1. Champion (5 stars, 572 notes)
2. EEeee's Normal (3,2 stars, 143 notes)
3. Expert (4,92 stars, 431 notes)

osuplayer111 wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- Set a preview point.
- You need an easier difficulty.

Timing:

BPM: 178,53 Offset: 890

And then resnap all notes.

Helped on IRC with map :3

Difficulty fixed by me

Leorda wrote:

This beatmap is so beautiful! I give you a star!

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

- Set a preview point on all difficulties.

[EEeee's Normal]

Much repeatitive, but it's fine. Only needs more hitsounds.

[Expert]

Why these difficulty have another offset ? Set offset 890, and BPM 178,53 and resnap all notes.

00:00:067 (1,2,3) - You have some notes before the offset here.
01:10:145 - Delete this offset.
01:11:083 (8) - New combo.
01:12:033 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:087 (8) - New combo.
01:20:902 - Delete this offset.
01:23:059 (1,2,3) - Invisible sliders.
01:37:087 (8) - New combo.
02:22:024 (7) - ^

[Champion]

Why these difficulty have another offset ? Set offset 890, and BPM 178,53 and resnap all notes.

00:00:067 (1,2,3) - Same as "Expert".
00:43:019 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:145 - Delete this offset.
01:20:902 - Delete this offset.
01:41:091 (1) - Unrankable spinner.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Yes! I Found the timing <3

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BPM: 178,50 - Offset: 210

BPM: 178,55 - Offset: 37.840

BPM: 178,60 - Offset: 70.175

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Remember to resnap all notes again and replace correctly.

Real1 wrote:

These are all suggestions.

[EEeee's Normal]
00:37:084 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This section is BEGGING for more rhythmic hitsounds.
01:31:675 - From this time and all the way to last spinenr there are no hitsounds at all! Add some!


[Expert]
01:13:198 - Awkward stop here. Perhaps add some notes around here cause this hole really breaks the flow.
01:40:057 (1,1,1,1) - Are you sure you don't want these in the same combo?
02:03:758 - Maybe add a spinner here that ends at 02:04:430 with a FINISH hitsound?

Note: Maybe you should end this with a Spinner like on [Champion]?

[Champion]
01:13:198 - Awkward stop here. Perhaps add some notes around here cause this hole really breaks the flow.

That's all. Have a star.

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Set Preview point.
Volume Down (just a bit)

[Normal]

It's ok

[Expert]

01:13:186 (x) - add a circle
01:13:522 (x) - ^
01:13:858 (x) - ^
01:21:922 (x) - ^
01:23:266 (x) - ^
01:24:610 (x) - ^
02:05:265 - add kiai

[Champion]

01:13:186 (x) - add a circle
01:13:522 (x) - ^
01:13:858 (x) - ^
02:05:265 - add kiai

f0012979 wrote:

Star!! >A</

Metroid wrote:

un-Inheriting timing sections - Are they needed? the 2nd seems unneeded at all.
EEeee's Normal - Add a preview point.
fine to me.

Expert - Add a preview point.
01:24:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - not spaced.
02:12:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not spaced. - Don't even try to pull a ztrot spacing... really it's too hard to pull it.

Champion - Add a preview point.
00:52:045 (5,6,7) - not spaced to the earlier part of the combo.

starred'

lthefuryl wrote:

Metroid wrote:

un-Inheriting timing sections - Are they needed? the 2nd seems unneeded at all.
EEeee's Normal - Add a preview point.
fine to me.

Expert - Add a preview point.
01:24:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - not spaced.
02:12:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not spaced. - Don't even try to pull a ztrot spacing... really it's too hard to pull it.

Champion - Add a preview point.
00:52:045 (5,6,7) - not spaced to the earlier part of the combo.

starred'

fixed...but anyways..........don't "even try to pull a ztrot spacing"? sorry but what are u saying??? what is "ztrot spacing"? and what is this "dont even try to pull?" is an order? sorry but i think i didn't understand..so if it is as i understand, i say u a little thing......this is my song and i don't need to copy anyone...this is "my" spacing and "my" jumps...so please don't come here to say that i copy someone else, if that's what you mean

Hanyuu wrote:

hi i dont really mod this but i played it and i liked it !! only the second half time of champion is VERY BORING !!
please make more notes on blue ticks

examples:01:37:029 (6) - 01:38:063 (7) -01:41:007 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
also the fast fast slider here should start at 1:42:08 and half a beat long (end red tick)

its a fun map but please make more circles in champion star !!

Sir Minelli wrote:

Overall:
Normal has a higher tick rate and NO kiai timing section when compared to the harder difficulties.
You didn't add tags. Put EEeee there.


[EEeee's normal]

01:47:79 (3) - New combo / Undo new combo: 01:48:13 (1) -

Aesthetics~

00:01:20 (1,2,3,4) - You might want to polish these sliders so they are all perfectly straight.


[Expert]

00:32:62 (7) - Take away this finish sound before I hit you.
01:31:66 - This timing section is not doing anything.
02:37:52 - Sounds like you need to add one las beat here. (with a new kiai timing section -hint hint-)

Aesthetics~

00:47:058 (11) - Polish this slider and make it straight.
02:22:056 (2) - ^


[Champion]

00:32:62 (8) - Take away this finish sound before I hit you.
00:37:83 - Why do you have two timing sections here. Leave only the one that changes the bpm which is the one that you need.
01:19:99 (3) - I would delete this beat here to follow the rythm better, but it's ok if you leave it like this.
01:55:35 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Are you really going to repeat this again? The rythm changes you know.

Aesthetics~

02:37:052 - End it with a new kiai timing section.

eee wrote:

eeemod GO!!!

[EEeee]
00:48:059 (6) - new combo
01:07:007 (1) - snap the end of this to the new BPM timing section

[Expert]
01:24:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - alright, I get it, this is a cool pattern, but it was kinda confusing for me :S
02:37:52 (x) - idk, a circle or something here, to end it where the others do

[Champion]
01:41:074 (15) - although it would be more brutal, might wanna add another Reverse Arrow on this one :S
The Preview Point is different than the others, fix it

I like your maps, lol, they're very good
Champian hurt, but it was nice, Expert was fun, but I think slow approach circles are hard to read, but that's just me, don't change a thing with the difficulty

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[Timing/All difficulties]
It's all 178.55. Though it definitely needs multiple offsets.
Set preview points.

[EEeee's Normal]
Boring but fine. The background is pretty poor-quality; JPG artifacts everywhere.

[Expert]
A lot of parts of this map don't flow as well as they could because the notes don't really match the song.
00:41:704 (6,7,8,9) - Poor flow.
01:17:218 (1,2,1,2,3) - Where did these jumps come from? I don't like these at all.
01:25:954 (5,1) - I like this anti-jump. But it's strange to have exactly one in the entire map.
01:34:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Poor flow.
01:55:354 (1,2,3,4) - I see the repetition, but this bit should stay synced to the vocals instead.

[Champion]
The jumps in this map ______, and the streams have poor flow. Why are the sliders and triple hits where they are? It doesn't make much sense, and keeps the player from really "feeling" the song.
01:41:746 (15) - I don't really like this, but I've seen worse 2x speed sliders.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Delete the .osb file
There are some SB elements that aren't even in the folder.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Delete the .osb file
There are some SB elements that aren't even in the folder.

EEeee wrote:

Mafiamaster wrote:

Delete the .osb file
There are some SB elements that aren't even in the folder.

This is back

Delete the .osb file in the osu folder then make sure u don't see it in "Design" there are 2 files not being used, , or not even in the folder set in the "Background" area

after that, Full Submit

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Sorry about doing this, really. .w.

[Expert]:
00:42:071 (1,2,3,4) - Though not as hidden as sliders I've seen before, it's definitely something trippin'...Would you mind changing this so that (2)'s hit-burst doesn't overlap (4)'s repeat?

Timing-wise...I do feel it's fine, but the first part's .5 really throws me off...Actually there really isn't much of a BPM to pick around there, xD, but if something is wrong with timing, the beginning is my culprit (the first timing section). The rest seem fine; having the last part be .55 seems to make it too slow.

Sorry about the pop; if you fix it and do a little housekeeping, I'll go bubble it back, kk? ;3