1. Dancing (4.89 stars, 613 notes)
2. Sleeping (1.16 stars, 198 notes)
3. Walking (2.84 stars, 288 notes)

cmn_891127 wrote:

HI, Lissette~

[Dancing]

01:17:440 (1,2) - I think removing them will make the rhythm clear, even though they are follow the voice Feels weird since the prev combo is following the voice, i find it to sudden the change
02:03:709 (x) & 03:24:940 (x) - add a note There's no any sound there, i prefer not
02:09:363 (1,2,3,4,5) & 03:30:363 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - why not make them same?~ oops, fixed :p
02:20:671 (3,1,1) - the two white notes confuse me. Maybe 02:21:133 (1) should change to another color removed new combo, now is dark pick
02:38:440 (1) - add a reverse and end at 02:38:671 no o.o

a lot of polygons are not regular, such as 02:59:094 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) I'll check and try to fix all of them ^^'

I love the fluctuation-sliders~ <3

AngelHoney wrote:

preview point ? I always forget this >:

00:48:017 (1) - remove ? nope, feels something empty there ><
00:53:094 - add ? I want to keep the jump here
01:02:902 - spinner ? These blank spaces helps the lack of breaktimes ><
01:07:056 (2,1) - spacing ._. Fixed
01:33:363 (1) - end at 01:35:671 and add note to 01:36:133 ? feels easier to click ? Done
02:08:902 (5) - http://puu.sh/Iffv ? Ruins the effect i want with that note
02:38:902 - spinner ? ^
02:54:594 (1) - ^^^ Done
03:28:748 (1) - change color ? same as 03:27:363 (1) ? coz last combo What do you mean?

have long time no mod , hope its useful >.<b

ouranhshc wrote:

Just curious. But what is up with your source lol

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi Lissette

General

1. ~

Dancing

1. 00:14:902 (1) - Add some whistles in notes from there until 00:29:209 (1) because it sounds empty Tried adding every 2 beats, but didnt liked how it sounds, then i added every 1 beat but sound too much for my taste, so ill keep this part like this, is the begging of the map, and i prefer it calm *.*
2. 00:29:671 (x) - Move the Break over there, i think it follows the vocals of the singer and looks good ok *.*
3. 00:44:325 (7,1) - Bad stacked whit 00:43:979 (6) but if that was intentional no problem Fixed
4. 00:48:594 (6) - I don't know why but if you add a finish there its sounds good, consider adding nope
5. 00:55:979 (3) - Add clap at the begin ? it follows the instrumental and keeps the consistency at hitsounds oops, added
6. 01:09:363 (1) - Add a NC, it plays pretty well whit the instrumental and avoid long combos that looks ugly looks uglier laste 4 notes of the stream in another combo T.T
7. 01:20:902 (4) - Move this note 1 grid down, it look better whit 01:19:517 (1,2,3) http://puu.sh/JnN4 done o.o
8. 03:17:671 (1) - Add finish, it will keep the consistency at hitsounds, and sounds good added
   
   Nice !

Love this song, and the mapset in Dancing its great, Hope it was helpful

Good Luck! And Star!

Midasmens wrote:

Midas here~
M4M

General
The map need a preview point and it's unrankable if you don't do that >< I alwayssss forget thissss, added u.u
Disable the countdown. it doesn't work~ so you can remove it k~

Walking
00:14:902 - 00:29:209 You can add some whistle in this part. such as like i said on a previous mod post

SPOILER

00:16:748 -
00:18:363 (3) -
00:20:440 -
00:22:286 -
00:24:133 -
00:25:748 (6) -
00:26:440 -
00:27:363 -

00:29:209 (1) - add finish nope
00:29:671 - drag the break to here imo. yep
00:57:594 - useless greenline deleted
01:02:902 - 01:04:286 add spinner here imo. nope
01:19:517 - drag the break to here. ok
02:24:133 - finish nope
03:45:363 - ^ nope
~~~~~~

Dancing
00:14:902 - 00:29:209 same with Walking~ add some whistle ^
00:29:671 - break start here
01:19:056 (4) - NC? nope
02:04:286 (1,2,3,4) -

SPOILER

oh no
02:09:825 (5) - add NC here. cause you change the Slider velocity. NC here can let player know the different about this slider is not a huge change, doesnt need
02:52:748 (3) - right 1 grid. Spacing will be better ok
02:57:594 (2) - NC here. Cause you add 01:36:363 NC removed from 01:36:363
03:31:056 (5) - NC. SV change ^
03:45:363 (1) - finish nope
~~~~~~

Nice song & map :3
Hope I can help you~ >.<

٩(๑╹◡╹๑)۶

KDS wrote:

yo~ can I make a taiko map for you? x333

• 
  HP Drain&OD -1? This is a easiest diffiulty in mapset huh
  Use Grid level 4 and check spacing after it
  00:17:671 (2,3) - maybe unstack it? this stacks looks hard in easiest difficulty
  00:25:056 (5,6) - ^
  00:40:286 (4) - nc?
  00:47:671 (4) - ^
  01:18:594 (3,4) - unstack? fourbeat-stacks in normal? or this
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:41:671 (1) - maybe break?
  01:44:440 (1) - nc?
  01:46:748 (4) - ^
  01:54:133 (4) - ^
  02:03:825 (4) - delete nc
  02:04:286 (1) - nc
  02:16:748 (1,2,3,4) - like in 01:18:594
  03:02:902 (1) - like in 01:41:671
  03:05:671 (5) - unstack?
  03:07:979 (4) - nc?
  03:10:748 (2) - ^
  03:11:671 (4,5) - unstack?
  03:15:363 (4) - nc?
  03:30:594 (1) - maybe delete? i think that 1\1 beat after looks hard in easiest difficulty

• 
  OD-1?
  Use Grid level 4 and check spacing after it
  00:16:056 (6) - nc?
  00:18:133 (5) - nc?
  00:28:979 (4,1) - place it closer
  01:05:556 (5) - nc?
  01:08:671 (2) - ^
  01:26:209 (4,1) - place it closer
  01:39:017 (1) - 2k spinner? One more reason to do OD-1
  01:42:133 (2) - nc?
  02:38:440 (1) - why this slider is rotated?
  02:47:440 (4,1) - place it closer
  03:11:671 (6) - nc?
  03:12:133 (1) - delete nc?

• 01:19:517 - Unnecessary green line

• Why not map till end ;.;
  01:55:979 (1,1,2) - For these patterns, I think it will be easier to read for beginner if the 2nd NC was removed

• 00:17:671 (2,3) - Add whistle at the end of the slider and 3?
  00:25:056 (5,6) - ^
  00:55:979 (3) - Add whistle?
  01:17:671 (1,2,3) - ^
  02:08:440 (3,1) - 1 grid down?
  02:16:748 (1,2,3) - Add whistle?
  02:24:133 (1) - ^
  02:31:517 (6) - ^
  03:34:748 (1,2,3) - ^
  03:38:440 (1,2,3) - ^
  03:42:133 (1,2,3) - ^

• 00:07:517 (1) - Completely hidden under 00:05:671 (1) - so I suggest you to shift these up or down
  00:18:133 (5,6) - Add whistle somewhere here?
  00:21:825 (3,4) - ^
  00:22:748 (1) - Start this slider at 00:22:517 - and add note at 00:23:440 - ?
  00:23:671 (1,1,1) - Remove NC?
  00:25:979 (2) - NC
  00:27:594 (1) - Remove NC
  00:28:979 (4) - NC for this instead of 00:29:209 (1) -
  00:55:979 (3) - Add whistle?
  01:17:671 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Add whistle somewhere here?
  01:24:594 (4,1) - 1 grid down, 1 grid right?
  01:26:209 (4) - NC this instead of 01:26:440 (1) -
  01:31:979 (4,1) - Hits the hp bar, move it down a bit?
  01:43:517 (1) - The slider slightly hits the hp bar
  02:04:748 (3) - 1 grid down
  02:16:748 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistles somewhere?
  02:31:517 (1) - Add whistle?
  02:47:440 (4) - NC this instead of 02:46:056 (1) -
  03:34:748 (1,2,3) - Add whistle?
  03:38:440 (1,2,3) - ^
  03:42:133 (1,2,3) - ^

-Bakari- wrote:

eh.. hi! maybe m4m? (you already modded this map. but i've got more mods. and maps is much better now, so i think it's ok to ask for re-mod)

[General]
~

[Walking]
00:00:133 (1,1,1) - i understand why but i still think this pattern isn't readale for Normal(?) diff (maybe do it like this?) this is far enough, will consider if there are more complaining tho
00:07:517 (1,1,1) - ^
00:41:671 (1) - maybe 1/2 shorter + add reverse. sounds much better, imo This pattern is supposed to be the same as Dancing, so wont change it
00:45:825 (6,1,6) - stack them? >.< ok S:
00:53:209 (3) - i can't read this pattern because of spinner's hitburst That's just like a normal back a forth pattern
01:06:594 (5) - nazi: end point 2 grids up. to be aligned with (2) and make perfect sqare ok
01:19:517 (1) - maybe add note here. right before break? mmm nope
02:09:363 (1) - rythm change I don't really get what you mean, what rhythm change?
03:19:979 (2) - nazi: ctrl+j add some fun! I don't see how that was is more fun anyways keeping it to be consistent with Dancing diff
03:45:363 (1) - finish I want last note to be quiet

[Dancing]
00:28:979 (4,1) - NC swap. kinda awkward while playing now :< This have been tested with different kind of players and is readable
01:28:748 (1) - not sure. but a bit overlaped with my hp-bar Is visible
01:31:979 (4) - ^
01:33:363 (1) - clap ok
02:09:825 (5) - please, point this slider out. use NC This change of velocity is not that drastic, in this case a new combo won't make any difference
~~~~~~~~~~

awesome diffs, really! :3

tiper wrote:

Hey~

[Walking]

• 
  HP Drain&OD -1? This is a easiest diffiulty in mapset huh This is not the easiest diff, remember i told you wait until is in pending? the easiest diff wasn't finished ^^
  Use Grid level 4 and check spacing after it
  00:17:671 (2,3) - maybe unstack it? this stacks looks hard in easiest difficulty ^
  00:25:056 (5,6) - ^
  00:40:286 (4) - nc? why?
  00:47:671 (4) - ^
  01:18:594 (3,4) - unstack? fourbeat-stacks in normal? or this There's nothing wrong with it
  
  SPOILER

  
  01:41:671 (1) - maybe break? I want that effect while "wow fantastic baby" thingy
  01:44:440 (1) - nc?
  01:46:748 (4) - ^
  01:54:133 (4) - ^
  02:03:825 (4) - delete nc
  02:04:286 (1) - nc
  02:16:748 (1,2,3,4) - like in 01:18:594
  03:02:902 (1) - like in 01:41:671
  03:05:671 (5) - unstack?
  03:07:979 (4) - nc?
  03:10:748 (2) - ^
  03:11:671 (4,5) - unstack?
  03:15:363 (4) - nc?
  03:30:594 (1) - maybe delete? i think that 1\1 beat after looks hard in easiest difficulty

I really don't get your combo suggestions, about the others things didn't changed since you are modding this as if is the easiest diff, which is not.

[Dancing]

• 
  OD-1? ok
  Use Grid level 4 and check spacing after it
  00:16:056 (6) - nc?
  00:18:133 (5) - nc?
  00:28:979 (4,1) - place it closer Like I already said, this has been tested and is readable
  01:05:556 (5) - nc?
  01:08:671 (2) - ^
  01:26:209 (4,1) - place it closer
  01:39:017 (1) - 2k spinner? One more reason to do OD-1
  01:42:133 (2) - nc?
  02:38:440 (1) - why this slider is rotated? Because the change in the vocal tone
  02:47:440 (4,1) - place it closer
  03:11:671 (6) - nc?
  03:12:133 (1) - delete nc?
  
  Didn't understand the combo pattern you are trying to suggest either

Takos wrote:

As requested.

General

• 01:19:517 - Unnecessary green line removed

Sleeping

• Why not map till end ;.; It wasn't finished, but now is
  01:55:979 (1,1,2) - For these patterns, I think it will be easier to read for beginner if the 2nd NC was removed I made some changes to those

Walking

• 00:17:671 (2,3) - Add whistle at the end of the slider and 3? I wanted that first to be quiet, but i will consider add some whistles if I find a pattern I like
  00:25:056 (5,6) - ^
  00:55:979 (3) - Add whistle?
  01:17:671 (1,2,3) - ^
  02:08:440 (3,1) - 1 grid down? ok
  02:16:748 (1,2,3) - Add whistle? nope
  02:24:133 (1) - ^
  02:31:517 (6) - ^
  03:34:748 (1,2,3) - ^
  03:38:440 (1,2,3) - ^
  03:42:133 (1,2,3) - ^I don't like the whistles at those points

Dancing

• 00:07:517 (1) - Completely hidden under 00:05:671 (1) - so I suggest you to shift these up or down I'll will ask for some other opinions about this before considering changing it, because I personally think is ok, and I have seen players test this and doesn't seem confusing
  00:18:133 (5,6) - Add whistle somewhere here? Like I said, will add some whistles if i find a pattern I like
  00:21:825 (3,4) - ^
  00:22:748 (1) - Start this slider at 00:22:517 - and add note at 00:23:440 - ? Nice, I like it
  00:23:671 (1,1,1) - Remove NC? I keep it like this because of the reverses, I dont like how it looks all in the same combo
  00:25:979 (2) - NC following the vocals here
  00:27:594 (1) - Remove NC This one is to mark the anti-jump
  00:28:979 (4) - NC for this instead of 00:29:209 (1) - Like I said in previous mods
  00:55:979 (3) - Add whistle? nope
  01:17:671 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Add whistle somewhere here?
  01:24:594 (4,1) - 1 grid down, 1 grid right? ok
  01:26:209 (4) - NC this instead of 01:26:440 (1) - ^
  01:31:979 (4,1) - Hits the hp bar, move it down a bit? Moved down a bit
  01:43:517 (1) - The slider slightly hits the hp bar Is not that much
  02:04:748 (3) - 1 grid down ok
  02:16:748 (1,2,3,4) - Add whistles somewhere? No whistles in this part ><
  02:31:517 (1) - Add whistle?
  02:47:440 (4) - NC this instead of 02:46:056 (1) - ^
  03:34:748 (1,2,3) - Add whistle?
  03:38:440 (1,2,3) - ^
  03:42:133 (1,2,3) - ^

Nice map
Catchy rhythm haha