yanaginagi - Zoetrope · forum

Realazy

Elite Mapper

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2017-04-13T22:27:05+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jeudi 10 août 2017 at 00:26:15

Artist: yanaginagi
Title: Zoetrope
Source: AMNESIA
Tags: Akitoshi _83 pyroflayer borborygmos bor yaleufeu Kyuukai Linada Kin エウアル euaru アムネシア opening
BPM: 83
Filesize: 3747kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

Akitoshi's Advanced (2,76 stars, 191 notes)
bor's Insane (4,24 stars, 262 notes)
Fragmented Memories (5,54 stars, 311 notes)
Kin's Hard (3,43 stars, 243 notes)
Kyuukai's Insane (4,56 stars, 270 notes)
Linada's Expert (5,3 stars, 330 notes)
Normal (1,91 stars, 116 notes)

Download: yanaginagi - Zoetrope
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Akitoshi

Kin

bor

Kyuukai

Linada

bg by 花邑まい

Last edited by Realazy 2019-06-14T12:26:54+00:00, edited 48 times in total.

Sotarks

3,524 posts

Joined May 2014

Sotarks 2017-04-16T10:57:42+00:00

[Extra]
00:28:138 - i want this note to be clickable for the sake there's a kick here, and you can delete 00:28:301 (4) - that one safely since there's no actual beat on this note, it will also make a nice break.
if you accept that (would be nice) remember fixing it everywhere there's this beat, like 00:29:279 (3,4) - 00:31:888 (3,4) - etc etc

01:12:975 (1) - this can be safley replaced by circles to catch the vocals here mate.

00:43:301 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - can you maybe do a clean star pattern here ?

01:00:258 (1,1) - you don't need ncs here since it's part of the same vocal pattern, just remove it safely imo.

01:03:111 - i don't hear any 1/4 here
01:13:464 (3) - ^

[Linada]
00:00:957 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - fix overlap.

00:47:866 (4) - replace this by 2 circle to follow correctly the vocals

00:49:171 (4,5,6,7) - the 1/4 are not so strong for a burst like this, how about making 2 kicksliders insted ?

00:50:638 (5,1) - swap ncs
00:53:899 (1) - remove nc

00:56:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why you do such small spacing streams for such big drums snares, you are using the same spacing then your stream previously i asked you to change to kicksliders zz

01:00:258 (1,1) - no need nc here since those are part of the same vocal pattern.

01:20:475 (1,1) - ok so this is really questionnable, first of all why sv change and nc on 01:20:475 (1) - ? and also 01:20:801 (1) - this is bad because first of all you can miss read the 3/4 and it doesn't give ANY emphasis to the hard finish+vocal on it.. rather changing this pattern tbh.

01:21:290 (2,1) - replace this by a 1/2 slider 01:21:453 (1) - hasn't got much impact...

[Kyuukai]
00:26:671 (3,2) - what the actual fuck is this? what are you even trying to follow you are skipping kicks here and ending slider on nothing, that's not good!
00:29:279 (3) - 00:32:703 (2) - 00:34:497 (3) - ^

00:28:627 (1) - same here don't end a reverse on such hard beat ... replace this like that
00:31:236 (1) - 00:33:845 (1) - ^

00:46:236 (8) - replace this by 2 circle to focus claps correctly

00:51:779 (9) - x192 y224 better structure

01:03:682 - better if this would've been clickable
01:04:008 - same why do you skip such vocals pls

01:05:475 (3,4) - don't need a mlg jump here replace this by 1/2 slider 01:05:638 (4) - hasn't got enough impact to be clickable.
01:06:942 (2,3) - ^ same replace to 1/2 slider
01:09:551 (2,3) - ^

01:11:997 (2) - wtf is this ? this is better there's nothing on 01:12:078 - this.

01:13:953 (5) - 2 circles for vocals
01:14:442 - skipping vocals again

01:19:986 (4,5) - 1/2 slider pls

tbh idk about this diff... rythmns are questionnable and structure feels messy..
[]
gl

Kyuukai

1,516 posts

Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 2017-04-16T13:11:52+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
[Kyuukai]
00:26:671 (3,2) - what the actual fuck is this? what are you even trying to follow you are skipping kicks here and ending slider on nothing, that's not good!
00:29:279 (3) - 00:32:703 (2) - 00:34:497 (3) - ^

00:28:627 (1) - same here don't end a reverse on such hard beat ... replace this like that
00:31:236 (1) - 00:33:845 (1) - ^

00:46:236 (8) - replace this by 2 circle to focus claps correctly

00:51:779 (9) - x192 y224 better structure

01:03:682 - better if this would've been clickable
01:04:008 - same why do you skip such vocals pls

01:05:475 (3,4) - don't need a mlg jump here replace this by 1/2 slider 01:05:638 (4) - hasn't got enough impact to be clickable.
01:06:942 (2,3) - ^ same replace to 1/2 slider
01:09:551 (2,3) - ^

01:11:997 (2) - wtf is this ? this is better there's nothing on 01:12:078 - this.

01:13:953 (5) - 2 circles for vocals
01:14:442 - skipping vocals again

01:19:986 (4,5) - 1/2 slider pls

fixed all

tbh idk about this diff... rythmns are questionnable and structure feels messy.. idk about it, guess we'll w/e if I have to rework it or not
[]
ty for modding !

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osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62450
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 2.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
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[Metadata]
Title:Zoetrope (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Zoetrope (TV Size)
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Realazy
Version:Kyuukai's Insane
Source:AMNESIA
Tags:bor yaleufeu Kyuukai Linada Kin エウアル euaru アムネシア opening
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BeatmapSetID:599195

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Linada

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Joined November 2014

Linada 2017-04-16T15:58:06+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
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00:47:866 (4) - replace this by 2 circle to follow correctly the vocals no

00:49:171 (4,5,6,7) - the 1/4 are not so strong for a burst like this, how about making 2 kicksliders insted ? i think its ok but if there are more complaint ill fix

00:50:638 (5,1) - swap ncs fi
00:53:899 (1) - remove nc xed

00:56:671 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - why you do such small spacing streams for such big drums snares, you are using the same spacing then your stream previously i asked you to change to kicksliders zz imo this part of the song fit better with a static movement rathar than a large spacing, especially because claps

01:00:258 (1,1) - no need nc here since those are part of the same vocal pattern. okek

01:20:475 (1,1) - ok so this is really questionnable, first of all why sv change and nc on 01:20:475 (1) - ? and also 01:20:801 (1) - this is bad because first of all you can miss read the 3/4 and it doesn't give ANY emphasis to the hard finish+vocal on it.. rather changing this pattern tbh. changed to 3/4 slinder instead because it just fix the problem and it fit

01:21:290 (2,1) - replace this by a 1/2 slider 01:21:453 (1) - hasn't got much impact... just fixed NC pattenrs

gl

my angel real

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Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2017-04-16T17:26:39+00:00

Sotarks wrote:
[Extra]
00:28:138 - i want this note to be clickable for the sake there's a kick here, and you can delete 00:28:301 (4) - that one safely since there's no actual beat on this note, it will also make a nice break.
if you accept that (would be nice) remember fixing it everywhere there's this beat, like 00:29:279 (3,4) - 00:31:888 (3,4) - etc etc this makes sense but there's a beat on 00:28:301 - and i believe mapping it on a sliderend is fine enough since the snare before is much stronger

01:12:975 (1) - this can be safley replaced by circles to catch the vocals here mate. this is fine imo, the slider starts on a stronger note so i can leave a simple vocal on its tail plus having a slider here lets you regain a bit of stamina after the stream

00:43:301 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - can you maybe do a clean star pattern here ? looks nice, done

01:00:258 (1,1) - you don't need ncs here since it's part of the same vocal pattern, just remove it safely imo. done

01:03:111 - i don't hear any 1/4 here alright, removed
01:13:464 (3) - ^ ^

gl

thank you!

anna apple

1,256 posts

Joined March 2014

anna apple 2017-04-18T07:26:17+00:00

pyroflayer to tag

name change xd

MBmasher

580 posts

Joined June 2014

MBmasher 2017-04-28T23:01:48+00:00

my m4m queue

Normal

Don't really have anything to say, except for the beginning. 00:13:969 (2,3) - should be a 1/1 slider like all the others, because this way it doesn't stand out. Since it's a quiet and slow section, it shouldn't stand out.

kin's Hard

00:50:149 (3,4) - Shouldn't these be the same slider like 00:47:540 (3,4) - and 00:48:845 (7,8) -
00:51:453 (3,4) - Shouldn't this be 2 1/2 sliders to follow the pattern
01:00:258 (3,4,1) - Same distance snap but different time spacing?

bor's Insane

Don't you think you should wait until around 00:22 for the spinner, the vocals are still going and it can be mapped.
Otherwise, nice diff.

Kyuukai's Insane

01:10:692 (1,2,1) - awkward jump
01:04:008 (6) - Add NC to be consistent with 01:14:116 (1) -
01:27:812 (7) - maybe space this further away with 6 and 1 so people will know that it is a 1/1 gap, also to emphasize it more.

Linada's Extra

00:32:051 (4,1) - Why aren't these "barely stacked" like all the other 1/1 gaps
00:34:660 (4,1) - ^
most of 00:48 to 00:54 has too large spacing for a quiet part

Extra

Nice diff

remember to mod my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/600818

Nice mapset, good luck, and thanks in advance!

Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2017-04-28T23:09:10+00:00

MBmasher wrote:
Normal
Don't really have anything to say, except for the beginning. 00:13:969 (2,3) - should be a 1/1 slider like all the others, because this way it doesn't stand out. Since it's a quiet and slow section, it shouldn't stand out. changed the rhythm a bit

Extra
Nice diff fixed thanks

Nice mapset, good luck, and thanks in advance!

thanks for the mod!

Linada

995 posts

Joined November 2014

Linada 2017-04-28T23:13:50+00:00

MBmasher wrote:
Linada's Extra
00:32:051 (4,1) - Why aren't these "barely stacked" like all the other 1/1 gaps the whole map is built around overlaps
00:34:660 (4,1) - ^
most of 00:48 to 00:54 has too large spacing for a quiet part imo its ok

Kyuukai

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Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 2017-04-29T00:55:58+00:00

MBmasher wrote:
Kyuukai's Insane
01:10:692 (1,2,1) - awkward jump
01:04:008 (6) - Add NC to be consistent with 01:14:116 (1) -
01:27:812 (7) - maybe space this further away with 6 and 1 so people will know that it is a 1/1 gap, also to emphasize it more.

fixed all

gya

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anna apple

1,256 posts

Joined March 2014

anna apple 2017-04-29T09:20:53+00:00

MBmasher wrote:
my m4m queue

Don't you think you should wait until around 00:22 for the spinner, the vocals are still going and it can be mapped.
Otherwise, nice diff. this would make sense, though I'm mapping the instrumentals in the intro so the spinner is based on those and to reflect the intensity buildup

anna apple

1,256 posts

Joined March 2014

anna apple 2017-04-29T10:30:00+00:00

Linada wrote:
MBmasher wrote:
Linada's Extra
00:32:051 (4,1) - Why aren't these "barely stacked" like all the other 1/1 gaps the whole map is built around overlaps
00:34:660 (4,1) - ^

Hey I think you missed the point, what MBmasher was trying to say was that you normally have overlaps representing 1/1 gaps like 00:26:834 (4,1) - where you don't move during this gap. They found it was inconsistent 00:32:051 (4,1) - here and 00:34:660 (4,1) - here because for this 1/1 gap you don't have the overlap, instead you have something the size of a 1/2 gap here. The implied suggestion is to make the 1/1 gap at these points the same as the previous 1/1 gaps where you do not have movement because of the overlaps.

MBmasher

580 posts

Joined June 2014

MBmasher 2017-04-29T10:46:34+00:00

pyroflayer wrote:
Hey I think you missed the point, what MBmasher was trying to say was that you normally have overlaps representing 1/1 gaps like 00:26:834 (4,1) - where you don't move during this gap. They found it was inconsistent 00:32:051 (4,1) - here and 00:34:660 (4,1) - here because for this 1/1 gap you don't have the overlap, instead you have something the size of a 1/2 gap here. The implied suggestion is to make the 1/1 gap at these points the same as the previous 1/1 gaps where you do not have movement because of the overlaps.

Yes basically, sorry about not being clear.

Linada

995 posts

Joined November 2014

Linada 2017-04-30T19:30:32+00:00

pyroflayer wrote:
Hey I think you missed the point, what MBmasher was trying to say was that you normally have overlaps representing 1/1 gaps like 00:26:834 (4,1) - where you don't move during this gap. They found it was inconsistent 00:32:051 (4,1) - here and 00:34:660 (4,1) - here because for this 1/1 gap you don't have the overlap, instead you have something the size of a 1/2 gap here. The implied suggestion is to make the 1/1 gap at these points the same as the previous 1/1 gaps where you do not have movement because of the overlaps.

oh sorry i completelly missed the point

it was done on purpose, the first part starting at 00:26:019 (1) - i did the 1/1 gap + overlap on the last note, then when the melody reapeated itself at 00:31:236 (1) - i went doing my 1/1 gaps + overlaps on the previous note to add some diversity, i guess if that's a problem i could make it consistent with the first part if needed

i feel stupid now

anna apple

1,256 posts

Joined March 2014

anna apple 2017-04-30T19:51:01+00:00

Linada wrote:
pyroflayer wrote:
Hey I think you missed the point, what MBmasher was trying to say was that you normally have overlaps representing 1/1 gaps like 00:26:834 (4,1) - where you don't move during this gap. They found it was inconsistent 00:32:051 (4,1) - here and 00:34:660 (4,1) - here because for this 1/1 gap you don't have the overlap, instead you have something the size of a 1/2 gap here. The implied suggestion is to make the 1/1 gap at these points the same as the previous 1/1 gaps where you do not have movement because of the overlaps.
oh sorry i completelly missed the point

it was done on purpose, the first part starting at 00:26:019 (1) - i did the 1/1 gap + overlap on the last note, then when the melody reapeated itself at 00:31:236 (1) - i went doing my 1/1 gaps + overlaps on the previous note to add some diversity, i guess if that's a problem i could make it consistent with the first part if needed

i feel stupid now

I think it creates a problem with cursor pace when you make your 1/1 gaps the same size as 1/2 gaps, this is because you move a certain speed for 1/2 rhythms and then halve that speed for these "disversified" 1/1 gaps.

Linada

995 posts

Joined November 2014

Linada 2017-04-30T19:55:44+00:00

well i guess you're right

fixed

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Pachiru

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Pachiru 2017-04-30T23:56:45+00:00

[Normal]

00:53:084 (2,3,4) - Je sais pas si c'est une bonne idée de focus sur les vocals ici, parce que ça a l'air d'être un peu "random" si on peut dire ça comme ça en comparant les autres parties de la musiques qui sont focus sur le beat. Sachant que tu reste focus sur du 1/1 pendant toute la partie, je pense que tu devrais garder ce pattern au moins pour cette partie.
01:03:845 (3,1) - Pourquoi sur ces deux sliders, tu ignores les maps en 2/1 et pas en 1/1, c'est quand même une normal diff, sachant que le patterning de la map est pas trop compliqué, pourquoi il faudrait encore plus le simplifier, surtout qu'ici c'est pas le meilleur endroit pour le simplifier selon moi.
01:26:018 (1) - Ca touche pas avec l'HP bar ce slider?

[Hard]
1. 00:10:354 - Je trouve que ça fait bizarre d'ignorer ce vocal, sachant que tu mappes sur tout les vocals dans les parties d'avant
2. 01:21:290 (2,3,1) - Le flow est un peu chelou ici, surtout entre le 01:21:290 (2,3) - essaie de faire un truc avec un angle moins droit pour que ça soit plus simple a jouer
3. Pour revenir au début, pour quelques parties j'ai remarqué que tu utilisais pas un spacing constant, mais je pense que ce serait bien de le faire, et ça rendrait un style plus propre a la part je pense, genre par exemple le spacing ici est pas constant: 00:18:868 (2) - (en général tu utilise du x0.80, mais la c'est du x0.83 et x0.77, donc l'écart est assez élevé). Y'en a d'autres, mais je te laisse check par toi même
  
  [Insane bor]
  1. 00:00:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to diversify this pattern, like for instance on each new combos, alternate the pattern side
  2. 00:12:161 (6) - I'm not sure that's a good idea to use a pattern that end on a 1/8 rhythm pattern
  3. 00:13:969 (4) - I think that this slider is weird, because you're ignoring so much vocals that you used to map before in the intro, i think that this slider should be changed in something more "detailed"
  4. 00:42:160 (2,1) - The flow here might be a bit rework, because it's pretty not comfortable to play
  5. 00:45:584 (1) - Why the spacing is so low compared to the rest?
  6. 01:04:008 (1,2) - The flow here might be quite strange imo, the fact that the slider is straight with a reverse angle is pretty strange and it doesn't play very well
  7. 01:10:855 (5,7) - Try to keep a constant spacing with this pattern especially make a constant spacing between those two to fit with the patterning
  8. 01:20:638 (2,3,4,5) - Nerf this part, because its very hard to play, especially with a enormous spacing with these notes: 01:20:638 (2,3) - that is very bigger compared to the rest of the song, plus the direction changes are very hard to fit with the previous bigger spacing
  9. To finish my mod on your diff, I would like to tell you my pov of this diff. Because it got an very interesting concept, because high CS, a lot of SV changes, and an original mapping style that would get close UC's one, and that's pretty nice. Buuuuut there is one point I would to discuss with you, is the rhythm use, for instance sometimes you use clicking point on 1/2 beats and I don't think that it fit well. I'll take for exemple this pattern 00:47:377 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - you miss a lot of beats that deserve to be mapped. (I prefer this part 00:52:105 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - because you stay focus on the vocals, while also respecting the beat, so it fit pretty well.) Apart from that, the diff is pretty neat~

Realazy

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Realazy 2017-05-01T01:02:52+00:00

all fix pour ma part, merci!

Pachiru

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Pachiru 2017-05-01T11:22:52+00:00

Je voulais mod le full set mais j'ai eu mon pc qui a die pendant le mod, obligé c'est parce qu'il y avait une diff de ylf

Realazy

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Realazy 2017-05-01T12:23:37+00:00

v'est pour pas te faire de mal qu'il a crash

anna apple

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anna apple 2017-05-01T22:55:30+00:00

Pachiru wrote:
[Insane bor]
00:00:957 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try to diversify this pattern, like for instance on each new combos, alternate the pattern side it switches sides when the concert bass comes in, and the new combo's follow phrases
00:12:161 (6) - I'm not sure that's a good idea to use a pattern that end on a 1/8 rhythm pattern I wanted to extend this slider because I wanted to compliment the vocal at this point, I could only do 1/8 extension because this song is in 1/4 beat divisor so to keep this consistent i halve it instead of using 1/6
00:13:969 (4) - I think that this slider is weird, because you're ignoring so much vocals that you used to map before in the intro, i think that this slider should be changed in something more "detailed" Its rather coincidence you thinkn I'm following vocals when I'm much more focused on the instrumentals in this intro. Though I used this slider to compliment the high pitched strong vocal slurs with a long hold and slow movement (slow movement is kind of a theme for this intro)
00:42:160 (2,1) - The flow here might be a bit rework, because it's pretty not comfortable to play This is pretty comfortable to play for me.
00:45:584 (1) - Why the spacing is so low compared to the rest? This was intended on contrasting spacing for emphasis on the snare sounds, its also low so the snare sound at the end of this slider is felt more than if the spacing was higher, if necessary I can increase this spacing slightly.
01:04:008 (1,2) - The flow here might be quite strange imo, the fact that the slider is straight with a reverse angle is pretty strange and it doesn't play very well It plays very well for me
01:10:855 (5,7) - Try to keep a constant spacing with this pattern especially make a constant spacing between those two to fit with the patterning There is constant spacing here, just look at this pattern in pairs of two, which is to empahsis the snare, this pattern is also symmetrical,
not really sure what you have a problem here.
01:20:638 (2,3,4,5) - Nerf this part, because its very hard to play, especially with a enormous spacing with these notes: 01:20:638 (2,3) - that is very bigger compared to the rest of the song, plus the direction changes are very hard to fit with the previous bigger spacing This was intended to be difficult because of the climax-ish part with all the cymbal crashes which I mapped with really slow 1/2 sliders, i believe this is more impactful given the set up you described.
To finish my mod on your diff, I would like to tell you my pov of this diff. Because it got an very interesting concept, because high CS, a lot of SV changes, and an original mapping style that would get close UC's one, and that's pretty nice. Buuuuut there is one point I would to discuss with you, is the rhythm use, for instance sometimes you use clicking point on 1/2 beats and I don't think that it fit well. I'll take for exemple this pattern 00:47:377 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - you miss a lot of beats that deserve to be mapped. (I prefer this part 00:52:105 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - because you stay focus on the vocals, while also respecting the beat, so it fit pretty well.) Apart from that, the diff is pretty neat~ this difficulty was a use of forced motion to emphasis strong beats. this is why there are sv changes like you see.
Thanks for your thoughts, though I disagree, I'm very much different from UC. his mapping is better

@realazy hey uh, can I use my hitsounding? (cuz rn its not using the same hitsound samples I used from my diff, which mixed some custom lines SC1(which I think you made SC2?) and default ones S

Realazy

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Realazy 2017-05-03T11:32:28+00:00

uhh i only remember swapping your s:c1 lines for s:c2 since i added your custom samples so your hitsounds should remain the same? though you can definitely use your own hs if you want to

anna apple

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anna apple 2017-05-04T00:59:31+00:00

what happened is all the points are now SC2 lol

Jean-Michel Jr

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Joined May 2014

Jean-Michel Jr 2017-05-05T18:23:14+00:00

Hi

bad mod

[General]

You can have your beatmap weigh 1,5 Mb less by switching the background from .png to .jpeg

[Kin's Hard]

00:46:562 (5,6,1) - The two notes are overlapping with the slider, but not in the same way ; I think it would be nice to move the slider a bit to the left so that its head is at an equal distance from the two notes

[bor's Insane]

Any reason why hitsounds are higher in the first 6 seconds ? I think they would be fine at 35% volume too

00:29:605 (4) - The drums go silent on the white tick here, making the slider finish on a stronger sound than the one it starts with. I think replacing 00:29:442 (3) - with a 1/2 slider, and moving 00:29:932 (1) - to 00:29:769 - + add a reverse would fit the song better.

01:25:529 (6) - Maybe place this a bit further from the triple, since you did it everywhere else in the outro ?

[Kyuukai's Insane]

00:18:306 (1,1) - Perhaps you can try to blanket the end of the slider a little bit better https://puu.sh/vvKtI/396053dd4b.jpg

00:16:860 (3) - Maybe you can put this slider on 00:16:679 - instead, to follow the vocals like in every other diff

00:44:932 (3,4) - fix blanket

01:08:736 (5,2) - These two sliders are different, shouldn't they be the same ?

01:14:116 (1,2) - This is not really pretty, maybe it would be better if they were a bit tiltled ?

I don't really understand the drum hitsounds placements, but my opinion doesn't really matter for such things I think.

[Linada's Extra]

00:28:627 (1,2) - I guess this blanket could be improved ? And maybe 00:28:627 (1) - would be better on x:220 y:189, so that it looks visually the same between 00:28:627 (1,4,1) -

00:48:518 (2,4) - Not stacked well

rly kool

[Extra]

00:02:041 (2,1,2) - Could stack these

01:26:182 (2,3,4) - The slider isn't well-aligned with the triple like you did here 01:26:671 (2,3,4) -

tain je trouve rien ça m'énerve

I'm sorry I took so long, and in the end I barely helped for anything...

Nice map tho

Good luck !

Linada

995 posts

Joined November 2014

Linada 2017-05-05T19:38:35+00:00

fixed all

thanks for mod

azeeresgvsdf

osu file format v14

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Title:Zoetrope (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Zoetrope (TV Size)
Artist:yanaginagi
ArtistUnicode:やなぎなぎ
Creator:Realazy
Version:Linada's Extra
Source:AMNESIA
Tags:pyroflayer bor yaleufeu Kyuukai Linada Kin エウアル euaru アムネシア opening
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anna apple

1,256 posts

Joined March 2014

anna apple 2017-05-06T06:58:07+00:00

Jean-Michel Jr wrote:
Hi FUK U, PUTTING MODS IN BOX!

[bor's Insane]

00:29:605 (4) - The drums go silent on the white tick here, making the slider finish on a stronger sound than the one it starts with. I think replacing 00:29:442 (3) - with a 1/2 slider, and moving 00:29:932 (1) - to 00:29:769 - + add a reverse would fit the song better. there are sounds on the white tick of the hi hat, plus it has emphasis because of the SV change

01:25:529 (6) - Maybe place this a bit further from the triple, since you did it everywhere else in the outro ? spacing for this last bit and movement is based around the cymbal crashes, so that's why the triple is an extension of the slider.

Good luck !

I mean it would be easier to just change the timing point in the editor than dropping this in so d

https://bor.s-ul.eu/LLTQ9vNK

Kyuukai

1,516 posts

Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 2017-05-06T11:01:54+00:00

Jean-Michel Jr wrote:
[Kyuukai's Insane]

00:18:306 (1,1) - Perhaps you can try to blanket the end of the slider a little bit better https://puu.sh/vvKtI/396053dd4b.jpg done

00:16:860 (3) - Maybe you can put this slider on 00:16:679 - instead, to follow the vocals like in every other diff I want to keep the 1/2 rhythm consistancy right here

00:44:932 (3,4) - fix blanket done

01:08:736 (5,2) - These two sliders are different, shouldn't they be the same ? They are the same lol

01:14:116 (1,2) - This is not really pretty, maybe it would be better if they were a bit tiltled ? Changed it

I don't really understand the drum hitsounds placements, but my opinion doesn't really matter for such things I think. blame Realazy

yanaginagi is bae

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Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2017-05-06T15:06:49+00:00

all fixed, thanks!
+ added borborygmos to tags

Kyuukai

1,516 posts

Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 2017-05-08T14:04:56+00:00

updated some things on my diff

laazeazeza

osu file format v14

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267,273,44279,6,0,P|339:287|426:211,1,160,4|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
431,154,44768,1,0,0:2:0:0:
329,229,44932,2,0,P|347:294|431:321,1,160,8|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
409,243,45421,1,8,1:2:0:0:
244,282,45584,2,0,L|238:361,2,80,0|8|0,0:2|1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
188,213,46073,1,0,0:2:0:0:
188,213,46154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,213,46236,1,0,0:0:0:0:
82,128,46399,1,0,0:0:0:0:
226,128,46562,1,8,1:2:0:0:
143,291,46725,1,8,1:2:0:0:
82,128,46888,6,0,L|93:34,1,68.0000012969971,4|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
162,22,47214,2,0,L|256:33,1,68.0000012969971,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
292,81,47540,2,0,L|359:73,1,68.0000012969971,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
427,27,47866,1,0,1:2:0:0:
487,81,48029,1,0,0:2:0:0:
508,159,48192,2,0,P|496:239|437:286,1,136.000002593994,0|0,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
389,320,48682,1,0,0:2:0:0:
323,271,48845,2,0,L|237:277,1,68.0000012969971,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
225,351,49171,2,0,L|310:357,1,68.0000012969971,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
394,232,49497,6,0,P|397:158|389:92,1,136.000002593994,4|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
334,37,49986,1,0,0:2:0:0:
261,74,50149,2,0,L|174:58,2,68.0000012969971,0|0|0,1:2|0:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
317,132,50638,1,0,0:2:0:0:
128,214,50801,2,0,L|119:69,1,136.000002593994,0|0,0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
225,148,51290,1,0,0:2:0:0:
119,78,51453,1,0,1:2:0:0:
261,74,51616,1,0,0:2:0:0:
192,224,51779,1,0,1:2:0:0:
190,40,51942,1,0,0:2:0:0:
30,181,52105,6,0,L|44:265,1,68.0000012969971,4|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
116,281,52432,2,0,L|127:213,1,68.0000012969971,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
200,249,52758,2,0,P|262:260|337:247,1,136.000002593994,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
402,204,53247,1,0,0:2:0:0:
423,125,53410,2,0,P|427:78|412:32,2,68.0000012969971,4|0|0,1:2|0:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
344,146,53899,1,0,0:2:0:0:
280,94,54062,2,0,P|246:89|212:93,1,68.0000012969971,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
151,147,54388,2,0,P|117:151|83:147,1,68.0000012969971,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
247,194,54714,6,0,L|242:304,1,80,12|0,1:2|3:2,0:0:0:0:
380,334,55040,1,0,0:2:0:0:
380,334,55122,1,0,0:2:0:0:
380,334,55203,2,0,L|270:329,1,80,8|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
463,286,55529,1,0,0:2:0:0:
463,286,55692,6,0,L|468:176,1,80,8|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
340,66,56018,2,0,L|343:145,1,80,8|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
476,277,56345,2,0,L|481:167,1,80,8|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
342,145,56671,2,0,L|346:225,1,80,8|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
346,225,56915,1,0,0:2:0:0:
347,225,56997,1,0,0:2:0:0:
233,161,57160,1,0,0:2:0:0:
161,244,57323,6,0,L|87:247,2,60.0000022888184,2|0|0,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
228,303,57812,1,0,0:2:0:0:
143,332,57975,2,0,L|69:335,2,60.0000022888184,2|0|0,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
228,303,58464,1,0,0:2:0:0:
312,332,58627,2,0,L|386:335,2,60.0000022888184,2|0|0,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
228,303,59116,1,0,0:2:0:0:
289,243,59279,2,0,L|348:245,2,60.0000022888184,2|0|0,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
228,303,59768,1,0,0:2:0:0:
101,246,59932,5,8,1:2:0:0:
235,168,60095,1,8,1:2:0:0:
228,303,60258,1,8,1:2:0:0:
135,152,60421,1,8,1:2:0:0:
377,152,60910,5,8,1:2:0:0:
284,303,61073,1,8,1:2:0:0:
277,168,61236,1,8,1:2:0:0:
411,246,61399,1,8,1:2:0:0:
256,64,61888,5,8,1:2:0:0:
256,64,61970,1,0,1:2:0:0:
256,64,62051,1,0,0:2:0:0:
321,122,62214,2,0,P|367:122|417:90,1,80,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62540,6,0,L|256:288,2,80,12|0|8,1:2|0:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
191,122,63029,1,0,0:2:0:0:
191,122,63192,2,0,P|145:122|95:90,1,80,0|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
63,180,63518,1,0,0:0:0:0:
63,180,63682,2,0,P|48:216|50:256,1,80,8|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
165,334,64008,6,0,P|205:337|242:322,1,80,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
140,178,64334,2,0,P|101:170|63:180,1,80,0|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
166,335,64660,2,0,P|175:289|161:245,1,80,0|8,0:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
82,295,64986,1,0,1:2:0:0:
232,190,65149,5,0,1:2:0:0:
337,289,65312,1,0,0:2:0:0:
232,190,65475,1,8,1:2:0:0:
257,288,65638,2,0,P|300:292|346:286,1,80,8|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
284,135,65964,1,0,0:2:0:0:
406,237,66127,2,0,P|449:241|495:235,1,80,8|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
290,56,66453,6,0,L|277:234,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
175,276,66942,2,0,L|183:174,1,80
295,315,67268,1,0,0:2:0:0:
158,365,67432,1,8,1:2:0:0:
16,292,67595,1,8,1:2:0:0:
16,292,67676,1,8,1:2:0:0:
16,292,67758,6,0,P|43:220|26:132,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
90,67,68247,1,0,0:2:0:0:
143,174,68410,1,0,0:2:0:0:
29,139,68573,1,0,0:2:0:0:
179,88,68736,2,0,P|218:85|258:88,1,80,8|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
371,212,69062,6,0,B|323:156|323:156|357:118|350:76,1,160,0|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
258,88,69551,2,0,P|218:84|179:88,1,80,8|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
109,171,69877,1,0,0:2:0:0:
259,208,70040,2,0,P|256:250|246:293,1,80,8|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
171,351,70366,5,8,1:2:0:0:
255,182,70529,1,0,0:2:0:0:
352,293,70692,5,8,1:2:0:0:
258,158,70855,1,0,0:2:0:0:
106,221,71018,5,8,1:2:0:0:
254,351,71182,1,0,0:2:0:0:
352,193,71345,5,8,1:2:0:0:
179,266,71508,1,0,0:2:0:0:
416,242,71671,6,0,P|428:169|416:143,1,80,4|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
375,90,71997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,180,72160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,158,72241,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,136,72323,1,8,0:0:0:0:
366,114,72404,1,8,0:0:0:0:
375,90,72486,1,8,0:0:0:0:
343,66,72567,1,8,0:0:0:0:
307,50,72649,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,42,72730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,42,72812,1,8,0:0:0:0:
77,55,72975,6,0,P|65:93|66:132,1,80,4|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
145,223,73301,1,8,1:2:0:0:
184,111,73464,1,0,0:2:0:0:
53,224,73627,2,0,L|69:309,1,80,0|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
215,339,73953,1,0,0:0:0:0:
322,238,74116,6,0,L|223:230,1,80
386,189,74442,2,0,P|402:231|397:275,1,80,0|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
466,178,74768,2,0,P|464:138|479:101,1,80,0|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
413,54,75095,2,0,P|373:52|336:67,1,80,0|8,0:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
386,189,75421,1,8,1:2:0:0:
248,87,75584,6,0,P|166:71|83:92,1,160,0|8,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
52,231,76073,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,182,76236,1,0,0:2:0:0:
28,147,76399,1,0,0:2:0:0:
137,275,76562,2,0,P|175:282|220:274,1,80,8|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
352,164,76888,6,0,P|332:221|385:310,1,160,0|8,0:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
481,330,77377,1,0,0:2:0:0:
426,223,77540,1,0,0:2:0:0:
292,316,77703,1,0,0:2:0:0:
413,380,77866,1,8,1:2:0:0:
321,215,78029,1,8,1:2:0:0:
321,215,78111,1,8,1:2:0:0:
321,215,78192,6,0,L|210:213,1,80,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
139,321,78518,2,0,L|250:319,1,80,10|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
75,271,78845,2,0,P|59:310|68:360,1,80,0|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
155,235,79171,2,0,P|158:195|142:159,1,80,8|2,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
85,84,79497,5,2,0:2:0:0:
51,181,79660,1,0,0:2:0:0:
234,137,79823,1,10,0:2:0:0:
164,71,79986,2,0,L|82:84,1,80
234,137,80312,1,0,0:2:0:0:
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300,192,81290,6,0,P|368:229|439:198,1,160,8|0,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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436,286,81942,1,0,0:2:0:0:
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258,342,82432,2,0,P|266:303|260:264,1,80,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
108,300,82758,2,0,P|147:308|187:302,1,80,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
150,149,83084,2,0,P|142:188|149:228,1,80,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
236,84,83410,6,0,L|319:73,1,80,8|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
450,159,83736,2,0,L|371:149,1,80,8|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
234,60,84062,6,0,L|326:64,1,80,8|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
452,183,84388,2,0,L|368:156,1,80,8|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
236,252,84714,5,8,1:2:0:0:
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350,290,85040,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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331,211,85366,1,8,1:2:0:0:
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236,252,85692,1,8,1:2:0:0:
375,158,85855,1,0,1:2:0:0:
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174,169,86508,2,0,P|187:207|193:247,1,80,12|0,1:2|1:2,0:0:0:0:
65,318,86834,1,0,1:2:0:0:
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160,32,88464,1,12,1:2:0:0:

Haruto

1,815 posts

Joined December 2013

Haruto 2017-05-23T01:22:00+00:00

Hi Im bored and i lied, i have finished all of my exams so i have nothing left to study on school. Which means i dont need to go to school for now B)

Bonjour! M4M from your queue

General

The Background could be resized to 1920x1080 to follow the new RC rule/guideline regarding BG. Its fine if its not resized anyway but would be better so Full HD resolution Users could see the BG without any pixel broke or smth.
TL;DR, heres the Resized BG of it http://haruto.s-ul.eu/euDPSbej. High Quality, bigger resolution and smaller file size than what you have currently

Extra

00:03:848 (1,2) - These slider are completely overlapped. I mean, (1) overlaps (2) and it kinda hard to notice, same stuff happens on appleeaterx's Sayonara dake ga jinsei da map. A BN wanted him to change it because the sliders are completely overlapped. I would say, 00:05:294 (2) - moving this to 260|137 would be better so (2) wont be completely overlapped with (1).
00:08:908 (3,1) - Can this have a larger spacing? So it will be consistent with what you did before on 00:06:378 (3,1) - this part. Use the same spacing as 00:06:378 (3,1) - is also fine but, your choice.
00:10:354 (3) - This slider has too many grey nodes in it, not really an issue but some of it could be lessen imo
Example
00:26:997 - This sounds overmapped imo. There is no sound in it, although if you said there is. It will be just weird to map it because the sound isnt really loud. Maybe the rhythm could be changed here with something like this.
Ex 1

Where you will remove 00:26:997 (5) - this
Ex 2
or try this
00:27:323 (5,1) - Swap NC? kinda inconsistent with what you did on 00:28:464 (5,1) -
00:27:812 (2,3) - Its kinda weird how a drum sound (00:27:975 - ) is stacked instead of making it spaced. Its actually fine but its better if you made them a jump rather than stacked.
00:29:605 (4,5) - CTRL+G them manually? So the flow from 00:29:279 (3) - would be like, wavy. Which is pretty cool
00:45:910 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - Can these have the equal space gap? What i mean is the gap between objects. Try moving 00:46:399 (2) - this to 437|366, 00:46:562 (3) - to 391|160 and 00:46:725 (4) - to 512|329. That way, the space gap between two jumps would look neat and consistent.
00:47:540 (3,1) - Emphasize the vocal at 00:48:029 - maybe?
00:49:497 (1,2,3,4) - Triangle Appreciation Team here. This triangle isnt imperfect B(
Try this one instead
move 00:49:823 (2) - to 438|296, (3) to 358|338 and (4) to 442|205. or, if you want a triangle with smaller spacing. Like this
. Just copy this code xD
```
326,183,49497,6,0,P|335:219|362:247,1,77.3500014753342,4|0,1:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
428,297,49823,1,0,1:2:0:0:
352,329,49986,1,0,1:2:0:0:
439,215,50149,2,0,P|450:178|446:140,1,77.3500014753342,0|0,1:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
```
00:50:475 (5,1) - Emphasize this vocal as well? Just like what i've suggested on 00:47:540 (3,1) -
00:55:203 (1) - Hmm, you probably will say "Unnecessary" here but. Would be nice if you added a NC here because the current combo'ing makes stuff goes to 10, which is unusual :d
00:56:834 (2,4,5) - add clap maybe?
01:02:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm, the flow here isnt as good as how you have right now. I would say the problem is because where 01:02:866 (3) - placed.
and how 01:03:192 (5) - directs. Try placing (3) to 455|0 and ctrl+h (5). Would flow pretty good imo.
01:10:366 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Big PP
01:21:779 (6) - Add finish here? i heard a cymbal sound which would be nice if added imo. Same goes to this 01:23:084 (4) - and the other parts as well
01:28:138 (1,2,3) - This illuminati ain't perfect at all B). Try moving (3) to 437|254. Would look better for the whole triangle.

I'll mod other diffs as soon as possible.
[]
Good luck o/

Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2017-05-23T12:11:00+00:00

Haruto wrote:
Hi Im bored and i lied, i have finished all of my exams so i have nothing left to study on school. Which means i dont need to go to school for now B) cheers!
hopefully they went well :^)

Bonjour! M4M from your queue halo

General
The Background could be resized to 1920x1080 to follow the new RC rule/guideline regarding BG. Its fine if its not resized anyway but would be better so Full HD resolution Users could see the BG without any pixel broke or smth.
TL;DR, heres the Resized BG of it http://haruto.s-ul.eu/euDPSbej. High Quality, bigger resolution and smaller file size than what you have currently thanks a lot, appreciate it
Extra
00:03:848 (1,2) - These slider are completely overlapped. I mean, (1) overlaps (2) and it kinda hard to notice, same stuff happens on appleeaterx's Sayonara dake ga jinsei da map. A BN wanted him to change it because the sliders are completely overlapped. I would say, 00:05:294 (2) - moving this to 260|137 would be better so (2) wont be completely overlapped with (1). alright, fixed
00:08:908 (3,1) - Can this have a larger spacing? So it will be consistent with what you did before on 00:06:378 (3,1) - this part. Use the same spacing as 00:06:378 (3,1) - is also fine but, your choice. ehh i want to emphasize the percussions in the background for the first one which aren't there on that pattern you linked
00:10:354 (3) - This slider has too many grey nodes in it, not really an issue but some of it could be lessen imo but that's what makes it so T H I C C
00:26:997 - This sounds overmapped imo. There is no sound in it, although if you said there is. It will be just weird to map it because the sound isnt really loud. Maybe the rhythm could be changed here with something like this. alright got enough complaints about it, changed to your second suggestion
00:27:323 (5,1) - Swap NC? kinda inconsistent with what you did on 00:28:464 (5,1) - the sound on the downbeat here isn't as strong as the one on the red tick so i'd rather NC that
00:27:812 (2,3) - Its kinda weird how a drum sound (00:27:975 - ) is stacked instead of making it spaced. Its actually fine but its better if you made them a jump rather than stacked. alright did a thing
00:29:605 (4,5) - CTRL+G them manually? So the flow from 00:29:279 (3) - would be like, wavy. Which is pretty cool would've done that but it's not really relevant now since i changed the rhythm here
00:45:910 (6,1,2,3,4,1) - Can these have the equal space gap? What i mean is the gap between objects. Try moving 00:46:399 (2) - this to 437|366, 00:46:562 (3) - to 391|160 and 00:46:725 (4) - to 512|329. That way, the space gap between two jumps would look neat and consistent. that's what i was aiming for but i guess i failed, fixed though
00:47:540 (3,1) - Emphasize the vocal at 00:48:029 - maybe? alright changed the pattern a bit
00:49:497 (1,2,3,4) - Triangle Appreciation Team here. This triangle isnt imperfect B( thank mr TAT
00:50:475 (5,1) - Emphasize this vocal as well? Just like what i've suggested on 00:47:540 (3,1) - did
00:55:203 (1) - Hmm, you probably will say "Unnecessary" here but. Would be nice if you added a NC here because the current combo'ing makes stuff goes to 10, which is unusual :d doesn't hurt to add it I guess
00:56:834 (2,4,5) - add clap maybe? DRUM CLAPS 8) actually i made it a bit more spicy here
01:02:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - Hmm, the flow here isnt as good as how you have right now. I would say the problem is because where 01:02:866 (3) - placed.
and how 01:03:192 (5) - directs. Try placing (3) to 455|0 and ctrl+h (5). Would flow pretty good imo. mm i did move 3 but i didn't change 5 because i prefer how it looks that way and it's kinda minor
01:10:366 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Big PP thanks i learned from the big pp master Alheak
01:21:779 (6) - Add finish here? i heard a cymbal sound which would be nice if added imo. Same goes to this 01:23:084 (4) - and the other parts as well yeah it's audible but i don't really like how a finish sounds here so :<
01:28:138 (1,2,3) - This illuminati ain't perfect at all B). Try moving (3) to 437|254. Would look better for the whole triangle. thank mr TAT

I'll mod other diffs as soon as possible. take your time 8)
[]
Good luck o/

thanks for modding!

Seni

715 posts

Joined August 2014

Seni 2017-05-24T15:40:46+00:00

m4m

Zoetrope

00:00:957 (1) - and 00:03:848 (1) - are the only instance where you follow the background rhythm over the vocals, you should probably follow vocals here the same way you do later on for consistency
00:12:161 (4,1) - Move the 4 down a bit to make it a blanket a bit better
Some of the red points during the first spinner are redundant since every diff has a spinner here
Honestly NCing 00:27:160 (5) - would really help readability since 00:27:160 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - feels separate from 00:26:019 (1,2,3,4) -
00:29:769 (4) - by the way it sounds 2 circles would fit much better here imo
00:32:051 (4) - why use filler rhythm here when you don't use it during 00:29:279 (3), 00:26:834 (4) or 00:34:497 (3)
00:54:714 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - imo this part feels really unstructured since all of the kicksliders point in seemingly random directions. I suggest you use some mirroring and copy pasting to make them more coherent
01:18:518 (2) - remove whistle

Linada

01:20:801 (1,1) - Imo it's much better to NC these two and not 01:21:127 (1,1) - cause then NC will land on important vocals and 01:20:801 (1,2,1) - are grouped as 3 xd
shit diff just delete

Kyuukai's Insane

00:18:306 (1) - xd this is like an alien slider compared to all the other designs in the map
01:12:486 (7) - Maybe NC this to help with readability since 6 and 7 are more closely spaced than the other circles and it lands on vocals

bor's Insane

You follow the song's clap pattern the whole time so maybe clap on 01:03:355 (4) - just to make it consistent throughout
00:49:008 (3,1) - Maybe triple here like 00:51:942 (4,5,1) - to make it tie together better. Imo the gap feels a bit awkward because of the offbeat sliders

lo huge ass mod I'm not expecting much in return tbh

Kyuukai

1,516 posts

Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 2017-05-24T15:48:19+00:00

Seni wrote:
Kyuukai's Insane
00:18:306 (1) - xd this is like an alien slider compared to all the other designs in the map might be :thinking:
01:12:486 (7) - Maybe NC this to help with readability since 6 and 7 are more closely spaced than the other circles and it lands on vocals alright

ty4modding xdd

Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2017-05-24T17:23:41+00:00

Seni wrote:
m4m

Zoetrope
00:00:957 (1) - and 00:03:848 (1) - are the only instance where you follow the background rhythm over the vocals, you should probably follow vocals here the same way you do later on for consistency uhh okay for the first one but im pretty sure the second one is good enough as is
00:12:161 (4,1) - Move the 4 down a bit to make it a blanket a bit better ok
Some of the red points during the first spinner are redundant since every diff has a spinner here i still want the map to be properly timed
Honestly NCing 00:27:160 (5) - would really help readability since 00:27:160 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - feels separate from 00:26:019 (1,2,3,4) - i prefer it that way actually, i prefer using NCs for stronger sounds
00:29:769 (4) - by the way it sounds 2 circles would fit much better here imo don't see how, both are acceptable and it gives a bit of variation
00:32:051 (4) - why use filler rhythm here when you don't use it during 00:29:279 (3), 00:26:834 (4) or 00:34:497 (3) changed to a circle
00:54:714 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - imo this part feels really unstructured since all of the kicksliders point in seemingly random directions. I suggest you use some mirroring and copy pasting to make them more coherent should be better
01:18:518 (2) - remove whistle why? there's a little piano section here so whistles fit

lo huge ass mod I'm not expecting much in return tbh

thnak

anna apple

1,256 posts

Joined March 2014

anna apple 2017-05-24T20:48:41+00:00

Seni wrote:
m4m

bor's Insane
You follow the song's clap pattern the whole time so maybe clap on 01:03:355 (4) - just to make it consistent throughout ye
00:49:008 (3,1) - Maybe triple here like 00:51:942 (4,5,1) - to make it tie together better. Imo the gap feels a bit awkward because of the offbeat sliders there is more support for a triple where the triple exists than where it doesn't

Can you add this hitsound to the folder? (should be soft-hitclap2) https://bor.s-ul.eu/5WE0Ab9Q.wav

update

Dragontail

252 posts

Joined August 2016

Dragontail 2017-05-25T03:01:30+00:00

m4m

[General]

Change diffs to 1/6 (or 1/8) beat snap divisor to match the music and make easier to map.

[Normal]

00:15:414 nc please? It is a downbeat.
00:31:888 no waypoint here? I think it breaks flow.
00:37:105 control plus h and move to old area, I think it works better.
00:42:323 I do not believe this slider works well here
00:44:279 control h thing again
00:54:714 Change to something else since the pattern was repeating 1/2 slider, but now 1/1 slider repeated so sorta confuing.
00:57:323 Please do not do multiple repeat slider, sorta unrankable I think for lowest diff. Use spinner again
01:00:095 put slider here and delete note afterwards.
01:01:073 ^
01:24:714 control and h thingy

For Akitoshi's Advanced, I have nothing to say.

[Kin's Hard]

00:09:631 extend slider to fit vocal line?
00:17:944 (5,6,1) I think normal stack will work
00:26:019 this slider looks like it is overlapping almost, which is very confusing for a hard
00:46:888 stack with previous note?
00:55:040 a player would probably not be prepared with the triplet here since so abruptly placed. Maybe a once repeating slider would work better?
01:01:888 same as before
01:02:214 The slider here may confuse the player so many connects into next slider?

[bor's Insane]

00:01:318 put slider to connect this note and next and for all patterns for similar to this do the same. And make it two ticks long (from red to blue tick)
00:02:041 place a note here, you are missing vocal. 00:03:487 ^. 00:06:378 ^
00:16:679 control h to flip?
00:18:681 move back one tick the spinner to match start of new phrase
00:29:279 why suddenly a direct stack?
Why at end direct stack again?

[Kyuukai's Insane]

01:07:758 control h and move back?
01:12:160 stream shape is a little weird and does not fit with next slider

[Linada's Extra]

Change 00:09:631 to this. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8172295.I used 1/8 beat snap divisor temporarily to get this result

[Extra]

00:03:848 change to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8172307. As follows. I used 1/6 beat snap divisor temporarily to get this result
00:09:631 do the same thing I told linada to do. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8172295 is link and I used 1/8 beat snap divisor.

Looks like your forte is higher diffs.

Good luck!

I was able to post since my mom said I could do it for getting a 100 on my math test

Kyuukai

1,516 posts

Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 2017-05-25T16:12:15+00:00

Dragontail wrote:
[Kyuukai's Insane]
01:07:758 control h and move back? I'm flowbreaking on purpose
01:12:160 stream shape is a little weird and does not fit with next slider well, I think it does, I'm changing the direction of the stream as the sound changes

Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2017-05-25T16:21:37+00:00

Dragontail wrote:
m4m

[General]
Change diffs to 1/6 (or 1/8) beat snap divisor to match the music and make easier to map. why..?
[Normal]
00:15:414 nc please? It is a downbeat. ok
00:31:888 no waypoint here? I think it breaks flow. i really don't know what you mean here, circular flow is as simple as it gets
00:37:105 control plus h and move to old area, I think it works better. personal preference, i prefer it that way
00:42:323 I do not believe this slider works well here why? there's a little wooshing sound on the white tick which can be supported with a red node
00:44:279 control h thing again personal preference again
00:54:714 Change to something else since the pattern was repeating 1/2 slider, but now 1/1 slider repeated so sorta confuing. i don't know what you mean here either lol, there's no 1/2 in the map except for the very last pattern
00:57:323 Please do not do multiple repeat slider, sorta unrankable I think for lowest diff. Use spinner again pretty sure it's fine as is since the slider is long and slow enough to let the player react to the 2nd repeat
01:00:095 put slider here and delete note afterwards. why, it makes the diff more complex than it should be and you're really not explaining your thoughts, should it be a 1/2 slider?
a 1/1 slider? anyway i think my rhythm is good enough here
01:01:073 ^ ^
01:24:714 control and h thingy personal preference again

[Extra]
00:03:848 change to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8172307. As follows. I used 1/6 beat snap divisor temporarily to get this result
00:09:631 do the same thing I told linada to do. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/8172295 is link and I used 1/8 beat snap divisor.
see i could do those but i think it kinda overcomplicates a really slow and calm part which i mapped with really simple rhythms here
Looks like your forte is higher diffs.

Good luck!

I was able to post since my mom said I could do it for getting a 100 on my math test LOL grats

thanks for modding

@bor: done

anna apple

1,256 posts

Joined March 2014

anna apple 2017-05-28T22:53:21+00:00

Dragontail wrote:
m4m

[General]
Change diffs to 1/6 (or 1/8) beat snap divisor to match the music and make easier to map. .
[bor's Insane]
00:01:318 put slider to connect this note and next and for all patterns for similar to this do the same. And make it two ticks long (from red to blue tick) not mapping for vocals
00:02:041 place a note here, you are missing vocal. 00:03:487 ^. 00:06:378 ^ not mapping for vocals
00:16:679 control h to flip? why, its good how it is.
00:18:681 move back one tick the spinner to match start of new phrase I want there to be a noticable pause for more emphasis to the circle
00:29:279 why suddenly a direct stack? because its less important and they are the same.
Why at end direct stack again? because they are kind of in an ending phrase and I wanted to really highlight by doing something noticably different.
Good luck!

I was able to post since my mom said I could do it for getting a 100 on my math test

-NanoRIPE-

2,059 posts

Joined October 2013

-NanoRIPE- 2017-05-30T05:30:35+00:00

yee m4m

normal
00:37:921 (3) - clap
00:45:258 (1,2) - you tried follow the vocal here and then you avoid the drum that have strong sound than vocal? hmm maybe 1/2 slider here for emphatize the drum at 00:45:421 -
00:54:714 (1) - ctrl j for better pattern
00:56:018 (2) - 2 circles here cause you always you used it when theres a drum on 1/1 beat
00:59:932 (1,2) - hmm these rhythm is not pretty accurate and a bit awkward imo,cause theres still a drum sound at 01:00:421 - my suggestion is use 3/2 slider here for reach the drum at red tick
01:00:910 (3,4) - ^
01:27:323 (2) - ctrl h for better flow

advanced
akitoshi's advanced??????????????

00:53:247 (3,4,5,,6) - decrease the rhythm here for give a break for player.maybe 1/1 reverse slider at 00:53:410 - and a circle on the next white tick
00:59:932 (1,2,1,2) - 4 circles cause the vocal and drum looks strong here and then for show the different rhythm with 01:01:888 (1,2) -

hard
hitsound?

00:37:105 (3,4) - ctrl g for emphatize the the vocal and the drum correctly
00:56:671 (3,4,5) - 1/4 reverse slider here and then 1/2 slider at 00:56:997 - for better rhythm
00:59:932 (1) - unstack for represent the drum more
01:15:584 (1) - im prefer you reverse this slider than use circle on the next white tick cause the drum and the guitar is not really strong tho for a circle

insane
00:21:732 (1) - move to blue tick for emphasis the vocal
00:48:029 (5,6) - ctrl g for make the drum at 00:48:518 - clickable
00:51:453 (7,8,9,10) - i think 4 circles a bit much for slow part imo.just use 2 1/2 slider here for better
00:52:432 (2) - make a jump here for emphatize the vocal more
00:53:899 (6,7,8) - ctrl g rhythm cause the current rhythms a bit awkward for me
01:12:160 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - the stream not smooth imo

i can't mod extra diff xd
GL!

Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2017-05-30T12:10:06+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
normal
00:37:921 (3) - clap i think a normal-hit is enough here
00:45:258 (1,2) - you tried follow the vocal here and then you avoid the drum that have strong sound than vocal? hmm maybe 1/2 slider here for emphatize the drum at 00:45:421 - i don't really want to have 1/2s in this especially when this isn't a really intense part
00:54:714 (1) - ctrl j for better pattern looks good
00:56:018 (2) - 2 circles here cause you always you used it when theres a drum on 1/1 beat not a bad idea, but i'd rather keep a slider to follow the held vocals here, i'll wait for more opinions on this
00:59:932 (1,2) - hmm these rhythm is not pretty accurate and a bit awkward imo,cause theres still a drum sound at 01:00:421 - my suggestion is use 3/2 slider here for reach the drum at red tick ehh i kinda like how the 1/1 circles represent vocals here
01:00:910 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:27:323 (2) - ctrl h for better flow why would it flow better? that way the whole pattern is in the same curve, which is pretty easy to play

hard
hitsound? woops my bad

insane this is kyuukai's insane, not bor's

thanks for modding!
i'll mod your map in the next days or so

Kyuukai

1,516 posts

Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 2017-05-30T12:15:14+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
insane
00:21:732 (1) - move to blue tick for emphasis the vocal k
00:48:029 (5,6) - ctrl g for make the drum at 00:48:518 - clickable mapping guitar right here
00:51:453 (7,8,9,10) - i think 4 circles a bit much for slow part imo.just use 2 1/2 slider here for better it fits pretty well right now in my opinion xd
00:52:432 (2) - make a jump here for emphatize the vocal more I don't think it fits to the music D:
00:53:899 (6,7,8) - ctrl g rhythm cause the current rhythms a bit awkward for me well, guitar xd
01:12:160 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - the stream not smooth imo well 01:12:160 (3,4,5,6) - doesn't have the same sound as 01:12:486 (1,2,3,4,5) - so I did a different shape

GL! ty for modding

Akitoshi

2,687 posts

Joined August 2014

Akitoshi 2017-05-30T15:50:03+00:00

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
advanced
akitoshi's advanced?????????????? yes

00:53:247 (3,4,5,,6) - decrease the rhythm here for give a break for player.maybe 1/1 reverse slider at 00:53:410 - and a circle on the next white tick yes, but did some other way for resting a player
00:59:932 (1,2,1,2) - 4 circles cause the vocal and drum looks strong here and then for show the different rhythm with 01:01:888 (1,2) - mid-tier players can't single tap well so nah

thanks buddy

boypusci is the best

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Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2017-05-30T19:42:59+00:00

Akitoshi wrote:
boypusci is the best

agree

iYiyo

1,107 posts

Joined January 2014

iYiyo 2017-05-31T04:06:17+00:00

Heyo m4m from your Q

[Extra]

00:03:848 (1) - Similar as your other mapping where you follow vocal, I think you should same with this. Consider doing 3/4 reverse slider, fits way more to the current mapping imo.
00:44:932 (3) - ctrl+g this would give better flow for 00:44:768 (2,3) - and 00:44:932 (3,4) - imo
01:11:508 (2) - I think you shouldn't reduce the DS of this jump cause you interrupt the current intense movement.
01:11:671 (3) - Also NC here would be nice for downbeat being quite noticeable
01:23:980 - shouldn't this have same hitsounds as 01:23:899 (2) - ?

[Linada's Extra]
00:40:529 (2,3) - I highly believe you should reduce the DS here. It's bigger than some kiai DS.
01:26:834 (5) - I think this one should have NC instead of 01:26:997 (1) -

[Kyuukai's Insane]
00:44:279 (1,3) - Idk but this overlap feels a bit odd, mainly because the (3) head isn't visible at all. Why not blanketing with each other?
00:46:073 (6,7,8,9) - hitsounds?
00:51:290 (6,7,8,9,10) - these jumps really felt off, like... you're mapping such a calm section with 1,2x DS and then boom xD Highly consider doing this more consistent
01:03:518 (4,5,1) - fix hitsounds here
01:05:638 - I don't think there should be a clap D:
01:11:997 (2) - clap or something?
01:13:301 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - hitsounds

[bor's Insane]
00:36:127 (5,6,1) - I think that in terms of DS emphasis, you should do something similar as 00:30:910 (3,4,1) -
00:38:736 - Vocals and drum are way stronger here than 00:38:573 - so I think it's worth it to make it clickable..
00:46:725 (4,1) - Not gonna argue about the whole style of your diff which is quite unique. However I do believe you should increase the DS here because of the hihats and because of the previous linear "jumpy" section. Right now you're breaking the movement a bit too sudden.

don't know how to mod this xd

[Kin's Hard]
00:10:354 - Why not mapping this part? You're following vocals+violin and here are these in order to map. Might be a Hard, but still you should properly map the music here
00:39:062 (5) - add NC?
00:37:595 - Since there's some strong beat+ follows vocals, I highly recommend you to make it clickable instead of being a slider tail. Right now feels a bit weird to have such hitsounds there. 00:41:345 (4) - here you do it fine~
00:57:812 (2,4,6) - since you're changing DS for every section here, why not adding a NC for every circle there?

[Akitoshi's Advanced]
fine

Hope it helps. GL!

Kyuukai

1,516 posts

Joined December 2014

Kyuukai 2017-05-31T09:44:56+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
[Kyuukai's Insane]
00:44:279 (1,3) - Idk but this overlap feels a bit odd, mainly because the (3) head isn't visible at all. Why not blanketing with each other? moved it a bit
00:46:073 (6,7,8,9) - hitsounds?
00:51:290 (6,7,8,9,10) - these jumps really felt off, like... you're mapping such a calm section with 1,2x DS and then boom xD Highly consider doing this more consistent not really, 00:51:779 (9,10) - sound is "growing up" compared to the other jumps in that section
01:03:518 (4,5,1) - fix hitsounds here
01:05:638 - I don't think there should be a clap D:
01:11:997 (2) - clap or something?
01:13:301 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - hitsounds

about hitsounding, blame Realazy

Realazy

Elite Mapper

1,004 posts

Joined June 2011

Topic Starter

Realazy 2017-06-01T23:40:16+00:00

iYiyo wrote:
Heyo m4m from your Q

[Extra]
00:03:848 (1) - Similar as your other mapping where you follow vocal, I think you should same with this. Consider doing 3/4 reverse slider, fits way more to the current mapping imo. idk a 3/4 slider just feels wrong here, the slidertail doesn't land on anything then
01:11:508 (2) - I think you shouldn't reduce the DS of this jump cause you interrupt the current intense movement. they sound less intense to me so i'd like to emphasize that and also the fact that this shows a change from the instruments i was following with the jumps

rest was fixed including idiot kyuukai messing with my hs, thanks for modding!

Kin

2,622 posts

Joined August 2010

Kin 2017-06-03T03:49:28+00:00

MBmasher wrote:
kin's Hard
00:50:149 (3,4) - Shouldn't these be the same slider like 00:47:540 (3,4) - and 00:48:845 (7,8) - I get your point, but as long the timeline is the same, there's no problem
00:51:453 (3,4) - Shouldn't this be 2 1/2 sliders to follow the pattern I think the current pattern goes pretty well here
01:00:258 (3,4,1) - Same distance snap but different time spacing? it's on purpose

Pachiru wrote:
[Hard]
00:10:354 - Je trouve que ça fait bizarre d'ignorer ce vocal, sachant que tu mappes sur tout les vocals dans les parties d'avant parce que le vocal est içi 00:10:173 - ; et qu'il est mappé de mannière passive
01:21:290 (2,3,1) - Le flow est un peu chelou ici, surtout entre le 01:21:290 (2,3) - essaie de faire un truc avec un angle moins droit pour que ça soit plus simple a jouer c'est surtout du flow emphasis sur 01:21:942 (1) - ; vu que c'est du NC, et que le vocal est assez strong
Pour revenir au début, pour quelques parties j'ai remarqué que tu utilisais pas un spacing constant, mais je pense que ce serait bien de le faire, et ça rendrait un style plus propre a la part je pense, genre par exemple le spacing ici est pas constant: 00:18:868 (2) - (en général tu utilise du x0.80, mais la c'est du x0.83 et x0.77, donc l'écart est assez élevé). Y'en a d'autres, mais je te laisse check par toi même parce que je map avec la grid

Jean-Michel Jr wrote:
[Kin's Hard]

00:46:562 (5,6,1) - The two notes are overlapping with the slider, but not in the same way ; I think it would be nice to move the slider a bit to the left so that its head is at an equal distance from the two notes ça devrait être un peu mieux now

Dragontail wrote:
[Kin's Hard]
00:09:631 extend slider to fit vocal line? extending it, will only ruin it
00:17:944 (5,6,1) I think normal stack will work the purpose of customs stack, is to get a perfect blanket
00:26:019 this slider looks like it is overlapping almost, which is very confusing for a hard we can clearly see it path
00:46:888 stack with previous note? no it will ruin flow emphasis & break the triangle. Here is explication : 00:46:236 (3,4,5,6) - snares -> linear ; 00:46:888 (1) - cymbal > angle change
00:55:040 a player would probably not be prepared with the triplet here since so abruptly placed. Maybe a once repeating slider would work better? I prefer to keep it as triplet. If the song does have those kind of triplet starting on white tick, there's nothing wrong about mapping it
01:01:888 same as before
01:02:214 The slider here may confuse the player so many connects into next slider? that's even more confusing

-NanoRIPE- wrote:
hard
hitsound? should be done right now

00:37:105 (3,4) - ctrl g for emphatize the the vocal and the drum correctly using linear flow on this case won't emphasize more the vocal/drum.
00:56:671 (3,4,5) - 1/4 reverse slider here and then 1/2 slider at 00:56:997 - for better rhythm I still prefer the current way, because there's only snares here 00:56:834 - 00:56:915 - 00:56:997 -
00:59:932 (1) - unstack for represent the drum more starting the cursor mouvement on 00:59:932 (1,2) - is actually representing the drum in a better way than constant spacing between 00:59:768 (8,1) -
01:15:584 (1) - im prefer you reverse this slider than use circle on the next white tick cause the drum and the guitar is not really strong tho for a circle that's actually the reason why there's 1/1 break here 01:16:073 -

iYiyo wrote:

[Kin's Hard]
00:10:354 - Why not mapping this part? You're following vocals~~+violin~~ and here are these in order to map. Might be a Hard, but still you should properly map the music here I'm only following the vocal.
00:39:062 (5) - add NC? fixed
00:37:595 - Since there's some strong beat+ follows vocals, I highly recommend you to make it clickable instead of being a slider tail. Right now feels a bit weird to have such hitsounds there. 00:41:345 (4) - here you do it fine~ I prefer to start the new section with a simple pattern easy to understand
00:57:812 (2,4,6) - since you're changing DS for every section here, why not adding a NC for every circle there? fixed

thanks for the mod everyone!

Hard update

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Smokeman

463 posts

Joined November 2012

Smokeman 2017-06-04T16:42:20+00:00

m4m from your q

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00:13:969 (3,4) - I thnk keeping the curvy slider aethetic would be better. It's not like this part will get boring because of too many curvy sliders. You coudl do somehting like this to change things up if you want https://puu.sh/waEQd/b796da286f.png
00:17:402 - mute the tick or silence them in genral.
Alternatively: 00:16:679 (3) - move the head to the white tick and make it a 1/1 slider. Imo the slider starts a bit too early, since the "ni" start like between the blue and white tick somehow. (on the white tick you would hit the faint background flute-thingy aswell)
00:18:306 - carful there. Timing point act like a 1.00x inherited point. Your slow down green line 00:00:957 - does not affect the following objects!
00:18:306 - I woudl recommend a slow continous drop in sv for all the red points aswell. I think it fits well to the atmosphere of this section in particular. https://puu.sh/waF8v/a581cc8b3c.png
00:26:508 (2,3,4,5) - very decieving pattern.
00:29:279 (3) - this looks ok if you only at 00:29:279 (3,4) - . But the way it positioned to what comes before 00:28:627 (1,2,3) - makes it look really awkward. I would recommend using the left playfield area for 00:29:279 (3) - instead since the area you put it in already was busy with your last pattern making the map feel less clunked but also fixing the akward positioning of 3 in regard to 00:28:464 (5,1,2) - . put it somewhere here https://puu.sh/waFoa/0fcf5126c4.png (couldnt think of a quick way to put it in there so use without changing too much)
00:34:497 (3) - put a proper noticable angle on it or make it straight. this is slightly triggering https://puu.sh/waFtu/71d531afb5.png
00:34:986 (4,5,6,2,3) - the way these are stacked is the same (auto stacking from the editor) Try using different custom stacking methods so they are a bit clearer.
00:35:964 (5,1) - very wierd that this is spaced the same as 00:36:127 (1,2) - even thos 1,2 are the heavy drum sounds. i would recommend lowering 00:35:964 (5,1) - so the jumps are more intuitive when playing.
00:37:921 (2) - wyh not curve this aswell (blanket curve of 00:38:410 (4) - )? I dont see a reason to make this straight, it makes your pattern look worse but is still played like it's supposed to be a curved slider (see the flow of 00:37:595 (1,2,3,4) - ). Something like this maybe https://puu.sh/waFFv/da35bd0bc1.png
00:38:410 (4,5,1) - Woudl be very nice to have some contrast between these objects since they are representing different sounds with their respective intensity. 00:38:736 (5,1) - shoudl be higher spaced than 00:38:410 (4,5) - to create the impact you would expect from an upbeatdrum sound like 00:39:062 -
00:39:714 (3,4,1) - the way 4 moves to 1 is also unnecessarily awkward. You have a musicly very simple section but you decide to map wierd angles and ignore slider impact angles all the time...
00:41:018 (4,5,7,8,1) - you probably claculated the triple to be exactly in the middle of 4 and 5 but this is how it looks like in reality https://puu.sh/waFPi/646c729cc9.png. i would recommend using stacking when mapping to you avoid unintended results
00:51:127 (2,3,4) - The vocals build up intensity here and you mapped these 3 sliders in the weakest possible way. Missed opportunity to have a nice intense slider pattern.
00:54:714 (1) - here you mapped this sound wiht a 174 slider but here 00:55:203 (1,2) - with 2 circles? Try to stick with one so you represent the same simple rythm equally. If you map it liek this you imply that that there is some difference but there isn't...
01:01:399 (4,1,2,3) - you mgiht wanan adjust these aswell, reason https://puu.sh/waG3C/84e9049c2a.png
01:03:192 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - i have no idea how you intended this to play out. It felt wierd when playing and it looks even wierder in the editor. In short I dont think you represented the music very well here...
01:04:986 (7,8,1) - let the triplet flow into the curvature of the slider curve??
01:08:084 (2,3) - These look ever so slightly off... cant you copy paste one over the other (not to mention the fucking 0.5° angle... why...)
01:09:551 (2,4) - see you can make straight sliders...
the whole kiai is an aesthetical mess to me...

Linada

00:13:969 (3,4) - how about copy pasting one instead of having slightly off angles? I woudl also recommend to keep the curvy slider in the section like i mentioned above.
00:17:402 - mute the tick or silence them in genral.
Alternatively: 00:16:679 (3) - move the head to the white tick and make it a 1/1 slider. Imo the slider starts a bit too early, since the "ni" start like between the blue and white tick somehow. (on the white tick you would hit the faint background flute-thingy aswell)
00:19:806 (4,5) - up the angle by 2° or something to make the angle difference more noticeable
00:18:306 - carful there. Timing point act like a 1.00x inherited point. Your slow down green line 00:00:957 - does not affect the following objects!
00:18:306 - I woudl recommend a slow continous drop in sv for all the red points aswell. I think it fits well to the atmosphere of this section in particular. https://puu.sh/waF8v/a581cc8b3c.png (same as extra)
00:28:627 (1,2) - move 2 a bit further away from the slider body so you keep some unity distance (see 00:27:160 (1,3) - and following similar patterns)
00:35:475 (2,3,1,2,1,2) - this pattern is nice for jumps but you could emphasise the drums a bit better. At the moment every objects has nearly the same emphasis althought some of them follow completely differently intense sounds. 00:35:312 - 00:35:801 (1) - 00:36:127 (1,2,1) - these are the most prominent while 00:35:475 (2,3,2) - are more of a fill in rythm which is clearly less noticable. Try changing the pattern up to fit this, there seemingly infinte equally cool jump pattern which respect these properties!
00:55:284 (2) - delete this and adjust the pattern to fit a note at 00:55:122 - . If you listen closely you will notice that its a 1-5-5 drumroll pattern. (or somethign like that, note: 00:55:203 - and 00:55:692 - should be the dominant parts of the streams since this is where the snares at)
01:09:551 (1,1) - slightly confusing. shouldnt 01:10:040 (1) - start 01:09:877 - since the thing which picks up in intensity are the vocals with another one at 01:10:203 -. 01:09:551 (1) - make this shorter and adjust teh rest i guess

tbh this should be the highest diff in this set. wtf lol

Kyuukai

00:18:306 - carful there. Timing point act like a 1.00x inherited point. Your slow down green line 00:00:957 - does not affect the following objects!
00:18:306 - I woudl recommend a slow continous drop in sv for all the red points aswell. I think it fits well to the atmosphere of this section in particular. https://puu.sh/waF8v/a581cc8b3c.png (same as extra)
00:44:279 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Add a NC soemhwer in here (like 00:46:236 (8) - or something). 11 note combo for an insane is kinda a lot xD
My biggest concern is the spacing in yout kiai.
01:02:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - you go from very low spaced (lower than prechorus even) and then go full ham with 01:04:008 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -. And then you keep that spacing which is fine i guess. (01:12:975 (1,2,3,4,5) - spaced). Remap 01:02:540 (1,2,3,4,5) - with a fitting amount of distance between the objects so everythign is in unity here.
01:14:116 (1,2,3,4) - 01:18:518 (2,3,4) - 01:19:986 (4,5,6) - and suddenly pussy level spacing again... wtf
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01:09:062 (1) - this shape looks kinda meh to me. maybe do this https://puu.sh/waHpo/0e2c7fe927.png so it slightly implies a blanket with 01:10:040 (4) -
01:12:160 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - you can make this stream look prettier :< lok for inspiration in other maps if you cant seem to find a better way. People have developed some nice ways to make good looking streams...

bor

people still think overkilling a map with sv changes is cool, lol

00:29:442 (3,4) - whats the deal with the sudden full stack? You never do this ever again so why introduce a confusing concept like this when you are not going to use it ever
00:49:008 (3,1) - have some filler here just like 00:51:616 (3,4,5,1) - . The gap felt awkward to me since you do this sv buildup and then suddenly nothing..
00:57:160 (1) - The normal whistle feels out of place imo
01:19:986 (1,1,2) - I thought i understood what you were going for but then this... I dont understand how this fits with the style of the map. try ctrl+g 01:19:986 (1) -
01:28:138 (5,6,7) - this feels like a very weak finish concidering the way the rest of the map is spaced and emphasised

imo the sv change gimmick is too confusing at times. Its not clear what the player should focus when playing or maybe he should just mute the song all together. Played it like 4 times so i could mod it and then i had enough...

i hope you dont pussy out from my map like some others did lol.

Realazy

Elite Mapper

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Joined June 2011

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Realazy 2017-06-06T23:51:52+00:00

Smokeman wrote:
m4m from your q

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00:34:497 (3) - put a proper noticable angle on it or make it straight. this is slightly triggering https://puu.sh/waFtu/71d531afb5.png please lol this is barely noticeable in game
00:34:986 (4,5,6,2,3) - the way these are stacked is the same (auto stacking from the editor) Try using different custom stacking methods so they are a bit clearer. mm idk i don't think it's that much of an issue, you can easily tell by the approach circles that the second pattern isn't a 1/4 double
01:04:986 (7,8,1) - let the triplet flow into the curvature of the slider curve?? it already plays pretty well like this though, it's so small that a flow difference here wouldn't mean much
01:08:084 (2,3) - These look ever so slightly off... cant you copy paste one over the other (not to mention the fucking 0.5° angle... why...) they aren't off, i just flipped 2 horizontally instead of perfectly mirroring it because i like doing that
01:09:551 (2,4) - see you can make straight sliders... lol pls
the whole kiai is an aesthetical mess to me... ehh

i hope you dont pussy out from my map like some others did lol. why would i tho

thanks, anything not mentioned was fixed

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