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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 106年11月20日 at 下午 11:30:02

Artist: Mia REGINA
Title: Choumusubi Amulet (TV Size)
Source: 装神少女まとい
Tags: Soushin Shoujo Matoi the Sacred Slayer OP tv size Moecho Moeri m1223961117
BPM: 193
Filesize: 2708kb
Play Time: 01:28
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Mia REGINA - 蝶結びアミュレット (TV size)

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Enjoy the song, Play for fun.
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IamKwaN wrote:
hai hai

Unicode Title: 蝶結びアミュレット(TV Size)
Romanised Title: Choumusubi Amulet (TV Size)
Unicode Artist: Mia REGINA
Source: 装神少女まとい

References:
http://media.vgm.io/albums/25/62352/623 ... 414678.jpg
http://www.matoi-anime.com/products/op.html
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D_5GM2-ALZ4

good luck la


Meta changed, thanks KwaN :)
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I've been waiting for completion of this map!

I am a little sad because Extra does not exist :o

But I like this song so I will cheer for ranked :)

Good luck!
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Yasaija 714 wrote:
I've been waiting for completion of this map!

I am a little sad because Extra does not exist :o

But I like this song so I will cheer for ranked :)

Good luck!


I will do Extra, don't worry... I try to make fast :( :?

Thanks
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Hello.

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1.
One flaw that I identified immediately after skimming the map is that the difference in pace of gameplay between the slow and the fast parts of the song is highly similar, which you ought to amend to reflect the objective sensations the artist intends to give. Such an amendment would perfect the organisation as well as diversify the individual segments which will improve the overall quality of the map. Examples of the problem are:

(a) 00:00:700 to 00:08:783, the spacing and the slider velocity ought to be significantly lower and slower respectively than the other parts in the rest of the map due to it being the most tranquil segment of the song. Whilst you do a good job in the latter, improvements can be made in the former, 00:01:633 (2,3,4), 0002:876 (2,3,4), 00:04:275 (2,3,1), for instance, are equally distant as, if not of bigger spacing than, patterns in the relatively fast parts, such as 00:10:338 (2,3), 0011:581 (2,3) and 00:12:825 (2,3).

(b) 00:10:027 to 00:14:923, the spacing in this particular segment is obviously meant to be faster than the previous one and thus, notably bigger spacing and faster slider velocity are recommended.

(c) 00:15:001 to 00:32:410, the speed of this segment is between the mentioned parts, and the spacing, therefore, should be smaller than the slow part but no more massive than the fast part.

For if you applied the modifications above, please also make the same applications on other parts. Reiterating that the segments throughout the map appear to be homogenous, and applying what said above would greatly improve the quality of the map by diversifying individual parts.






2.
As for ornamental value, unintended overlappings that occasionally appear in the map deteriorate the aesthetic of the patterns/flows that are temporarily near the overlappings. To illustrate, 00:17:022, 0017:488 (1,2), 00:55:415 (1,1), 0100:856 (1,3) , 01:07:540 (2,6) and 01:23:705 (2,4) are examples of which I believe are unintended but consequences of perhaps, distance snap or a lack of idea of how to position them. They, subjectively speaking, are fairly messy and purport to have no relations whatsoever to each other. Demonstrations on how to fix them are thus:

(a) 00:16:866 (3,5)
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(b) 00:55:415 (1,1)
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(c) 01:00:856 (1,3)
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3.
Frankly speaking, I see no creativity in the entire map. From a mapper's perspective, speciality is particularly desirable and is a major factor in determining the quality of a map. A repeated melody is often where mappers put their unique patterns on, as a result, the pattern will be on the stage for multiple times that get the players' attention. In the case of this map, 00:55:415 to 00:55:882 is the most repeated melody, not only does it appear in the slow part (00:00:700), but also several times in the kiai time and other parts of the map. Try to think of a pattern which you consider as eye-catching, and put it in the slow part in slow speed, in the fast part, fast pace. Indeed, if you could, so creatively, invent more than one creative pattern, that would massively boost the quality of the map.
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嗨嗨~ 練習MOD~


Easy

00:03:809 (5,6) - 這個的尾端似乎沒有包好
01:09:094 (5) - 想說這個有點壓到線滑條 會不會對新手造成視覺上讀譜困難呢?

E譜的節奏處理得很好 我學習了!


Normal

00:39:871 (1,2,3,4) - 第一個1 2有空拍 而3 4是緊連在一起的 不是很確定這樣難不難 就我來說 對剛升到N譜的玩家有點難 感覺會誤判
01:00:078 (4,5) - 感覺4的尾端的聲音比較明顯


Hard

00:19:975 (1,3) - 有考慮3尾端疊在一起嗎?
01:06:918 (3,1) - 不確定這個擺法會不會有點檔到 就我測試來看 差點miss
00:18:887 (2,3) - 感覺沒有包好


Insane


00:04:275 (2,3) - 感覺可以在開一點 大約在DS 1.73左右


Expert

00:59:146 (3,4,5,1) - 感覺5的那顆ds特別小 可以再拉點距離
01:17:954 (1,2) - 感覺壓到了不太好看


MOD完發現是我學習了不少

非常謝謝給我這機會~

希望能夠RK

GL~ :)
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还好楼上不是2kd的坑
Mod
Easy


Normal
  • 00:35:674 (3) - 这个Circle感觉没那么强的音,跟滑条尾感觉能好一些。尤其是加了音效违和感有点明显。
  • 01:00:389 这里加个clap感觉好听些
  • 01:15:312 (5) - 折返换成一个长滑条?


Hard


Insane


EXPERT难度摸不动,感觉自己摸图能力越来越差,GL
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If you finish the set I'll check it
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Genal
01:17:954 - 萌球diff这里有两个一模一样的绿线,最好删掉一根吧

Easy
01:08:472 (4,5) - 这里的lap能不能再稍微明显一点呢....现在这么看起来有点像unnecessary overlap><

Hard
00:01:944 (3) - 这个莫名unsnap了
00:42:980 (3,4) - blanekt大概还能在改善一下

后面的都摸不出啥了,只能water mod,GL~
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Easy
00:48:420 (2,1) - ds变了
01:08:472 (4) - 是不是漏了nc 00:58:524 (1) - 前面这里nc了


Normal
00:39:871 (1,2) - 00:40:804 (3,4) - 这两种混用离得这么近会不会对读图不太友好
01:04:120 (2) - 这里是不是也放滑条好一些,我听起来和01:00:545 (5) - 感觉很像


Hard
ds好奔放啊,我就只会固定ds重音跳一下;w;
00:23:705 (4) - 漏nc?
00:38:783 (4) - ^
00:40:338 (2,3,4) - 音量大一点?感觉在打空气


Insane
摸不出什么来


Expert
00:44:379 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - 不nc下吗,11都出来了
01:20:441 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里间距相比前后是不是小了些


Extra
00:10:493 (4,5,6) - 是不是有点太别手↓
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01:18:887 (4,5,6) - ^ 我看出你是复制粘贴的了


Moecho
00:42:047 (7) - 错开点?感觉这样没法读↓
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01:10:182 (2) - ctrlG一下会不会更好玩一些
01:15:623 (1,2,3,4) - 这里大间距会不会表现力更强点?

太厉害了不太会摸,说的不对望别介意;w;
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I fixed Moecho's double green line first, I would fix mod morning.

then give back m4m mods. :) :)

Thanks everyone
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M4M

Extra



Insane



Hard



美丽,就很水....
直接飞图吧!
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新人摸图试水QAQ

唔,其实玩起来完全没问题,但我只玩了insane因为菜到只玩4*-5* 所以只摸了Insane,Expert不敢摸,,我怕我只是鸡蛋里挑骨头。。。

以下是一些个人的想法看法唔

Insane


00:03:809 (1) - 这里加个finish音效会不会好一点0.0

00:19:042 (2,3,4) - 这里是不是 做成跟 00:16:555 (2,3,4) - 这里一样好一点?

00:24:016 (5) - 这里拉一个1/1 的条怎么样 做一个00:22:462 (1) - 这里的翻转 比如00:23:861 (4) - 放在 00:22:462 (1) - 然后 00:24:016 (5) - 起的条放在x:219 y:221 不过你那样貌似也行,,, 就当凑字数吧。。orz

01:05:830 (1) - 唔然后这里 我不确定你的想法,感觉是想加速? 感觉可以 01:05:830 (1) - 变成一个3/4 ,然后01:06:141- 这里可以加个圈, 或者01:05:830 (1) - 变成1/2 的条, 又或者再在01:06:218 加个圈 变成个3连? orz。

01:15:933 (1) - 这儿要不要来个滑条收尾 感觉会很刺激233

01:26:970 (1) - 这个条感觉有点怪,音乐上面



所以如果哪条有用得上的话。。。给我说一下QAQ,想练自己的摸图水平
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leo16834 wrote:
嗨嗨~ 練習MOD~


Easy

00:03:809 (5,6) - 這個的尾端似乎沒有包好
01:09:094 (5) - 想說這個有點壓到線滑條 會不會對新手造成視覺上讀譜困難呢? >規定是不能壓超過slider的一半,主要是不影響讀圖,這裡就沒有要擔心的必要,不過有的mapper應該還是有強迫症要我不相交就是

E譜的節奏處理得很好 我學習了!


Normal

00:39:871 (1,2,3,4) - 第一個1 2有空拍 而3 4是緊連在一起的 不是很確定這樣難不難 就我來說 對剛升到N譜的玩家有點難 感覺會誤判 >改了
01:00:078 (4,5) - 感覺4的尾端的聲音比較明顯 >這裡我得跟你說是為了玩起來有加速的感覺而放的,跟一般的節奏下法會有些許不一樣


Hard

00:19:975 (1,3) - 有考慮3尾端疊在一起嗎? >可以
01:06:918 (3,1) - 不確定這個擺法會不會有點檔到 就我測試來看 差點miss
00:18:887 (2,3) - 感覺沒有包好


Insane


00:04:275 (2,3) - 感覺可以在開一點 大約在DS 1.73左右 >先保持原樣


Expert

00:59:146 (3,4,5,1) - 感覺5的那顆ds特別小 可以再拉點距離
01:17:954 (1,2) - 感覺壓到了不太好看 >我做圖就是這樣...交疊的情形很多,抱歉啊 :?


MOD完發現是我學習了不少

非常謝謝給我這機會~

希望能夠RK

GL~ :)

Hikawa Hina wrote:
还好楼上不是2kd的坑
Mod
Easy
  • 01:08:472 (4,5) - 这个贴边的overlap看起来有点难受。 >當初做圖的時就就有想到一定會有人抓這點,不過我個人認為不用太計教這種北觀的東西


Normal
  • 00:35:674 (3) - 这个Circle感觉没那么强的音,跟滑条尾感觉能好一些。尤其是加了音效违和感有点明显。
  • 01:00:389 这里加个clap感觉好听些
  • 01:15:312 (5) - 折返换成一个长滑条? >我故意放給別人抓的


Hard


Insane
  • 00:34:586 (5) - 这个感觉也可以换成kick >當初我有想過要不要放成kick,不過最後還是只放在Extra裡面比較適當
  • 00:09:716 (2) - 01:18:110 (2) - 用绿线降低下SV感觉效果能好一点 >不用吧,我自己覺得搖滾就讓開頭稍微快也不要太快的感覺剛剛好


EXPERT难度摸不动,感觉自己摸图能力越来越差,GL

kanor wrote:

Genal
01:17:954 - 萌球diff这里有两个一模一样的绿线,最好删掉一根吧

Easy
01:08:472 (4,5) - 这里的lap能不能再稍微明显一点呢....现在这么看起来有点像unnecessary overlap>< >我其實不太懂大街為什麼這麼介意這種小stack

Hard
00:01:944 (3) - 这个莫名unsnap了 >我也嚇了一跳
00:42:980 (3,4) - blanekt大概还能在改善一下 >我不是為了blanket才這樣放的啊233

后面的都摸不出啥了,只能water mod,GL~

papapa213 wrote:

Easy
00:48:420 (2,1) - ds变了 >嚇到
01:08:472 (4) - 是不是漏了nc 00:58:524 (1) - 前面这里nc了 >前面去NC,後面不變,謝啦 :)


Normal
00:39:871 (1,2) - 00:40:804 (3,4) - 这两种混用离得这么近会不会对读图不太友好 >前面的摸也有提到,我改了
01:04:120 (2) - 这里是不是也放滑条好一些,我听起来和01:00:545 (5) - 感觉很像 >是很像,不過節奏不太一樣,我覺得不用改


Hard
ds好奔放啊,我就只会固定ds重音跳一下;w;
00:23:705 (4) - 漏nc?>也可以啦233
00:38:783 (4) - ^ >可以可以,方便讀圖
00:40:338 (2,3,4) - 音量大一点?感觉在打空气 >全圖修改


Insane
摸不出什么来


Expert
00:44:379 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - 不nc下吗,11都出来了 >沒問題,又不是超過10就一定要NC
01:20:441 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这里间距相比前后是不是小了些 >感覺沒有差很多啊


Extra
00:10:493 (4,5,6) - 是不是有点太别手↓
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01:18:887 (4,5,6) - ^ 我看出你是复制粘贴的了 >我前面幾個難度也有啊

太厉害了不太会摸,说的不对望别介意;w;

Yugu wrote:
M4M

Extra



Insane



Hard



美丽,就很水....
直接飞图吧!

-Kyouka- wrote:
新人摸图试水QAQ

唔,其实玩起来完全没问题,但我只玩了insane因为菜到只玩4*-5* 所以只摸了Insane,Expert不敢摸,,我怕我只是鸡蛋里挑骨头。。。

以下是一些个人的想法看法唔

Insane


00:03:809 (1) - 这里加个finish音效会不会好一点0.0

00:19:042 (2,3,4) - 这里是不是 做成跟 00:16:555 (2,3,4) - 这里一样好一点?

00:24:016 (5) - 这里拉一个1/1 的条怎么样 做一个00:22:462 (1) - 这里的翻转 比如00:23:861 (4) - 放在 00:22:462 (1) - 然后 00:24:016 (5) - 起的条放在x:219 y:221 不过你那样貌似也行,,, 就当凑字数吧。。orz

01:05:830 (1) - 唔然后这里 我不确定你的想法,感觉是想加速? 感觉可以 01:05:830 (1) - 变成一个3/4 ,然后01:06:141- 这里可以加个圈, 或者01:05:830 (1) - 变成1/2 的条, 又或者再在01:06:218 加个圈 变成个3连? orz。

01:15:933 (1) - 这儿要不要来个滑条收尾 感觉会很刺激233

01:26:970 (1) - 这个条感觉有点怪,音乐上面



所以如果哪条有用得上的话。。。给我说一下QAQ,想练自己的摸图水平


沒改nold的摸,當初只是要求大老給我做圖的建議,這張圖我先保持原樣rank
一切都留給下一張圖及改變過後的自己


No reply = fixed

Thanks all for mods...then this is Moecho's reply below...

papapa213 wrote:

Moecho
00:42:047 (7) - 错开点?感觉这样没法读↓ 我覺得完全沒問題呀?

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01:10:182 (2) - ctrlG一下会不会更好玩一些 我感覺不會,這樣反而打起來會很痛苦 很容易斷Combo
01:15:623 (1,2,3,4) - 这里大间距会不会表现力更强点? 這裡是歌曲裡面的呀,只有中間那一段是激烈的 後面的跟前面都是沒有那麼突出,這裡加間距的話會太奇怪了吧,雖然可能會好玩點,但是歌曲里沒有這個


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