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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jeudi 10 août 2017 at 00:26:15

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Zoetrope
Source: AMNESIA
Tags: Akitoshi _83 pyroflayer borborygmos bor yaleufeu Kyuukai Linada Kin エウアル euaru アムネシア opening
BPM: 83
Filesize: 3747kb
Play Time: 01:28
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Image Akitoshi
Image Kin
Image bor
Image Kyuukai
Image Linada

Last edited by Realazy on , edited 47 times in total.
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00:28:138 - i want this note to be clickable for the sake there's a kick here, and you can delete 00:28:301 (4) - that one safely since there's no actual beat on this note, it will also make a nice break.
if you accept that (would be nice) remember fixing it everywhere there's this beat, like 00:29:279 (3,4) - 00:31:888 (3,4) - etc etc

01:12:975 (1) - this can be safley replaced by circles to catch the vocals here mate.

00:43:301 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - can you maybe do a clean star pattern here ?

01:00:258 (1,1) - you don't need ncs here since it's part of the same vocal pattern, just remove it safely imo.

01:03:111 - i don't hear any 1/4 here
01:13:464 (3) - ^


Linada
00:00:957 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - fix overlap.

00:47:866 (4) - replace this by 2 circle to follow correctly the vocals

00:49:171 (4,5,6,7) - the 1/4 are not so strong for a burst like this, how about making 2 kicksliders insted ?

00:50:638 (5,1) - swap ncs
00:53:899 (1) - remove nc

00:56:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why you do such small spacing streams for such big drums snares, you are using the same spacing then your stream previously i asked you to change to kicksliders zz

01:00:258 (1,1) - no need nc here since those are part of the same vocal pattern.

01:20:475 (1,1) - ok so this is really questionnable, first of all why sv change and nc on 01:20:475 (1) - ? and also 01:20:801 (1) - this is bad because first of all you can miss read the 3/4 and it doesn't give ANY emphasis to the hard finish+vocal on it.. rather changing this pattern tbh.

01:21:290 (2,1) - replace this by a 1/2 slider 01:21:453 (1) - hasn't got much impact...


Kyuukai
00:26:671 (3,2) - what the actual fuck is this? what are you even trying to follow you are skipping kicks here and ending slider on nothing, that's not good!
00:29:279 (3) - 00:32:703 (2) - 00:34:497 (3) - ^

00:28:627 (1) - same here don't end a reverse on such hard beat ... replace this like that
00:31:236 (1) - 00:33:845 (1) - ^

00:46:236 (8) - replace this by 2 circle to focus claps correctly

00:51:779 (9) - x192 y224 better structure

01:03:682 - better if this would've been clickable
01:04:008 - same why do you skip such vocals pls

01:05:475 (3,4) - don't need a mlg jump here replace this by 1/2 slider 01:05:638 (4) - hasn't got enough impact to be clickable.
01:06:942 (2,3) - ^ same replace to 1/2 slider
01:09:551 (2,3) - ^

01:11:997 (2) - wtf is this ? this is better there's nothing on 01:12:078 - this.

01:13:953 (5) - 2 circles for vocals
01:14:442 - skipping vocals again

01:19:986 (4,5) - 1/2 slider pls

tbh idk about this diff... rythmns are questionnable and structure feels messy..


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Sotarks wrote:

Kyuukai
00:26:671 (3,2) - what the actual fuck is this? what are you even trying to follow you are skipping kicks here and ending slider on nothing, that's not good!
00:29:279 (3) - 00:32:703 (2) - 00:34:497 (3) - ^

00:28:627 (1) - same here don't end a reverse on such hard beat ... replace this like that
00:31:236 (1) - 00:33:845 (1) - ^

00:46:236 (8) - replace this by 2 circle to focus claps correctly

00:51:779 (9) - x192 y224 better structure

01:03:682 - better if this would've been clickable
01:04:008 - same why do you skip such vocals pls

01:05:475 (3,4) - don't need a mlg jump here replace this by 1/2 slider 01:05:638 (4) - hasn't got enough impact to be clickable.
01:06:942 (2,3) - ^ same replace to 1/2 slider
01:09:551 (2,3) - ^

01:11:997 (2) - wtf is this ? this is better there's nothing on 01:12:078 - this.

01:13:953 (5) - 2 circles for vocals
01:14:442 - skipping vocals again

01:19:986 (4,5) - 1/2 slider pls

fixed all

tbh idk about this diff... rythmns are questionnable and structure feels messy.. idk about it, guess we'll w/e if I have to rework it or not


ty for modding !


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Code:
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Title:Zoetrope (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Zoetrope (TV Size)
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Realazy
Version:Kyuukai's Insane
Source:AMNESIA
Tags:bor yaleufeu Kyuukai Linada Kin エウアル euaru アムネシア opening
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Sotarks wrote:

Linada
00:00:957 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - fix overlap. fixed

00:47:866 (4) - replace this by 2 circle to follow correctly the vocals no

00:49:171 (4,5,6,7) - the 1/4 are not so strong for a burst like this, how about making 2 kicksliders insted ? i think its ok but if there are more complaint ill fix

00:50:638 (5,1) - swap ncs fi
00:53:899 (1) - remove nc xed

00:56:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why you do such small spacing streams for such big drums snares, you are using the same spacing then your stream previously i asked you to change to kicksliders zz imo this part of the song fit better with a static movement rathar than a large spacing, especially because claps

01:00:258 (1,1) - no need nc here since those are part of the same vocal pattern. okek

01:20:475 (1,1) - ok so this is really questionnable, first of all why sv change and nc on 01:20:475 (1) - ? and also 01:20:801 (1) - this is bad because first of all you can miss read the 3/4 and it doesn't give ANY emphasis to the hard finish+vocal on it.. rather changing this pattern tbh. changed to 3/4 slinder instead because it just fix the problem and it fit

01:21:290 (2,1) - replace this by a 1/2 slider 01:21:453 (1) - hasn't got much impact... just fixed NC pattenrs 8-)


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00:28:138 - i want this note to be clickable for the sake there's a kick here, and you can delete 00:28:301 (4) - that one safely since there's no actual beat on this note, it will also make a nice break.
if you accept that (would be nice) remember fixing it everywhere there's this beat, like 00:29:279 (3,4) - 00:31:888 (3,4) - etc etc this makes sense but there's a beat on 00:28:301 - and i believe mapping it on a sliderend is fine enough since the snare before is much stronger

01:12:975 (1) - this can be safley replaced by circles to catch the vocals here mate. this is fine imo, the slider starts on a stronger note so i can leave a simple vocal on its tail plus having a slider here lets you regain a bit of stamina after the stream

00:43:301 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - can you maybe do a clean star pattern here ? looks nice, done

01:00:258 (1,1) - you don't need ncs here since it's part of the same vocal pattern, just remove it safely imo. done

01:03:111 - i don't hear any 1/4 here alright, removed
01:13:464 (3) - ^ ^

gl


thank you!
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Don't really have anything to say, except for the beginning. 00:13:969 (2,3) - should be a 1/1 slider like all the others, because this way it doesn't stand out. Since it's a quiet and slow section, it shouldn't stand out.


kin's Hard
00:50:149 (3,4) - Shouldn't these be the same slider like 00:47:540 (3,4) - and 00:48:845 (7,8) -
00:51:453 (3,4) - Shouldn't this be 2 1/2 sliders to follow the pattern
01:00:258 (3,4,1) - Same distance snap but different time spacing?


bor's Insane
Don't you think you should wait until around 00:22 for the spinner, the vocals are still going and it can be mapped.
Otherwise, nice diff.


Kyuukai's Insane
01:10:692 (1,2,1) - awkward jump
01:04:008 (6) - Add NC to be consistent with 01:14:116 (1) -
01:27:812 (7) - maybe space this further away with 6 and 1 so people will know that it is a 1/1 gap, also to emphasize it more.


Linada's Extra
00:32:051 (4,1) - Why aren't these "barely stacked" like all the other 1/1 gaps
00:34:660 (4,1) - ^
most of 00:48 to 00:54 has too large spacing for a quiet part


Extra
Nice diff


remember to mod my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/600818

Nice mapset, good luck, and thanks in advance! :D
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MBmasher wrote:
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Don't really have anything to say, except for the beginning. 00:13:969 (2,3) - should be a 1/1 slider like all the others, because this way it doesn't stand out. Since it's a quiet and slow section, it shouldn't stand out. changed the rhythm a bit


Extra
Nice diff fixed thanks


Nice mapset, good luck, and thanks in advance! :D


thanks for the mod!
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MBmasher wrote:

Linada's Extra
00:32:051 (4,1) - Why aren't these "barely stacked" like all the other 1/1 gaps the whole map is built around overlaps
00:34:660 (4,1) - ^
most of 00:48 to 00:54 has too large spacing for a quiet part imo its ok
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Kyuukai's Insane
01:10:692 (1,2,1) - awkward jump
01:04:008 (6) - Add NC to be consistent with 01:14:116 (1) -
01:27:812 (7) - maybe space this further away with 6 and 1 so people will know that it is a 1/1 gap, also to emphasize it more.

fixed all
gya
Code:
osu file format v14

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Title:Zoetrope (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Zoetrope (TV Size)
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Realazy
Version:Kyuukai's Insane
Source:AMNESIA
Tags:pyroflayer bor yaleufeu Kyuukai Linada Kin エウアル euaru アムネシア opening
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Don't you think you should wait until around 00:22 for the spinner, the vocals are still going and it can be mapped.
Otherwise, nice diff. this would make sense, though I'm mapping the instrumentals in the intro so the spinner is based on those and to reflect the intensity buildup
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00:32:051 (4,1) - Why aren't these "barely stacked" like all the other 1/1 gaps the whole map is built around overlaps
00:34:660 (4,1) - ^


Hey I think you missed the point, what MBmasher was trying to say was that you normally have overlaps representing 1/1 gaps like 00:26:834 (4,1) - where you don't move during this gap. They found it was inconsistent 00:32:051 (4,1) - here and 00:34:660 (4,1) - here because for this 1/1 gap you don't have the overlap, instead you have something the size of a 1/2 gap here. The implied suggestion is to make the 1/1 gap at these points the same as the previous 1/1 gaps where you do not have movement because of the overlaps.
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Hey I think you missed the point, what MBmasher was trying to say was that you normally have overlaps representing 1/1 gaps like 00:26:834 (4,1) - where you don't move during this gap. They found it was inconsistent 00:32:051 (4,1) - here and 00:34:660 (4,1) - here because for this 1/1 gap you don't have the overlap, instead you have something the size of a 1/2 gap here. The implied suggestion is to make the 1/1 gap at these points the same as the previous 1/1 gaps where you do not have movement because of the overlaps.


Yes basically, sorry about not being clear.
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Hey I think you missed the point, what MBmasher was trying to say was that you normally have overlaps representing 1/1 gaps like 00:26:834 (4,1) - where you don't move during this gap. They found it was inconsistent 00:32:051 (4,1) - here and 00:34:660 (4,1) - here because for this 1/1 gap you don't have the overlap, instead you have something the size of a 1/2 gap here. The implied suggestion is to make the 1/1 gap at these points the same as the previous 1/1 gaps where you do not have movement because of the overlaps.


oh sorry i completelly missed the point :o

it was done on purpose, the first part starting at 00:26:019 (1) - i did the 1/1 gap + overlap on the last note, then when the melody reapeated itself at 00:31:236 (1) - i went doing my 1/1 gaps + overlaps on the previous note to add some diversity, i guess if that's a problem i could make it consistent with the first part if needed

i feel stupid now
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pyroflayer wrote:

Hey I think you missed the point, what MBmasher was trying to say was that you normally have overlaps representing 1/1 gaps like 00:26:834 (4,1) - where you don't move during this gap. They found it was inconsistent 00:32:051 (4,1) - here and 00:34:660 (4,1) - here because for this 1/1 gap you don't have the overlap, instead you have something the size of a 1/2 gap here. The implied suggestion is to make the 1/1 gap at these points the same as the previous 1/1 gaps where you do not have movement because of the overlaps.


oh sorry i completelly missed the point :o

it was done on purpose, the first part starting at 00:26:019 (1) - i did the 1/1 gap + overlap on the last note, then when the melody reapeated itself at 00:31:236 (1) - i went doing my 1/1 gaps + overlaps on the previous note to add some diversity, i guess if that's a problem i could make it consistent with the first part if needed

i feel stupid now


I think it creates a problem with cursor pace when you make your 1/1 gaps the same size as 1/2 gaps, this is because you move a certain speed for 1/2 rhythms and then halve that speed for these "disversified" 1/1 gaps.
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