osuplayer111 wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

- Set a preview point.
- You need an easier difficulty.

Timing:

BPM: 178,53 Offset: 890

And then resnap all notes.

Helped on IRC with map :3

Difficulty fixed by me

Leorda wrote:

This beatmap is so beautiful! I give you a star!

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

- Set a preview point on all difficulties.

[EEeee's Normal]

Much repeatitive, but it's fine. Only needs more hitsounds.

[Expert]

Why these difficulty have another offset ? Set offset 890, and BPM 178,53 and resnap all notes.

00:00:067 (1,2,3) - You have some notes before the offset here.
01:10:145 - Delete this offset.
01:11:083 (8) - New combo.
01:12:033 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:15:087 (8) - New combo.
01:20:902 - Delete this offset.
01:23:059 (1,2,3) - Invisible sliders.
01:37:087 (8) - New combo.
02:22:024 (7) - ^

[Champion]

Why these difficulty have another offset ? Set offset 890, and BPM 178,53 and resnap all notes.

00:00:067 (1,2,3) - Same as "Expert".
00:43:019 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:145 - Delete this offset.
01:20:902 - Delete this offset.
01:41:091 (1) - Unrankable spinner.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Yes! I Found the timing <3

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BPM: 178,50 - Offset: 210

BPM: 178,55 - Offset: 37.840

BPM: 178,60 - Offset: 70.175

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Remember to resnap all notes again and replace correctly.

Real1 wrote:

These are all suggestions.

[EEeee's Normal]
00:37:084 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This section is BEGGING for more rhythmic hitsounds.
01:31:675 - From this time and all the way to last spinenr there are no hitsounds at all! Add some!


[Expert]
01:13:198 - Awkward stop here. Perhaps add some notes around here cause this hole really breaks the flow.
01:40:057 (1,1,1,1) - Are you sure you don't want these in the same combo?
02:03:758 - Maybe add a spinner here that ends at 02:04:430 with a FINISH hitsound?

Note: Maybe you should end this with a Spinner like on [Champion]?

[Champion]
01:13:198 - Awkward stop here. Perhaps add some notes around here cause this hole really breaks the flow.

That's all. Have a star.

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Set Preview point.
Volume Down (just a bit)

[Normal]

It's ok

[Expert]

01:13:186 (x) - add a circle
01:13:522 (x) - ^
01:13:858 (x) - ^
01:21:922 (x) - ^
01:23:266 (x) - ^
01:24:610 (x) - ^
02:05:265 - add kiai

[Champion]

01:13:186 (x) - add a circle
01:13:522 (x) - ^
01:13:858 (x) - ^
02:05:265 - add kiai

f0012979 wrote:

Star!! >A</

Metroid wrote:

un-Inheriting timing sections - Are they needed? the 2nd seems unneeded at all.
EEeee's Normal - Add a preview point.
fine to me.

Expert - Add a preview point.
01:24:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - not spaced.
02:12:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not spaced. - Don't even try to pull a ztrot spacing... really it's too hard to pull it.

Champion - Add a preview point.
00:52:045 (5,6,7) - not spaced to the earlier part of the combo.

starred'

lthefuryl wrote:

Metroid wrote:

un-Inheriting timing sections - Are they needed? the 2nd seems unneeded at all.
EEeee's Normal - Add a preview point.
fine to me.

Expert - Add a preview point.
01:24:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - not spaced.
02:12:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not spaced. - Don't even try to pull a ztrot spacing... really it's too hard to pull it.

Champion - Add a preview point.
00:52:045 (5,6,7) - not spaced to the earlier part of the combo.

starred'

fixed...but anyways..........don't "even try to pull a ztrot spacing"? sorry but what are u saying??? what is "ztrot spacing"? and what is this "dont even try to pull?" is an order? sorry but i think i didn't understand..so if it is as i understand, i say u a little thing......this is my song and i don't need to copy anyone...this is "my" spacing and "my" jumps...so please don't come here to say that i copy someone else, if that's what you mean

Hanyuu wrote:

hi i dont really mod this but i played it and i liked it !! only the second half time of champion is VERY BORING !!
please make more notes on blue ticks

examples:01:37:029 (6) - 01:38:063 (7) -01:41:007 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
also the fast fast slider here should start at 1:42:08 and half a beat long (end red tick)

its a fun map but please make more circles in champion star !!

Sir Minelli wrote:

Overall:
Normal has a higher tick rate and NO kiai timing section when compared to the harder difficulties.
You didn't add tags. Put EEeee there.


[EEeee's normal]

01:47:79 (3) - New combo / Undo new combo: 01:48:13 (1) -

Aesthetics~

00:01:20 (1,2,3,4) - You might want to polish these sliders so they are all perfectly straight.


[Expert]

00:32:62 (7) - Take away this finish sound before I hit you.
01:31:66 - This timing section is not doing anything.
02:37:52 - Sounds like you need to add one las beat here. (with a new kiai timing section -hint hint-)

Aesthetics~

00:47:058 (11) - Polish this slider and make it straight.
02:22:056 (2) - ^


[Champion]

00:32:62 (8) - Take away this finish sound before I hit you.
00:37:83 - Why do you have two timing sections here. Leave only the one that changes the bpm which is the one that you need.
01:19:99 (3) - I would delete this beat here to follow the rythm better, but it's ok if you leave it like this.
01:55:35 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Are you really going to repeat this again? The rythm changes you know.

Aesthetics~

02:37:052 - End it with a new kiai timing section.