:300 (2) - Unrankable Slider, try to make it so the tail and the head dont overlap, it's hard to tell the direction it goes. I will not change this slider in any shape or form until a BAT threatens the ranking process becouse of it.

[Normal]
Fine

[Easy]
Fine

Fix those 2 sliders and all is good
thanks
Doodley
Good map as far as I can see.

General Notes
01:28:910: Normal hitsounds here?
1 minute of the song isn't mapped. Unless you're expecting to map that part, crop it with Audacity or something similar. (I can understand you kept it there for effect, but nobody is going to stay on the ranking screen for 1 minute, and the song didn't "end."
Grey isn't a recommended combo color due to when waiting for turns in co-op your notes are grey. Perhaps they could be a dark greyish red or something like that? (Oh and, white notes aren't as bad.)
It's difficult to pin down when slow sliders should be used, but it's mostly for effect. The slow sliders here are the exact same length as other sliders so you do not expect any of them. They slipped me up a few times on this map and you might've overused them.
I don't like the difficulty names, they seem ambiguous.

Hard
01:27:995 (3): This note's under a slider, usually bad.

Normal
No problems.

Easy
No problems.

Good job, star.
James2250
Resize background to 800x600 as it looks kinda odd at the moment
Make sure kiai time in the same on every difficulty
Might as well cut mp3
Slowed down sliders didn't bother me too much

Easy:
00:52:50 timing section isn't needed
01:19:03 timing section isn't needed
map looks nice

Normal:
Why so many new combo's in the beginning of this map, they don't really fit. I would redo them so they just follow the music normally
00:54:885 (2,1) - I wouldn't have this repeat under a note just in case anyone complains they can't see it
01:18:666 (1,2,1,1) - all the new combo's aren't needed

Hard:
00:43:910 (9) - remove this from under the previous notes
02:03:300 (2) - separate this more somehow as its kinda confusing how it is now
02:07:690 (3) - remove slider from under notes

*star*
Topic Starter
Mukku

James2250 wrote:

Resize background to 800x600 as it looks kinda odd at the moment
Make sure kiai time in the same on every difficulty
Might as well cut mp3 I don't want to do that becouse when I do it it'll result in a bigger mp3 file becouse of the fade-out I always put in. At least thats what happened last time.
Slowed down sliders didn't bother me too much <3

Easy:
00:52:50 timing section isn't needed whoops, fixed
01:19:03 timing section isn't needed ^
map looks nice

Normal:
Why so many new combo's in the beginning of this map, they don't really fit. I would redo them so they just follow the music normally I guess I thought it looked nice. Changed to 4 per combo
00:54:885 (2,1) - I wouldn't have this repeat under a note just in case anyone complains they can't see it Well the 300 disappears in time so that you can see the repeat.
01:18:666 (1,2,1,1) - all the new combo's aren't needed fixed some

Hard:
00:43:910 (9) - remove this from under the previous notes Nononononononononono
02:03:300 (2) - separate this more somehow as its kinda confusing how it is now Moved up a bit.
02:07:690 (3) - remove slider from under notes Nonononononononono

*star*
Thanks :)

Thanks to stickmeister also for modding.
La Cataline
a long, but rather decent map.
checked twice. see no flaws.
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