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lthefuryl

f0012979 wrote:

Star!! >A</
xDD wow thx f0012979 xDDD
Nharox
[Champion]

00:18:847 (3) - Snap the note on the end of the slider (2). Don't forget to move the (4) too.
00:24:225 (4) - Same as above
00:32:964 - You might place a timing section there with mute (= 0 Volume)
01:16:378 (4) - New combo
01:16:462 (1) - Remove old combo
01:41:746 (15) - Not sure about this 2x slider without warning. It's okay though.

Only suggestion. Overall the patterns are a bit boring but the map is good. ;)

[Expert]

00:32:964 - Same as in [Champion].
01:17:554 (1) - Remove combo
01:24:946 (1-5) - Weird & confusing spacing. :P
01:27:970 (6) - New combo?
01:40:906 (1), 01:41:242 (1) and 01:41:578 (1) - Would be better without new combo but it's okay.
01:56:698 (1) and the next 2 (1)'s - Same as above

I would turn down the overall difficulty by 1. Your decision.

[EEeee's Normal]

00:32:964 - That mute thing again if you want to. :P

Seems to be good, too many spinners though imo.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Metroid
un-Inheriting timing sections - Are they needed? the 2nd seems unneeded at all.
EEeee's Normal - Add a preview point.
fine to me.

Expert - Add a preview point.
01:24:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - not spaced.
02:12:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not spaced. - Don't even try to pull a ztrot spacing... really it's too hard to pull it.

Champion - Add a preview point.
00:52:045 (5,6,7) - not spaced to the earlier part of the combo.

starred'
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Metroid wrote:

un-Inheriting timing sections - Are they needed? the 2nd seems unneeded at all.
EEeee's Normal - Add a preview point.
fine to me.

Expert - Add a preview point.
01:24:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - not spaced.
02:12:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not spaced. - Don't even try to pull a ztrot spacing... really it's too hard to pull it.

Champion - Add a preview point.
00:52:045 (5,6,7) - not spaced to the earlier part of the combo.

starred'
fixed...but anyways..........don't "even try to pull a ztrot spacing"? sorry but what are u saying??? what is "ztrot spacing"? and what is this "dont even try to pull?" is an order? sorry but i think i didn't understand..so if it is as i understand, i say u a little thing......this is my song and i don't need to copy anyone...this is "my" spacing and "my" jumps...so please don't come here to say that i copy someone else, if that's what you mean ;)
Metroid

lthefuryl wrote:

Metroid wrote:

un-Inheriting timing sections - Are they needed? the 2nd seems unneeded at all.
EEeee's Normal - Add a preview point.
fine to me.

Expert - Add a preview point.
01:24:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - not spaced.
02:12:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not spaced. - Don't even try to pull a ztrot spacing... really it's too hard to pull it.

Champion - Add a preview point.
00:52:045 (5,6,7) - not spaced to the earlier part of the combo.

starred'
fixed...but anyways..........don't "even try to pull a ztrot spacing"? sorry but what are u saying??? what is "ztrot spacing"? and what is this "dont even try to pull?" is an order? sorry but i think i didn't understand..so if it is as i understand, i say u a little thing......this is my song and i don't need to copy anyone...this is "my" spacing and "my" jumps...so please don't come here to say that i copy someone else, if that's what you mean ;)

Don't worry I just meant it in a joking way, it's just 02:12:099 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not spaced.
that is all I'm trying to say, I'm just adding on it looks similar to ztrot jumps which are usually not good unless intuitive..
sorry for any misunderstandings..
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
jumps fixed and ztrot spacing danger averted xD
Hanyuu
hi i dont really mod this but i played it and i liked it !! only the second half time of champion is VERY BORING !!
please make more notes on blue ticks

examples:01:37:029 (6) - 01:38:063 (7) -01:41:007 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
also the fast fast slider here should start at 1:42:08 and half a beat long (end red tick)

its a fun map but please make more circles in champion :) star !!
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Hanyuu wrote:

hi i dont really mod this but i played it and i liked it !! only the second half time of champion is VERY BORING !!
please make more notes on blue ticks

examples:01:37:029 (6) - 01:38:063 (7) -01:41:007 (12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19) -
also the fast fast slider here should start at 1:42:08 and half a beat long (end red tick)

its a fun map but please make more circles in champion :) star !!
thx and i've put other circles ;)
Sir Minelli
Overall:
Normal has a higher tick rate and NO kiai timing section when compared to the harder difficulties.
You didn't add tags. Put EEeee there.


[EEeee's normal]

01:47:79 (3) - New combo / Undo new combo: 01:48:13 (1) -

Aesthetics~

00:01:20 (1,2,3,4) - You might want to polish these sliders so they are all perfectly straight.


[Expert]

00:32:62 (7) - Take away this finish sound before I hit you.
01:31:66 - This timing section is not doing anything.
02:37:52 - Sounds like you need to add one las beat here. (with a new kiai timing section -hint hint-)

Aesthetics~

00:47:058 (11) - Polish this slider and make it straight.
02:22:056 (2) - ^


[Champion]

00:32:62 (8) - Take away this finish sound before I hit you.
00:37:83 - Why do you have two timing sections here. Leave only the one that changes the bpm which is the one that you need.
01:19:99 (3) - I would delete this beat here to follow the rythm better, but it's ok if you leave it like this.
01:55:35 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Are you really going to repeat this again? The rythm changes you know.

Aesthetics~

02:37:052 - End it with a new kiai timing section.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Sir Minelli wrote:

Overall:
Normal has a higher tick rate and NO kiai timing section when compared to the harder difficulties.
You didn't add tags. Put EEeee there.


[EEeee's normal]

01:47:79 (3) - New combo / Undo new combo: 01:48:13 (1) -

Aesthetics~

00:01:20 (1,2,3,4) - You might want to polish these sliders so they are all perfectly straight.


[Expert]

00:32:62 (7) - Take away this finish sound before I hit you.
01:31:66 - This timing section is not doing anything.
02:37:52 - Sounds like you need to add one las beat here. (with a new kiai timing section -hint hint-)

Aesthetics~

00:47:058 (11) - Polish this slider and make it straight.
02:22:056 (2) - ^


[Champion]

00:32:62 (8) - Take away this finish sound before I hit you.
00:37:83 - Why do you have two timing sections here. Leave only the one that changes the bpm which is the one that you need.
01:19:99 (3) - I would delete this beat here to follow the rythm better, but it's ok if you leave it like this.
01:55:35 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Are you really going to repeat this again? The rythm changes you know.

Aesthetics~

02:37:052 - End it with a new kiai timing section.
done...so, star it? xDD
Sir Minelli
You need to add EEeee to all of the difficulty tags.

Delete the .osb file inside your map's folder.
eee
eeemod GO!!!

[EEeee]
00:48:059 (6) - new combo
01:07:007 (1) - snap the end of this to the new BPM timing section ;)

[Expert]
01:24:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - alright, I get it, this is a cool pattern, but it was kinda confusing for me :S
02:37:52 (x) - idk, a circle or something here, to end it where the others do :x

[Champion]
01:41:074 (15) - although it would be more brutal, might wanna add another Reverse Arrow on this one :S
The Preview Point is different than the others, fix it

I like your maps, lol, they're very good
Champian hurt, but it was nice, Expert was fun, but I think slow approach circles are hard to read, but that's just me, don't change a thing with the difficulty ;)
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

eee wrote:

eeemod GO!!!

[EEeee]
00:48:059 (6) - new combo
01:07:007 (1) - snap the end of this to the new BPM timing section ;)

[Expert]
01:24:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - alright, I get it, this is a cool pattern, but it was kinda confusing for me :S
02:37:52 (x) - idk, a circle or something here, to end it where the others do :x

[Champion]
01:41:074 (15) - although it would be more brutal, might wanna add another Reverse Arrow on this one :S
The Preview Point is different than the others, fix it

I like your maps, lol, they're very good
Champian hurt, but it was nice, Expert was fun, but I think slow approach circles are hard to read, but that's just me, don't change a thing with the difficulty ;)
thx eee for your suggestions :) i've fixed some of your suggestions ;)
CheeseWarlock
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

CheeseWarlock wrote:

[Timing/All difficulties]
It's all 178.55. Though it definitely needs multiple offsets.
Set preview points.

[EEeee's Normal]
Boring but fine. The background is pretty poor-quality; JPG artifacts everywhere.

[Expert]
A lot of parts of this map don't flow as well as they could because the notes don't really match the song.
00:41:704 (6,7,8,9) - Poor flow.
01:17:218 (1,2,1,2,3) - Where did these jumps come from? I don't like these at all.
01:25:954 (5,1) - I like this anti-jump. But it's strange to have exactly one in the entire map.
01:34:018 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Poor flow.
01:55:354 (1,2,3,4) - I see the repetition, but this bit should stay synced to the vocals instead.

[Champion]
The jumps in this map ______, and the streams have poor flow. Why are the sliders and triple hits where they are? It doesn't make much sense, and keeps the player from really "feeling" the song.
01:41:746 (15) - I don't really like this, but I've seen worse 2x speed sliders.
thx...i haven't fixed much your things because i disagree most of your stuff...especially in the expert diff...sorry...i hope you don't get angry :)

P.S.: i've changed the EEeee's Normal image, i've put your timing and i've put preview points ;)
Mafiamaster
Delete the .osb file
There are some SB elements that aren't even in the folder.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Mafiamaster wrote:

Delete the .osb file
There are some SB elements that aren't even in the folder.
thx mafia :) done
Doomsday
I was about to mod this, but i don't know wether the BAT's that posted before are gonna bubble or something. I'll hold off until i know for certain.
EEeee

Mafiamaster wrote:

Delete the .osb file
There are some SB elements that aren't even in the folder.
This is back

Delete the .osb file in the osu folder then make sure u don't see it in "Design" there are 2 files not being used, , or not even in the folder set in the "Background" area

after that, Full Submit

EDIT: I just manually walked the fury into deleting these files, it should be gone now
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

EEeee wrote:

Mafiamaster wrote:

Delete the .osb file
There are some SB elements that aren't even in the folder.
This is back

Delete the .osb file in the osu folder then make sure u don't see it in "Design" there are 2 files not being used, , or not even in the folder set in the "Background" area

after that, Full Submit
ok i've REALLY done it now xDDD
minyeob
Modding type: By request

[EEeee]
02:00:072 (1) - Please compare this spinner with 01:07:007 (1).

And please change offset if you can(Note before offset is not good :p)

Starred ^^
Takuma
Nice song/map. Bubbled.
Starrodkirby86
Sorry about doing this, really. .w.

[Expert]:
00:42:071 (1,2,3,4) - Though not as hidden as sliders I've seen before, it's definitely something trippin'...Would you mind changing this so that (2)'s hit-burst doesn't overlap (4)'s repeat?

Timing-wise...I do feel it's fine, but the first part's .5 really throws me off...Actually there really isn't much of a BPM to pick around there, xD, but if something is wrong with timing, the beginning is my culprit (the first timing section). The rest seem fine; having the last part be .55 seems to make it too slow.

Sorry about the pop; if you fix it and do a little housekeeping, I'll go bubble it back, kk? ;3
Kytoxid
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Sorry about doing this, really. .w.

[Expert]:
00:42:071 (1,2,3,4) - Though not as hidden as sliders I've seen before, it's definitely something trippin'...Would you mind changing this so that (2)'s hit-burst doesn't overlap (4)'s repeat?

Timing-wise...I do feel it's fine, but the first part's .5 really throws me off...Actually there really isn't much of a BPM to pick around there, xD, but if something is wrong with timing, the beginning is my culprit (the first timing section). The rest seem fine; having the last part be .55 seems to make it too slow.

Sorry about the pop; if you fix it and do a little housekeeping, I'll go bubble it back, kk? ;3
hi kirby, i've already received a bubble from takuma and so i don't think your fix are indispensable :(
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
edited >:(
Alace
lol
It is the best (don`t rank this map) request
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Alace wrote:

lol
It is the best (don`t rank this map) request
Alace i'm tired that i must wait 5 months for a bubble...this song is ready since 2 months and no bat has gone here for a bubble -.-

i've done 100000 request in all queues but the result is = zero

i'm really tired of this situation
Takuma
you act like you're the only one
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Takuma wrote:

you act like you're the only one
good...im not the only one and..........are you happy for this?
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
i've edited my post only for my friend osuplayer111...but im really tired for this situation...try to give more attention to me too :(
Card N'FoRcE
Meh, that's your typical attitude, it seems.
You get angry, when you're angry you don't know what you're saying, you say bad things, then you feel sorry.
Well, let's see how this will end.


- General:
  • L'ultima sezione è in ritardo all'inizio e in anticipo alla fine. Prova a diminuire di poco il BPM e diminuisci l'offset di almeno 5ms
- EEeee's Normal:
  • .Opinions:
    Fine ^^

- Expert:
  • .Suggestions:
    01:25:114 (2,3) - molto, forse troppo, strano O.o Però muovendo un pochino a sinistra risolveresti con stile ^^
    01:27:130 (4) - è troppo in alto
    02:37:521 (10) - nuova combo? xD
- Champion:
  • .Opinions:
    Niente da dire
La stello perché è una mappa valida e molto giocabile, ma devi fixarmi il timing, prima della protobolla :P
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Card N'FoRcE
Ok, timing should be ok, and the map is fine overall.

I'm protobubbling this, but remember that what you said is kinda ...heavy D:
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Card N'FoRcE wrote:

Ok, timing should be ok, and the map is fine overall.

I'm protobubbling this, but remember that what you said is kinda ...heavy D:
thx fabio...anyways i dont deny what I said :) this is my thought...maybe i've used a heavy tone...but this is the truth :roll:
Yuukari-Banteki
yay I missed all the drama. Note: I have not read anything in this thread about you and am approaching your map as unbiasedly as I possibly can :)

[EEeee]
00:05:232 (4) - move 1/2 earlier? feels kinda awkward in general
01:42:414 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this section is kinda boring/repetitive
01:07:075 (1) - start 1/2 earlier

[Expert]
00:43:720 (4) - tone down the claps or remove the middle one, theyre overriding the song a bit
01:27:125 (4) - ^ with finishes
01:40:566 (1,1,1,1) - try some hitsounds here
02:04:761 (1) - a little soon after the spinner ends, for such a short spinner
02:15:514 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - With all due respect, this rhythm is getting repetitive in here :(
02:20:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - overusing whistle

-this is a friendly reminder that the comments I make are suggestions on how to improve your map, and that implementing them is up to the discretion of the mapper-

[Champion]
I suggest you increase your spacing a little
Also you have about twice as many soft whistles as you need in this map, please remove about half of them. :) otherwise, this is a decent (if somewhat boring) map, and rankable save 01:41:742 (15) - which needs either a warning or to be the same bpm as everything else
Kuroneko-sHerald
Nice map. Starred :P
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

Kuroneko-sHerald wrote:

Nice map. Starred :P
thanks :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
ok Saturos-fangirl i've showed your suggestions...i'll put (no) if your suggestion hasn't been put and (yes) if your suggestion has been put :D
[EEeee]
00:05:232 (4) - move 1/2 earlier? feels kinda awkward in general (no)
01:42:414 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - this section is kinda boring/repetitive (no)
01:07:075 (1) - start 1/2 earlier (yes)

[Expert]
00:43:720 (4) - tone down the claps or remove the middle one, theyre overriding the song a bit (yes)
01:27:125 (4) - ^ with finishes (yes)
01:40:566 (1,1,1,1) - try some hitsounds here (yes)
02:04:761 (1) - a little soon after the spinner ends, for such a short spinner (yes)
02:15:514 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - With all due respect, this rhythm is getting repetitive in here :( (yes)
02:20:891 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - overusing whistle (no)

[Champion]
I suggest you increase your spacing a little (no)
Also you have about twice as many soft whistles as you need in this map, please remove about half of them. :) otherwise, this is a decent (if somewhat boring) map, and rankable save 01:41:742 (15) - which needs either a warning or to be the same bpm as everything else (no)

thx :D so bubble? xD
BananasGoMoo
was waiting for this to be mapped.
couldnt find any problems, really

+Star
Lunah_old
Starred
Yuukari-Banteki
Doin' my remod now while I still have internet

[EEeee]
decent

[Expert]
I still think theres too many whistles but meh

[Champion]
00:06:569 (4,5,6,7) - deceptive
01:15:531 (1,2,3) - why whistles instead of claps?
01:55:352 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - what is this mapped to?


One final thing....are you aiming for ranking charts or just regular ranking? starr'd and call me back
Topic Starter
lthefuryl
[Champion]
00:06:569 (4,5,6,7) - deceptive done
01:15:531 (1,2,3) - why whistles instead of claps? done
01:55:352 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - what is this mapped to? done

:)
Yuukari-Banteki
[Champion]
meh

bubbled
Andrea
[EEeee's Normal]

01:06:907 (1) - This spinner should end here -> 01:10:143.

[Expert]

02:13:666 (3,4) - Adjust this spacing.

[Champion]

Different timing here? Weird. Change the first timing to BPM 178,55 and Offset 1.200. Others 2 BPM and Offsets are correct.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

osuplayer111 wrote:

[EEeee's Normal]

01:06:907 (1) - This spinner should end here -> 01:10:143.

[Expert]

02:13:666 (3,4) - Adjust this spacing.

[Champion]

Different timing here? Weird. Change the first timing to BPM 178,55 and Offset 1.200. Others 2 BPM and Offsets are correct.
done
Andrea
You forget to fix the spinner on EEeee's Normal. Use 1/6 for correct spinner end.

Oh, I write bad before. I mean 01:10:141 not 01:10:143.

EDIT: Now it's okay~

Bubbled.
Topic Starter
lthefuryl

osuplayer111 wrote:

You forget to fix the spinner on EEeee's Normal. Use 1/6 for correct spinner end.
done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done done :lol: :lol: ;) ;) ;) ;)
whymeman
Well done. Ranked.
SabreWolf
The bleed on this is a bit ridiculous.
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